Date: Jul 24, 2016 1:36 am Title: Chapter 8
Please Please PLEASE write FAST!!! If this isn't the story of the "Young, Old and Ridiculous," I don't know what is! I really want to know what story the main family called, The Stupids (Horny Stupid played by Mel, Slutty Stupid played by Lindz and Dumbass Stupid played by Michael) will come up with to save the character Desperation Stupid played by none other than the incomparable JR. Delusional Stupid (Debbie) shouldn't have the suspension lifted at all. She's old enough to know better and STILL can't see the pattern of "Momma-Boy Syndrome." Apparently she hasn't lost enough allowing Michael to ruin her life.
As for the Taylor-Kinney Camp, I can't wait to find out how the Pet Saga plays out! I'm glad Ted has had enough of the shenanigans and David did right to call hotel security since they tend to keep a record of disturbances.
Anxiously awaiting MORE of this!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 24, 2016 1:25 am Title: Chapter 8
Update quick! :) this is getting very interesting
Date: Jul 23, 2016 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
Bad Michael and the girls
Date: Jul 23, 2016 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hi I know I'm late starting to read this, but I love the start. I love dark place fics. I love Brian and Justin having a family. Brian is going to be pissed when he finds out what happened to Gus. I love Gus's adoted silblings already. Even though they are younger then him they want to protect him and that is nice.
Date: Jul 23, 2016 2:59 pm Title: Chapter 7
Loved, loved, LOVED this chapter! First Ted telling that bitch Linday OFF! The nerve of that heifer trying to lay guilt trips. I love this Ted! Self-confident, straight-forward and has a clear perspective of his friend, Mel!
Kennywood was a BLAST!!! The only mar in the mud was Michael. He really needs to get a grip! He and Debbie deserve the hard fall that's coming. I wonder what they will do when they find that the manic munchers have been withholding info on their precious JR.
Anxiously waiting for the implosions!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 23, 2016 2:27 pm Title: Chapter 7
Lindsay is out of her mind asking for the loft to live in and for more money to support Gus who isn't even in Canada anymore.
I love "Dad doesn’t ride anything that will mess with his hair.". He can be a Princess too!
Date: Jul 23, 2016 6:02 am Title: Chapter 7
The girls are making a big mistake by not accepting Brian's offer, I guess they will have to learn the hard way.
Date: Jul 23, 2016 5:57 am Title: Chapter 6
Brian and Mia: too cute together; she can make him do whatever she wants, almost.
Emmett and Drew having 3 kids at once: what a challenge.
And yeah, Brian still got it!!
Gus obsessed with his weight can't be good at his age.
Date: Jul 23, 2016 5:35 am Title: Chapter 5
Simply delicious!
JR tested positive, the munchers will be evicted and Michael will travel by bus... and they could owe 12 years of rent to Brian, so they will have to really work!
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2016 5:21 am Title: Chapter 7
At least the kids had a fun day at the park. Mikey and Deb are reaping what they've sowed. Brian told it like it was. He'd practically supported Mel, Lindsay,and JR because of Gus. While Mikey did Jackshit. Then you leave us with Lindsay at the door! What is she up to?
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2016 4:04 am Title: Chapter 6
A nice quiet moment of family back ending and an introduction to three new people is nice and much needed before the madness starts up again.
How sweet of Brian and Blake to want to help JR but I do agree with Brian Mel is going to fight it because she doesn't want Brian to have all the control.
I like reading about the interaction between Brian, Justin, Ted, Blake, Emmett and Drew it just goes to show you that once you stop listening to others opinions you start to realize who your real friends are.
I look forward to reading about Max, Dylan and Linda they are going to make wonderful additions to this family and they will be loved by Drew and Emmett.
I know Lindsay is starting to realize that maybe JR isn't such a innocent angel, but I still think she will try to con Brian out of some money or manipulate Justin.
Looking forward to the next chapter :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2016 3:33 am Title: Chapter 6
Love your POV's. It's interesting that Mia is the princess who must be obeyed. Chad is adorable. Emmett and Drew are doing a great thing and I think that Max, Dylan and Linda will add a lot to this story.
Author's Response:
I think that the new kids are going to see this from outsiders point of view. I plan on them meeting the other clan. Emmett is going to turn into Brian if the kids have problems with Deb’s crew.
