Date: Jul 19, 2016 8:29 pm Title: Chapter 13
I love this story.
My favorite line in this is when Brian said to Linds: "One other thing, Justin would most likely burn the house down if you moved in." Hilarious.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
Thanks for all your help in making this readable.
Date: Jul 19, 2016 4:42 pm Title: Chapter 13
Lindsey is way out of her league of she thinks she can take on Jenn in the WASP category! she doesn't stand a chance. She doesn't stand a chance with Brian eiother! lol.
Everyone has had it with her. when is she going to get a clue? Mind you...I'm having lots of fun reading this, so it certainly doesn't have to be anytime soon. ;)
This whole garden sub-plot..Is terrific! It's such a great giggle and so many of them getting involved. Looking forward to the garden party. Katie's reaction is sure to be a hoot and her hubs I'm guessing will find it just as funny as the others do!
Cheers!!!!!
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2016 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 13
I'm worried about Lindsay. Is she going to try kidnapping next? Love how Jen spiked her intentions of getting in Gus' face. I can't believe that she told him about them living together, as if Brian would be willing.
Date: Jul 19, 2016 10:07 am Title: Chapter 13
I don't even have words... Lindsay is really grasping at straws now.
Date: Jul 19, 2016 7:39 am Title: Chapter 13
After the girls' night, the WASP battle; you sure know how to keep the tension.
"Linds is dressing and acting like her mother": she's talking and thinking like her as well.
Too bad Brian doesn't want to get a tree with interesting fruits.
Date: Jul 19, 2016 5:13 am Title: Chapter 13
Please I want more. Lol I so lobed this story. Ty so much for sharing.
Date: Jul 19, 2016 4:06 am Title: Chapter 13
LOVED it!!!! Gus was great but Jen was PRICELESS!! Have several seats?? Yep! Now sit your tail down Lindsay and get schooled!
I'm sort of on the fence about Brian telling Lindsay about the surrogate. I still don't trust the trollop not to try and harm Amanda. Lindsay is crazy but completely stable Which means that cold and calculating is the name of her game right now. NOPE don't trust thay trick!!
I love the way Justin handled Lindsay! She needed to be told that she was nothing more than a glorified cheerleader on the sidelines of Justin's career. She must be stewing at being asked if she knows any agents right after being told that she couldn't have a job at the Bloom Gallery. No doubt why she wanted the job at the gallery in the first place....SMH transparent much, Lindz?
Great Job! Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2016 3:58 am Title: Chapter 13
Lindsay is a COW and she is a selfish twit I can't wait till everything implodes around her, her attempts at playing concern mommy is not fooling anyone especially Gus, I wouldn't let Gus go to her parent's house without a swat team I would be too afraid of him not coming back, she just ignored JR and Melanie, glad to see Jennifer dishing it right back.
Sarah and Cynthia have to be at the art opening and garden party I bet they will love it, plus I would like to see them cock-block Lindsay :)
Can't wait to read about the garden party and Justin's art opening I hope Lindsay makes a fool out of herself (Won't be Too Difficult for Her) and the press is there to cover it I just know mommy and daddy would be so proud lol
Date: Jul 18, 2016 3:35 pm Title: Chapter 12
Catching up from over the weekend. Was thrilled to see each and every new chapter. this fic is bloody brilliant and am loving all of it.
Justin and Micheal are great in this together. while I'm the first to admit I dislike Micheal for the most part, it's fun seeing them in this one. both being little mischevious boys. Having such fun at Katie's expense. btw....are those real plants?? I want to look them up and check it out when I have the time.
Daphne is my hero! Her confrontation with Lindsey was aaaaaawesome!! was laughing my ass off reading it.
I still think that Lindsey, while delusional, isn't unstable. I just think she's so self involved that she simply expects things to go they way she wants. It's very typical of that kind of upbringing. Everythign is about her and her wants. She's so manipulative and even towards her parents. Terrible.
girl's night out?!?! Frigging hilarious! GO JENN!!!!!!!!! LOL! Mell needs to contact Sarah. Those 2 together battling out against Lindsey would be great.
Looking forward to the next update, even of it's late. will stay up to read!!
Your fics are tremendous! have loved them all. So glad you decided to take up writing.
cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Yes every plant exists. Some are called by different names but these are the common names.
