Date: Nov 04, 2016 1:38 am Title: Chapter 28
A new baby girl! Sweet Gemma...I have to ask...how do men give birth without a vagina?! lol
Date: Nov 03, 2016 9:11 pm Title: Chapter 27
Omg I need more plz plz plz give me more..... Fab story
Date: Nov 03, 2016 1:08 pm Title: Chapter 27
Great chapter! Max and Em have Anna. I laughed aloud with Max's thoughts during childbirth. I think all of us have had those same violent thoughts during that moment in time!
Now Brian and Justin are having their own child together. The kids asking for another baby (or a babydoll) was adorable. I could understand both Brian and Justin's frustrations with each other but I'm glad they worked it out. I'm also happy that Mel has been sticking around and is redesigning her life the way she wants to live it. How long will Michael be in jail? I'm sorry that we didn't see the trial BUT I can live with that since he's in jail.
Looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Nov 03, 2016 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 27
How sweet... it's a girl!!! Ok, seriously, eating before the hospital is so essential lol. Hours of labor on an empty stomach sucks.
Justin and the kids were so cute! Now we get another baby (and a baby doll).
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2016 4:06 am Title: Chapter 27
Max and Emmett have a baby girl. That Jewel is something else thinking she could take the baby home. Justin's going to be a father again and isn't it interesting that Mel is the one to get through to him that it's Brian's first time going through this. What did happen to Mikey? Did I miss the trial? Love this story.
Date: Nov 02, 2016 4:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm in awe of Michael's stupidity! I mean Holy shitballs!!!!!!!!!!! WOW. All 3 caught up in their own machinations. No wonder there were so many hits on youtube for that video. LMFAO! Priceless. thankfully all 3 went down. Shame that Lindsey got a reduced sentence, but that's the way of things in the legal world and at least it got Michael nailed to the wall!
both weddings were lovely and thrilled that they finally happened!!
Had to laugh at the end part with Eric. serves the little asshole right. Emmett is one ballsy character! Love him! Eric was definitely shown teh door adn in public even! well desrved.
Brilliant chapter! Everything seems to be ending up exactly the way it should and looks like you're tying everythign up in a pretty red bow.
cheers
Elaine
Date: Nov 02, 2016 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Man, I wanted see Mikey arrested in his footie Captain Astro pjs... Lol
Max's inscription was so perfect. I love Emmett and I love stories that find him love and happiness. I wonder if they'll live in NYC or the Pitts?
I hope Mikey writes to Brian cuz they only let them use small pencils and the writing would totally look childlike... Lol I'm so cruel to the ding bat.
Debbie should have gotten the deal and Lindsay hard labor.
I guess the next wedding is our boys. Awwwww.
Date: Nov 02, 2016 3:57 am Title: Chapter 26
Yay!! More Max and Emmett. I see the end is near and I cannot decide if I can't wait for the end or don't want this ride to end. This has been a major bright spot, for me😃.
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2016 3:09 am Title: Chapter 26
It's official. The Kinney Clan is one big family. And there's a new Dick going around with delusions. Loving this.
Date: Nov 01, 2016 1:32 pm Title: Chapter 25
Great Chapter!! The Dynamic Dummies are all getting their just desserts. Even with Lindsay's reduced sentence, she should still get at least 10 years since Captain Malfunction will be facing at least two charges of his own. Not only did she blackmail Michael and Deb but she is also an accessory to attempted murder; that should count for quite a bit of hard time.
As for Debbie: Throw the book at her!! What kind of... LAWD HAM TURKEY I don't even have words for her brand of thievery and selfishness! How dare she ruin her brothers good name posthumously?! She deserves every single bit of jail time AND a special spot in the ninth circle of Hell for what she's done.
Michael....Well there will be no getting out of or away from any of his misdeeds this time! LMAOOOOOooooo By his own mealy mouth admission, he is guilty of it all. He will defintely be somebody's MITCH in prison- not that I think he'll last that long. Between that ever-present whine and his attitude of entitlement, someone is bound to stuff him in a dryer, turn it on high and put Captain Malfunction out of everyone's misery.
Max and Em's wedding made me tear up. It was so sweet. Justin's reflections after the wedding was over was also very touching. There's a new dynamic to Max and Jay's friendship now and I don't think either of them are sorry there is. They have found family at long last!!
WRITE On Star!
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2016 4:59 am Title: Chapter 25
I'm always pleased when I see another chapter. This one gave the evil threesome a look at jailtime. How funny that Mikey posted it all on You tube without watching it first. Lindsay is getting off much to easy. Max and Emmett are finally joined in matrimony. Hallaluhah!
Date: Oct 31, 2016 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Omg! that was bloody HILARIOUS! Oh I'm so glad Max and Emmett saw that! No wonder there are so many hits on that video! WOW! I absolutely cannot wait to see the fall out from all of this! Hooray for Youtube!! BWAHAHAHAH! Oh I can't stop laughng over it all.
All three are going to go down! I thought the snub at the gallery was epic. This has it beat by a country mile!
I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter in this!
Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Oct 31, 2016 3:41 pm Title: Chapter 24
OMG what incredibly awful stupid evil people! So glad evil will out and loving that it's on video!!! That's of course our authoress strutting her stuff.
