Date: Jul 14, 2016 5:43 am Title: Chapter 5
Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU for having mercy on me!! This chapter was so GOOD! Lindsay is a truly deranged BITCH and yet from the looks of it, completely sane. And then she thought to force Brian's hand using emotional blackmail...bet she didn't think her little rant would have that effect. Either her uterus will fizzle out or go into hyperdrive. I wouldn't put it passed her to find some clueless schmuck, get pregnant and then try to pass the baby off as Brian's. But Justin is on to her and hipping everyone to the ways of the WASP. Good Boy, Justin; you get an A+! Go to the head of the class!
Blake, Justin and Michael are a trip! I can't wait until the bushes are finished and the neighbor's head spins around with possibly green crap flying out of it. No doubt that her husbamd has already told her to tend to her own garden and leave other folks' alone but I doubt she'll listen, which makes this even MORE fun for us! Sanctimonious Shrew!!
Back to Lindsay for a moment: I seriously CAN'T wait until she finds out that Mel and the kids are staying with Brian in the manor she thought should be hers. Her plans are backfiring big time and everyone is going to sit around and watch while she implodes! If it were me, I'd probably help her do just that. I am, after all, just as bitchy!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 14, 2016 5:04 am Title: Chapter 5
God I love that Justin and Michael upped their game with the neighbor. ROFLMAO!!!
How fast will Lindsey's broom get her to the Pitts?
Patiently waiting for the next update.
Sandy
Date: Jul 14, 2016 4:38 am Title: Chapter 5
Lindsay doesn’t really have a clue does she? She just screwed up big time
[Report This]Date: Jul 14, 2016 4:09 am Title: Chapter 5
Blake helping Justin get back at the neighbor is Hilarious I also like Emmett's idea and the strobe lights will really make it POP *lmao*
Lindsay seriously thinks she is going to marry Brian? 😅😅😅😅😅 Dream On Crazy!
She has lost everything and she doesn't even know it yet Brian is not going to let her continue to play these little wasp games with him.
Gus is one smart little boy and sees the truth of Lindsay and he is also not playing her game.
Now that she knows about the baby she is on her way to the Pitts to fight for her fantasy, I wonder if everyone will be there for the show?
I can't wait to see what they come up with to annoy the neighbor next? (her husband likes it, probably making his year lol).
[Report This]Date: Jul 14, 2016 3:58 am Title: Chapter 5
Lovely, lovely, lovely. Ted and Blake are really there for Mel. Blake managed to one up the penis project and watch the kids. It would have been funny if when Linds said Gus would be hurt because Brian didn't think of him that Brian said "Why don't we ask?" and handed off the phone to Gus. So much for her treats. Thank you, thank you, thank you for posting.
Date: Jul 14, 2016 3:31 am Title: Chapter 5
Love the new and improved penis trees. LOL
Linds is such a beotch. She's lost everything and doesn't know it yet.
Date: Jul 14, 2016 2:16 am Title: Chapter 4
Talk about a trifling heifer!!! I'm so glad that Gus is on to Lindsay. That is one smart kid! And I'm happy for Mel. She's finally gotten her backbone back. If it were up to me, I would keep the penis trees. The kids really wouldn't know what they symbolized unless someone told them. But then again, I'm a vindictive bitch with a warped sense of humor! Perhaps the neighbor would finally mind her manners and her own business- highly doubtful but hey it might happen. I just hope that she doesn't come across Lindsay who will no doubt stalk and show up at Britin demanding entry. But then again, perhaps a nosy neighbor could be useful in that instance. They are more apt to call the police for any and all things they consider a disturbance. *rubbing hands and evil grinning* It's time for me to get back to work on "The Lion and the Stud" now but as soon as I see this updated, I'm there!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Blake helps on the trees. I finished a chapter but will hold it hostage for an update I love that story.
[Report This]Date: Jul 14, 2016 1:01 am Title: Chapter 4
Mel is being a good parent and getting those kids out of bad situation that is getting ready to escalate because Lindsay just let Gus go and sadly he is her pawn to get to Brian, I have a feeling she is on her way to the Pitts which is probably what she wanted so she could be closer to Brian.
I think Sarah deserves a raise along with Cynthia because she is handling Lindsay wonderfully.
Mel and the kids staying at Britin is good because Lindsay can't just barge in like she could the loft, Mel finally acknowledging that Brian is not her enemy is good because they are going to need to work together to handle Lindsay, while also protecting Gus and JR.
Why is Lindsay's mom is all of sudden talking to her and trying to give her advice about Brian? What is Mrs. Peterson up to?
Sorry to see the penis trees go they sounded interesting and hilarious can't wait to find out what Justin thinks of next.
I have a feeling this is just the calm before the storm of the century hits The Pitts, everyone better prepare.
Author's Response:
Lindsay wants her mother to approve of her. In this one I changed Lindsay reasons for what she did. I see her going to her mother because Brian would be someone they could show off. No one she knows would help her. But her mother would if Lindsay married Brian.
Date: Jul 14, 2016 12:44 am Title: Chapter 4
The fallout is near....it won't be pretty
Author's Response:
Its going to be ugly. I usually end it on a light note. I can't redeem Linds.
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2016 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
Jumping up and down for joy. Another chapter!!! So Mel is finally leaving Linds. About time. Shame Brian, Justin, Mikey and Ben decided to leave Rome. Shame about the trees. Love how Emmett spiked Lindsay when she called. Also Sarah managed to tell her off and deserves a raise.
Author's Response:
The trees are still there Michael and Justin get a surprise when they get back.
Date: Jul 13, 2016 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 4
Nooo! Not the penis trees... LOL
This is good stuff. Keep those updates coming! :)
Author's Response:
I couldn't let them go completely. Next chapter is done just waiting for beta.
Date: Jul 13, 2016 3:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
Really enjoying this take on it all. Mel really seems to be realistic and not so angry at Brian. glad she's leaving and is talking to Brian about it. That she's putting the kids first. Will Lindsey even care the Gus is going with Mel or will she only see it as losing her tool for manipulation? Can't wait to read about all teh drama that you'll have happening!!
HA! so going to enjoy Lindsey's smack down!
Very excited for the boys to having this new little one.
saw your note that it'll be late today or even tomorrow. You realize you have completely spoiled us, getting at least one chapter a day. LOL. Now this short wait is going to seem torterous! lol
Hope all is well. Thank you for sharing yet another story with us!! Glad you seem to be enjoying thie process as well.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
I almost wanted to let Justin and Michael go Pink posse on her. My vacation ended so my writing anytime will be limited. I have new chapter done. Will post it when Lorie finishes beta. I will try to post once a day if possible till this is done. Thank you for sticking with me.
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2016 10:44 am Title: Chapter 3
At least Mel is thinking about Gus and not just JR. This is getting exciting. We don't know what Lindsay will do once she finds out.
Date: Jul 13, 2016 7:11 am Title: Chapter 3
The plot is thickening... Poor Gus, well aware that something is definitely wrong with her mother.
I loved:
- Emmett said Mom has permanent PMS.
- She wants to be her mother.
- I was kind of listening, but you know looking at Justin naked is distracting.
Date: Jul 13, 2016 6:51 am Title: Chapter 2
So delicious: the bitch is fishing and nobody helps her; she is going to do something drastic and she will be all by herself.
Even her son is wary.
Date: Jul 13, 2016 5:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Justin may not have thought it was funny but I thought the cat's name and the meaning behind it hillarious! LOL
Author's Response:
My sister's cat peed on her monitor and it the name came from that.
Date: Jul 13, 2016 5:12 am Title: Chapter 3
And let the fireworks begin! Lindsay isn't going to be a happy camper.