[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2016 1:41 pm Title: Chapter 12
Darn, Lindsay's realized that Daphne isn't pregnant. I'm so glad everyone isn't willing to tell her who is. Looking forward to the garden party. Should be a hoot. Then there is the gallary where Paul meets up with Sam. LOL.
Author's Response:
I think mom is going to be there too. I haven't decided yet. Depends on how much is going on when I write it.
Date: Jul 18, 2016 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 12
I never thought I would said that one day but I like Michael in this story.
Mel kissed Jennifer? That must have been hot as hell; Jennifer is way hotter than Lindsay.
This scene in Babylon and the girls dancing on stage: I would have paid any fee to see that!
I loved these in particular:
- Justin was in shock. His mother dancing on a stage. What in the world would make his mother dance on Babylon’s stage? He was pacing and going on and on about killing Daphne. I figured I would save Daphne’s life. I started to undress. Justin couldn’t grasp that his mother could do something fun. He was mid rant and I was naked. Justin turned to say something else but just like I planned, he forgot what he was talking about. Six hours and four times later he was asleep.
- I need to figure out what these women do to scare off the crazy woman. I mean Brian freezes people. Justin likes to get revenge. Michael, who we love, can whine someone to death. Ben pretends they are sane. Emmett talks them to death. Blake tries to reason them to the point they give up and I get abused until I can escape the madness.
- new character for Rage, Icebitch
Author's Response:
I wanted us to see Mel have friends that were different from Lindsay. Mel in the show didn't really do anything other than work. Unless it was with Lindsey. So I gave her Daphne, Jen, and Deb. They are multigenerational until the party.
Date: Jul 18, 2016 5:53 am Title: Chapter 12
LOVE Mel and Daph's dynamic here! Looks like Mel may have a new gal pal and that can only be to the good since Mel isn't trying to hurt Brian nor Justin! Love that Sarah is looking at Mel. She needs to take Sarah up on it! And wouldn't that just burn Lindsay's ass! Her ex-lover AND her nemesis hooking up would serve the bitch right!
Another thing that would serve Lindsay right is if she tries to corner Brian at that art show. SMH this chick doesn't learn and I look forward to one controlled-but-irate blond Prince out-WASPing the spoiled blonde princess trying her best to become the Queen Bee! I think Lindsay will live to regret hiding that invitation from Nancy in more ways than she could bargain for.
IneverThoughtIwouldSayThisBut... Good for Michael! He gave Lindsay's insult back to her but GOOD and even threw two in of his own! Icebitch is truly an accurate description!
Lookimg forward to MORE! Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
P.S. I think Brian may be underestimating Lindsay's brand of Bitchy if she finds the surrogate. Desperate chicks like that deserve full suspicion! And Ted needs a 'superpower' of his own, LOL Poor guy! His assessments of the others and their 'powers' were HYSTERICAL!!
Author's Response:
Ted has one he just doesn't know it. He is an accountant who controlled Linda funds. I haven't decided if Linda will meet her. I don't think Justin would let Linda keep breathing if that happens but who knows maybe Deb and Michael will help him hide the body.
Date: Jul 18, 2016 5:41 am Title: Chapter 11
Justin and Daphne are quite a pair but I guess Brian and Daphne could create some fabulous scenes as well as Emmett and Daphne.
I would love to see Jennifer gone wild.
I loved the references to Justin's skills coming from Jennifer; that says a lot!
Date: Jul 18, 2016 4:24 am Title: Chapter 12
This just keeps getting better!
[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2016 2:30 am Title: Chapter 11
Jen You Wild Woman! This was a good chapter because we got a girl's night that these ladies will never forget (Thanks YouTube), I wonder how Lindsay is going to.react to all the fun Mel is now having?
Sam is coming town? I hope Lindsay comes to the show to see him I bet it will be memorable lol
Daphne buying gifts for the kids is so sweet and that is why she is a wonderful best friend to have.
Nancy knew about the affair with the god-daughter that says so much about her and her need to stay in control (Lindsay did learn at the master's feet after all).
