[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2016 3:05 pm Title: Chapter 21
I love where this is going. Gus learning he can be a kid and Ryder hopefully finding a lover in Ben.
Date: Dec 18, 2016 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 22
Oh! That was good. Let Drew catch him ,please.
Date: Dec 18, 2016 8:57 am Title: Chapter 22
So Lindsay are you ready to walk in the blazing charcoal because that's where you're headed specially now that you pissed Justin off that much by contacting the sperm donor,not to mention a more pissed off Jen??!!!!And let's not forget the sharky Daphne,you really don't know what hit you when the time comes..😆😆😆😆
Hahahahaah i can picture out Michael while running away from Drew...who wouldn't with the size like Drew has,you should be running to the hill..😆😆😆😆
Date: Dec 18, 2016 4:23 am Title: Chapter 21
YES Ben!! Grab that CLUE and Ditch the Mitch!! Michael wasn't worth the effort it takes to tear off a piece of toilet paper let alone trying to build a life with. I feel sorry for Ben that it took years instead of mere hours for him to get the fact that Michael is a spolied rotten little troll who lives in his head and has absolutely no heart. I'm happy that Mel has gotten the same clue about Lindsay.
Every chapter I like Ryder more and more. He's down-to-earth and so genuine that even children with severe trust issues flock to him. I hope he becomes Ben's knight in shining armor too. He's already doing a wonderful job with Jenny and Gus.
I really appreciated Brian's talk with Ben. While they both understand Michael, it is taken from different perspectives- both scorned and hurt in their own ways by the thoughtless actions of a whiny weasal out to take everything and give back nothing. I think Brian telling Ben what made him fall for Justin also shed a little more light on why Ben isn't feeling remorse. Again, Michael isn't worth the price of a number 2 pencil. Brian's reaction to Justin bussing Mark on the cheek was incredibly funny. If I was Justin, I probably would have done the same thing and promised a lap dance for later since Mark managed to prevent DUMBelina and TweedleleDUMB's entry to the club. HA! Let the FUN begin!!!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Dec 18, 2016 3:17 am Title: Chapter 21
Ben it's a good thing you finally realized that you need to move on and have some color in your life in the form of Ryder..I'm loving Ryder every time. .ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜And Brian can be a real talker when he wants to and a very convincing one too..🤗😙
Date: Dec 17, 2016 5:09 pm Title: Chapter 20
Lindsay is pathetic and petty... such a good and loving friend is so quick to throw his past -key word PAST- in his face
Date: Dec 17, 2016 11:22 am Title: Chapter 20
Well Dumbelina and TweedleeDUMBass strikes again!! SMH! Michael complaining about where Jenny is staying is laughable. Meanwhile he is still running around like a chicken with his head cut off, trying to get someone to take care of him. HIM!! A long-since-supposed-to-be-grown ass man! I'm so glad that Brian, and everyone else including Mel, sees Michael for the Moronic Mistake he is. If ever there was one time Deb should have swallowed...
Same is going for Nancy Peterson's spoiled, idiotic and unreasonably arrogant get Lindsay. This tricking trollop never ceases to amaze me with her unmitigated gall and sense of entitlement. Threatening a successful gay man with his past when he's been married for the last five years with two children in addition to the child she's been using as a prize calf is the height of desperation and stupidity! Did I mention that Brian is GAY and therefore has no interests in the dried up, over-used, lazy, over-indulged, classless and tasteless prune that Lindsay is. I mean really Lustful Lying Loose-lips Lindsay GET A GRIP on reality. I would venture to bet that Brian doesn't even have so much as a parking ticket let alone has done something that couldn't be chalked up to being a single wild and free man before he met Justin. I really am looking forward to her abject humiliation along with Michael's. You know how I love to punish them and you do a fabulous job of it!
I think Mel is wising up. That talk with Ben really has done some good and now she is going into all of this with her eyes wide open. Furthermore, I'm especially glad that she followed Daphne's advice and obtained a lawyer. Not only was it an extremely smart thing to do but it shows a willingness to negotiate to everyone's benefit. In the wake of Lindsay's departure, I'm happy that Brian offered his shoulder. It has to be hard seeing the pointlessness of a life spent with the wrong person. I think shedding the tears now in the privacy of Brian's conference room, even if it's with a reluctant support system in Daphne and Justin, will give Mel some much needed relief and renew her resolve. I wonder if she can put Lindsay out of the house despite the fact that the mortgage is in both their names. I doubt that with Lindsay luxurious spending with the stolen child support money and emotional blackmail (because that's how I look at what she's done to Brian and Mel), she would have put aside the money to help with the mortgage. Perhaps Justin will by the house after all, this way Mel is able to dissolve any 'assets' she and Lindsay might have had in common without having to wait forever and six years for the house to be refurbished and sold. If Justin buys it, I'm sure that with a few mods Jennifer or another RE Agent will sell Muncher Mansion in no time.