Date: Jul 23, 2016 3:27 am Title: Chapter 6
OHHHHH what a darling chapter!! I think the three kids are going to be a wonderful addition to all their lives! And Max is going to be Chad's hero since he caught the Grandaddy! I loved this bit of normalcy amid all the insanity!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2016 2:25 am Title: Chapter 5
I understand that JR is only taking in what her parents have told her, but she's not happy with her life. Mel and Lindz are in denial and Mikey, rather then having his own money to get to his daughter he asks everybody for help. Even Hunter refused. I hope Mel accepts Brian's offer to help JR.
Author's Response:
II wanted to explain why she is the way she is. I don't think I can change her. She is too far in Michael’s camp. I kind of felt I left it that she was just a brat. I need to see where it came from. I still on the fence about her. I think Deb should have to deal with two kids who pass the blame.LoL.
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2016 1:13 am Title: Chapter 5
The land of denial must be a nice place to live since Melanie, Debbie, Michael, Lindsay and JR have taken permanent residence there, even with the report staring them in the face they will still try to blame Gus, they are children playing at adults.
Not surprised Lindsay's sex buddy broke it off and ended the relationship his sister is a smart woman, wonder if Melanie's sex buddy will drop her too?
Melanie losing her job twice because she refused to listen to the client and using the fact that she is a lesbian is to argue her position is pretty accurate, she always did think being a man hating lesbian means she was right about everything and to Hell with what anyone else wants or thinks.
David is a very good attorney to be two steps ahead of Melanie I hope he and the police will be there to make sure the girls move out in two days.
Lindsay slowly coming to realize that she is on the wrong side is typical her, staying on Melanie's side gives her no monetary benefit though I think she will do her whole pretend thing when Michael shows up with his whining and Deb arguing for her sweet innocent granddaughter.
I doubt Melanie will accept Brian's offer because she won't let him have control over her and her daughter.
I look forward to them having to pack their stuff so fast and being forced to pay back twelve years rent.
I do feel sorry but JR but I also feel she needs to deal with some consequences for her lies about Gus.
I wonder if anyone at the party used their phone to record the party that would be the proof to show the four idiots that Gus was not there and it would show JR using drugs socially, plus it might also show JR being truthful about how she feels with the situation between Mel and Lindsay??
Author's Response:
JR is Michael’s daughter you owe her. Michael is going to meet his match. Deb ineeds to see what pass the blame does. Brian will help if they accept it because the sex for drugs bothers him. He had a daughter. I gave him a family different than Debs. I always see that scene with Vic where she sat in his house and berated him taking about taking care of him and he owed her. Brian’s family doesn't keep score.
They are going by force from their house.
Date: Jul 23, 2016 1:04 am Title: Chapter 5
Well....at least Lindsay is waking up to reality
Date: Jul 23, 2016 12:59 am Title: Chapter 5
Keep 'em coming! I'm enjoying this fic a lot. :)
Date: Jul 23, 2016 12:56 am Title: Chapter 5
These MOFOs!!!! Ironically, I don't feel sorry for JR one damn bit. She knows right from wrong and if she wasn't so jealous and mean-spirited she could have been incluuded and taken care of. I do fault Mel for involving her daughter in adult business and Lindsay for standing by and doing NOTHING. Their asses deserve to have their asses handed to them. Every last one of them do! Which brings me to that waste of sperm named Michael.
JR is just like him- lacks the balls to take responsibility for his own actions. He has messed around and burned every single bridge except for those who are blinded and don't see his spiteful, petulant and childish ways. I'm glad no one with good sense is falling for his act of "Woe is Me." Perhaps when Mel finally has a look at the police report and shares it with Michael (which she probably won't), then some progress will be made.
This is what happens when narcissistic and incompetent people are allowed to procreate (Mel and Michael with less sense than a bag of M&Ms). And also what happens when a self-absorbed person is allowed to become a parent in any sense (Lindsay without the sense God gave a can of string beans). I swear....2 Bitches and a Mitch!
Great Job getting my blood pressure up and Looking forward to MORE!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
You posted have I said I love your stories. I would fear you if my name was Mel or Linds. Michael would just tell you Brian won't let you hurt me. Justin would buy you a new car and help you hide the bodies.
[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2016 12:54 am Title: Chapter 4
Wow! The stuff that Gus was hiding from Brian and Justin I think we are only scratching the surface of all this kid has been through in Canada, I want to hurt Mel and Lindsay so bad right now they deserve to be in the gutter or underneath it.
