[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2017 8:51 pm Title: Chapter 48
Looks like Luther is not doing well and as for Michael, well all I've got to say is HAHAHA. At least everyone is going to Portland.
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2017 6:52 pm Title: Chapter 48
Oh yeah. Micky keeps digging digging himself deeper deeper
Love Love this FAMILY :)
~Teresa~
Date: Mar 04, 2017 6:41 pm Title: Chapter 47
He's so creepy??!!seriously even when he got cought from everything what he's done still acts like he's innocent!!Can someone smack him just once but stronger than a typhoon maybe he could get a clue that no one wants to see his useless face anymore..
Date: Mar 04, 2017 1:22 pm Title: Chapter 46
I'm actually crying,i can each and everyone's emotion while gathered in the Tree House..poor Justin and Brian😔
Oh You conniving greedy leech just wait until they throw your ass in jail...!!
Date: Mar 04, 2017 8:59 am Title: Chapter 47
Thanks for the arrest. I just love him in a cell.
[Report This]Date: Mar 04, 2017 5:07 am Title: Chapter 47
Someone is aiming to be Bubba's bitch. :))))))
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Mar 04, 2017 4:12 am Title: Chapter 47
This just gets better and better.
[Report This]Date: Mar 04, 2017 4:00 am Title: Chapter 46
Love seeing Michael finally get his just dues.
[Report This]Date: Mar 04, 2017 1:50 am Title: Chapter 47
I have eaten gummy bears smarter than Michael he will get on that stand and hang himself.
At least he can't use a mental illness to get a reduced sentence everything Jermaine Stewart said about Michael is true and then some. (Curious about what the doctor would say about Lindsay?)
Michael sitting there lying and gloating about what he did made me want to beat him with a chair?
Are the police in New York about to arrest Lindsay?
Damn two chapters in one night had me dancing with joy this story is Beyond Fantastic!!:)
Date: Mar 02, 2017 8:52 pm Title: Chapter 45
Oksy.... so I don't condone violence against women by a man in RL but I will not lie.... OMG!!! She deserved that pop in the mouth long since and Michael deserved to see the inside of a police cruiser as well. Can't wait until he's sharing a cell with Big Bubba on a daily basis. He really deserves to be locked in a trunk taking small sips of air through one small hole for the rest of his life for what he's done to Brian and Justin, let alone Ben and Jenny. Chest-rat bastard!
WHOO!! What an emotional and emotion-filled chapter! I really can't wait to see what the fallout will be from all these revelations. WTG bringing back Judge Maatje!! YAY!!! I just love her, both in RL and within the scope of this fic. I hope that she is able to sit in the courtroom as a spectator to see justice served since I don't think she can preside over the proceedings. If nothing else, it will provide her with some major comic relief watching his non-thinking, overtalkive ass try to worm his way out of this one.
As for Luther's lyin' ass, I can't wait to see what happens when all of his machinations come back to make mincemeat out of him. It looks like the sons are geared up to deliver the final dose of "FUCK OFF!" Oh it's going to be so much fun to read!!
Back to Lyin' Loose Labia Lips Lindsay for a second... it's too bad that she isn't preggers with neither Grady nor Michael's baby and instead is sick with an ulcer BUT knowing that her Karma is coming for her in a big way, I'm glad that's all the pain in her stomach is. It will be interesting to see how she deals with the ultimate stress of becoming Big Bertha's Bitch in prison...LOL LAWD I can't wait!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2017 7:47 pm Title: Chapter 45
As bad as I feel for Lindsay after what Michael did a small part of me wonders if she might use this to get her place back at Brian's side?
This is just what she would use to go crying back to The Family for some sympathy and coddling from her Best Friend, ex-wife, and ex-kids???
I wonder what the boys have to say to Luther and how has he been enjoying his time in his cell and has he made any friends?
Date: Mar 02, 2017 9:37 am Title: Chapter 45
Out of breath from ranting and crying.
WTF Michael. You unimaginable bastard! Robbing your best friend and let his lover take the blame? You should be flogged, skinned alive and rubbed down with salt and then left to stew in it with you hands and feet tied.
Messing with the condoms was stupid but then offer Lindsay to be the father to her next child? How stupid are you? No please don't answer that. An amoeba on a flee on a dog has more braincells that you will ever have.
Michael has crossed some major lines here and may the courtcase that follows all these transgressions be a serious drama. Is Judge Maatje going to be the one to preside over this one? I'd love to see her chopping Widdle Mickey to bitesize chunks and feed him to some ravenous long time jailies with an appetite for a whiney piece of ass.
Done ranting now!
So looking forward to the next update.
XOXO
Meriam
Date: Mar 02, 2017 9:20 am Title: Chapter 45
Ok I think i calmed down enough to review😑
I'm just so so so angry at the conniving cunt right now!!!How dare he and how he could've done that to Brian as he always pronounce to anybody who listen that he's his bestfriend but at the same fucked him over?!Really so he has to do something at the burglary happened way back in the Loft and then just stood there and let Justin took all the blame??I want to dig his eyes feed them to him!!And also the original artwork of Rage??Oh Michael you're totally going down for what you've been putting the family through specially B and J! !
