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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2016 4:46 am Title: Chapter 7

Okay I am all kinds of pissed at Melanie  and Lindsay for not paying attention to Jenny, calling her a drama queen and not noticing  that she ran away, they are so selfish and really don't deserve to have children.

Thankfully soon Jenny will be safe with her grandparents though, Mel  and Lindsay won't be safe from The Grandparents. (Jenny calling Brian Mr. Brian is cute:))

Now the argument between Mel  and Lindsay was funny as Hell they both took a strip out of each other, of course that is nothing compared to what Justin is going to do to them.

Glad that Emmett is talking to Justin  and seeing that Calvin is not who he wants to be with, Ben also got him to see that mental abuse is just as hurtful as physical abuse (Ben is opening his eyes to the abuse Michael is giving him too), Emmett is opening up slowly hopefully the next few days will help him see that he is worth more than being a doormat to Calvin, also hope maybe a hot football player will help reignite his flame lol

Loving the flow of this story :)

 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2016 4:14 am Title: Chapter 7

I hope Carl gets there and makes sure the girls do not take her home... such selfish bitches!

Whereas Brian, Justin and even Gus, Ben and Em think of Jenny first, the women only see her as a drama queen or a way to split up Brian and Justin... pathetic

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2016 8:34 pm Title: Chapter 6

I so love the "boys" hiding out at Casa Kinney to avoid their awful relationships. This crew is gonna be strong!!!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2016 8:23 pm Title: Chapter 5

So glad Emmett is trying to get his flame back!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2016 6:41 pm Title: Chapter 4

Grovel Lindsay... do you think you'll suddenly be able to save face now?

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2016 5:35 pm Title: Chapter 3

I'm so glad that Deb is fighting for them too... those 3 idiots have no idea what they have started!!!!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2016 5:29 pm Title: Chapter 2

Mel is such a miserable bitch... what the fuck did she need to life insurance for??? she's a god damned attorney.. I never understood how she NEVER had money without Brian's help!  and you chose Sir Whines Alot to be your baby daddy so he wouldn't be involved, but you STILL think Brian should pay for everything??? BITCH

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2016 5:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

I saw there were mulitple chapters to this story,but the way this chapter progressed, I was wondering if I had been wrong... Such a good set up. I'm guessing the rest of the story is about dealing with the "family" finding out about Brian's real family...

 

Bring it on!

Reviewer: BritinLover Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2016 4:27 pm Title: Chapter 5

Awwww Emmett ooooh are drew and Emmet gonna get together 

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2016 2:07 pm Title: Chapter 6

BTW- LOVE, LOVE, LOVED that 'Michael Jr.' comment from Ben! I always thought of Michael and Mel as the Yapping Chihuahuas of Season 4! 

 

WRITE On Star!!


~Nichelle

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2016 2:00 pm Title: Chapter 6

LOVE that Emmett is coming back to himself! FLAME On Em!!!! 

Michael has some damn nerve with all of his entitlement and idiocy issues. Talk about a STUPIDITY leak!! How is what he has done to Emmett any different than what he was trying and is still trying to do with Brian? The difference is that Brian wouldn't let Michael dictate to him what he should want in his life whereas Em allowed himself to be easily led for the sake of having someone. I'm glad Ben is finally calling Michael on his bullshit and then got out of there. Calvin is..... WHOO I don't even have words for that ASS! 

Mel and Lindsay..... Lawd ham turkey!! Lindsay is a jealous, spiteful, greedy idiot which is the perfect partner for Mel since she is as well! I really hope they try to justify trying to keep Gus away from Brian and Justin. I have a feeling there are more skeletons in their collective closet than there is in any cemetery. Not only that but what they are doing to Jenny is just plain child abuse in a sense. Michael doesn't support her but Mel's depending on Brian's money to fund hers, Lindsay's and Jenny's life. REALLY? I really think it's time for Brian and Justin to seek custody of Gus permanently and for Debbie and Carl to start invoking Granparents rights. A for the two Bitches and the Mitch, they all need to be kicked to the curb once and for all, especially the two best friends whom are really just spoiled children in adult bodies with major delusion and entitlement issues! 

Can't wait for Justin, Em and Ben to really get to know each other and for the arrival of Drew and Daph! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2016 3:08 am Title: Chapter 6

Putting Gus and Jenny in between your inability to get next to Brian like you want (Lindsay) and your petty jealousy (Mel) is just going to piss Justin off more.

