Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2016 12:47 am Title: Chapter 5

Michael is all mixed up.  Thinking if he gets Mel to let Brian see his son Brian will be all love and kisses.  I'm glad the Brian and Justin are trying to solve this delima, but I can't help but wonder why a smart man like Brian used a lawyer that worked with Melanie and thought he was getting good advice?  Love Brad.  He'd going to do Brian well for being a member of the family.  Yay!  Love this story!

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 06, 2016 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 5

Fantastic action and emotion packed update!  Between the last chapter and this my allergies have been acting up, lol.  Poor Jacob worrying about meeting Brian and all the wasted years.  They are just going to have move forward.  The same for poor Gus.

If Michael had been sincere, he would have actually almost been a good father, but nope he's scummy.

Linds and Mel are an embarrassment.

 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 06, 2016 10:48 am Title: Chapter 4

Thanks for the update.  I always enjoyed Brian and Jennifer's relationship in Season 5.  Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 06, 2016 2:05 am Title: Chapter 4

Melanie and Lindsay have gone too far with trying to keep Brian away and Michael should loose everything especially his daughter's respect for the way he's been treating Gus.  You can't send Gus back to that kind of envirament.  Jacob needs to spend time with his brother.  You did a good job of making me really angry with Mel and Mikey.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2016 2:56 pm Title: Chapter 3

Yeah!!!! I'm so happy that they are getting back together.  I hope they get the chance they originally deserved and can raise both boys together.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2016 3:19 am Title: Chapter 3

Justin going to Canada was the wake up he needed to face what...who he has been avoiding for twelve years, perhaps this time they can have a mature relationship without 'The Family' getting in the way. (Just need to talk to Daphne before she tries to cream Brian)

I am not surprised by Mel's reaction she never liked the fact that she came second to Brian in Lindsay's eyes, instead of being mature and talking about the situation with her partner she just made Brian the villain in her story and that turned her into a bitter, vindictive shrew.

While dismissing the fact that Gus plays a factor in this she is using him as nothing more than a possession, she doesn't love Gus the way a parent should makes her and Lindsay no better than Jack or Joan.

Lindsay wants someone to take care of her and she will stay with the devil himself if it means she gets her creature comforts.

The fact that Gus has been missing for a week has not cause them any concern makes me think that they are seriously hiding something which whiny Michael knows about and he is helping them??

Michael isn't even worth a paragraph of course it is only the third chapter as the story goes along I am sure I will have a few choice words for that Asshat.

In this fic I hope Mel, Lindsay and Michael pay for their stupidity :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2016 2:40 am Title: Chapter 3

That went really well.  Melanie being a bitch.  Lindsay being the caught in the middle one but wanting it all.  Michael being delusional.  And Justin finally listening to reason.  Gus is loved he just doesn't know it.  I wonder if something sneaky is going on in that brain of his.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2016 7:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Justin is getting some of the long held anger off his chest. It's only the start I know. he has lots more to unload, BUT...he also needs to listen to Brian and keep  an open mind. will be hard to do because he's had 12 years of anger and bitterness to hold on to and it's not something you can just shrug and say, "Oh, OK...I understand" and then carry on. 12 years is a long time, so he and Brian are going to have to straight up and honest with each other.

Ben's convo with Brian was so honest. I was glad he said what he did. Brian didn't intend to be malicious or hurtful. to him, in his eyes, he didn't see it as anything but getting Michael to stop with the white party crap. He went about it entirely the wrong way though and there definitely were consequences. It was a bad scenario all round and so many people were hurt by it. I am however, glad that brian and Michael's friendship ended. I don't think the Michael will let things go however now that justin is back. He's going to react very badly.

How is everyone else going to react once they find out about Justin adn Jacob? I'm hoping Jen will be able to help Brian in the Justin and Jacob department, especially once she finds out why he left specifically.

Am waiting with baited breath now to find out what happens in Toronto. What excuses teh girls have, their reasonings behind the order for Brian etc. Kind of hoping that the girls screwed up enought that Brian can somehow get Gus.

congrats on teh start of what looks like another fantastic story..

Cheers,

Elaine

 

 

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2016 6:11 am Title: Chapter 2

Love the start of this story.

What's going to happen in Toronto, inquiring minds would like to know.

Keep on writing Star!

Sandy

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2016 4:22 am Title: Chapter 2

Okay so Brian's plan to get Michael to choose Ben backfired on both of them and maybe Justin shouldn't have run away, but Michael believed that at long last he was getting his dream come true and Justin believed that he wasn't good enough for Brian.

No one used their brains properly and no one got what they wanted.

Jacob and Gus can possibly be the catalyst to get Justin to listen to Brian??

What Justin finds in Canada will hopefully be enough to help Brian get his rights back and help him from being arrested before he can talk to Gus.

I wouldn't be surprised if Lindsay was cheating again or if Mel is aswell, they were always two people who preferred to ignore the problem than address that there is one.

I always wondered if they had Gus to save their relationship that sweet innocent baby kept them from ever admitting that the relationship was over years ago??

 

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2016 3:20 am Title: Chapter 2

Soooo....Justin gets to do all the talking and feels he doesn't have to listen? He's not being very fair in that department at all. It's good that he is willing to help, but he needs to drop the anger because what he did by not telling Brian about Jacob was far more hurtful than what he just assumes happened between Michael and Brian.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2016 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow! Off to a great start. angst plus. Very excited to see what happens next. I can't really blame Justin for taking off like he did. He was young and terribly hurt. If it were almost anyone else I would've wanted him to tell Brian, but with justin thinking Brian and Michael were together?? YEah....I think I'd do the same thing in all honesty.

Go Daphne! I so love her in all your stories. She is teh exact opposite of michael and shows what being a "best friend" is all about.

Justin seems to making a success of himself in a farily short period of time. Especially considering he was also pregnant and having Jacob.

What the hell is up with the girls? How the hell can they not realize their son hasn't been home in 2 days?!? WTF!!!!! they aren't even in teh story yet and I already want to flay them alive. and not allowing Brian to see Gus...ARGH! What's with that order against him? What did the uber bitches do?

Another exciting start. Can'twait for more!

Cheers,

Elaine

Author's Response:

Justin’s reaction is exactly that youth. Brian should have thought about Justin when he was trying to teach Michael a lesson.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2016 1:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

WOW!! I don't even know what to think right now. I'm certainly pissed off with Mel and Michael. Strangely, I'm a little peeved with Justin too because he didn't wait for the answers he needed. But in all fairness, when does a teenager EVER wait before acting on impulse (I'm dealing with that again now and have gone through it before with my oldest son who's 21 and still impulsive)? 

I feel really bad for Gus. No child should have to feel like they are unloved and unwanted. Mel should really be ashamed of herself and seek therapy for that mean streak she has and her control issues. To tell him that his father doesn't care about him is beyond cruel and Lindsay's lack of a backbone didn't help matters. She had ample opportunity to tell Gus the truth but something tells me she didn't have time if she's 'impressing' her boss the way I think she is....<eyebrow raised>

As for Michael, I think there is a little more to this than meets the eye and Michael is at the bottom of it. I don't blame Justin for not wanting to share Jacob with Michael as he had to with Brian. It would have just been one more thing for Michael to whine and criticize Justin about.

Well this is surely a tangled web that I am looking forward to unraveling!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Author's Response:

Everyone is flawed this time. Brian for thinking he was helping Michael realize he didn’t want Brian and Justin for being afraid to find out the truth.