
Date: Oct 30, 2016 1:44 am Title: Chapter 22
Evidently Lindsay wasn't embarrassed enough. She had to try to get back at Brian. Luckily it didn't work. Poor Max. I hope everything is okay or... is he pregnant? That would be icing on the cake!
Date: Oct 30, 2016 1:28 am Title: Chapter 22
WHAT A B***H!! I was this close to feeling sorry for Lindsay, then she opened her mouth. Awe sweet Max & Emmit moment. I can't wait to see what happens when everyone gets back to Pittsburgh.
Date: Oct 30, 2016 12:50 am Title: Chapter 21
LOVED THIS UPDATE!!! At first, I thought Mel was deliberately trying to start a fight with Justin. But as the conversation went on, I understood what she was doing- a little reminder of his WASP upbringing. She prepared him to deal with Lindsay's passive-aggressive tactics using herself as a model. My respect for her just rose a bit higher. Hopefully she will really take Justin's advice about learning to live again to heart. The 'Mel' I know would never opt to live as a zombie. It's time she rediscovers that fire she had.
As for Bitchzilla: I can't wait for her downfall to begin! She really is a piece of work in all her gold digging glory. I actually feel sorry for Sam having to deal with her. I can appreciate that when Lindsay tried to make Jay insignificant, Sam spoke up on his behalf. I wonder if Nancy will change her tune regarding Jay's work when she witnesses Jay and company break her daughter. Nancy and Lindsay are fair-weather people but they both have to know that any attempts to undermine Justin's career and life will be met with a well-planned, throughly-executed revenge. I can't wait for that lesson to be meted out.
The reunion and proposal was EVERYTHING I could have hoped for. Brian and Justin on the same wavelength is always a thing of beauty to watch. I'm looking forward to the reactions of the Peterson-Novotny factions as Brian is placed even further from their reach!
WRITE On Star!
~Nichelle

Date: Oct 30, 2016 12:17 am Title: Chapter 21
Love the fact they bought rings for each other and that they aren't letting The Idiot Brigade stand in the way of them having a life together with their family.
I think Max could be pregnant?
I love the fact that Max bought a ring for Emmett it is time for Emmett to get a shot at happiness and Max is perfect for him.
I just wanna see Lindsay go splat all over the front page of all the newspapers with Mommy Dearest's face right beside hers.
Lindsay is so awful that you can't help but feel bad for Sam and can't wait for them to get to the show so everyone can cheer Sam on along with Justin, Brian, Max, Emmett and anyone else who has an axe to grind against Liddy/Lindsay.
That chocolate silk pie sounds delicious I can understand why Justin was pissed at Sam.
Time For Lindsay to Go Down! :)
Date: Oct 29, 2016 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 21
Awww, I feel all warm and squshy after that. Max is knocked up, way to go Emmett!! Awww, see I'm still emoting.
Lindsay/Liddy is as they'd say in the old days, a trip. A one woman wrecking crew that has met her blonde match. Her downfall is going to be awesome.
Date: Oct 29, 2016 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 21
Love that they both had rings for the other! Max & Emmett are perfect for each other.
Date: Oct 29, 2016 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 21
Fantastic double update. So love your fics, can never get enough.
Thanks for sharing.
JoAnn
Date: Oct 29, 2016 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 21
I love the visual of the boys gaging and Jewel awww'ing over Max and Emmett. So happy that Emmett is getting his happy ever after.
Waiting for Lindsey/Liddy to get her ass kicked by Justin.

Date: Oct 29, 2016 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 21
Yay, they're getting married and hopefully Emmett and Max too. I can't wait to see what you have planned for the show. I even feel sorry for Sam in a way. Very fun chapter. Pie and a little monkey and Mel spending time with Gus.
Date: Oct 29, 2016 3:15 pm Title: Chapter 20
So glad Justin got all his memories back! Max is a devious one isn't he? Can't wait to see what he has in store for 'Liddy's' family. lol
Date: Oct 29, 2016 2:33 pm Title: Chapter 20
I'm glad that Justin remembers everyone and everything. Now he and Brian are armed with the information to help them succeed this time around. I'm also glad that Brian explained the Mel/Lindz dynamic to him. Lindsay truly ruled her household with an iron fist in a velvet glove. Him and Justin's resolve to just be 'Brian and Justin with their three kids' was sweet.
Lindsay has some damn nerve!! Trying to rule Max in his own gallery?! REALLY TRICK?! REALLY? OOOooh I can't wait for the show! I'll bet she'll wish that she kept her family in Pittsburgh and went into hiding by the time Mad Max and Jay get through with her lying, scheming ass. I'm glad that Max called her on her comment about Justin's memory. The bitch backpeddled but it didn't change the fact that Max caught her out there. It was as good as an admission that she knew Justin's past before he became Jay. She needs to worry about that instead of where Sam's painting will be placed.
WRITE On Star!
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 29, 2016 8:47 am Title: Chapter 20
I cannot wait for the show. Lindsay is such an idiot. YAY, Justin has his memory!

