Date: Apr 05, 2017 8:41 pm Title: Chapter 12
I want david to find out the truth about EVERYTHING
Justin's response text to Mikey was PERFECT!
Date: Apr 05, 2017 8:34 pm Title: Chapter 11
And I bet Michael won't understand why he was wrong and trying to fix it made it worse lol
Date: Apr 05, 2017 6:14 pm Title: Chapter 10
Ha, david finally gets to see an inkling of Mikey in action lol
Date: Apr 05, 2017 6:05 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wow David falls for idiot boy hook line and sinker... doesn't even question anything because Mikey story just fuels David's thoughts in those below him anyway
Date: Apr 05, 2017 5:14 pm Title: Chapter 8
So Britin is further away than Canada???? And pushing Deb? ASSHOLE
Date: Apr 05, 2017 5:04 pm Title: Chapter 7
Seriously, Michael is just dumber than dumb... and LIBES to be the perpetual victim... it could NEVER be his fault for anything
Date: Apr 05, 2017 4:39 pm Title: Chapter 6
the fallout for Ben and Mikey and Monti and Eli for that matter is great!!!!
Date: Apr 05, 2017 4:30 pm Title: Chapter 5
Justin's tirade was priceless and so spot on... Ben is pathetic at this point... always finding a way to place blame anywhere but with him or his hetero wannabe husband
Date: Apr 05, 2017 4:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
Michael doesn't even stop when confronted... he is so good at deluding himself into thinking he is so smart and can do whatever the wants
Date: Apr 05, 2017 4:12 pm Title: Chapter 3
As i reread, I still can't believe that Ben thinks Brian and justin are the immature ones. ugh
Date: Apr 05, 2017 4:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm on a mission to recommend my favorite of your stories, and so I'm rereading to make my choice... damn, I only planned on skimming,but now I'm sucked back in again and can't stop reading LOL
Date: Aug 21, 2016 5:54 pm Title: Chapter 15
This was a great twist on Michael trying to split up Brian and Justin. I really love stories where Justin stands up for himself against Micahel. And adding in the whole 'Monty' bit was very clever indeed! Loved it!
Deb
Date: Aug 15, 2016 11:06 am Title: Chapter 15
Wow. I almost felt sorry for this Michael. How delusional can you get? LOL. TAG
Date: Aug 02, 2016 6:56 pm Title: Chapter 15
Sad to see this one come to an end. I so enjoyed it! Mind you, It just makes me look forward to the next one.
Glad Michael got his comuppance, but sadly, I'm really not sure he learned anything. Is he ever going to be able to take responsibility ffor his own actions rather than blaming everyone else. His speech in teh court room was hilarious adn just goes to show his level of delusion. Can't believe he thought the jury would see his POV. So laughable. He got off lightly in my opnion, but as a 1st time offender, I suppose it's understandable.
Justin and Blake......frigging HILARIOUS! OMG....making all those lunches and Micheal gets a PB and banada! LMAO!!!! COuldn't happen to a better guy.
Glad Ben is trying to make things right, particularly with Hunter. REALLY glad the everyone is holding back though. Can't blame them. Not sureI'd be forgiving at all. He has a long road ahead of him.
Also nice to see that Deb is the one leading the gang in "he has to learn" mantra! No excuses for her. YES!! She recognized her own culpability, but realizes also that Michael needs to bloody well grow up.
Excellent ending. Again...all tied up nicely.
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Aug 01, 2016 12:51 am Title: Chapter 15
Applause, Applause! You are a brilliant writer who amazes me with every new story you post.
Michael got exactly what he deserved he has to pay back David and he is all alone without anyone to help him, Nice that Debbie sees that she is at fault for Michael's behavior and that she needs to stop being his enabler, happy that Ben is sticking with Hunter this time and staying away from the Family, he also enabled Michael which in turn made him into a snob.
Justin and Blake are Great! They know how to stick it to Michael in a childish manner while also coming up smelling like roses lol.
I am sorry to see this end but I look forward to reading it all over again :)
Date: Jul 31, 2016 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 15
HAHAHAHA! You write the most hated Michaels... I love it! Great story, as usual.
