[Report This]Date: Feb 23, 2017 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 40
What an interesting chapter. Michael is in trouble, first cashing in that policy that's got to be illegal. Fraud of the first order. Lindsay had been looking like she was starting to turn around, but she's just as greedy. Menno and Sol are disappointed that they didn't get to baptist the barn first. I'm sure the housewarming will be fantastic.
Date: Feb 23, 2017 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 40
HO-LY SHITBALLS!!!!!!! Ok, so I was way off base. But this??!?! Did not see that coming from a MILE away! My goodness.....Michael is sooooooooooooo going down for this and in such a big way! I have no words for his level of deciept. Poor Ben. And Jenny too. And hunter. Better double check to make sure there's not an insurance claim for hims somwhere as well! Jeeeebus christmas. You seriously threw me for the ultimate loop on this one. Absolutely BRILLIANT twist!
Lindsey seems to be just as decieptful as Michael is. Nobody is going to help her either. I'm not so sure Grady will. I think he has his own mess to worry about. I kind of figured he was with some other guy. It wouldn't be Michael. But barebacking??! And with the punctured condom? I guess he's definitely not aware of Michael's machinations in that area. Man o man...Some crazy crazy shit is going to go down.
cheers to Cow Pies II. B&J have already broken in the barn. I gues this makes them up one more. lol.
WOw...just.......WOW! Amzing chapter! again! I'm positively vibing from having read it.
cheers,
Elaine
Date: Feb 23, 2017 6:57 pm Title: Chapter 39
I'm honestly a little disappointed that Vince and Daphne didn't reconsider their decision. I just feel like they are coping out without giving themselves a chance to be good parents....i mean....I don't know. At any rate, I hope they don't start to regret it.
Date: Feb 23, 2017 6:39 pm Title: Chapter 39
Hmmmmmmmm. Had a thought. Is Michael's collection really just replica's now? Has he inadvertantly sold then and stashed away the money? Am I giving him too much credit? Is he really just stupid enought to go bankrupt? Something strange is going on there besides his lack of wanting to sell them I hthink. It's not like he has a choice. She will confisacate them. Period. They're locked up. He has no access to them at this point due to the thing they're being held in and it's locked up. Something is definitely fishy there I think. Perhaps "he doth protest too much" for a different reason. Ralph and Talon are definitely on to something.
Everything going on with Daph, Vince, Emily and Francine is heart stopping. So poignant. Really beautiful. Incredible bravery by Daph and Vince. I do believe that that little circle will go beyond friendship. It will be a true kinship.
Lindsey got canned once again. Had to see that coming. Not surprising at all. Was only a matter of time.
That threesome of Lindsey, Grady and Michael...Not sure what Grady is up to either. Is he aware of what Michael did with the condoms? He seems aware of almost everything else. Is Lindsey getting pregnant his way of getting in with the family circle? Is Lindsey the only one unaware?
Sooooooo many questions! Every chapter give me more of them. this is a real thrill ride!
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Feb 23, 2017 4:41 am Title: Chapter 39
Michael really is idiotic enough to choose bankruptcy over getting a job and paying everyone he owes back.
He doesn't want to work he just wants everyone to take care of him and ignore all his little misdeeds cause no one was seriously hurt and besides Brian can afford to help his 'Bestest Friend'.
Lindsay lost her job...again.
I still don't get why Grady is still with her I feel he has another plan up his sleeve??
Faal is giving Zee the distraction she needs so she can rest and regain her strength for all the events they have coming up before Christmas. (And the competition can wait a few weeks so Brian and Justin can plan better lol)
Daphne, Vince, Emily and Francine are going to be very good friends and the twins are going to be well loved and looked after.
[Report This]Date: Feb 23, 2017 3:54 am Title: Chapter 39
It's nice that Zee gets to spend time with her brother. I'm sorry we missed Lindsay getting her pink slip. Now Grady helping them figure out how much they owe was interesting. The only thing is I do think that Michael is willing to bankrupt himself if he gets to keep his collection. He's that stupid.
Date: Feb 22, 2017 6:46 pm Title: Chapter 38
I'm continually amazed and Michael's stupidity. I mean...WOW! How does this guy get through a day? Oh...right, lazing around and reading comics or watching movies he's already watched a million times. He is earth shatteringly, insanely stupid!
Definitely MUCH more friction between Michael and Lindsey/Grady adn I'm sure there will be more to come. Seems they are getting to the ends of their rope when it comes to the idiot boy. He owes a SHIT LOAD of money!!