Date: Oct 29, 2016 4:15 am Title: Chapter 20
Justin remembers and they will be happy together. But we have to wait and find out what will happen at the show with Sam and Liddy. That should be fun. And how they get even with Deb and Mikey.

Date: Oct 29, 2016 4:14 am Title: Chapter 20
It is wonderful that Justin's memories have come back cause now no one can play him about how Brian was five years ago, they can both move forward with their three kids and live their lives with no one having power over them ever again.
I hope Mel steps up and starts acting like a parent to Gus or she will be facing the wrath of Brian and Justin together.
I can't wait for the opening of this show I want the press to get every word and every photo, it is so nice that Mommy and Daddy Peterson are going to be there, to have them basking that their daughter has a successful hetero relationship right before the hammer swings is priceless.
Once Lindsay goes down then they can go after Deb and Michael it is getting close to all the dominoes falling and for them to pay All Douchebags need to rot preferably in a cell.
I am biting my nails trying to figure out what happens next? ;)
Date: Oct 29, 2016 4:01 am Title: Chapter 20
Absolutely loving this! Thanks for the great story :)
Date: Oct 28, 2016 8:32 pm Title: Chapter 19
I am really enjoying this story. I love strong Justin.
Date: Oct 28, 2016 3:46 pm Title: Chapter 19
That chapter was gorgeous! Loved it all. Nice intro with Lindsey and Sam. I was giggling knowing full well that Sam is in on the plan and all of Lindsey's plans are going to go south in a big way.
Now....to the gut wrentching part of this chapter. That chat between Gus and Justin. Really lovely. Gus opened up, sharing his fears, his anxiety. I'm so glad they had that talk. gus's fears are natural with 2 families coing together like these 2 did. some blood, some not and inbetween. It's not the blood that matters and I think Gus is understanding that. Glad that justin was able to ease those thoughts.
adn that "little chat" between Justin and Mel. It was a long time coming. Really disappointed that she'd done anything up til now. Just giving excuses. Justin laid it out on the line for her. Basically shit or get off the pot. Now it's up to her.
He went straight ot his childhood home. He's really starting to remember isn't he. YAY!
Excellent chapter!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Oct 28, 2016 3:20 am Title: Chapter 19
Brilliant update. Happy to see Justin giving Mel what she needs, a veral thrashing.
Hate to see Gus so sad and confused regardiing his mother's.
Thanks for sharing, looking forward to more!
JoAnn
Date: Oct 28, 2016 1:03 am Title: Chapter 19
Omg poor Gus...he broke my heart...thank God Justin stepped up and their cool now. And good for him telling Mel off, she needed that. Hopefully she'll start putting Gus first.

Date: Oct 28, 2016 12:54 am Title: Chapter 19
Oh my. He's remembering and I love how he lit into Melanie. Poor Gus.
Date: Oct 28, 2016 12:10 am Title: Chapter 19
Damn, Justin is kicking butt and taking names. Poor Gus. I can understand Mel's point about healing, she was lucky to have Brian take care of Gus.
Date: Oct 28, 2016 12:07 am Title: Chapter 19
YOU TELL HER JAY!!!! Poor Gus feeling left out😟. I cannot wait for all the shoes to drop.

Date: Oct 27, 2016 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 19
That was a beautiful gut-wrenching moment between Justin and Gus that is one scared confused little boy who just needs reassurance that he is loved and won't be abandoned.
Justin telling off Mel made me cheer (I Wish That Had Happened On The Show) she is just making excuses for why she abandoned her son that she wanted so badly, I mean she was so cold to Brian to get him to sign that million dollar insurance policy and his rights to Gus that I couldn't stand her.
Lindsay and Michael made her life Hell Gus was not the cause of it plus Brian did what she didn't think he was capable of, he stepped up as a parent and took responsibility for his son while she ran away (Not surprising she did that on the show after she cheated).
It is not Gus's fault that Mel became a doormat for Lindsay he was a baby, love isn't suppose to make you lose your spine, it is supposed to give you the strength to face any battle head on.
I hope she shows up to ease Gus's pain I think if she doesn't she will have to face the wrath of Justin again.
Lindsay should enjoy her moment in the spotlight cause it will soon be her last. lol
:)
Date: Oct 27, 2016 7:42 pm Title: Chapter 18
Max and Emmett have a great talk. We are all on the same page now as to how Max really feels about justin/Jay. No questions now. Am also gald that Max is realizing whre his place needs to be now that Brian is here. Not that Brian wants to usurp Max's place, but Max needed to get thet Brian needs to be given a chance. I think going forward that Max and Brian are going to be excellent friends. Brian will be able to go to Max for advise and a bit of a history lesson on Jay, and Max will be able to understand more of who Justin was through Brian.
I think once Justin and Jay "merge" so to speak, there will be more of a sense of peace for them all. I don't honestly don't think there's any concern as to whether Justin will cause Jay to question Brian's allegience. Jay is too stong of a personality. Jay remembering Justin will just balance them more I think.
Just love this.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Oct 27, 2016 1:06 pm Title: Chapter 18
Awww his memory is coming back. i hope the past does not bother him with doubts about Brian.