Love the way this is unfolding!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Dec 17, 2016 4:23 am Title: Chapter 20
I can't get over tweedle dee and tweedle dum. They don't have a leg to stand on yet persist in thinking they can win. Against Daphne? I think not.
[Report This]Date: Dec 17, 2016 4:06 am Title: Chapter 20
Why do people in Glass houses always prefer to throw stones when the other side has boulders to crush their little house?
Lindsay is about to get burned taking this to court I hope Mommy and Daddy help so they can sit in court and find out the games she played to keep Brian focused on her, they will be so proud to hear what she has done and how she used her child over and over again.
I feel bad that Gus has to go through this but he has Brian, Justin and Justin's family to help him through.
Mel is finally being smart and putting her children's needs first.
Brian tricking Michael so he could get him out of the way was funny and appropriate considering Michael's stupidity.
Daphne is about to have fun and Lindsay should be scared about what Daphne knows?
Wonder if some press will be in the courtroom? :)
Date: Dec 16, 2016 6:31 am Title: Chapter 19
Oh Lindsay you're on,prepare to face the wolf or shark of a lawyer called Daphne!!You really don't know what you're about to find out when you pissed off Justin and with his family behind,you're digging your own grave..Can't wait for the meeting in Kinnetik..I think Mel woke up from her slumber of always pleasing Lindsay finally!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2016 5:35 am Title: Chapter 19
Mel's looking better. Lindsay is going to be in for biiiiigggg trouble. Please, Matt, don't tell Justin what Brian said. I'd hate to see him sleeping without his favorite pillow.
Date: Dec 16, 2016 3:49 am Title: Chapter 18
Justin has a very interesting family.
Date: Dec 16, 2016 3:48 am Title: Chapter 19
I'm proud of Mel, and not at all surprised by Lindsay unfortunately
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2016 2:41 am Title: Chapter 18
Ryder is so sweet he is willing to do anything so Jenny knows she is loved, even offering to buy a house so they could all live together (Ben you are so moving in!! lol) and Jenny can have peace away from Lindsay.
Mel is trying but she has to try harder and really listen to Gus and Jenny, using work as an excuse is tired and selfish which she can't be anymore.
If Gus is going to give her a chance she has to stop using Brian as a scapegoat and let Lindsay go her own way.
Brian found his happiness and he is not letting anyone take that away from him, he is going to fight tooth and nail to make sure his family is safe from Michael and Lindsay.
Only this time he doesn't have to carry that burden alone he has Justin and some wonderful people in his life now who will stand by him to shoulder the expectations of two people who have never really grown up.
The next chapter will be very interesting:)
Date: Dec 16, 2016 1:21 am Title: Chapter 18
I LOVE the idea of Ryder, Ben, Mel and Jenny (and eventually visits from Gus) living together...
Lindsay has no sense of priorities!
Date: Dec 16, 2016 12:42 am Title: Chapter 18
Wow, Ryder buying a houe for Jenny and Mel , with himelf and Ben thrown in.
Fantastic! Can hear the shreaking and whinning from Linz and Mikey now.
Thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2016 12:33 am Title: Chapter 18
I am so proud of Ryder. He's willing to put up with Melanie to make Jenny happy as long as Ben moves in with them. This ought to be good.
Date: Dec 15, 2016 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 18
I'm loving Ryder each chapter,he's easy going,funny guy and became the father and a hero to Jenny..Mel should just sell.the house and leave Lindsay while they don't hate each other that much and just fucos her time on her kids until they forgive her..Let Michael and Lindsay fend for themselves who cares about them anyway..
Another great chapter!!
Date: Dec 15, 2016 4:10 am Title: Chapter 17
Go Ted! Fantastic!
Thanks for sharing, looking forward to next update!
JoAnn
Date: Dec 14, 2016 9:37 pm Title: Chapter 17
Be for real Mel!
