Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2016 5:13 pm Title: Chapter 15

Ryder did what we've ALL wanted to do. I must say though, I was completely gutted though. but then again, so was he. The fact he was able to take on Jenny's pain.....A deeply deeply emotional part.

Lyndsey got fired. No surprise. Also not surprising that she want to the Nichols Gallery. There's no way she's going to get an in there though. The very idea is laughable!

speaking of laughable...that Michael thinks he should continue to pursue Ted...that Lindsy is encouraging him...wow......Looking forward to blake kicking his ass. Also want to see Ted lose it on Michael as well. We all knew these 2 were delusional....but seriosuly?!?! The level they're at now is jaw-dropping!

Terrific chapter! Highly emotional and they you eased it with ultimate hilarity! 

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2016 3:08 pm Title: Chapter 16

*Snicker* **Chuckles** ***Laughing*** ****LMAO**** *****ROFLMAO***** Those are all of the emotions I had during the contretemps between Em, Drew and Cunty Calvin!! OMG!!! The visuals of Calvin beating the hell out of himself and the neighbors' reactions.....SMH I ended up with the hiccups trying to catch my breath from laughing! 

I really love Justin like this! He's strong and isn't willing to let anyone get away with excuses for idiotic behavior. However, I am also glad that Ben was there to temper Justin's conversation with Mel. He knows what Mel has endured being married to a selfis, self-absorbed and obsessed person since he's had to live through the same kind of trauma being involved with Michael. Both Lindsay and Michael expect to be taken care of and then emotionally abuse the people who are fulfilling their needs. I'm glad that Ben has resolved to get out while his sanity and self-esteem are still in tact. Hopefully Mel will do the same and find her self-worth again. As much as I hate her actions, I can understand why she felt as if she was always fighting against the shadow of Brian Kinney. I agree with Ben. Mel needs to sell the Harridan Hotel that was once Muncher mansion and MOVE ON.

So happy that Daph is there!! I loved the greeting with Justin and the fact that despite the success and motherhood, she is still the same "Ride or Die Hard" BFF. Her and Ryder's interaction was too hilarious!! But it was completely done without malice and their mutual respect for each other was obvious. I think if Mel isn't as honest as she can be with Daphne, Daph is going to destroy her anyway simply for daring to mess with Brian and Justin for all these years. As for Lindsay, I really can't wait for that clash. In addition to that, Lindsay is calling Gary up a storm to try and get next to Justin..SMH Lawd Ham Turkey that she-wolf is NUTS! I really can't wait to see what happens when she is told 'NO' in reference to working with Justin. For now though, I'm relieved that she doesn't know where they live....yet Please don't let Em, Ben, Ted, Mel or Deb spill that information to the Dumber-ment Twins.

Looking forward to the next update!

WRITE On Star!

HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2016 1:45 pm Title: Chapter 16

Wow Daphne blunt as always and doesn't sugar coat everything..Good for you Lindsay,you baiting yourself into the trap of ur own enemy.What do you know you're trying to manipulate your worst enemy's husband😀😀can't wait for you to meet Daphne🤗🤗

I'm loving Ryder every chapter he's in,he became the father figure and a hero to Jenny..

And that's right Justin,don't be so soft on everything!Know how to be a hard person sometimes..

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2016 2:26 am Title: Chapter 15

Fantastic!  Hope Mel is really wanting to better herself for Jenny and not just  putting on a show. Would love to see Ryder and Ben get together.

Linz and Mikey need to be shipped to Siberia or to another planet.

Justin's family are all so kind and loving.

Mikey better watch out, Blake won't be so kind next time.

Thanks for sharing, eager for next update.

JoAnn

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2016 1:44 am Title: Chapter 15

I agree  with everything Ryder said to Mel, sure now she admits that something  is wrong  with the kids, but she is still refusing to face the problems, I wish there was some way for Ryder to take Jenny that child would understand like Gus does what it feels like to be cherished and loved  with the freedom to be a  child and not afraid to make friends.

I want to give Mel the benefit of the doubt but she has to admit to all the problems including her animosity to Brian and how that makes Gus feel.

I just love Ryder he is funny, sweet and I bet that kiss he laid on Ben has him half way through the door.

Can't wait for everyone  else to show up this is going to be so much fun.

Lindsay might want  to reconsider calling Justin's agent and trying to get involved with his career, Justin would just love to rip her a new asshole and the agent will hold her down while Justin does it.

Michael should stick to comic books at least those he actually has a chance of scoring, cause if he comes near Ted again Blake is going to ram that tire iron up his Ass!! lol

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2016 12:52 am Title: Chapter 15

Oh, little Jenny just breaks your heart.  I envy her tho because I could totally use Ryder in my life.  He is her hero. And like Brian I still don't believe Mel but I am suspending my disbelief.

