Reviewer: ConnieMelissa Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2016 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 29

Okay, I'm back...I could not not review this chapter. It was so original. Using Brian's family...ingenious. 

I am loving this story. I wonder what Michael has in store for us since Lindsay is about to give birth to Gus's cousin...is he going to marry Claire to get back at Brian and Justin?

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2016 11:22 am Title: Chapter 29

OH, that was so good!!!! 

 

I think Ryder is my favorite non QAF character.  He is just something else.

 

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2016 3:55 am Title: Chapter 29

Wow Lindsay would go down that low just to get what she wants but i guess she didn't expect anything to backfire..So this is what she was talking about what she's done to get Brian to forgive,but she didn't realize she's making it worst!!Good for you Nancy standing up against daughter which is good if its because of what she's doing but as usual bcoz you just don't want to get embarrassed..Now that ur cunt daughter doesn't have any support who she's going to come to now,maybe made up with the whiny brat??

I want to see Justin to fight this time,it's exciting to see Daph & Jussy works together they played well and no one would suspect or notice until the person they're aiming is being hit with the storm...

Another great chapter,can't wait for the next one..Thanks!

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2016 12:52 am Title: Chapter 28

I love tough Jen.  Deb and her together are dangerous. The Petersons are perfect snobs.  Poor Lindsay she'll have to find another old man.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2016 5:55 pm Title: Chapter 28

I'm imagining Deb at the country club. Oh what a breath of fresh air she'd be amongst the snooty bunch. LOL. The good thing is, at least from my own experience, is that the Nancy and Ron's are really few and far between. Most of the members at the club my family and I belonged to would've thought her a hoot. A bit abrasive at times, but a hoot none the less.

That entire conversation with Nancy there was exceptional! I was in giggles reading it. Then...throw in Michael!! I just love imagining all these scenes in my mind's eye. hehehe. Michael gets told what's what by Lindsey, that she doesn't give a shit about him, and he was temporarily a means to an end. However, not surprisingly was a useless tool. I'm with Ryder here though. What is she up to? What is her reasoning for all this. What is this thing she did that she mentioned? and does she really think that Justin gives a shit about craig? Does she really thing that she effected him in any way shape or form? she's delusional!

Excellent!! 

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2016 10:30 am Title: Chapter 28

Oh, no what is Lindsay up to? 

 

I love Jen and Ryder in this story.  :)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2016 4:58 am Title: Chapter 28

Get Her Ryder!!! Make the Cow Go Fetal!! :)

Reviewer: Erbear4474 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2016 3:29 am Title: Chapter 14

I love your creation of Ryder.... he cracks me up..."Daddy Bear" and “The force is strong in this one.” Ryder tells us and grabs Gus to tickle him.

just great! 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 27

YEAH!!!!  Ben and Ryder!!!!  I'm so excited for this couple.

 

Thanks for the update.  The thought of Lindsay and Craig together is so repulsive.  They kinda belong together though. 

 

I have faith that everything will work out.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 4:49 pm Title: Chapter 26

Jaw is currently on the floor. Woah! Did not see that one coming at all. Completely side-swiped. 

1st off, Lindsey is a complete and utter idiot. We all know she goes both ways. She's already tried the marriage for convenience thing with The frech dude, Gui. Now she's tryingit again with Craig. Even if it goes to court, any judge worth his/her salt will see the correlation between Justin and Craig. A 7 year old is able to put 2 and 2 together. Mind you, with Lindsey and Craig, they probably came up with 5. Now Craig is going to be facing criminal charges for trying to pull this shit off. Did he really think that everyone would just let him get away with it? That they'd just ignore the agreement made earlier? Not only that, but the fact that Lindsey also took money out of an account that she shouldn't have....well, I'm assuming that some for of legal action will be taken there as well.  And trying to take custody of the other 2 kids is unbelievable. What gaul! 

Nothing better than seeing a pissed of Lindsey! she just digs her self deeper and deeper into a big pile of shit. Her little show of hystrionics was very telling of her emotional state never mind her true intentions. I mean, here she is, sitting with her *cough* "fiance" *cough*, and screaming out about how she should have the life that Justin does with Brian. She wants Brian and that life, and Craig wants access to money. both are greedy beyond belief. That greed will be their ultimate downfall. 

Intense and brilliant chapter!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 2:52 pm Title: Chapter 27

Glad that Ryder and Ben are about to get a little Freaky-Sneaky going on....LOL It's about time! I doubt Peen-less, Ass-less Michael was satisfying. And Michael was just vicious for mentioning Ben's condition so blase like that. I probably would have slapped him down simply on general principle. Classless cunty bastard! But I love that Ryder was there to shine the light on the idiocy of the imbecile and really question his intelligence for his continued loyalty to that conniving, self-important shrew Lindsay. I'm also glad that Ben thought about Brian before telling Michael where he could stick his supposed blackmail. Perhaps it's better to just file the paperwork and let the chips fall where they may. Michael will be too busy chasing after Brian and nipping at Lindsay's heels to make fruitless plans that he'll be too preoccupied to read the paperwork. No contest divorce anyone??  

As for TweedleleDUMB.... Lawd....SMH I would almost pity him except the way my feelings are set up.... Nope not possible! He was stupid for a few reasons: 1) I can't imagine a grown ass man- or even one that's supposed to be a grown ass man- wanting someone to take care of them. I mean really Michael...how old are you?? 2) Thinking that Ben was just going to wait around for him to make up his mind of whom and what he wanted was just DUMB... Even the most docile dogs get tired and eventually will bite their owner. Guess Ben's day has come and gone. 3) Why on God's green and purple earth would he trust the ONE person who wants Brian more than he does? BITCHZilla has more going for her in terms of entrapping Brian than he does. She even has more balls than Michael does and that's saying a whole lot since he was supposed to be born with his own set of them. Can we now officially change his name to DUMBZilla?

Now back to his Wonder Twit Twin Lindsay: OMG!! Soooooo this Trick is switching Teams simply to reacquire Gus to fill her coffers. Not only that but she's willing to become engaged to Craig Taylor...aka Sperm Donor to do it thinking that ANY judge won't see through all that Maybeline? First, if she thinks that Justin is going to give ANY money that may go to support his deadbeat Dad, she was sorely mistaken. Since Brian and Justin's assets are joined, Justin would definitely have to agree to that.

Secondly, Daphne was freaking fabulous. First she dogged Lindsay and her motives, then she goes ahead and reminds Craig that he is in direct violation of a settlement to avoid prosecution. I love the fact that he was so damn arrogant that he thought Daphne and Justin wouldn't bring up that he isn't even supposed to be in the same room- let alone have ANY contact- with Justin.

Their third mistake was to try and petition the court to take custody of JJ and Julia. WHAT THE HELL?!!!!! I wouldn't trust a pack of AA batteries to these nitwits let alone children. By way of Lindsay's rant and spewing of the real reason she is trying to gain custody of Gus, she clearly showed herself as unstable and a hypocrite to boot. Then Craig thinking that he could taunt Justin about his lifestyle when he tried to make said homosexual financially support him was just plain ludicrious. Something tells me that Jennifer is not only going to see Debbie as she says. I think there will not only be a visit to Craig but probably in the company of some police officials as well. Read the fine print jackass....Read the fine print! 

WHOO-WEE!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 11:07 am Title: Chapter 27

Lindsay and Craig?!?!  Oh, no looks like Craig didn't read the fine print, lol.  Lindsay better get prepared for conjugal visits, lol.

Court is going to be a trip! Go Daphne!