Date: Dec 12, 2016 12:14 am Title: Chapter 12
Wow, another Fabulous fic. Just read the first 13 chaps. Fantastic!
Can't wait for next update, thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
Date: Dec 11, 2016 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 10
Drew and Em are too cute! I loved when Drew said you take your time with eye candy, lol. Ryder is a stitch.
Justin's meeting with Mel was perfect! Mel just talked and talked and Justin then laid down the law.
Gus and Jenny make sense esp. if the home is truly desolate. Linds and Mel seemed to want kids for the wrong reason and per cannon have no clue about relationships.
Poor Ben. Mikey is such a piece of work.
Date: Dec 11, 2016 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's too bad that Jenny isn't biologically Brian's instead of Michael's, like if Lindsay, at the last second before inseminating Mel, had switched out Michael's material for Brian's, then Brian could take both kids from the girls Mel might have a shot at redemption , but Michael and Lindsay are lost causes. And I'm so glad Emmett is back to his old self!!!! And Daphne is on the way !!!! The terrible trio better watch out!!!!! All kinds of excitement coming our way, I can't wait !!!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2016 9:42 pm Title: Chapter 12
You are such a fast writer. I have to say that Drew, Emmett and Ryder are becoming fast favorites in this story. Little Jenny is very smart. The we get into unreality with Michael. I spit out my coke when he started to make a play for Ted in front of Blake. Wasn't he just whining about how could he keep Ben? Blake and Ted are tops in my book.
Date: Dec 11, 2016 9:20 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh, how sad. Poor Gus and Jenny. I'm glad she's speaking more. But what happens when she goes home to her poor foundation?
Couple chapters back I forgot to say how perfect Ben breaking up with Mikey was. I loved when the dummy muttered too loud.
Date: Dec 11, 2016 9:01 pm Title: Chapter 12
I hope Mel finally gets her priorities right and realizes, she doesn't have to like Brian (but she should because he is awesome lol), but he isn't the devil incarnate!
Date: Dec 11, 2016 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 12
Hahaaha i can picture out the whiny's face while Blake dragging him to his car..meaning he's just all whine and talk shit bcoz Blake was smaller than him and he scared him by locking himself in the car😅😅😅😅HOT Blake on the road,Ted must feel a million bucks for being Blake's husband at the moment!!🤗🤗
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2016 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 12
Mel better think of someway to fix what is wrong with her home life or she will lose her children, Daphne is coming along with Jennifer and Molly, it is time for her to take this situation seriously because if this is taken to court she won't like the outcome.
Blake put Michael in his place beautifully I especially like the line that Ted wouldn't want him even if his dick was on fire and Michael's salvia could put it out, that had me rolling, Michael is such a whiny little baby who wants a boy for a husband or partner when they could have a man?
Ben is smart enough to see the problems in his marriage and he is taking some time to figure out what he wants and what he is not willing to accept anymore.
I took think Ben should meet Ryder, Emmett had already found his flame and if he is lucky it will stay lit Forever.
Another Great Update:)
Date: Dec 11, 2016 5:46 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh Melanie just what you & Lindsay done to poor Gus?Now that he talk to daddy Justin,you both just unleashed the beast side of Sunshine...!You better watch out now!!
Date: Dec 11, 2016 5:14 pm Title: Chapter 10
Justin just let Dahp deal with them...wished Ben can meet Ryder soon,i think they will be perfect for each other...
Date: Dec 11, 2016 5:11 pm Title: Chapter 11
poor Gus, I want to cry for him and slap the shit out of Lindsay and especially Mel for not caring enough about the daughter she loves so much... why the hell would she have a problem with Deb seeing Jenny... wtf?
Date: Dec 11, 2016 4:56 pm Title: Chapter 10
OMG, how does Melanie say her diatribe about it really being issues with Lindsay, but still want to blame Brian.. um, jealous much???
Insensitive and fucking idiotic Michael, how hurtful can he be saying what he did AND Ben hearing it!