Blake is going to end up showing Mikey new uses for a tire iron. And someone should warn Lindsay that Justin isn't a kid or easy.  I have a feeling trying to get involved in his career is a terrible idea.

 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 6:46 pm Title: Chapter 14

First off.No boundaries for Ryder! Nope! None!! Let the man go for broke! Far too enjoyable! HAHHA!

Now there's Mel. OK...comingin through the bedroom window....WAY too creepy for words! while I'm thrilled that she's finally seeing herself for the selfish C-word that she is, I'm just hopig that the damage that she's already done is fixable. How far is she willing to go on order to make amends? Glad she spoke with Ben, even more so that Ben is there out of concern for the kids, adn isn't taking anything Mel says or does at face value. Whatever happens, he's going to protect the kids. Period. A bit nervous as to what's going to happen next. while I certainly hope she's being honest adn intends to get her shit together, I also hope that Jenny is able to stay at Britin with Gus. Brian adn Justin will fight tooth adn nail to keep Gus withthem, but they really don't have a leg tostand on when it comes to Jenny. 

Eager to see where all those goes.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 6:00 pm Title: Chapter 12

Wow...You did a shit load of updates this weekend. Brilliant and thank you! So very appreciated and am enjoyng every chapter!!!

Gus, like Jenny, is a smart little thing. while talking with Ryder about the fort,all of then are fully aware that they're discussing the girls.

Oh dear. Now Jen is coming as well as Daphne.

I officially need eye bleach! O>>>M>>>>G!!!!!!!!!! What the F were you thinking!??! UGH! Michael coming onto TED like that! Jeeeez. the visuals! Blech! blake handled it well enough. I get the impression that Ted was in more of a state of shock as he didn't say much.

Mels is hearing virtually the same thing from all different sides. It finally took talking to dust to stop making excuses. To stop kidding herself that Jenny and Gus are fine. Now what though. Is she really willing to do anything about it. does she really love the kids enough? Does she love GUS enoughto do anything for him or will she only concern herself with jenny?

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 5:30 pm Title: Chapter 11

So glad that our beloved Emmett is back to being himself again. I don't think Calvin is going to let it end like that, but whatever....Not like he can do anything with Emmett surrounded by Ryder, Drew and the rest. In fact...bring it on!! LOL!!

I am absolutely LOVING Ryder! (am enjoying how you are using names fron canon and just makingentirely new characters.) 

Jenny is pretty smart isn't she. What a great analogy as well for a relationship. Nothing is going to get by this girl and lord help them all when she's a teen! HAHA. Nice to see her comfortable enought to talk and interact with everyone rather than just Gus.

omg......my heart continues to break for Gus. Those so-called Mothers need to be drawn adn quartered. So wrapped up in themselves....so fucking self-involved that they don't see what they're doing to their children. Mel's attitude towards Gus is beyond disgusting! she's allowed her hatred for Brian to influence her feelings for Gus! Oh I hope she gets nailed to the wall for that! she and Lindsey both. I hope teh kids get taken away from them, at least until they sort themselves out, but in all honesty, I'm not sure they can. They are both too selfish for that.

 

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 2:47 pm Title: Chapter 14

Ryder is a pisser!!! LMAO! I enjoy his character so much! I'm glad that Justin's words to Mel, coupled with Dusty and Ben's, have seemingly made a difference in how Mel thinks and processes her actions in regards to the treatment of the kids. Perhaps with Ben's advice and assistance, Mel will be able to find her way back to happy so that she can become an effective parent instead of the emotionally-abusive one she's been. As for her personally, I think she needs to take a page out of Ben's book and leave Lindsay. She has to see that all of her emotional baggage begins and ends with the harridan. At least she's recognizing that Brian has done nothing to encourage Michael or Lindsay in their delusions. That's a start, I suppose. Do I trust her fully? A snowball chance of becoming an icicle in hell has a greater probability but I remain cautiously hopeful that she means every single words she's saying.

As for Ryder's joke on Michael last chapter...OMG!!! OMFG!!!! ROFLMAO!!!! That!! THAT was EPIC!!!! Michael and Superman underroos standing in the middle of the Diner was classic!! Drew's reaction had me hiccuping with both horror and laughter by turns. That will be gossip fodder for the Queens of Liberty for many years to come! And Blake.... WHOO, a forceful Ted and equally forceful Blake are just freaking HOT! The crowbar..... Now THAT was a man after my own heart right there!

Thoroughly enjoying this story Star!!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 6:00 am Title: Chapter 14

Yes!  Mel's seen the light. 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 3:52 am Title: Chapter 13

great fairy tale Ryder

That will teach you Michael... Superman underwear LOL

Reviewer: BritinLover Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 12:25 am Title: Chapter 12

Hopefully Mel changes love her