Date: Jul 07, 2016 3:35 pm Title: Chapter 6
King of Babylon is next Saturday: I can't wait to see how Michael ios going to try to impress Brian with that...! More laughter to come I guess...
Date: Jul 07, 2016 3:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
Brian: “Mel, if I kill someone, or say Jen does, can we get justifiable homicide?”
Jen and Deb fighting: “Fuck you Deb, I don’t care if Brian fucked the President at Pride you do not hit my son.” Jen yelled.
Brian: Now I really wished that she could have said Johnny Depp or Patrick Swayze but not Bush, never Bush but I digress.
I only extracted those but the rest is so much fun!
Date: Jul 07, 2016 11:58 am Title: Chapter 18
So many unexpected twists! It was a really fun story to read.
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2016 5:53 am Title: Chapter 18
Great story! Ted and Justin was my favorite. Micheal will never learn but at least the others woke up. Keep the stories coming because I can't put ty gem fown.
Date: Jul 07, 2016 5:34 am Title: Chapter 3
He can't even cook something correctly; that's pathetic; he can't kiss either or give head without chocking: what a loon!
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2016 2:20 am Title: Chapter 18
I see Michael has moved his delusions to someone else I like that Brian is continuing to stay out of the drama, it is nice to see finding their own happiness and leaving Michael to figure out life on his own. I look forward to reading more from you because it was such a pleasure to go on this ride :)
Author's Response:
Thanks the newest one I am attempting is going to start out different but i have to laugh. Thank you for riding with me through all this.
Date: Jul 06, 2016 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
Poor Ted: so much fun discovering what he had just seen; little Justin isn't so little!
Author's Response:
Poor Ted he has a bit of a time with Justin but he get's over it.
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2016 6:47 pm Title: Chapter 18
Darn! I can't believe this is over. I so enjoy Mikey bashing, especially when he does something stupid. I notice you didn't mention Carl. Everyone else is more or less happy. Which is a plus in my book. And yes, this story has been fun.
Author's Response:
I just didn't want to start repeating myself. I figured that I could put this away and maybe do a sequel later. I did start another on it's going to center the kids.
Date: Jul 06, 2016 6:04 pm Title: Chapter 17
This was perfect! And Drew singing to Em, Sweet! Loved it! ~ Kathleen 💕
Author's Response:
Than you, I really wanted to end it with a happy note.
Date: Jul 06, 2016 5:38 pm Title: Chapter 18
Nicely all tied up with a pretty red bow. Well done. Glad that everyone, well, almost everyone has found a bit of happiness. Ben adn Sean....good on Sean standing up to Deb. she means well, but she really needs to take the blinders off more than she already has when it comes to Micheal.
Great story! enjoyed this thoroughly!!!!!
thanks for sharing this with us adn look forward to reading more fics from you.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jul 06, 2016 5:27 pm Title: Chapter 18
Bravo! Well done my friend.
Date: Jul 06, 2016 3:37 pm Title: Chapter 10
I love it Michael, is in the line of fire from Lo and Daphne... You Go Girls!!! ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 06, 2016 3:33 pm Title: Chapter 17
LMFAO!!!!!!! OMG...I kinda wish something like that had happened in the show, just to get it down on film! LOL. Freaking hilarious both reading it and the visual I had in my head. Emmett wondering about the apple...lol. Little descriptions like that, the minute details are great. Deb hauling him off by the ear! Brilliant. LOL.
YAY Ben won!! Was there any doubt? Bringing back Sean as well! Great! Great scene you created there with the three of them on stage. Justin pulled it off well.
Happy for Emmett. Love he adn Drew together. and Ted is all happy as well.
Definitely looking forward to the next chapter and seeing how you bring it to it's finale. Sad when a story ends though. Glad though that you are writing another. Will look forward to reading that one.
Thank you!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Glad. I just put up a small ending. I might come back and write something about this again. Thank you for reviewing
Date: Jul 06, 2016 1:50 pm Title: Chapter 6
Delusional!!! Call the men in the little white coats! ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 06, 2016 1:40 pm Title: Chapter 5
Merow! Cat Fight! LMAO!!! ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 06, 2016 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
I lost my place, and had to start over from the beginning... You've been very busy, now I have to catch up! Loving this!
