[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2017 9:55 pm Title: Chapter 34
Looks like Anouk is starting to regret hiring Lindsay for her gallery as a manager Lindsay is suppose to guide the client to make a purchase not bully them into doing what she wants.
Love the fact that she came to Pittsburgh to gloat and shine and she was pushed into the background, Hunter's star is rising while Lindsay's is fading faster every day.
No way do I trust a Luther clone who hasn't shone all his cards yet Grady is up to something just waiting for the big reveal.
The lunch with Michael and Lindsay should be very I
captivating especially since I think Lindsay is going to try to get info from Gus (She Won't!) about Brian, Justin, Faal, Zee (No Way Is She Giving Up On Getting Brian or Faal) and Michael will try Jenny who will get more from him.
Can't wait for their lunch date :)
Date: Feb 16, 2017 8:44 pm Title: Chapter 34
HAHAHAHA! Loved that ending! Oh Lindsey...still basking in the delusion that she's important somehow. I'm very interested to hear her take on the evening when she talk to Grady. will she bitch and moan about other usurping her moment in the spotlight, or will she make like it was all on her? Hmmm.
Lunch will definitely be interesting. Again, fly on teh wall please!! And I'm REALLY interested in Grady's interactions with Matt and Hunter. That he even stated Hunter being his son in law surprised me. I also think he will more than likely greatly underestimate Hunter's intelligence and influence. This whole aspect is definitely something that could either turn out to be a positive thing, or yet one more person who is taken down by the entire gang. Grady is a curious creature. Definitely had his reasonings starting off with Lindsey, but am wondering if there's actually something more now, especially since Lucas's influence is greatly depleted. I just can't wrap my head around it. Or...I'm making a bigger deal of it than necessary. ;)
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2017 3:23 am Title: Chapter 33
Menno and Solomon were making me sad with their goodbye at the airport, thankfully Zee was able to figure out a solution so that they can be happy and no more ties will be ruined lol
Could Lindsay be Prego or could she be tired because with this job she actually is doing the work instead of calling off sick and foisting her obligations onto others???
Michael lost his precious toys again because he is an idiot and Talon's collection keeps getting bigger rofl
Lindsay yelling at Michael to get a job is funny she loved his laziness before but now that she is back with Art Set she wants to make a good impression.
Notice she hasn't called or barely thought of Gus or Jenny in fact neither of them have, they haven't seen or spoken to Gus and Jenny in months their level of emotional concern is really touching.
Happy that Kiki will be living in Craig's house I bet it will look Amazing when she finishes.
I can't wait to read about the blessing and wedding I expect to be quite teary-eyed and happy.
Date: Feb 16, 2017 2:13 am Title: Chapter 33
So loving this story
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2017 1:34 am Title: Chapter 33
I'm so glad you got Sol and Menno together. A ranch is Ohio sounds perfect. Michael not wanting to work has got to be stopped. How will you manage. Is Lindsay pregnant? Love that Matt and Hunter are sharing their blessing with Tobias and Darius so that everything gets cooked. So looking forward to that.
Date: Feb 15, 2017 9:37 pm Title: Chapter 32
justin's negotiation skills are impressive! and extremely HOT!
Jenny & Hank...not surprising, but in my mind, she's still about 10 not 16. I keep forgetting. :) Thankfully the parent's aren't panicing and are just encouraging "safety 1st" I remember when I found out about mine and did my damnest to do the same.
Craig. Well all I can do is point and laugh! couldn't happen to a better guy really. He's out millions, in jail, lost his lawyer adn is reduced to a court appointed attorney. Best of all...Kiki is getting the house!!! Your mind is just delicious! While he may wish he could "die here", I think he deserves to have to live through it all! :)
Interesting bit of history there with Zee and Faal. He certainly learned what he needed to. I was actually a bit disappointed in him at first when he continued to bring those friends around. I also would've found it very disrespectful. she warned him and she followed through. Like was mentioned, it was only a car, easily replaced. Good thing Steve seemed to catch on in the end. ;)
Anticipating Matt and Hunter's intereaction with the idiot twins. Definitely worth waiting for! Watching those 2 go down is always a treat to behold and more now so coming from the younger ones.
