[Report This]Date: Jul 29, 2016 3:57 am Title: Chapter 10
*LMAO* Michael tried to embarrass Justin about winning King of Babylon and ended up embarrassing David instead!
David doesn't want a partner he just wants a Bitch he can keep around to make him look good (Why He Chooses Michael I Will Never Understand!), he could hire a made for less and just have some tail on the side.
David wants to present to his friends someone who is his intellectual equal and has the kind of money to travel as he and his friends do, Michael will never fit that description he likes comic books and can't even hold an utensil right and he will never have the money or the intelligence to fit in with David's elitist friends...Hold Up!...I am getting Deja Vu...where have I seen this happen before?...Wait Don't Tell Me, I know it will come to me *scratches Head*
David looks down his nose at Brian while trying to make an impression by using Justin and his status as an artist, who by the way makes more more in one show than Michael can make in an year (Hell Brian makes more money than David in an hour lol).
David is getting exactly what he deserves by keeping Michael around, I think David deserves some more embarrassment. Wonder if the reporter will have pictures of David dancing around Babylon? *rofl*
[Report This]Date: Jul 29, 2016 3:57 am Title: Chapter 10
Another fantastic chapter. How do you think up all this! It's great!!!
Date: Jul 29, 2016 3:34 am Title: Chapter 9
David and Michael in the same chapter brings the ick factor up a bit lol. David wants to control Michael, and Michael wants to use David...this is going to be a disaster.
[Report This]Date: Jul 29, 2016 3:32 am Title: Chapter 9
OMGAWD!! Michael is such an idiot that he insults idiots everywhere! He pushed his own mother and thinks it is funny?
Mel telling him off was so good because Michael is behaving like a spoiled, selfish, inconsiderate child and now that Pretentious David is back in the picture this should get very interesting, I never liked David he was a snob he just was more subtle about it, won't he be surprised when he hears some truths about his sweet wittle Mikey (Hell he might want to still be with him anyway).
I wonder what Justin is planning for Michael and will Brian have to hide the body? lol
Ben attempting to make amends with Hunter is a good start but he has a lot to make up for, Brian is not to blame for what he did to Hunter or Michael attempting to act like he has class and is smart, he let that happen because he wanted Michael to put their relationship first and it turned him into a hypocrite and a giant snob.
I can't wait for the next chapter if David helps Michael with the custody issue than he deserves exactly what he gets!!
Date: Jul 29, 2016 3:21 am Title: Chapter 9
Ok, so David needs to wake up and smell the coffee before he gets run over by Mickey's Karma train. Time for Deb to enlighten him.
[Report This]Date: Jul 29, 2016 2:33 am Title: Chapter 9
Michael's got nerve. He plans to eat with his mother after pushing her in the pool, but decides to let her cool off first. Ha. Then he mets David again and decides he'll get David to pay for his lawyer. He twists everything to his benefit. And throwing Mel's affair in her face. Mel will wipe him up if they go to court. Wonder what Justin's planning.
Date: Jul 29, 2016 2:12 am Title: Chapter 9
<pinching the bridge of my nose> Lawd, Where do I begin?????
This mofo is psychotic in a completely sane and selfish way. Not only is he going to try to sue Mel and Lindz, he's going to put condition on where they can live with his daughter?? DDS is completely asinine! Then he's going to tell Ben that he can't kick him out yet his name is NOWHERE on the mortgage? Oh that's rich. Unless Michael can show that he contributes in any way to the household expenses, he's assed out...and his ass is TOSSED out!
So then he runs into David (btw...are you reading my mind or hacked my computer for SOWK Part 1 or what??) who seems to blame Brian for Michael running back to the Pitts. I wonder if David even registered what he was thinking in terms of Michael needing constant attention and that it was Michael following behind Brian and not the other way around. Delusional Much David? Willfully Blind, David? "He can be friends with everyone except Brian." Really Sir?? Although I doubt that Michael will have any friends left by the time this is over.
OMG! I hope someone exposes David to the TRUTH before he is not only out of money but taken to the cleaners by Michael's 'poor wittle Mikey, woe is me,' routine. Although from the sounds of it, he and Michael just may deserve each other.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 29, 2016 2:11 am Title: Chapter 9
Woah....now there's a twist I didn't see coming. Huh. David's back. Could possibly cause problems. Mind you, Michael is too stupid and David will figure out the lay of the land quickly enough. He's a parent first and foremost and while Michael is a father his priorities are out of whack.
Now this is gonna get even more fun!! ðŸ˜
Date: Jul 28, 2016 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh crap! He did it now... he's lucky Carl didn't kuck his butt!
[Report This]Date: Jul 28, 2016 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh my. Michael certainly has a nack for pissing people off. Carl needs to call for a fellow officer. Mikey assaulted his mother! I can hear him now. Ma, you can't let them arrest me. I'm your son!
Date: Jul 28, 2016 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 8
I'm always thrilled when I see a new chapter... Michael's zero for two, with introducing men to Brian. Three strikes and he's out! ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 28, 2016 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh my, he has really gone to far now.
