Date: Nov 28, 2016 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 4
Read this all in one go. Delighted that you are putting your comedic ability into a crack fic. It;s just so completely ridiculously funny and over the top!
The fact that Alex seems to want to continue to help these 2...it's almost to the point that he's gonna reap what he sows. LOL. As Brian as said b4. You can't cure stupid.
Emmett is funny as hell!
Such a fun read>
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Nov 28, 2016 5:44 am Title: Chapter 4
Love, love it!! Can see them both stuck to their chairs with their faces pressed to the window.
Date: Nov 28, 2016 2:08 am Title: Chapter 4
LMAO!!!! Synthetic cum!!! I LOVE it!! Justin is a devious little twat. Michael and Lindsay have no idea what they unleashed especially with Em, Blake and Daph involved. I hollered over the moms grounding their grown ass babies!!
WRITE On Star!!
~Nichelle
Date: Nov 28, 2016 1:59 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh my days, so funny! Can't wait for more
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Nov 28, 2016 1:48 am Title: Chapter 4
Alex loss this battle before he even started he can't even get them to admit they are delusional so how can he help them?
The glue and singing was so funny I can't wait to find out what else the glue was used for and what they come up with next?
Date: Nov 28, 2016 1:35 am Title: Chapter 4
Now that was funny! I still think Alex might need a little help himself.
Date: Nov 27, 2016 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 3
I feel llike Alex needs a rabies shot and 2 straightjackets Oh and 2 muzzles so he doesn't get bit again.
Blake's last line says it all "you can't cure stupid."
Date: Nov 27, 2016 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is sosilly! I love the apathy of the group. Their self involvement mirrors Mikey and Linds but with completely different motivation and results. It's almost as if the two groups are speaking different languages. How funny that they left Alex to Linds and Mikey? Your work is such a joy to read. It's laugh out loud funny.
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2016 8:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
Okay this story is too funny Michael and Lindsay couldn't plan their way out of a cardboard box with the lid open and holes poked into it.
Alex must be on something if he thinks he can help these two dimbulbs and him trying to get everyone else to help is laughable too he needs to lay off the drugs and face reality.
If they aren't listening to Alex why does he think they will listen to Justin?
This is going to be a fun ride ;)
Date: Nov 27, 2016 5:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
OMG!!!! I can't STOP laughing and gagging! Any reference to Michael and Lindsay in sexual situations or the mentioning of their boy or girly bits, especially featuring Brian or Justin, tend to have me throwing up in my mouth a little bit. LOL Poor Alex trying to cure stupid and crazy is absolutely hilarious. The guys are in it strictly for the entertainment value of it all and I don't blame them. Lindsay and Michael need solitary confinement ASAP! They have a brand of delusion even a psych ward wouldn't cure. I swear this is the extreme of Histrionic Personality Disorder mixed with Borderline Personality Disorder and a dash of Bizarre Delusion Disorder for good measure! I might have even thought about Shared Schizophrenia, in which one of them starts out completely rational and buys into the other person's delusions, but that I'm not sure either one of them was sane even before Justin met Brian....LOL
Looking forward to more hijinx from the Dumbassment Duo!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I was thinking of all of you when I wrote this.
Date: Nov 27, 2016 5:42 pm Title: Chapter 3
I honestly don't know how you come up with these scenarios. Each story you post has such interesting and different levels of crazy. You are definitely a bright spot...BYW, Thanks Lorie for the different meeting of our boys that allows for this funny story.
Author's Response:
Without Lori this wouldn't have been written. She steered me through all of the first chapter. So I thank God she's so wonderful.
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2016 3:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm enjoying this greatly, but my laptop for some reason won't let me post long reviews, so I'll have to wait til I get home. Right now I'm high in the mountains of Branson MO
Author's Response:
Just laugh with me that's the best compliment I could get.
Date: Nov 27, 2016 3:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
HILARIOUS 😂They do put the cray in crazy. Alex should just lock them up and throw away the key.
Author's Response:
All I can say is poor poor Alex, he really is delusional if he thinks he can help them.
Date: Nov 27, 2016 9:30 am Title: Chapter 1
I laughed so very hard - this is side splittingly funny. I am so excited about the progress of this story because the beginning was fantastic!
Author's Response:
I figured less drama this time.
Date: Nov 27, 2016 7:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Screeching with laughter. Write on!
Author's Response:
I hoping to keep it funny.
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2016 5:53 am Title: Chapter 2
Love the new story! Your updates always brighten my day!
Date: Nov 27, 2016 4:23 am Title: Chapter 1
That was so funny. Those two are such a waste of air. Poor Alex he needs his head examined if he thinks they can be helped.
Author's Response:
I was in the mood for funny.