Seriously Mikey is so delusional... he is told straight out and just doesn't want to believe it! Asshat!
Date: Dec 14, 2016 9:23 pm Title: Chapter 17
So I went back and re-read this in it's entirety last night. I admit that I had almost come to the conclusion that Mel was up to something. That her recent attempt at reconciliation with the kids was some sort of ploy. I think though, that after reading this chapter, I can believe in her sincerity. That she really does want this, and there's no malicious intent involved. Daphne isn't going to give her any chances anyway and of course, neither will Justin. Mel I think is finally going to start being honest with herself now, and is realizing that Brian is not the enemy. I am glad that she realized what Daphne was saying about being a parent. The law will always be there, but the kids won't be. Her prioroties have been completely scewed. For the kid's sake, I hope she's able to change those going forward.
thank you for clearing up the whole insurance policy issue. I really didn't like that Mel was questioning Brian on that. It's his policy and his choice how to look after it. Period.Now we know it was actually Lindsey who was looking into it. Obviously it was to find a way to somehow get $$. Thankfully that can't happen.
More family is arriving at Britin. I'm liking Uncle Matt and I'm pretty sure Brian is adoring him atm. :) Who wouldn't?
So tired of Michael's continued "always has always will" crap. does he say it in his sleep? Honestly? when a person is faced with certain things time and time again, wouldn't one, at some point, reasonably assume it be treu? How many times does Michael have to be told NO or that Brian DOESN"T love him. That at this point barely tolerates him. that Brian stays away on purpose. He seems to find away to make excuses for Brian saying or doing the things he does. or that he needs to fly in and save Brian from the evil Justin. *insert eye roll here*. At least he seems to have come to the conclusion that he's going to give up on Ted. Thank goodness for small mercies. Looks like the only person that he's going to have is Lindsey, and even she only barely puts up with him, and only because she's able to manipulate him so easily. He's a basically a puppet.
thanks for this! Readingthis update was a nice break from the doldrums at work.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Dec 14, 2016 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 17
I need an Uncle Matt in my life😀. I am so glad that Mel got her head out of Lindsay's ass. Could Michael be any dumber?
Another great update.
[Report This]Date: Dec 14, 2016 8:29 pm Title: Chapter 17
Meeting Uncle Matt is a treat. Justin has some great people in his family. Now Mikey needs to see a head doctor. He's fixated on one thing and one thing only.
Date: Dec 13, 2016 7:14 pm Title: Chapter 16
Daph is on the scene. Let's hope Mel starts to put Jenny first. Love Ryder, hope he and Ben connect. Can't wait to see what is in store for Linz and Mikey.
Fantastic, thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
Date: Dec 13, 2016 5:53 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh thank goodness Emmett stood his ground with Calvin. That was fantastic! Emmett realizes his worth, as well as teh value of his true friends. Calvin is outa there! Weel, for now anyway. we'll have to see if he tries anything further. He seems to have the same sense of self worth as Michael and Lindsey have. Definiltey and over inflated ego. Drew.......well, he sure did deflate that didn't he. The neighbour's reactions was frigging hilarious! Was laughing my ass off over that! Granny's even getting a new car out if it! Definitely worth Calvin face planting it into her old one. LOL! Calvin's come backs were just so jeuvenile! I mean really....."Make me" and "I'm not scared of you...." Ugh! Reminds me of grade school. It's no wonder he and Michael are friends.
Mel, while her intentions may be to "fix" things, her expectaions are out of whack. She's upset because the kids won't talk to her. What does she expect? And sadly, she's still making excuses. The" I have to work" crap will only go so far. Majority of people have to work, het our kids are still out #1. Seems that her work is her #1. She's still not taking full responsibility, but I hope she's sincere in her intentions. That she'll start taking the right steps in doing what's right for her kids. Up till now, she's been the worst kind of vindictive bitch. she's had so many people on the periferal warn her about what she and Lindsey are ultimately doing to their kids. I really hope she starts doing right by them. That her ego doesn't get in the way.
DAPHNE'S HERE!! Oh let teh games begin! she's not going to let ANTONE fuck with Justin or Brian and lord help anyone to tries! And what an interesting plot twist! that her hubby owns the gallery that Lindsey is wanting to apply to!? BWAHAHAHA! Oh man..........I absolutely CANNOT WAIT to see what's going to come of all this!
AMAZING!
Cheers,
Elaine