Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2016 4:22 pm Title: Chapter 16

Hey there:

finally able to give youo a proper review. I feel bad as I've been able to take breaks from unpacking to keep up with the sotry, but I just can't write on my phone. I'm a single digit texter adn it takes far too long. :)

Can I just say I freaking LOVE this! It's both disturbing and fucking hilarious all at once!! I can't  wait to read about Micheal's adventures on stage.

wondering if Justin has a parasite or something...I mean...he's a bottomless pit! Nobody eats that much without having something....lol. He should be the size of a house! totally jealous of his metabolism. Not fair. ;)

Lindsey seems to be keeping it together. A few slips, but I get the impression that she really is trying and not just putting on a front. She sees what's happening to adn with Micheal, adn doesn't want that for herself. While she knows she wouldn't be completely cut off because of Gus, I think she understands that SHE hershelf would be. Mel seems to appreciate Lindsey's turn around as well. that in turn will help with Brian. As long as Lindsey keeps it up, it should be all good on that end. I'm sure there will be more sips, old habits die hard as they say.

Good that B&J are strong/secure enough that rumours and such, re: Nick etc won't effect them. Brian is aware of Justin's love and belief in him. Is secure in it. As is justin's in Brian. This makes Micheals' shenaigans slightly less effective. He can try, but won't succeed. He's just makingthings hard for himself, rather than B&J. I mean, he's a pain in the ass, but B&J can simply cut him off, as they seem to be doing.

Really glad that Ted adn Nick have connected. Ted deserves it and Nick seems like a good chap. 

Wonder if Emmett and Ben eventually get together? I love reading fics where they are a couple. For some reason they seem well suited at times. I never really got Ben and Micheal....ah well.

Will Deb and everyone else ever get through to him? what will be the final nail in the coffin for him? Hmmmmmmmmmmmm. Can't wit to find out.

I have to say, I'm having such fun reading this. I look forward to new updates everyday if not twice and get such a happy feeling when I see a new one.  great excfuse to stop unpacking or working or what have you adn take a much needed reading break.

thanks for this and like I said....I can't wait for teh contest!! LOL!! 

Terrific job!! 

cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2016 3:39 am Title: Chapter 15

Places everyone, PLACES!!!! Lindsay has surely, and FINALLY I might add, been put in hers! The nerve of her telling Justin what he needs to do for his career AND inviting herself to Paris. Mel had it RIGHT; Lindsay negated Justin's role to that of babysitter and fuck-buddy while she placed her delusional self in the role of wife. My respect for Mel went up with her acknowledgement of what Lindsay was doing, her admission that she takes it out on Brian and her vulnerabilty in seeking advice from Justin. 

As for Michael.... Lawd, Ham TURKEY, he's off his rocker! As always- and unlike with Ethan- Michael went off half-cocked with the wrong info to 'tattle' on Justin. I say 'unlike with Ethan' because Michael actually had ALL the information to fix Brian and Justin's relationship before Justin left but only chose to tell Brian what he deemed important. Uh- some best friend!!! Anyway, I'm glad that Lindsay saw for herself 'what' she is becoming and that they threw the pestering prick OUT of the car. I would hope that him having to wait for the bus would do some good but unlike Michael, I choose not to live in delusions.

Looking forward to MORE! Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Author's Response:

I wanted to give everyone something special for the contest. Enjoy the next chapter, first then help me laugh through the contest. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2016 2:35 am Title: Chapter 15

Well, at least Lindsay sees that she's turning into Michael and stops before it's too late.  Mikey has a one track mind and the train's about to hit him head on.

Author's Response:

Yes it is. I was originally going to  just let Michael embarrass himself but I decided some payback is in order.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2016 8:15 pm Title: Chapter 14

It's about time someone told Deb how things are getting out of hand.  Ben's better off without Mikey, even Hunter doesn't want to stay with Mikey.

Author's Response:

I let Ben live in hope too long. Unlike Michael he is going to have fun. I have a surprise with Ben involved.

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2016 3:12 pm Title: Chapter 13

I'm  enjoying this more and more with each chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you it's my first time writing anything.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2016 2:41 am Title: Chapter 13

What is Michael up to?  If Mel and Lindsay find out he skipped out on watching JR he's gonna be in trouble.  Is he planning to tattle on Justin.  It's not going to work because Brian knows all about Nick and Ted.  Just how is Emmett going to talk with Michael and is he going to use Daphne.  That would be fun!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the reviews. I love that all my favorite authors aren't being bored.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2016 12:52 am Title: Chapter 13

Lindsay is soooo beyond nosy, it's a wonder she doesn't trip over it every time she walks! She really needs to stay out of the mix, sven in terms of information. Deb is STILL covering for Michael. It wouldn't be so bad if he didn't cause her so much chaos in the process. She really does need to let him grow up and fend for himself like Ben finally is and Carl is doing. Jeez!  I can't wait for Em to get with his 'favorite' to deal with Michael. And hopefully she'll knock the devil out of him and back to good sense!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2016 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 4

So, I gotta ask - exactly what drugs is Michael on? Lol. TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2016 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 2

Omg! Literally Lolol in a coffee shop where I was sitting while I read this. Poor Ted. Or should we say, fortunate Ted, who now has plenty of material in his 'spank bank'! Lol. TAG

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2016 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 12

At least Deb's apology was sincere.  Poor Justin, lost his desert.  The Justin, Nick, Ted triangle is cool and funny.  It's just like Mikey to want to tattle even when he doesn't know the truth.  Now that Nick is interested in Ted what do you have in mind for Ben?

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2016 4:36 am Title: Chapter 12

Pretty okay apology from Deb she acted just the way I expected so I will let it pass, Justin might just gain a pound the way he keeps eating, the mouse scene made me smile and giggle a little, good to see Ted is going to get some lovin lol I am so happy for him. I think you should have Michael dance to the same song Justin danced to and even try for the same outfit, in his mind he should hear a lot of cheering, you could even get him to do the cabbage patch😄😄😄😄.Get him to try to do the same moves that Justin did, I was also thinking why not have Michael dye his hair blonde too?

Author's Response:

I really love Deb, but Brian still has his doubts.  The food theme is something I picked up from other stories. That is what i first thought of for the dance still work in progress on that one.  I actually looked up the cabbage patch, Interesting.  I like the blonde hair but i think he might have and accident if i go with it.  Thanks for the review and the suggestions.

Reviewer: NoChaser Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2016 9:07 pm Title: Chapter 11

::I hear a whimper, now he feels my pain.::

Oh, this is priceless! I'm loving this little romp! And finally Deb gets a clue! LOL

 

Author's Response:

Thaks for reading. This is a result of me not having anything to read.  My family are helping when i get stuck can you tell none of us can be serious.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2016 1:42 pm Title: Chapter 10

Oh, I like Lo.  Mikey trying to steal tricks - that's funny!  Love the Ted, Emmett and Daphne moments.  Deb caused her own problems, Justin told her the truth and she couldn't take it.