Date: Jul 28, 2016 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 8
And now back to Planet Delusion already in progress...
Jumping Jehosphet's Jockeys! Michael has got to be the most desperate Dumbass on the planet! Once again, he refuses to accept responsibility for the upheaval his life is in. It never occurs to him that if he wasn't sticking his wick in Mutton's candle that Justin wouldn't have had anything to tell Ben. SMH... then the ass invites himself and another deperate bastard with the hots for Brian to a houseparty that he wasn't invited to for very good reason.
I laughed out loud at what Brian did to Marty...Martin...Marvin...oh yeah his name is Matt, isn't it? LOL Well it WORKED because he finally took the hint to get lost. But will asshole Michael also take the hint to make himself invisible? NOOOOOOO not Michael 'Asshole Extraordinaire' Novotny! He couldn't find a hint even if it was a stick of dynamite shoved up his cavern and blew his ass to bits. It would be almost heartbreaking if it wasn't Michael...but since it IS Michael, it is thoroughly entertaining. Justin and I are having loads of fun watching the idiot fail in his machinations!
Everyone else is wanted there, including two newcomers he brought in through lies and deceit, yet they are decent men. Why is he still hanging around? It's because he is a glutton for punishment and I hereby charge you with punishing him so much that it is painful (from laughter) to watch!! I have a feeling that with him pushing Debbie, the noose he's made for himself just might get a little more tighter. *evil grinning and rubbing hands* I CAN'T WAIT!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 28, 2016 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 8
Mikey is seriously cruisen for bruisen LOL!! He deserves it too. I'm not sure why the fools Kevin and Mikey would need an upgrade from Justin. If Brian calls another guy a troll...then his word should be taken as law. I mean Brian, of all people, would know. Tho, Brian does have a point, if Kevin has to promote himself like that...he's over compensating and not as good as he claims. LOL!!
Can't wait for the next update!
Date: Jul 28, 2016 9:45 pm Title: Chapter 8
Jeeebuz! Michael just won't give up with this whole match makingthing. It's funny as hell!
I cracked up about Mark?...Marty?....Matt! what a stroke of genious that was! Well done!!! Nice that caleb turned out to be a decent chap. HAHA. Kevin is accepted by the group adn now Caleb, meanwhile the whole gang is turning their backs of poor wittle Mikey. Ironic or what!
Does he really think he can do anything to Mel or Lindsey re: custody? He doesn't have a pot to piss in yet he thinks he can threaten them with a custody battle. It would be almost worthwile to go through with it just to see him even more humiliated! Does he really think the fact he's given o support at all, that Hunter ran away, no income, a failed marriage due to him cheating wouldn't come out in court? No lawyer woth his salt would take the case except for one assigned to him. Would be funny as hell though!
Can I just say though.MAN O MAN!!!!!!!!!!!! He is in so much shit!! Pushing Deb the way he did! He thought people were pissed off at him before??! woah...he ain't seen nuthin' yet!! Everyone is going to go off the deep end now!! hehehe get it...deep end?! pool... yah yah..I know. lol
Excellent chapter. As usual, can't wait ti see where you take this and how much more you are going to torture Michael and how. LOL!!such fun. this one is so amusing! I'm finding myself chuckling, if not outright laughing in parts, cheering in others. A bit heart broken b/c of the Hunter story. A great realm of emotions, but amusement is really high up there!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jul 28, 2016 5:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
I waited anxiously for this update all day and was thrilled by it.
Michael trying so desparately to hold onto his place in Brian's life. I don't think he relaly cares one hoot about the others in all honesty, but they come as a package deal with Brian. His delusional thinking that Emmett or Ted would sympathize with him is funny. (pathetic too) His constant "Brian is my best friend" diatribe is falling on deaf ears, yet he can't seem to get a clue. This downward spiral is wonderful to watch. LOL.
Ted is a joy to behold. He's realized the meaning of real friendship and won't let Michael colour it. He knows that Brian looks out for his friends and has really "grown up" into an honest to goodness good man and true friend. His relationship with Blake is great. blake won't let anyone push ted around or try to manipulate him. Great partnership!!
Justin of course was awesome! funny as hell. Pulls no punches and loves playing with the timy mind of Michael. All of Michael's attempts will fall with a resounding "klunk". Justin is just far to smart adn will recognize Michael's machinations for what they are. Let's face it. Michael just isn't smart enough to challenge Justin in this playing field. Justin is far too self assured.
Am sooooooo enjoying this and aticipate every simgle update. Can't wait for the next one!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jul 28, 2016 2:20 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh Poor Micky, no one wants to listen to his whining tonight...
Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 28, 2016 3:54 am Title: Chapter 7
This chapter brought tears to my eyes, a lump to my throat and laughter to my soul!! It was so GOOD to see Michael getting what he has deserved since....FOREVER! He has run out of friend-sources to be used and abused at will for their kindness.