Brilliant!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Feb 15, 2017 9:14 pm Title: Chapter 32
Well Craig got what he deserve finally!!I guess it's true that payback really is a bitch..
Zee sure is brave,never let anyone despise her even her own husband,that's why Faal loved her to death. .
Bedroom scene was HOT,and i'm bouncing from happiness when Justin called Brian with pet names..Please let them keep calling each other some sickening sweet pet names..
Great chapter as always..Thanks for sharing.😘
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2017 2:40 pm Title: Chapter 32
The kids having sex! Disrespect, things aren't that way anymore.
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2017 4:44 am Title: Chapter 32
Craig wishing for a death that isn't coming anytime soon (Unless he pisses someone off?), he is getting exactly what he deserves and it isn't going to get easier.
That was HOT the way Justin got Brian to promise to stick to getting the smoker and bbq, Brian would basically stick to a promise but this way Brian will be sure to remember and get a reward for keeping it lol
Zee just did what most women would love to do to get her point across, those guys weren't really Faal's friends they just like stirring up trouble, Faal dropped them like a bad habit and has a wife who will stand by him, love him, defend him and kick his Ass <giggles> he figured out what was more important and is happier after the lesson Zee taught him.
I look forward to Matt and Hunter taking on Lindsay and Michael they need to do this for themselves.
Another smack down for Michael and Lindsay will be fun :)
Date: Feb 14, 2017 6:12 pm Title: Chapter 31
YOu know, you'd think that after all this time, Michael would get some sort of clue as to how to behave. That perhaps this self imposed pedestal really asn't workign for him. but does he? Nooooooooooo. He's stil treating people like they are all below him. Little does he realize that all of them have more class in their pinkie toe that he has in hsi entire being. I seriously want to reach through the computer screen and throttle him. Sadly many have tried, but to no avail. It would simply make ME feel better. lol.
When is someone going to tell Lindsey and Grady about what he's been doing to the condoms? (or will they?) Not only do they have to be concerned about pregnancy, but STD's. Especially considering that Grady is double dipping!!
Craig got a fitting sentence. Especially his community service! OH my that must've chaffed his ass!! LOL!! the fact that his store has been taken over, is being gutted and revamped, and will undeoubtedly be incredibly successful will just be icing on teh cake!
speaking of chaffed asses......the reception?? LMFAO!!! WOW! that couldn'e have gone any better! That she was introduced to Hunter as someone "to be so young adn talented..." THEN, she sees the ring on Matt's finger! That Sidney basically ignored her, and that everyone else was getting introduced to the more important people. Let's not forget the fact that she was being led around like a puppy by her boss. OH wat a marvelous evening!!
On a side not...I'd so love Faal and Brian to shop online for me!!
sorry for some missed reviews.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Welcome gack I missed you. Glad you're still reading.
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2017 8:29 pm Title: Chapter 31
I can see why Lindsay is seeing what she once liked about Michael as a hindrance now since she wants back in the wasp set, but she coddled this whiny baby and now has to deal with the consequences.
I knew she wasn't done with trying to get her place back in the family it was just that she got to New York and was distracted by Talon and Bethany who were feeding into her ego, one to play her against Michael and the other to be superior.
Man is she going to be floored when she finds out what Michael is up to and why Grady is with her.
Date: Feb 13, 2017 6:10 am Title: Chapter 31
First thing,what is Zeon gave to Lydia??
Hahhaa Medea,i'm.picturing Madea from the movie,cause she sure is would scare the whiny brat..And Lindsay,ooh I thought she finally learned her lesson,but apparently still not..She still the same as before,never felt sorry or guilty of what she's done with the family..Now thet she has a job again,seems to think it's her way to get back to the family..So sad to see it will all go to waste..Specially when Grady kick her to the curb when he didn't get what he's supposed to get as if there is to begin with from Zee or Faal..And Lindsay the moment she saw the rings,the green eye monster in her suddenly reappear and the jealousy surfaces..And the whiny brat,i wonder what he's planning to do about Hunter and Matt now??