Max and Emmett are too cute!
Cant wait to see what else is in store.
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2016 3:18 am Title: Chapter 24
Taken down by their inability to keep a secret and YouTube thank goodness Michael started his blog, they just wrapped themselves in a bow for the police.
What A Bunch of Dumbasses!!
Date: Oct 31, 2016 2:57 am Title: Chapter 24
Brilliant plan to use YouTube!!! Now there is videotaped evidence against the co-conspirarors! Deb can't get Michael out of hot water; Hell she can't get herself out of it either because of her admission to identity theft! Then there is Lindsay's admission of knowing where a missing person was and knowing that a crime was committed and how she did nothing. OMG! Max is right that they all shot themselves in the foot... and the ASS too! LMAO!
WRITE On Star!
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2016 2:22 am Title: Chapter 24
Max is not going to be bored for much longer. Those Utube videos are gonna come back to haunt the evil threesome.
Date: Oct 30, 2016 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 23
Fantastic. You made a very special partner for Em.
Thanks for sharing.
JoAnn
Date: Oct 30, 2016 6:46 pm Title: Chapter 23
Wow! Yay Max & Emmett are pregnant! 'Get to the point Kinney before I die' lmao
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2016 6:38 pm Title: Chapter 23
Lindsay is so pathetic She thought she had the upper hand and found out she has nothing, I can understand Justin wanting to follow her outside and tell her off but it is better to get let her think she still has some allies in Pittsburgh.
Mel has finally started growing her back bone and has truly seen Lindsay for the worthless cow she is.
Max finally got to set the right mood to properly propose to Emmett and now with a baby on the way and two weddings to plan they really need to get rid of The Idiot Brigade once and for all.
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter :)
Date: Oct 30, 2016 4:57 pm Title: Chapter 23
My heart is weeping with joy right now!!! Oh Max and Em are not only getting married but having a baby! YAY!!! That child is going to be FABULOUS <in my Em voice> So happy that Em is finding happiness at last!
Mel's public diss of Bitchzilla was PERFECT! It's about time she started standing up for herself again.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2016 2:03 pm Title: Chapter 23
I can't get over Lindsay. "Mel, it’s so good to see you. Do you think we could talk? I want us to be able to be friends again.” She's got some nerve. Max and Emmett are going to be parents. A dream come true.
Date: Oct 30, 2016 11:31 am Title: Chapter 1
I was hoping someone smack Lindsay before they let her leave the gallery..but for now i'm so excited about the wedding but let Maxie & Emmett do the wedding first so no one can steal the attention from our boys when it's their time to walk the isle...Please another baby soon for them...ðŸ™ðŸ™ðŸ™
Date: Oct 30, 2016 11:11 am Title: Chapter 23
Man, I wanted Justin to go after her and tell her "Look what all your lies and sceeming got me... Brian and this ring you insignificant poser!" Or maybe hit her with a cream pie (chocolate silk pie is too difficult to make and too yummy to waste on her). Sam did a good job at embarrassing her. All in all, I still want jail time... Lol
Max and Emmett are so cute. I love Brian's gift. And Emmetts reaction... awwwww!!!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2016 1:58 am Title: Chapter 22
That was funny how Sam let Lindsay know that she has been replaced and that she will never again have access to The Art World, all her enemies got a good show and the story is going to spread like wildfire, by morning she won't have a leg to stand on and her name will be the butt of many jokes. (Mommy won't be able to save Lindsay's reputation due to the fact that she will be to busy trying to save her own)
Sam gave the press just the sort of gossip they will be salivating over for awhile they are going to be digging into her past quite thoroughly, sex sales and the fact that Lindsay/Liddy was whoring herself out should make for some interesting fodder lol.
Good that all three idiots will be together should make it easier for them all to be arrested.
Brian handled Lindsay with just enough decorum so that she knows her words have no affect on him and he gave nothing away about what awaits her in Pittsburgh.
Feel bad for Max his plans didn't work out the way he wanted with Emmett hopefully the second time will be better.
Time to finish taking out the trash :)
Date: Oct 30, 2016 1:57 am Title: Chapter 22
LMFAO!!!!!!!! I cannot stop laughing like a damn hyena in heat! That was magnificiently done! Doors slamming in Cruella DeWhore's face is the least of her worries. Then she tried to make Brian feel as worthless as she does by telling him about Justin and how he may have aborted Aiden or given Brian's child away....LOL Brian sure told that trollop that her attempts at ruining the night for him and Justin weren't going to work. The public kiss as reporters looked on and snapped pictures was a wonderful touch to "The Fall of the Floozy!" That would probably make a very nice headline and there are certainly hundreds of pictures to go with that. OMG! I can't wait for the fallout from this very public ass-whooping.
And now she's on her way to Pittsburgh where she thinks she's going to enact revenge and wreak havoc. Uh-huh Ms. DeWhore! Everyone that matters has your number and I'll bet they're willing to play and beat you at your own game. Michael and Deb would be smart to climb up out of Lindsay's business...but we know they are NEVER smart!!
WRITE On Star!!!
~Nichelle