Emmett's 'conversation' with DDS had me fist-pumping and cheering aloud! You know that you are an asshole if your friends would rather join 'See the Light' rather than hang out with you...DAMN!! LOL
I LOVED that Blake had no qualms in pointing out Michael's shortcomings and then when Michael thought he would repay it in kind, his points fell flat. I LOVE Ted in this! It is easy to see that he's adopted Brian's 'No Bullshit' policy but more than that Ted has his own backbone and he isn't afraid to stretch it!
Oh and then the little peanut-brained bastard tried to pull the 'Brian's my best friend' card twice. The first was with Blake and he was immediately shot down. I will NEVER figure out why he thought that tactic would work on someone as self-assured as Justin/ I LOVED the way Justin calmly- and laughingly- dismantled Michael's lies. And then had the nerve to lie without checking the facts first. Brian's remarks about Mutton-mouth and the VIP section was priceless! I still marvel at the Peter Pan reference though since Brian is the one with TWO successful businesses while Michael can't and doesn't pay his own rent on his comic book store. Go figure! Justin makes 20-50K per painting but Ben and Michael regarded him as childish...But meanwhile Ben is working his ass off while Michael is playing plug-in-socket with mutton mouth while his comic shop is empty- NOT CLOSED- but EMPTY...LOL Yeah, and the STFD Golden Chair Award goes to: Michael Charles Novotny-Bruckner!!
I honestly can't wait for the next chapter of this!!!! LMAO this made my night!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jul 28, 2016 2:57 am Title: Chapter 7
Gotta love how Michael turns everything around. Even with all his old friends telling him he's a pretentous prick, he still feels the need to badmouth Justin and Blake. So much to do to Mikey and I can't wait to find out what you have planned next.
Date: Jul 27, 2016 4:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved everyone's reaction! Lindsey is reight in this one...why is anyone surprised? I guess, since she grew up WASP, it's something she was more than likely expecting at some point. An Justin just being so non-chalant about it afterwards. I think it will take time for Mel to get used to this side of Justin. I love how they both were so impressed that Justin stood up for the group, not just Brian
Brian of course was completely turned on. No surprise there. LOL
Ben Ben Ben...I really don't know if he'll be able to come back from this. He's burned alot of bridges. His behaviour has been comopletely inexcuseable and totally unforgivable ESPECIALLY when it comes to Hunter and JR. Justin can handle Ben and Michael's attitude towards himself, and even the others. but when it comes to the kids......look out! JR is too young to really understand, but hunter! OMG...my heart broke at that. I get that Ben is only now realizing his behaviour has been beyond reproach...but still. To take that attitude with your child!! To put your husband and your frigging friends before the needs of your own kid?!?! I don't know. I think perhaps maybe possibly he and Hunter can at asome point become tentative friends, but hunter will never completely trust Ben I don't think. I honestly felt sick to my stomach at that point of the fic. so well done!
Michael as usualy looks everywhee else to blam rather than looking at himself. He'll get no sympathy from anyone and his plan to have himself adn Brian find new partners.........yeah...like that's gonna happen. there's no way Justin will fall for his crap. There are too many others to support him, who will derail anything Michael has planned. I'm really looking forward to reading what you have up your sleeve in that regard. and can't wait to see the outcome! LOL. will he and Moany keep hooking up?
another great chapter and really really really looking forward to the next chapter(s).
Cheers!!!!!!!
Elaine
Date: Jul 27, 2016 1:42 pm Title: Chapter 6
Bruckner bridges falling down, falling down, falling. Bruckner bridges falling down, OH the DUMMIES!!!! LOL
Well the aftermath of Sunshine Supernova are having some very interesting effects on Planet Delusion! I guess that from the DDS point of view, Ben should blame Justin for Michael playing plug-in-socket with Mutton-mouth, too. My goodness, his sense of entitlement is astounding. Well both Captain Denial and Dumbass Denial Stupid along with Elite Egotist and the Mutton Man got taken down by a true WASP and none of them could handle the sting of truth!
Mel cracks me up! I would be shocked too if someone I've known for 8 years who always had the sweetest disposition turns out to possess MORE venom than his Alpha counterpart. I LOVED that she realized that Justin wasn't just defending himself but everyone else in his inner circle. And I loved Lindsay's response, 'Why are we surprised?' Why INDEED! She is married to a Wasp but didn't know that Justin has the same tendencies? LOL I think they all know now that sweet little Justin can be extremely bitter too.
Looking forward to the continuing burning bridge of the Bruckners and to Michael realizing that he truly has no one left!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 27, 2016 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 6
So So good... can't wait for more....
I don't read WIP, but this looked just too good... update quickly please! keep this cookie happy :)
Date: Jul 27, 2016 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
OMG, this was THE BEST... take that assholes!!!! Mikey and Monti... ewwwww lol
Go Justin!!!!!
Date: Jul 27, 2016 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 4
Michael just infuriates me... I hope Kevin joins the fun group lol
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2016 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 6
Love everyone's view points on Justin's little talk with Michael and Ben. Glad they told Emmett, who got to Debbie before Mikey could. Ben's realizing that his excusing Mikey's behavior was partially to blame. But Mikey's supposed to be a grown man. He acts more like a kid then the kids do. Great chapter.