Hugs ~ Kathlen
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2016 4:15 am Title: Chapter 17
Hahaha. Orange hair and he thinks he was good? You had me going, I didn't see Ben as the one following Michael, but it worked. And the winner is - Big Ben. Michael doesn't even know everyone's laughing at him. How is Deb going to explain this to him? And you brought Drew in for Emmett, very nice.
Author's Response:
I am going to have everyone follow Brian's example. Michael is going to be on his own. The last chapter is coming it's just a wrap up for now. Maybe I come up with a new story. It's been a fun experience and thank you for all the reviews.
Date: Jul 06, 2016 3:11 am Title: Chapter 17
love that Ben won the contest- and Drew- what a great surprise- I lvoe him and Emmett together
Author's Response:
When writing this today, I wanted someone from the cast to win. Thanks for reading this.
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2016 3:01 am Title: Chapter 17
OMG!! That was Hilarious! I especially loved that Justin got Ben into the contest while Brian was worried that Justin would enter, that is one sneaky blonde lol Ben winning is just perfect and a nice little ego boost, Deb boxing Michael's ear and taking her whiny brat out was just as funny as Lo man-handling him, Brian and Justin are two very sneaky people and I love them for it!
Welcome Back Drew, Happy 21st Birthday! I hope Emmett enjoys blowing out his candles lmoa
Author's Response:
Justin entering Ben worked better for me. Justin got to have fun and Ben got to show off. I thought about not bringing in Deb but we know she would have to be there. I have to give Emmett a happy ending. Thank you for staying with me.
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2016 2:28 am Title: Chapter 17
LMAO!!!!! I am laughing like a hyena in HEAT right now! First, orange hair! Then a messed up, totally stalker-ish outfit, then being manhandled by Lo and finally mother-handled by Deb!!! OMG, Michael got a reward alright and it wasn't the one he bargained for but DESERVED!!
I'm so happy that Justin arranged for Ben to enter the contest. What an amazing ego boost for a man who so richly deserved better than that nutcake Michael!
And Em!!!! YAY!!! I'm so happy that Drew finally reached '21!' Emmett is so deserving of his chance at happiness.
Brian and Justin... well what can I say other than I LOVE them in this story. Both are officially sure of their place in the other's life; it's a beautiful thing!
Great chapter! This story is definitely one that I will read over and over again!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I wanted Ben to shine. With this story Michael is to far gone to be redeemed. Emmett will always get a happy ending if I write a story.
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2016 12:26 am Title: Chapter 16
Ben is joining the King of Babylon Contest?!! This is going to be so good I wish the next chapter was up already this train wreck is going to be fun! 😄
Date: Jul 05, 2016 8:58 pm Title: Chapter 16
Ohhhhhh BEN can't wait for next chapter I know Michael going to be pissed
Author's Response:
I wrote it, hope you still like it.
Date: Jul 05, 2016 8:40 pm Title: Chapter 16
OMG...I just thought of it. Ben's the hottie isn't he???!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Actually no he isn't. But he will be involved.
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2016 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 16
Wonder who the hottie is? Can you imagine - hottie wins, Michael pouts. lol. Justin does have some appetite, must be nice. This is one story that you just want to hear whats happening next!
Author's Response:
I had to sit around for hours trying to find songs and watching videos to do the next chapter. Hope it everyone likes it.
Date: Jul 05, 2016 5:19 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh PLEASE write FAST!!!! LOL! Brian is as hysterical in jealous mode as Justin is in 'rambunctious teen' mode. I'll definitely have to watch the "HSC" dance when I get home from work!
How much do I want to bet that Michael will dye his hair blond? Blech!!!! Part of me wishes he would just give up NOW and save himself untold embarassment. But then again, the vindictive and vicious Bitch that I am is wanting him to finally slink away in darkness after he realizes that there is no way, he could EVER be Brian's anything! Between Michael and Justin, there is just NO comparison. I was also moved by Brian's thoughts on that scenario and his realizations of just 'who' Justin really is.
So glad Debbie is FINALLY heeding Carl's advice and now we can add Hunter's warning into the mix. She's learning that she doesn't have to live in eternal idiocy; that's Michael's 'job.' I can't help but wonder if after Michael's self-humiliation if he will also show up to family dinner or hide as he usually does after he does something wrong... Hmmm hope springs eternal that he will sit his ass down somewhere... but only AFTER the next chapter! LOL
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle