Date: Jul 21, 2016 7:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
Lindsay went very far to get Brian and Justin to break up for good. She discredited herself a little more with each person she contacted.
As for Deb, she got what she deserved: her son living with her and Carl gone.
JR is as jealous of Mia and Chad as Michael and Lindsay are of Justin.
What a family!
Date: Jul 21, 2016 7:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
So much happened.
So, Mel has gone crazy and bullied Gus and Lindsay didn't do anything. JR can't do wrong as Michael...
For how long Deb and Michael will demand help from Brian, using guilt to get what they want? "You owe us"...
Lindsay doesn't even know where her son is; that's unbelievable. What a bitch.
Mia and Chad are to die for.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 7:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whoa, what a start!!
So happy to see that Brian finally came to his senses and got Justin back and that they have a family.
So sorry for Gus and what he's going thru but he has wonderful people by his side and made the right move to get out the hell hole he was living in.
JR is taking all the good sides of her parents/grand-parents: lying, bad mouthing and cheating. She has a bright future ahead.
This is going to be fun to read...!
Date: Jul 21, 2016 6:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
I feel bad for JR. Getting into drugs at such a young age. She's on a rocky road. I do think that B&J will be able to save her in the long run. It wil take many challenges though. She may be an absolute brat, but there are definite reasons behind it. I get the feeling she'll hit bottom before any help is accepted though, and of course, B&J and Gus will be blamed until that happens. Such a sad place for her to be in. Can only hope she resilliant enough.
Brian rocks!! Put it all out there adn now will wait to see what comes of that little conversation. Nothing good I'm sure.
Mia sure has Emmet and probably everyone wrapped around her little finger. The great thing is she's not selfish about it. Sounds like a lovely little girl.
so much in 1 day! What a thrill!!
Thank you!
Cheers
Elaine
Date: Jul 21, 2016 5:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
Love love love this. I'm a sucker for anti mel/linds/michael stories. Please continue to make sure they get tgeir comeupence. Can't wait for the next chpt. Thankfully you are writing like a speed demon so I won't have to wait long
kearney
Author's Response:
Brian is only started, Justin is going to help him finish. Thanks for reading.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 5:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
OK..yup..blood is boiling. Anxiety level is high! :) Holy shitballs! Between the girls and Deb...I'm not sure who to torture first. The girls. Deb is getting infor from them.
hehehehe..JR arrested. Now THAT is funny. I get the feeling they are all screwed!
another of your fics that I see myself completely engrossed in. I will be awating the next update with baited breath. Can't wait to see what you do with and to everyone!!
Cheers!
Author's Response:
I think you could be right. I have the last chapter I have written posted.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 4:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
You are a writing queen!! Can't believe you've already started another one! I can already tell I'm going to get very emotionally involved in this one. :) I had smoke coming out my ears in chapter 1.
I hope Justin or brian get pictures of the bruises on Gus! I'm almost scared for Mel adn Lindsey...not really. I winder what Deb and Micheal will say once they find out about those bruises? Will they blame Gus or will they actually get a clue? I fear they'll find a way to blame Briand & Justin as well as Gus. At least he's 17 and can make decisions for himself now. All monies can now be stopped. (I hope)
I must say, I very anxious to read this! I'm looking forward to it. I love how I'm already emotionally involved just after 1 chapter. Glad you'll be adding a touch of hunmour here and there to balance. Otherwise I forsee Zanax in my future! LOL
THANK YOU!!!!!!! thank you for sharing your stories with us!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thank you for continuing to enjoy them. I have the next three chapters going.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 4:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
You posted chapter one again hun.... 😉
Author's Response:
fixed it.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 4:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
I think you put in teh wrong chapter hun...this is chapter 1
Author's Response:
fixed thanks.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 3:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow....should I be nervous?
Author's Response:
It is going to get worse before it gets better but don't worry Brian is going to protect his family.
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2016 1:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
I hope they get pictures of those bruises. Boy, this is another fantastic start. So different yet looks to be so good. You've got a great imagination.
Author's Response:
I am keeping the pov because it works for me. Maybe I will eventually learn to write without it but I need to have everyone telling the story. I have the next two chapter at beta and want to write the next one because I need some funny.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 6:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, oh, oh... thar be angst! My heart is full of gratitude! (I'm an unabashed angst junkie.)
This is a very very promising beginning. Pins and needles here
Roni
Author's Response:
Justin and Brian are not going to let anyone off. I almost feel bad about it.
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2016 4:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Whoa you are not pulling punches this time I can't believe...no wait I can believe how selfish all four of those idiots are being, all they care about is themselves and what they can get from Brian and Justin.
I am so happy that Brian has cut the strings to Michael and Debbie that should have happened a long time ago.
Mel and Lindsay are a terrible couple who should have ended their relationship a long time ago, I can't believe that Mel attacked Gus and threw him out, Brian and Justin are going to kill them for hurting their son.
Everyone not standing behind Brian and Justin is going to suffer their combined wrath and they will deserve it.
I hope you don't blind on pulling any punches this a is fight that has been building for years, it is time to put the bullies in their place once and for all!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
This isn't going to be pretty. Brian is going to make everyone pay. Gus is going to have a lot of help healing. He is hiding a lot from Brian and Justin. Thank you for all the comments and reading through my crazy.
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2016 4:00 am Title: Chapter 1
First, OMG 4th fic already?!!! GO GAL!!!!
Now onto my review: Great beginning!! I already know it's going to piss me off but I will rant happily as I leave my reviews. Already the four PITAs (that's pain in the ass for short) are tap-dancing on my last working nerve of the last working nerve. I am already looking forward to you making them pay in BIG ways (I'll be making them pay in my fics as well just to make sure they suffer A LOT, LOL).
Your writing is amazing and you never disappoint! I am always ALWAYS able to escape into the story and that is a true gift!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Yep I hit all your favorites anti them all. Get to writing and I'll help you want bash the hell out of them. Thanks for sticking with me.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 3:50 am Title: Chapter 1
This is starting out very interesting. Brian is going to go on the warpath and Mel is in his sites.
Great start on the story. Sometimes the writing muse won't go to sleep. Sending virtual chocolate to keep it happy.
Sandy
Author's Response:
I was going to let Linds survive but I changed my mind. I really just thought this story up a few hours after my last one. I had it planned out and decided to go with it. It will get lighter.