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2016 9:53 pm Title: Chapter 15
I am really going to miss this. Mikey still dosn't get it. This is the kind of story that you could continue on forever.
Date: Jul 31, 2016 9:34 pm Title: Chapter 15
LMAO!!!! LMFAO!!!! And so we have reached the conclusion of Planet Delusion. I am so sad to see the end of this but what an ending it WAS!!
Michael finally had to take responsibility for being an ass, even if I thought the prison sentence wasn't long enough. It was nice to see that Debbie wasn't asking for Michael to be pardoned or defending him. It was even nicer to see that she held herself up as being his primary enabler. That showed such growth on her part!
I think Brian's assessment of David's choices in partners was spot-on! I think that he expects tricks...oops I mean PARTNERS to fall into his lap simply because he's a doctor. One would think that he would have learned not to hold himself up as a willing flunkie since he was burned by Michael not once but TWICE!
Happy to know that Ben is on the right track in restoring his relationship with Hunter. I'm also happy to know that he's moved on from Whineville and is designing a new life for himself. Sad to know that he and the gang couldn't have remained friends but I totally understand why! Ben picked up where Debbie had left off in defending Michael's behavior, even going so far as to jump on his "Blame Justin" bandwagon and that was unforgivable in so many respects. If Ben hand't learned to judge all of them based on their own merits after knowing them for so many years, then he didn't deserve to remain a part of the 'family.' I think it was a wise move on their parts since none of them are that easily-influenced or deluded.
As for Michael himself: LMAO! LMAO! LMAOOOOOOOoooooooooooo!!!!! That little twerp is the epitome of "This is your brain on drugs!" Talk about a faulty memory. I swear that fool must have had LSD for blood since he always seemed to be TRIPPING! I couldn't help but laugh at his speech before the court. Once again, he gave the ADA an open and shut case simply by being himself. To call him childish, idiotic, ignoramus, jackass, ridiculous, stupid and a host of other adjectives to describe him would be doing a veritable disservice to the english language and the words themselves.
Blake and Justin are such Brats but in the BEST way possible!!! OMG! I LOVE THEM! I would have done the exact same thing if I was in their positions. It is no shortage of amazing that those two became such good friends. In their professional lives, they are both successful but in their personal lives there is no shortage of fun, laughter or innocently-portrayed vindictiveness. Gotta love blonds with cutting wits, wicked senses of humor and the glimpses of brilliance disguised behind innocent facades. Brian and Ted have their hands full with the mischievous duo and I'll bet they wouldn't have it any other way!
Looking forward to your next fic!! God's Good Gravy, Darling!! You have finished 5 well-written, thoroughly-engaging fics in a little over a month and I am so grateful for your gift of writing!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 31, 2016 8:39 pm Title: Chapter 15
This is delicious: I love how you make Justin and Blake so evil and so nice at the same time. They are really great together; it's a shame they didn't get along like that in the series.
Michael is the only one complaining but then, he has to drink Coke while he loves Pepsi; what a nightmare...
Thank you so much for this story; can't wait to read what you have in your sleeve for the next one (hoping there will be one).
Date: Jul 31, 2016 4:33 pm Title: Chapter 14
I haven't read Nichelle's comments yet but I'm sure she likes what you wrote about Dumb the First; in fact, I'm quite sure everybody likes it.
Thank you for the entertainment!
Date: Jul 31, 2016 4:19 pm Title: Chapter 13
Excellent ending as well!!
Date: Jul 31, 2016 4:07 pm Title: Chapter 12
The whole chapter is a delight but the end is hilarious!
Michael is going to fall hard.
Date: Jul 31, 2016 3:49 pm Title: Chapter 11
Dr David is going to LOVE what Michael told the reporter...
He wanted to bash Justin and got bashed in return.
Very good job to highlight 2 things that could have damage Justin and in fact have turn into a positive feedback.
Date: Jul 31, 2016 3:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
Yep, Michael jumped right into a new hole and Dr David doesn't like it at all.
Good for Justin to reply with David's pole dance and Divina being Michael's father.
Date: Jul 31, 2016 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wow, David's back: that's an amazing idea to add some trouble into an already shaken situation; well done!!