Date: Jul 13, 2016 4:29 am Title: Chapter 3
I'm glad that Ben gave Mel all the info she needs to FINALLY be free of Lindsay. That bitch is certifiably INSANE! I know that there will be some angst once Mel takes Gus (aka Lindsay's Loophole for getting to Brian) away. Hopefully it won't count that she is the birth mother especially since it's evident that she has no one's best interests at heart except hers. If Lindsay wants her mother's life so much, perhaps she should go live with the shrew! Also glad that Michael is using his vocal abilities for good this time and giving Brian the neccessary information to deal with his baby mama. Perhaps a reward for him would be to have Lindsay locked up in a cell where she can't escape and let the masters of Whine (Michael) and Screech (Debbie) loose on her...LOL Now THAT would definitely straighten her out!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I keep writing to try to make your muse out do mine. Thanks for all the encouragement.
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2016 1:08 am Title: Chapter 2
WOW You Amaze Me, Congratulations on Story 3! Read both chapters and I must say it is nice to have a Michael that isn't annoying and has smarten up so he could accept Brian band Justin together.
Now on to Lindsay funny how she is so excited for Gus to get a sibling when he already has one?
Brian and Justin are doing this the smart way by not asking the either of the g to be surrogates, Brian has had enough problems with those two and the way he was treated when Gus was born.
Lindsay is living in La La land thinking that either Brian or Justin would ask her, she us already acting like a witch because Justin has come back to Brian and because he more successful than she could ever be, glad you addressed her sleeping with Sam I know that it was about Brian.
Lindsay listening to her mother who thinks Brian can change his sexual preference as fast us Lindsay is laughable, when I read that I wanted to ask her was she high or just stupid, Brian loves Lindsay as friend no way is he giving up dick just so she can have her 'Hetero-Fantasy'.
Mel is going to have to put on her big girl pants and deal with Lindsay because she is going to go off the rails when Lindsay finds out the baby is coming sooner than she expected.
As swear you are so becoming my favorite author :)
Author's Response:
That is so sweet. I just wanted a story to go my way. Lindsay is defiantly in her own universe. I thought we could have one to change why she went to Brian all those times. I'll hopefully keep everyone interested with my writing. Thank you for sticking with me.
Date: Jul 13, 2016 12:47 am Title: Chapter 2
I like this Michael...after two chapters I'm already hooked. I love Brian and Justin raising kids together. Can hardly wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
I needed to let him have a good story. Thanks for the review.
Date: Jul 12, 2016 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
You've got me hooked already...can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
I can tell you it's not going to get better. Thanks
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2016 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm liking this Mikey. It's going to be fun watching you take Lindsay apart. I feel sorry for Melanie. Did Michael and Ben talk about the baby in front of JR? That could prove a problem when Lindsay decides to interrigate the small child who doesn't know she should talk about certain things.
Author's Response:
Yep they might need to be careful Jr is about 4 I think. She can talk.
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2016 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Another story!!!! This one looks to be good, really good. That's saying something since your last two were fantastic. Love how they are going to have a little Justin. Mikey seems to be more likable. Lindsay is going to be the problem, but they've got her number.
Author's Response:
I tried to stop I really did. I just needed to tell you. Thanks
Date: Jul 12, 2016 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
Jealousy and Envy thy name is LINDSAY!! Glad that Michael has learned to use a muzzle for his mouth and that he is NOT speaking everything he knows for once. Ben has certainly been a good influence on him in this fic. Mel is going to have hell to deal with especially since she has access to Brian and Lindsay is constantly being thwarted. Good for both Ted and Cyn, giving that harridan what she deserves. I laughed out loud that Cynthia told Lindsay that she needs her own job and that the role of Brian's keeper is filled by Justin. That must have burned Lindsay's ass but good!
Amazing work! Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
P.S. I'd better start writing so that I can keep up with you! May the MUSE continue to be with you!!
Author's Response:
I was hoping to get you to write. I thought Michael deserved some rest.
Date: Jul 12, 2016 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Already on your third story. You write fast and it's good.
I love this story.
Lindsay needs to be bitch-slapped.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
Thanks I thought we could mess with the WASP.