Deb is living in a dream if she thinks Brian and Justin still owes her and Michael I think those two should be in the gutter along with the two witches of the north.
JR being on drugs is sad but not really surprising since Mel and Lindsay are just fixated on themselves, plus how much money they can get out of Brian, I was so mad when they asked for $8000 a month are they high!
I think Brian should sue them for all the support he paid them that they barely spent on Gus, I know they will be coming to Pittsburgh which puts them on Brian and Justin's turf *rubs hands together while smiling evilly* they are all going to learn that it's not nice to attack The Taylor-Kinneys.
Brian and Justin have the money, power and drive to crush them all I can't wait to read that:)
Congrats on your fourth story! You Truly Amaze Me!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2016 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 4
This keeps getting better and better. I'm loving Emmett, Drew, Ted and Blake. How can they prove that JR is the responsible one for what happened to her. Can't wait to see how the eviction goes.
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2016 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
So glad to see you're going to make them pay. JR is turning into a little Mikey. Such a shame.
Author's Response:
JR only knows what she is told by her family. If your mother and father tell you something enough you believe them. She is a very angry child. In the next chapter you get to hear what she has been told all her life. She is in a lot of trouble but because Michael and the others give her get out of jail free cards she views things the way Michael does. You know what happens when you find out people you are suppose to trust lie to you. Mel, Michael and Deb are going to find out.
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2016 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
Love, love, love this. Gus is getting the short end of the stick, but he's got his dads to take up for him. Deb needs to stop believing everything her son and the girls tell him.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
Well, I don't suppose they will really listen. Hopefully they will piss test JR
Date: Jul 21, 2016 7:37 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is a combined review of chapter 2 through 4 so bear with me!!!
I love that Mia calls Emmett and Drew by "Emmy and Drewsy." I mean can you really get more adorable than that?!! So happy that Brian and Justin now have a family of their own and that their careers are thriving. Definitely glad they cut ties with the dead weight in their lives and that Brian took steps to protect Gus.
And what's with that BITCH throwing shit and hitting Gus?! OH please let someone whip her ass during this fic for hurting Gus. I felt like worming my way into your computer screen to choke that ho!! And Lindsay....what kind of... you know what never mind. I know what kind of trollop Linday is- the type that's all about child support but only remembers that the child is important as PERSON when it affects the bank account. Fucking HEIFERS! And then to threaten Justin's career if he didn't get Brian to do what she wanted...REALLY Trick? Betta grab that chair and set her ass down on that one!! LOL I swear if Lindz and Mel were 'real' people, I would find the nearest elevator shaft and push them down it so that they could ride to HELL in style! SMH The road to hell would no longer be paved with good intentions but with the bodies of Mel and Lindz...oh and add Deb and Dumbass to that too!
Deb, Mel and Lindz must have matching brooms lubricated in bitchiness and delusions. Michael has no brain so I'm not sure what his broom would be covered in except whininess and bullshit...YEAH that sounds about right. I always worried about what JR would become when she hit puberty. People tend to write her as this perfect teenager but I call BS. I always thought that she had about a 98% chance of inheriting the worse of both her parents and in this story I am RIGHT!!! Right now, I want to choke the lies out of the little twit along with the adults siding with her. As for Mel, Lindsay, Michael and Deb, I just want to lock them in a room while a hidden camera is placed in JR's clothes to document everywhere she goes and what she does. Then perhaps they won't wear the "Fucking Idiot" blinders anymore.
KUDOS to Brian and Justin for telling the Negligent Novotnys and the Cunts of Canada to go fuck themselves. I am so happy that Brian is having Gus' house evicted. It was a smart move to have the house put into his son's name. I'm so glad that the Taylor-Kinneys have true ride or die family in the guise of Emmy and Drewsie (I just love that, LOL), Ted and Blake, David and Cynthia!
Did I mention that I am so HAPPY that Ben and Carl left and are living their lives to the fullest?! It amazes me that Michael and Deb can cuss out everyone in one breath while holding out their hands expecting help...SMH ALL of the family, including Jen and most importantly their former partners, needed to leave Deb and her offending offspring long since.
OMG!! I can't wait for more of this! Happy writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 21, 2016 7:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
Emmett and Drew are really good as a couple, as Ted and Blake.
Brian and Justin are fortunate to have them as friends.
So happy to hear what Justin told Deb and what Brian told Lindsay.
Can't wait for more...
Thank you for this new story and for the super quick updates!!!