Date: Jul 27, 2016 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ben thinks Justin and Brian act like kids and drag Michael down???? what the hell planet is he living on??? Even Deb can see it! ugh
Date: Jul 27, 2016 11:54 am Title: Chapter 2
Again, Mikey is an ass, but I am glad the rest of the people all see it too... and it almost makes me feel better it isn't Justin alone he targets. At least everyone sees it!
Date: Jul 27, 2016 11:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow... Mikey is awful, but not quite in the way I expected... he doesn't want Brian, but doens't want Justin for him...
Now nobody is good enough??? ugh, Mikey makes my skin crawl!
Date: Jul 27, 2016 9:13 am Title: Chapter 6
Can't wait to see if Michael will dare coming to his Mommy.
Date: Jul 27, 2016 9:11 am Title: Chapter 5
So happy that Gus asked if he could call Justin Papa.
Michael's reaction when Mel asked about Ben being JR's papa: what a jackass.
The whole scene at the zoo; too many things are happening to comment but the lashing out at Michael and Ben was the best of all.
Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Date: Jul 27, 2016 9:05 am Title: Chapter 4
Excellent chapter, as always.
Eli and Monty are so snobs; the same type as the Good Doctor David.
Yeah, the girls are coming back.
So glad Brian and Mel getting along well.
Eli and Monty clashing Brian and Michael doesn't say anything the protect his "best friend": that tells everything about Michael deviate mind.
I-800-382-5633 is hilarious but will Michael get the meaning? It seems not.
As if Justin would ever invite Dumb the Frist and the Snobs.
Date: Jul 27, 2016 5:31 am Title: Chapter 6
Yeah, Deb findly got a clue and is going to kick Michael to the curb like Ben did!
Poor Brian, has to wait for sexy time with Justin. The joys of parenthood
Date: Jul 27, 2016 4:56 am Title: Chapter 6
Brilliant....simply brilliant!
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2016 4:32 am Title: Chapter 6
*ROFLMAO* Ben got it right between the eyes and now he knows the price he paid to associate with The Fakes, don't feel any sympathy because everything Justin said was the truth and the truth always hurts.
Now everyone knows that you don't piss off Sunshine unless you want your secrets out in the open.
Nice to know about Hunter is doing well glad that Deb and Carl stepped in and gave him the support he needed when Ben and Michael turned into idiots.
Eli tossing Monty's stuff out on to the street was Hilarious, I especially liked when he broadcast to the neighborhood about Minty and Michael cheating that was such a good move.
Michael getting kicked to streets as well at least Ben was smart enough to not put his name on the house deed, perhaps Monty and Michael can live together now that their marriages are over? lol (Bet Monty will be riveted about the endless discussion of Captain Astro and Michael will drool over his pompous opinion about stuff he will never understand)
The thought of Michael trying to get revenge on Justin is laughable that I can't wait to read his attempts, Michael is not a great thinker so this just be quite amusing.
Date: Jul 27, 2016 2:33 am Title: Chapter 5
ROFLMAO!!! Go Justin!!! Super pissed Sunshine is fun.
I felt sorry for Ben for about 5 seconds, he was in the dark while Mr. Whiney and Monty were playing slap and tickle at Red Cape Comics. This is what happens when you support Mr. Whiney.
Keep it coming, I'm loving it!!
Sandy
Date: Jul 27, 2016 2:26 am Title: Chapter 5
YESSS LOL GO JUSTIN THIS WAS AN AWESOME CHAPTER. BEN IS AN IDIOT
Date: Jul 27, 2016 1:46 am Title: Chapter 5
OMG the hypocrisy. A pissed of Sunshine certainly turns into a fireball. Loved it.
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2016 12:43 am Title: Chapter 5
HOLY SH!t!!! I So Love Justin!! He laid the verbal Smack Down on Ben and their snobby friends and I am rolling lol.
Justin had to do it because Ben had no right to put the blame for why JR did not want to hang with her father or the Fakes on Justin, if Michael doesn't call to find out about his daughter (Surprised he remembers what she looks like) then everyone is just supposed to wait? Bump that he wasn't worried about JR until he saw her with Justin, then all of a sudden he wanted to get loud and draw everyone into the conversation (Ass!!).
JR exerting her independence at four is good because a child can tell the difference between genuine kindness and someone being Fake.
Justin throwing out the reason why Michael follows Monty was Hilarious I was not expecting that to happen, well at least Eli can now say his relationship is exactly the heteros he so wants to emulate, Monty most be so proud I bet Ben is? :)
You threw away true friendship to hang with a group of people who are Pretentious, Egotistical, Glorified, Social Climbing Snobs one of whom is sleeping with your husband...Way to Go Ben!!!
You tossed Hunter back out into the streets because of what these two idiots said?
You let them bad mouth your mother-in-law, criticise Brian, Justin, Emmett, hang on Drew's celebrity status, ignore Blake and Ted so you could feel important and it all crashed in burned!
I can't feel bad because Ben walked into this with his eyes wide open, Ben let this happen.