So, Cynthia and Zeus huh..some nice heat starting there. Nice. And great that we're seeing some romance there for Cyn.
Poor Zee is getting tired. She seems to be wwearing down. thankfully some of teh gang has realized that and are doing their best to eleviate it for her. Good plan of action there.
Scores are tied. LOL! that was funny!
Great chapter!
Cheers
Elaine
Date: Feb 22, 2017 3:33 pm Title: Chapter 38
I really love how Brian and Justin is so relax and comfortable fooling around and specially in Zee's residence..They are feeling totally at home...And so is Zee and Faal,they are welcoming and understood what the boys are doing,even encouraging it too. ..Well nothing can compare to those two when it comes to being passionate to each other...
What's Grady's up to now,reviewing everything??but it's a good thing too bcoz the asshat now knows what he needs to do and what he owes who...So irresponsible and immature..
Thanks for sharing..great chapter as alwaysðŸ˜
[Report This]Date: Feb 22, 2017 6:38 am Title: Chapter 38
Looks like Grady knows which way the wind blows and Cynthia and Zeus are bringing the family close once again. Now that Zee and Faal have the food settled, they've managed to spike Brian and Justin's plans to win the contest.
[Report This]Date: Feb 22, 2017 4:25 am Title: Chapter 38
Michael owes some serious coin to a lot of people and considering how much he has spent on his toys he better get a hat and start panhandling, he would never make as an escort cause no one wants a no ass, tiny dick crybaby.
Cynthia getting some Zeus was HOT!
Faal came to the rescue to solve the problem before Zee decided to get her knives out, now if they just stay away from her for a few days she might start liking them again lol
I admire Brian and Justin for trying to break the tie but they gotta work on being sneaky and Brian's giggles rofl
[Report This]Date: Feb 22, 2017 3:05 am Title: Chapter 38
YAY CYN is gong to get her some LOVE. I like the playfulness with e1
Date: Feb 21, 2017 5:48 pm Title: Chapter 37
I'm sorry i didn't get a chance to leave a review for the past chapters,i've been busy with work and dealing with some family issue..
Wow what a big disappoinment for the three clown,thinking they finally nailed it but totally wrong...When is Grady telling Lindsay that he's not capable of getting her pregnant and i'm wondering why??But only Zee knows??
And Daph,wow twins,too bad it won't go to Brian and Justin,but whatever it's still goes to a family member..
So excited everytime you mention food,bcoz you know a lot of recipes that gets me thinking what does it all look like...
Great chapter,thanks for sharing.😘
Author's Response:
And you're back here too. Happy dancing. Hope you continue to read.
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2017 3:37 am Title: Chapter 37
Well, things are not working out for Grady. Michael and Lindsay couldn't be more wrong if they tried. Looking forward to finding out what else you have planned.
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2017 3:17 am Title: Chapter 36
So much happening. I still am not sure what Michael is up to. Like the way Zee's brothers manage to toss Grady, Lindsay and especially Michael out. It's so sad that Daphne and Vince are giving their baby up, but Emily and Francine are perfect choices for parents.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 9:10 pm Title: Chapter 37
I have been saving up my comments....I love that Lindsay and Michael are still paying their dues, not so crazy about Daphne and Vince though. Later on down the line when they have more children and the twins find out the truth, that's going to hurt on some level. There's always that question of why you and not me? But nevertheless this is all so brilliant and getting so juicy....I can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Glad you're back! Those three are so going to pay it's unreal! Yeah Daph and Vince had a tough decision to make but they will still the babies in the future and be able to explain why they did what they did. Thanks for the brilliant compliment, hope I can keep it up.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2017 7:56 pm Title: Chapter 37
Yes!! I knew Grady wasn't trying to renew his relationship with Matt after eighteen years out of remorse, he thinks if he can get his rights reinstated then he will have control over Matt's inheritance, thankfully Zee and Faal are smarter than Grady gave them credit for, he won't be able to touch a dime now or in the future.
Michael and Lindsay really should be use to the family gathering together to smack them down, I really don't think Lindsay is pregnant but if she is I doubt it is Grady's, he hasn't had another kid in eighteen years (Unless there is a long lost child out there somewhere he has abandoned for not being the perfect reflection of him, can definitely see why he and Luther got along) and I doubt he would want one with Lindsay?
Michael is really salivating over the possibility of a baby between Lindsay and Grady, while Lindsay is boiling with anger at the thought of Brian having a child with anyone but her.
