Date: Dec 20, 2016 2:59 am Title: Chapter 7
OMG, I was a little leery of Max... but with each chapter I like him more and more... this chapter made me LOVE him!
Date: Dec 20, 2016 2:36 am Title: Chapter 6
wow... Debbie is so beyond a bitch! it makes me sad.... I like to love Debbie, but I love to hate Michael and Lindsay, so Imma go with it LOL
Date: Dec 20, 2016 2:16 am Title: Chapter 5
definitely good to start with honesty. I agree with Justin, Brian needs to stop blaming himself
Date: Dec 20, 2016 1:59 am Title: Chapter 4
smell was the key... such a hot start!!!
Date: Dec 20, 2016 1:44 am Title: Chapter 3
that's a start... at least they both (really, I'm talking about Justin) seem willing to try!
Date: Dec 20, 2016 1:28 am Title: Chapter 2
I really hope this reunion goes well... I'm so glad that Brian still misses Justin, but I worry about all the reactions.
Date: Dec 20, 2016 1:18 am Title: Chapter 1
for some reason, I thought I had read this already... someone posted about it and I clicked on it to refresh my memory of it and BOOM... it's new to me!!!! I was just gonna do a quick browse, and now I'm hooked and I somehow bet I wont stop until I finish it (or fall asleep then finish it tomorrow!)
Michael and Lindsay - assholes!!!!!
and so happy to hear Brian DID look for Justin and even adopted his baby, and now they have one together! so excited!
Date: Nov 23, 2016 8:20 pm Title: Chapter 10
I love this story, can't stop reading!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2016 3:03 am Title: Chapter 30
Wow! I'm so impressed. Finishing your 10th story already. Way to go. Thanks for writing all these wonderful stories for us! TAG
Date: Nov 08, 2016 5:10 pm Title: Chapter 30
BAHAHAHAHA! Oh man...what a great ending! Was in fits of giggles at times I must admit. Michael is such a fool. Imagine going against the advise of your attourney. And Deb....smacking an officer of teh court! Those 2 really take the cake. Lindsey...well...she sure was able to manipulate the system to her advantage. She got off relatively easy really.
Wonder how Michae copes i prison for 10 years. LOL!! Deb has no house now. No real job to speak of...what happens to her now? Do we care?? LOL And Lindsey. Hmmmm. Probably find some rich old fart to look after her.
Am so glad you gave us a peek into the legal remifications of the stuped trio. Very enjoyable I must say!!
Loved this story!! Enjoyed every update!
Congrats on ending yet another excellent story!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Nov 07, 2016 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 30
I love this story very much.
Michael is the biggest stupid man on earth.
Is it going to be a sequel?
Date: Nov 07, 2016 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 30
LMFAO!!! Mikey is so smart he talked himself into a nice long vacation. He lied and assumed that no one could disprove him. But ultimately, when you hit someone in the head with a pipe, isn't it always assault, can you explain it away? Well, Mikey's explanation didn't work.
Deb was lucky she didn't get more time for violating parole for her contempt of court. Lindsay, well she'll be miserable because her parents will see to it.
All the babies are born and happiness rules. The family has a Jewel and a Gem!
Look, I love your writing but something essential is missing, we need..... a Christmas story with all the kiddies... Oh, please, please just a one shot of Christmas with the Kinney.
Thanks so much for making me laugh, sniffle, hope, and simply have good time while this kooky election was taking place!!!
Date: Nov 07, 2016 3:55 am Title: Chapter 30
OMG!! LMAO!!!!!!!!!!! Oh God my sides HURT so much right now from laughing! The Three Stooges couldn't have effed this up more than the Truthless Trio! Deb was lucky all she lost was her house. She should have gotten time for an accessory after the fact since she also knew that Michael (OMG there I go again Laughing my Ass OFF for real!) committed the crime. At the very least she should have gotten time for assaulting 2 officers especially dealing with NYPD. The probably took pity on her thinking she's suffered enough for giving birth the the trainwreck called Michael Charles Novotny (oh damn.....*again LMAO!).
As for Lyin'-lips Lindsay, I also think she should have gotten more than a year but I can live with her sentence a little bit. She'll be a known felon which is definitely a punishment since she won't be able to go back to live with mommy and daddy in the WASP nest. Lindsay as a social pariah is definitely justice.
As for that Whiny Witless Wonder called Michael.....OMGGGGGGG!!!!! LMFAO!!!!!! His lawyer should sue him...hell EVERYONE including the judge should sue him for loss of brain cells and a severe drop in their IQ for having to listen to him. I feel sorry for the prisoners and corrections officers that will have to listen to that schmuck for the next 10 years. They should just throw his ass in solitary confinement and forget he's there..SMH!
Great finish to a GREAT STORY Star!
WRITE ON,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2016 12:46 am Title: Chapter 30
I don't know whether to laugh, shake my head or run screaming from all the stupidity of one Michael Novotny, I feel for his attorney who is probably wondering what he had done in a previous life to get such a moronic client.
Of course Deb and Lindsay did not help the situation any they should have gotten the same sentence as Michael.
I wonder what is going to happen to Deb and Lindsay while Michael sits in jail, Lindsay has mommy and daddy but Deb has no one, I wouldn't be surprised if she tries to get Brian or Justin to take care of her???
Thanks for that glimpse at what happened to all three of them it was terrifyingly funny lol
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2016 12:42 am Title: Chapter 30
Thank you for letting us see what happened to Mikey, Lindsay and Deb. Mikey seems to have a change of pleading insanity, because you can't plead stupidity. Deb's problem was she couldn't keep her big mouth shut. She's lucky she only lost her house. Lindsay got away with a lot of this. The justice system is not always fair it seems to me.
Date: Nov 06, 2016 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 30
Now that's the Michael we know and love, an idiot from beginning to end. I wonder if his attorney can sue him for effecting his closure rate with his stupidity.
Thank you for letting us get a glimpse of their life after Jay.
Again, I loved this story.
Date: Nov 06, 2016 3:38 pm Title: Chapter 7
You Go Baby! Strike one!
Hugs ~ Kathleen
Date: Nov 06, 2016 2:14 pm Title: Chapter 4
Sweet! I hope his memory comes back reigniting all the passion and love of the past.
Later ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Nov 06, 2016 1:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm loving this fic! I can't wait until Brian and Justin are reunited. I can just see the two of them raising their kids, and all that will ensue...
Hugs ~ Kathleen
Date: Nov 05, 2016 6:09 am Title: Chapter 29
HAPPY family scene😃
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2016 5:11 am Title: Chapter 29
Wonderful chapter and everyone that means anything got to go to Paris! Brian even got to go to Italy.
Date: Nov 04, 2016 7:45 am Title: Chapter 28
Thank you for another chapter but it's not enough I want more more mor plz...... No seriously loved it.....
Date: Nov 04, 2016 6:14 am Title: Chapter 28
Baby carrots, LOL! Awe a Gem(ma) to go with their Jewel.
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2016 1:48 am Title: Chapter 28
Justin is so - I don't know what. If my husband had offered to help while I was pregnant I'd of been in dog's heaven. They have another girl in the family and this one's a Gem which matches Jewel. Good thing Max and Emmett were around.