I can feel the pain that B/J feels right now,it really cutting through...
As for Lindsay well atleast she just stole from the recent gallery she worked for so it would lessen her punishment but even though she's not getting away with it now that she has nothing..Grady left her and she and the greedy leech has finally over i hope so,and mostly her parents wants nothing to do with her..
Oh My God MsMerlot this is way way greater than any movie i saw...Thank you😙😙So excited for the next update🤗🤗
Date: Mar 02, 2017 6:58 am Title: Chapter 45
I'm so glad she isn't pregnant. Michael needs some serious beatings.
[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2017 4:32 am Title: Chapter 45
Gotta love Medea. All that time trying to get Lindsay to be pregnant and he doesn't know that Grady is sterial. Hahaha. Let's see Michael can be charged with Assualt, fraud, theft, possession of stolen goods. How many years can we have him put away for.
[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2017 4:10 am Title: Chapter 45
OMGAWDAMN!!!
I can't believe Michael did that to Lindsay!!
He outed himself and that pathetic scheme has destroyed the possible last friendship he has and all for Greed.
Michael let Justin take the blame for his theft he watched as for months Justin had to work hard to pay Brian back and he sat there all smug.
If that little weasel had an Ass I would say the line forms to the left and everyone gets a turn.
What Michael did is beyond vile and he deserves everything that is coming his way and then some.
I knew Lindsay wasn't pregnant!
So now Grady is gone or just taking a break?
Lindsay wasn't stealing from Bloom tried to steal Hunter's accomplishment and got tossed on her flat Ass, I am surprised that I am not surprised ;)
[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2017 3:42 am Title: Chapter 45
Wonderful chapter. Poor Justin. I hope they fuck weasel over good.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Mar 01, 2017 9:15 pm Title: Chapter 44
Still loving this. Hopefully you are writing now because I need MORE.
~Lorie
Date: Mar 01, 2017 9:09 pm Title: Chapter 44
Oh my God Lindsay is unbelievable??!!she's as worst as the whiny brat...So like Michael they each both been stealing from the beginning??how could they..Greediness is really a dangerous thing to learn...And as for the other leech wow i think i have an idea what personal things he has that comes from Tremont...Please let Ephraim tear them.into pieces...
Loved the name of the Castle....
Date: Mar 01, 2017 5:44 pm Title: Chapter 44
OK, so I read back a bit (again) and I'm reminded that I think it was Zee who mentioned once that Grady could no long provide appropriate swimmers, so I'm guessing that Lindsey isn't pregnant. Futher concern since Grady is stepping out without a glove. Now that is pretty friggin scary! Hopefully it's not a serious threat. I don't like Lindsey but don't want to see anyone suffer that much. Perhaps something that can be treated easily, but she's still able to smack down Grady afterwards, but not enough for anyone of sympathize with her too much.
And woah!! The contents of the storage? Stuff from Tremont?!?! Was Michael actually the one behind the burglary at the loft?! He actually has it all?! WOW! just...WOW!
I am continually intrigued by the possibilities. you always throw a curve ball and I LOVE every moment.
1 last thing...and I REALLY wanted to go truffle hunting with them!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 01, 2017 7:17 am Title: Chapter 44
Did Michael steal the stuff from Brian? I hope Lindsay is not to sick. I don't like her but ...
[Report This]Date: Mar 01, 2017 5:24 am Title: Chapter 44
I figured at some point Luther would raise his arrogant head again how pathetic he is to try to bring Xanthe down with him.
Harold and Millicent have guaranteed that Lindsay will get no help from her parents if they can prove she got money by double charging her commissions while working for Sydney and Lydia.
I think Lindsay might be experiencing a miscarriage or her appendix is getting ready to burst.
Could Michael be holding stuff stolen from the loft years ago that Justin got blamed for?
If he does than he is a real Bastard and he needs to be under the jail instead of in a cell!
[Report This]Date: Mar 01, 2017 4:38 am Title: Chapter 44
Oh my. So much going on but I'm beginning to smell a rat. Two rats. Is Lindsay going to have a miscarriage and the items from Tremont wouldn't by any chance be from when the loft was burgled?
Date: Mar 01, 2017 4:28 am Title: Chapter 44
Happy Dancing for Realz!!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Hugs back and double shimmy dip shake!!!
Date: Feb 28, 2017 2:44 pm Title: Chapter 43
Oh i forgot to ask,what's happening to Lindsay?it couldn't be that she's pregnant right because it was mention before when Zee said that Grady won't be able to have a child?but we don't know the reason..?Can't wait for the next update,thank you👄👄
Author's Response:
Answer is coming in C45 and that is going to be a biggie!