A child who will take some of Gus's inheritance and her chance to get her hands on that money or back into Brian's good graces.
I can see why Lindsay finds Grady so attractive they share the same brain and the same greedy nature.
It's what drew her and Michael together in this plan to regain their prior positions in Brian's life and into his checkbook.
Wonder what the three stooges will come up with next and if Grady will get the money? (I see he doesn't read paperwork handed to him either)
Date: Feb 20, 2017 7:43 pm Title: Chapter 37
HA! Take that Grady! I knew he'd try something underhanded at some point. He just played his hand, and now everyone is aware of his intentions. He's no better than Lindsey or Michael. I had this weee little bit of hope that he was going to become a slightly mroe stand up guy. That he would be a little bit of a better influence on Lindsey. Who bye the way is unnervingly quiet of late. At least towards teh family. Not quite as compative at least. Certainly is towards Michael. Have to admit, she adn Grady constantly at battl with him is pretty funny! His one adn only allegience is dropping him like the plague. He really will end up on his own.
Jenny has most certainly grown up to be a lovely young woman. thoughtful and fiercly loyal. Very proud of her. The consideration she's showing Emily and Francine putting together that book is so incredilby sweet. She will be a wonderul Godmother.
All in all a wonderful chapter.
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Feb 19, 2017 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 35
Reading it over again and what ticks me off about the lunch with Gus, Jenny, Matt and Hunter is the fact that not one of the three apologize.
They just sat there expecting to be accepted while dismissing that they had a hand in the reason why they are estranged from their children.
They really did come off smarmy, self-centered and that lunch had nothing to do with making amends, it was all about working an angle on their kids and that really sucks!
Grady, Michael and Lindsay would be smart to stay away from them all but I doubt they are smart.
Date: Feb 19, 2017 9:47 pm Title: Chapter 36
Sorry, but I just can’t see either Daphne or Vince, as you’ve written them, giving up their child simply because it came at an inconvenient time. There are plenty of female doctors who have children at many points in either their training or careers and who continue to make a difference in the medical field, no doubt some at their workplace who could mentor Daphne and Vince about doing that. There are plenty of other children that Emily and Francine could adopt (and they should have done so years ago) and I really hope Daphne and Vince change their minds and keep the baby and return to being the strong characters that you’ve been portraying them as.
[Report This]Date: Feb 19, 2017 8:58 pm Title: Chapter 36
Aww I loved how you worked your magic
[Report This]Date: Feb 19, 2017 3:19 am Title: Chapter 36
I see Michael just keeps digging himself deeper every time he opens his big mouth hope he enjoyed the long walk back lol
Lindsay must be so happy about the way Zee and her brothers remodeled her parent's former home, now the place has some style isn't so boring and pretentious <giggles>
Too bad they didn't get to figure out what Grady is up to before Michael opened his mouth.
I feel after their performance at lunch and how Matt reacted I think Grady's motive will become more clear.
Daphne and Vince are doing the right thing for them cause neither one is ready for such a big step, I thought Brian and Justin would take baby but I do believe this is better.
Emily and Francine will cherish that baby as they all will because he or she will be apart of this ever expanding family forever.
December is going to be quite a celebration...for some anyway ;)
[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2017 1:14 pm Title: Chapter 35
Michael can't help himself screwing things up. You almost have to feel sorry for Lindsay. Loved this.
[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2017 4:31 am Title: Chapter 35
Are Lindsay and Grady suppose to be engaged and who started that rumor?
I think after that slip we just might get an answer about the whole pregnancy question???
I love how Gus, Jenny, Matt and Hunter came together as a united front to face these three and find out what they want.
Michael needs to learn he doesn't know everything has no game and that a two-year old playing in the mud has more class than him and even if Zeph was gay he still wouldn't want Michael to touch, flirt or come near him again <shutters>
All that parental concern was making me cringe because it really came off so fake and like they were trying too hard to forge a bond that will never exist.
Lindsay, Grady and Michael are not winning anyone over at this lunch maybe they should go back to New York and think of a new strategy lol
:)
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2017 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 34
I'm surprised that Anouk hasn't learned about Lindsay, surely she must have lied on her resume. I'm looking forward to reading about the get together with Gus and J.R. Michael is in for it.
Date: Feb 16, 2017 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
So I'm going back and rereading. Am @ 25 of BOTW adn have come up with a conclusion......
Justin has a tape worm! Seriously! It's the only way he eats so much and doesn't gain an ounce!
Author's Response:
Well that and Brian of course!
Nicole