Keep underestimating your opponent is surely a sign that you are going to lose before the battle even commences.

Ben and Emmett are seeing what a loving relationship looks like, Brian is comfortable in his own skin and not ashamed to be affectionate in front of others, he is at peace and happy in his new life thanks to Justin and the years they had to just be themselves without outside interference.

If this goes to court Mel and Lindsay are going to wish for a hole to crawl into and die all their dirty little secrets are going to come out, no judge would award them lint to take care of, Hell an egg would be too much pressure for them.

And Michael couldn't handle time without breaking it much less a small child who needs love and understanding, he is a whiny little dork with no real interest and a marble for a brain. (Ooo maybe he should date Calvin? lol)

Can't wait to see how the weekend goes and what the Three Bitches do next? :)

 

Reviewer: ConnieMelissa Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2016 2:28 am Title: Chapter 6

And I hope they get more.

Also, really hating Mel & Lindse...hopefully they will get what they deserve. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2016 2:09 am Title: Chapter 6

Love, love, love your Ben.  He has the right ideas.  Shame they had to leave Jenny with Michael Jr.  Emmett is coming around.  Wonderful!

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2016 7:39 pm Title: Chapter 5

Lindsey and Michael are about as audacious as anyone can get. The sense of entitlement is mind boggling. To think they have any rights to Brian is unbelievable! I mean really. I seriously snorted when Michael made his comment about him being more important that Justin.I can't even imagine what they will try to do. At least Lindsey understands the fine line she's walking. She knows how much influence Justin has and just what he's capable of. Seems though that with all her attempts at manipulating and pushing Brian, she's letting her responsibilies with Gus and Jenny slide. Not going to look good in any court proceedings. Something that I'm sure Daph will home in on and use to her advantage.

Emmmmmmetttttt! Oh thankfully he's slowly but surely realized what an ass Calvin is. The fact that he wants to hang out with Ben and Michael should say enough. (btw...how is Ben going to feel about everything. Hmmm curious) I cheered when Emmett kicked him out. Even happier when he called Ted. He'll go the party on the weekend and meet Drew, Justin, see the kids. I'm so happy. I only hope that  Calvin is now gone, or will at least SOON be gone permanently. He can go hang out with Michael.

Excellent chapter. definitely looking forward to the journey you take us all on. Always an adventure with you and your talent!

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2016 6:53 am Title: Chapter 5

I want to get inside the story and punch Michael just to get him to wake up that he's not really the most important person in Brian's life!!And Lindsay,well i'm just waiting for her turn to be a bitch that she is so that Justin can put them all to their right places...When's Daphne showing up?can't wait for the bubbly girl and yet shark like😉😉😉

Emmet that's right wake up and go back to the land of hohohomo of the always flaming queen Honeycutt!!Excited for him and Drew to meet!!

Reviewer: ConnieMelissa Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2016 5:01 am Title: Chapter 5

Poor Emmett, I think I said that before but it bears repeating. It figures that Calvin likes Mike & Ben. Could Michael be more dumb? 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2016 4:55 am Title: Chapter 5

Michael is the one who doesn't get it.  His own mom knew and didn't tell him for a reason.  Wonder how Ben will take all this.  Lindsay is being sly and Mel is being I'm not sure but it isn't nice.  Glad that Em is going for the weekend and Calvin is out the door.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2016 7:05 pm Title: Chapter 4

Gus is as angel! I'm sure he will survive this but I worry about the emotional cost.  I also worry for Jenny.  

Mel finally has a sense of who the enemy really is and I am so happy she's afraid. Linds and Mikey are self centered and obtuse. Their"best friend" was married and had kids and never told them, their first thought should be what have I done.  Instead they plot to take Brian's happiness.  I can't wait for them to show their butts and get their due.

Drew is here to rescue sweet Em, gosh I hope so.  Emmett is special to me, his storylines were the best aside from B/J imho. I like him happy.  And, I love sober touch Ted.  

As for Brian and Justin, it's time to put on matching Prada shi$$ kicking boots. And I can't wait for Daphney to school Mel. 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2016 7:01 pm Title: Chapter 4

So Daphne is a lawyer in this one huh? Now THIS should prove to be interesting! I'd definitely like to see her go up against Mel. Mel wouldn't stand a chance! J&B willl have alot of people in their corner fighting for  them. Justin though certainly doesn't seem to be worried at all. hehehe. Oh Lindsey....if you only knew just who you're trying to challenge!  You deary are going DOWN!! 