Lindsay is so delusional she actually believes Brian is going to marry her? Did she grow a dick and not tell anyone? lol
Justin and his super sperm have produced twins for the Taylor-Kinney household, now Brian is going to have three sunshines to brighten his life :)
Date: Jul 18, 2016 2:19 am Title: Chapter 11
great update- Lindsay is still a cunt and swimming in the river de- nile
[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2016 2:17 am Title: Chapter 11
Gotta give it to Em he knows how to stir up trouble. Fun, fun, fun.
Date: Jul 18, 2016 2:04 am Title: Chapter 11
And the plot thickens LOL
Date: Jul 18, 2016 1:51 am Title: Chapter 11
OMG!!!!!! I LOVED GIRL'S NIGHT!!! GO JEN! Justin got it from his Mama! I always laugh when I see her telling Brian that in her youth she had some wild times. Nice to know that Jen wasn't always so prim and proper! And Emmett remains HILARIOUS!!
Lindsay is getting part of her just desserts. YAY!! Although Nancy still should have put her on a plane, it was nice to see Lindsay be forced into dating other men. I still find her thoughts about marrying Brian a trip though. She's going to blow a gasket when she finds out that Brian is already, in a sense, MARRIED to her nemesis. Do I detect a clash of the blond WASP in the near future?
I really LOVE Daphne! She really takes care of those she loves and that extends to the kids. What a touching scene between her and Gus! I'm also thrilled about Brian and Justin becoming the father of twins!! GO JUS and your over-achieving bubble butt!
This chapter was freaking awesome and I certainly can't wait for more! Damn Real Life is so intrusive!! Wouldn't we all just love writing fan-fic all day?! But work does pay the bills which includes internet service so I guess it's a MUST!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2016 1:07 am Title: Chapter 10
I thought I would die laughing. Daphne actually said she was having triplets? And the fathers could be Brian, Justin and Ted? And Lindsay bought it? Brilliant.
[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2016 12:53 am Title: Chapter 10
That was too funny for Words, though I do have a few for Lindsay lol Daphne Is My Girl!! Everything she said to Lindsay was hella funny I wish Lindsay hadn't left yet I wanted Daphne to say more.
So Lindsay would owe Brian $140, 000 huh? That sounds about right since not all that money went to Gus anyway, still hasn't even asked about JR...What a Cow!
Daddy sleeping with his god-daughter is not surprising still wondering if he is going to give the spoil brat the cash to pay Brian?
Brian and Justin vanishing for a few days sounds wonderful cause the garden should be finished by the time they get back, I so wish I see Katie's face when Jennifer shows her around and says the names of all the plants *roflmaO*
Looking forward to the garden party where Katie gets put in her place (her husband is so going to love this!) and when Lindsay gets what she deserves.
I Just Love Your Wicked Imagination! ;)
Date: Jul 18, 2016 12:38 am Title: Chapter 10
OMGGGGG!!!!! I freaking LOVE Daphne! She is a TRUE best friend! I nearly choked on my Pepsi while she told Lindz about the 'babies' and then followed it with the sex change offer. This chapter was absolutely HILARIOUS and pure Daphne!!
As for Lindsay, I think she is finally beginning to see that all avenues to her becoming Mrs. Brian Kinney are closed to her. But I doubt that she will take the high road and quit while she's ahead. Gold-digging heifer! Watching her downfall is amazing!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 17, 2016 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 10
I lover Daphne's candor, but I don’t think it was wise to add fuel to the fire. It was funny as hell and Lindsay deserved every scathing word of it.
Date: Jul 17, 2016 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 10
Amazing chapter: you got to love Daphne; she's the best of the best friends!
I love everything you wrote here and especially:
"I told Brian that he is going to have to rub my feet and carry me around when I get too big"
and
"I don’t want to be the perfect WASP wife to Brian like you do. Linds, has it occurred to you that without a dick Brian isn’t interested in you. Wait, I think I might know someone who does sex changes if you need that number. Even with a sex change though, you couldn’t be Justin. You don’t have the ass for it, but maybe a they could do butt implants. Linds wait, where are you going. I haven’t finished yet."
May I ask why you call Melanie "Melody"?
Author's Response:
The name was my mistake fixed it thanks for letting me know.
Date: Jul 17, 2016 9:55 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh so now she's going after Daphne...she is in for a BIG surprise. As Maury would say..."Daphne, you are not the baby mama"