Ben Bruckner gave Michael free reign to act however he wanted and now it has come back to bite him in the ass!!
I can't wait for the next chapter I want to know how long Justin has known about Michael cheating?
Date: Jul 26, 2016 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oooo burn! Go, Sunshine!
Date: Jul 26, 2016 9:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
OMG....WTG SUNSHINE!!!! I absolutely loved every bit this! Ben deserved the truth after trying to excuse Michael of his wrong doings.
Date: Jul 26, 2016 9:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
That damn Michael.......
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2016 8:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh, this was gooood. I can't believe Mikey and to find he's fucking Monte! Go, Justin!!!
Date: Jul 26, 2016 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
OMG!!! OMGGGG!!!! OMGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!! I'm laughing so damn hard right now! Well now we all know WHY DDS was hanging on Mutton-mouth's tip so much...it's because he's been sucking it too! YIKES! Michael topping? Personally I prefer to think that he's a eunuch and only uses a tube to pee....*shivers and blech* I now NEED Brain Bleach!
As for Captain Denial.... Ben really did deserve having all that self-righteousness thrown right back in his face. Can't understand why no one wants to be around you? Well I don't think there is a misconception left since Justin put it all plainly. While his new friends and his husband are busy being hypocrites, he's too busy attaining the perfect level of snobbery to receive a SMACKDOWN- WASP style, which Justin delivered in spades!!
I'm with Brian....Never Piss Justin Taylor OFF!!! LMAO! I know there is more coming soon from Planet Delusion. Ben has had a lot of revelations at the zoo and will have to decide what to do with Monkey...oops I mean Mikey, LOL
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 26, 2016 8:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
Smack down at the zoo! I love it!
Is it wrong to love seeing Michael verbally taken down by Justin...
Hugs ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 26, 2016 8:01 pm Title: Chapter 5
O!!!M!!!!G!!!!!!!!!! That was so AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! I read and re-read that a couple times. Completely blindsided! Did not see that one coming from a mile away. I'm with Brian on this one. Do not piss off Justin! Will Ben FINALLY see things as they are now? Will he take his head out of his ass and see exactly what kind of people Mondy and Eli are or will his sismply comiserate with Eli. Blame everyone else because he and Michael were never included? I mean according to he, Michael and their 2 newest friends, it's always someone else's fault.
I'm almost bouncing n my seat wanting to find out what happens next!! LOL.
Typical Michael blaming Ben. I can't wait to see what Deb's reaction is going to be!!
Hunter ran away??! No wonder if shit like that is going on in their home. He'd feel completely unwanted around the likes of those 2 being influenced by M&E.
good for JR standing up for what she wants. Even in her 4 year old mind she knows that the other "adults" aren't fun for her.
Terribly excited to see what bring to this in teh upcoming chapters!
I'm still cackling over Justin's take down.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jul 26, 2016 4:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
Michael's wants to empress everyone with his friends status, yet he's embarrassed my their partners careers. I wonder if he see the irony, that he's just like them. His partner is a professor, and he sells comics...
Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 26, 2016 3:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
"I like Justin and Brian but they still act like kids and it drags Michael down with them." I think Ben's got it backwards...
So glad to see a new chapter, and I still have one more to read!!!
Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 26, 2016 3:48 pm Title: Chapter 4
You know what cracks me up about the attitude of Monti and eli. The ytry so hard to be "like the straight people"...yet the straight people are no different. Some want marriage, some don't belive in it. Some are sluts and take promiscuity to a whole new leverl, others are more choosy. How is that any different that those who are gay? A snob is a snot is a snob. doesn't matter the sexuality, the colour or the religion.
Ben needs to realize that Michael is the problem, not the gang. He stands aside allowing Michael to have the most abhorant behavior...just lets it slide. I don't get it. He's beginning to blame the others for Michael's behaviour...that they aren't including them. well...why should they? The fact that both Michael adn Ben allowed fo rthe stotty behaviour of Monty and eli to continue...to treat Deb they way the did!! WOW...I can't believe Michael told Deb that. Glad she gave back to them the same as she got. Never....and I mean NEVER allow someone outside insult your mother! Especially some social climbing, elitist stotty assholes!
The 1-800 number was BRILLIANT!! Laughed my ass off on that one! I really have to remember that one!!
I do have 1 little favour to ask. When changing the POV's on the characters...could you go back to labeling that way? It makes reading it a bit smoother so I don't have to figure out who's talking. allows for the flow to go smoother. At least for me.
another great story. am really enjoying the approaches you are taking on each of them. also, how each one has different relationships. I mean, in this one B&J and the girls are getting along...another, Lindsey is a psycho, or Mel is...or Mel is cool. I like how you mix it up. In this one it's Michael and surprisingly Ben is being an ass. Enjoying your perspectives!!
Cheers!!
Elaine
Date: Jul 26, 2016 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow I'm not liking Ben very much right now....he is sounding like Deb
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2016 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
ROFLMAO. Mikey is alienating everyone. HE wants to impress everyone with HIS friends. He told Ben he was going to see JR? That's going to bite him on the ass.