I hope that little bit of acting got the message to Emmett! Like I said before, hopefully Drew will get it going.

Lindsey and Mel have finally learned who they're messing with. Woe is them. They are so screwed! again...I just can't wait for the blow out to happen.

I wonder what Michael is going to get up to as well. He must be pissed that his mom has been involved and never told him.

thank you!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2016 6:34 pm Title: Chapter 3

Heart is hurting for poor Gus. Having to deal with the 2 witch bitches is too much for a 13 year old to have to deal with. He should be enjoying being a kid, not stressing out over his 2 mom's. Thankful he has his 2 dad's to look out for him.

Neat twist that Drew is Justin's cousin. I get the impression that Emmett's flame may start burning a little bit brighter once these 2 meet. 

The 2 she-bitches are unbelievable. Mel blames Brian for, well everything, adn wants nothing more than to discredit him at every turn. Lindsey blames Mel for not being able to live up the the standars she expects. Typical "rich bitch" attitude, one who has been given averything and has never worked for anything, has never been taught to appreciate.

Deb is going to be a rock for our 2 boys. she called it right. Mel lit a connon that's going to leave them bloody and broken and personally, I can't wait to watch it happen. :) Call me sadistic, but those 3 need to learn a very big lesson!! They are going to lose BIG!

Great chapter. 

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2016 3:00 pm Title: Chapter 4

<in my announcer voice> LET'S GET READY TO RUMBLEEEEEEE!!!! OMFG what an AMAZING chapter!!! 

Justin is the freaking MAN!!! Lindsay AIN'T READY!!! I think I especially enjoyed her reaction when Mel mentioned Brian and Justin's other children. Yeah Trick....YOU AIN'T SPECIAL!! Trying to look down her WASPY nose at a man who could buy and sell her fool ass and her parents 8000 times over and still have pocket change...LOL And if she thinks Brian is going to bow to her wishes, she needs to see someone about those delusions of grandeur she's been allowed to indulge for far too long! I think Justin will take care of that though... and Daphne! Now THAT is who Mel isn't ready for!! 

Soooo Mel took Deb's advice and looked up her enemy and now is fearful of what she's found. GOOD!! As for that uppity blonde she married, I'll bet she's just about ready to sink into the floor. 'So he's from a rich family. I am too.' HAHAHAHAHA! I nearly died when Lindsay tried to compare Justin's lineage to her own. The funny thing is that even though Justin has his own inheritance, he's also increased his wealth whereas her Bitchass is just BROKE and trying to use Brian and Gus as cash bulls. And I think the icing on this here cake is that Lindsay stands to lose her job because there is NO WAY that Justin would ever do anything to help her. Sadly that extends to Sydney but perhaps Justin will buy his gallery so that he can retire in style and hire an actual staff to run it while Lindsay goes to off to sulk and sit her ass down somewhere. I'm just happy right this second that the discovery of just WHO Brian's husband is has taken the wind out of their sails for the interim. It's going to be fun to watch them scramble like roaches to cover the Pandora's box they just opened!

Then we have the idiot man thinking that Brian owes him and Lindsay an explanation for living his own life without their permission. MITCH have a seat! I'm so glad Deb let them both have it, even if it didn't do much good for the moment. I don't think the little whiner is ready to meet the MAN who nabbed Brian. I would feel sorry for the schmuck for the rude awakening he's about to get but.... yeah, the way my feelings are set up....NAH Can't do it!!

Well the Contestants going against the Gladiators are in for far more surprises than I'll bet they bargained for! I CAN'T WAIT LMAO!!!  

Please please PLEASE bring back my Flame-throwing Hero, Emmett!!! I miss the most fabulous Ho-Ho-Homo in the Ho-whole wide world <in my Brian voice> I think Justin and the kids need to hang out with him so he can remember who he was and what he used to dream. Calvin....Pfft! But that's what happens when love is found in a very wrong place and folks get desperate to date or get married just for the sake of having someone to call a partner. My Poor Darling Emmett!! 

Anyway, I am so looking forward to MORE of this!!! 

WRITE On Star,

HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: MissMerlot Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2016 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

So so good.  I keep checking every 30 mins for an update.  So looking forward to more from one of my favourite authors.  

MissMerlot

Reviewer: ConnieMelissa Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2016 11:38 am Title: Chapter 4

YAY!!! Daphne's coming.  Poor Emmett, hurry Drew and relight his flame.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2016 7:43 am Title: Chapter 4

Really good chapter. Lots of good info.

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