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2016 2:37 pm Title: Chapter 11
Looks like you had the same idea I had. Sic Ryder on Mikey. Like how he tells things. Jenny has really come out of her shell, which makes Gus happy. But what happens when she goes home? So sad that she doesn't think much of her dad with reason.
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2016 2:24 pm Title: Chapter 10
It amazes me how good Justin is at mult-tasking. Mel is poor me and it's all Brian's fault. Can't wait for Daphne to take her on. Will Brian be able to get along with Ryder? Mikey's already in hot water, thanks to his big mouth. Wonder what meeting Ryder would do for him?
Date: Dec 11, 2016 8:02 am Title: Chapter 9
Love Emmett!
Date: Dec 11, 2016 6:27 am Title: Chapter 9
Yaaaaay the Queen is back🤗🤗🤗🤗Ryder could be a better person for Ben?please let it be😊It's great Justin has a family tree who's willing to support and protect him from anything not to mention the very bestfriend Daphne who apparently is shark lawyer in this one..Can't wait for them all to clashed each other, just to put the crazy lizzies in their place...
Date: Dec 11, 2016 6:19 am Title: Chapter 9
Yay that drew is here. Brian sad makes me sad
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2016 6:13 am Title: Chapter 9
Justin knows just how to take care of his man. Emmett's met the love of his life. Now just where does Ryder come in?
Date: Dec 11, 2016 6:06 am Title: Chapter 8
If i were Brian i would let them lose everything and fight custody for the kids..Poor Gus shouldering the problems at home..
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2016 3:51 am Title: Chapter 8
Boy, Melanie is asking for it. Gus is the best big brother and I hope Jenny finds a home that she doesn't have to run from. Lindsay isn't going to be seeing where Brian lives any time soon.
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2016 1:13 am Title: Chapter 8
Mel may love Jenny but she loves being right and beating Brian more it has gotten to the point where her hatred for Brian has now turned her against Gus.
She is seeing Gus as her enemy instead of the child she helped to raise, how can he respect either of his mothers when they don't respect him.
Lindsay is using Gus as a tether to Brian in her fantasy quest and a cash cow to get more money from Brian, Mel is using Gus as a weapon to hurt Brian and exhort money from him too.
Michael just sees Brian as his superhero, surrogate father figure and the lifestyle he will never have because he was too much of a coward to take a chance and he enjoys the benefits of being Brian Kinney's best friend and constant shadow. (Even a dog enjoys leftovers when he is denied a place at the table)
None of them have noticed that Brian is no longer playing their childish games he found his happiness and no one is taking that away.
If they were smart they would stop but the Three Stooges don't know the meaning of the word, so they should be prepared to deal with consequences.
Date: Dec 11, 2016 12:47 am Title: Chapter 8
I can't believe Mel doesn't see how bad it is. She genuinely loves Jenny, but shame on her for NOT loving Gus and it shows
Date: Dec 10, 2016 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 8
I am torn between wanting to keep you here forever giving me my anti-Michael anti-Lindsay fix and insisting you go and become the next Fifty Shades success(only with actual a plot and relatable characters).
On to the review...I am feeling so bad for poor Jenny and just want to wrap her up and get her away from those two psychos (3 if we include Michael).
You go Deb and Carl taking care of their granddaughter.
Loving Brian telling it like it is to those two idiots.
Can't wait for the next update
Date: Dec 10, 2016 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 7
That was terrifying! Without the description of where she was and the man showing up, I was so frightened. I probably won't be 100% sure she's ok until I read that Carl picked her up and took her to Grandma for some ice cream.
Emmett being able to say clearly what's been done to him but refusing to change it until now makes sense. People can in fact recognize a trap and still fall in it. I hope Drew is just what he needs.
Linds and Mel, some of the low blows were real zingers.
Brian building a fort, lol, I love it!!
[Delete] [Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2016 6:07 am Title: Chapter 7
Damn, who thought a little girl could get so far on her own. Thank goodness she had a phone to call Gus. Enjoying this a lot.