Date: Jun 17, 2021 12:34 am Title: Chapter 8 - Mandatory Reporting
Argh I have been avoiding reading this as I worked in child protection before I retired and I have seen and read too much. However I relented and have read all chapters to date. I look forward to the next chapters as per usual your writing is so addictive thank you, Chris
Author's Response:
I'll be interested in hearing your take on whether or not I'm being realistic. If I'm way off base, please let me know. Thanks for caving & reading. TAG
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2021 3:52 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Celluloid Nightmares
Hi Tag. Sos, only started reading this a few days ago. PC probs. Also since I decided to make a huge gash in finger, whilst defroesting the freezer, it's hard to type with the bulky dressing on it!
This is really good, even though it IS a tough read. Look forward to more.
Thanks,
Deb L.
Author's Response:
Sorry to hear you're injured. Best to just lay in bed all day and read fanfic... Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment despite your typing issue. LOL. TAG
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2021 2:49 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Celluloid Nightmares
This is so hard to read. You’re doing a great job with this, but Lord have Mercy Tag, that... that... what Daphne said. I’m sticking with it though.
Author's Response:
I need to research more ways to curse out people. I was struggling to put all of Daphne's feelings into words. Please send more curse words. Thanks. TAG
[Report This]Date: Jun 14, 2021 5:33 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Conversation
And so we dig in deeper. Looking forward to next chapter.
Author's Response:
So much deeper... TAG
Date: Jun 14, 2021 5:08 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Conversation
I apologize for not writing a review sooner, I guess you could say I'm a greedy reader, once I'm hooked on a story, especially one of yours, I dont want to stop reading to write. Dark and angsty are my favorite genres and I can already tell Buddy will be a favorite of mine. You truly get Brian, his quirks, his inner secrets and thoughts. Did the warnings scare me off...heck no, they're what drew me to the story. Candy
Author's Response:
I completely understand getting caught up in a story. I'm just glad to get some feedback because I thought I might have scared all my readers off. You can rest assured this one will be SUPER dark and angsty! Thanks for reading. TAG
Date: Jun 13, 2021 7:58 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Meet The Prescotts
OMG.. Great writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you! TAG
Date: Jun 05, 2021 1:18 am Title: Chapter 4 - Coach
I'm loving this. I just recently read Alterations by NoChaser. I loved it and I'm really excited to read your version of this type of story line. That throw away line, ".. But I don't remember." really stuck out. As someone who always bragged about his conquest, it was so out of character. I admit I didn't catch it the first time I watch the show. But then I didn't know Brian that well. I thought he said it to change the subject. But of course it really stuck out after rewatch 3 or 4. I knew Brian then.
I'm surprised you two are the only ones to pick up on it. It explains so much about why he lived as he did.
Can't wait to see where you take this.
Deborah
Author's Response:
I love 'Alterations' too. This story isn't going to be quite the same. I'm not qualified to write a DID narrative. But this Brian is suffering from a similar experience. And, yes, that weird line in S1E1 ALWAYS bothered me. I thought it was telling... Thanks for reading. TAG
Date: Jun 02, 2021 7:51 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Shock To The System
I cannot read this, breaks my heart, love your storys but this is too much
Author's Response:
I totally understand. Do not apologize. This is definitely going to be one of the darker stories I've ever written. Maybe, once I'm done writing and there's a happy ever after, you'll reconsider. THE
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2021 3:24 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Heading Home
Hmmm. I'm following this. Will Michael know? I guess Vic is dead in this story, cause he is the one I think would know. Already ready for more.
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2021 9:28 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Head Shrinking
Painful to read and think about, but so good. Looking forward to more.>>Cat
Author's Response:
I know. But for some reason, I like writing the painful stories... *sigh* Thanks for reading. TAG
Date: May 24, 2021 1:59 am Title: Chapter 1 - Shock To The System
Hi TAG! I didn't read this chapter because according to the tags I have the impression that Brian is going to live a dark story. I really like your stories so I'll read this one when it's finished. I want to be able to cry and feel bad, telling myself that in the end everything will be fine and I will be able to breathe. I find it hard to read the dark stories in small pieces. Stay healthy, warmest regards.
Author's Response:
I understand. Now I just have to write it all... TAG
Date: May 22, 2021 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Shock To The System
poor Brian
Author's Response:
Yeah... I'm afraid it's going to get worse, too. Hang onto your hat! TAG