Yaaaay my wished finally granted,Zeus and Cynthia,i'm sure they could be another power couple in Business world,both intiligent and hardworking and never took anything for granted...ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Now theres just Zander and Zeph left,looking for a lovelife..Hoping you can come up for a partner for them MsMerlot...
Great chapter as always,Thanks for sharing.😘
Author's Response:
It was a painting that was in the house in Paris. I made up the name of the artist.
Since you asked so nicely will see what I can do for the other brothers....
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2017 3:31 am Title: Chapter 31
This chapter is coming out fine. It's good that Justin was able to get Zeus to take over management of Taylor Electronics. His ideas are great. Lindsay is changing for the better so that leaves Michael as being the shit. Opps seems I've misjudged Lindsay. The bitch is coming back. Now what's this about Brian and Faal buying a villa in Italy while looking for a pasta machine?
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2017 1:33 am Title: Chapter 31
Michael thinks if Lindsay gets pregnant he will be taken care of?
Where The Hell Did He Come Up With That?? He is channeling his inner Lindsay with that thought process.
Boy did Grady get real upset when he found out Matt and Hunter are married, his first thought was about the money, Lindsay was envious about their wedding bands and Michael could care less.
Medea, Gerald and Jason are cracking me up with their interactions with whiny Michael.
Luther is going to cry when he hears about what Zee did to his former condo, clothes, jewelry I hope he cries.
I know Craig is crying with the sentence he got he could have tried for some compassion but he would rather show the judge how much of an Ass he really is, so I hope he enjoys prison because his cellmates are going to enjoy meeting him.
Cynthia and Zeus???
Brian and Faal buy a house and Zee is going to chase them down the street with a meat cleaver rofl
Fantastic Chapter :)
Date: Feb 11, 2017 9:40 am Title: Chapter 30
Why is Talon is not just kicking their asses to the street instead she cleaned the condo and hired some help to maintain it..Can't get her why??
Wow so Grady has his own agenda,and now I feel sorry for Lindsay,bcoz she seems to get her life in order but when Grady abandon her what would her reaction be?I hope she won't fall back to her old behavior...And Michael's idea of the family to support them because of supposed Lindsay's child if she get pregnant is just horrible and so is Grady's plan to get money out of Zee or Faal??
[Report This]Date: Feb 10, 2017 3:08 pm Title: Chapter 30
Love how you manage to spike Michael. Great job.
[Report This]Date: Feb 10, 2017 5:39 am Title: Chapter 30
Aha I knew Grady wasn't hanging with Lindsay for her gracious personality and divine sexual prowess, he is hoping for a payday bigger than he got from Zee's grandfather, makes me wonder if since the years he has been divorced from Zee if he is broke or soon will be??
Lydia had the best pre-birthday surprised ever she is going to need the next year to recover lol
Talon knocked Michael down another peg and put a dagger in Lindsay's back with the fact that she is living in her new reinvented home that is a dream.
I love that Talon took half of Michael's collection and put the rest in a glass display, it will drive him crazy that he can see his stuff but he can't touch until he pays her what is owed.
That is the ultimate punishment for a brat like Michael.
That video is going to be very funny especially the edited parts wonder if Ben, Mel and Leda are going to have a talk with Jenny? lol
Spectacular Job :)
Date: Feb 08, 2017 2:45 pm Title: Chapter 29
I love this Guy and Jules character..But it's amusing to see the Legend artist is a huge fan of Justin who is newer compare to him,but then again Justin's art is phenomenal..I guess another people adding tonthe growing family..
Why is Grady can't have kids anymore?I hope Lindsay would continue getting her life together and not screw this up again what she has with Grady unless Grady himself is the idiot one who has another agenda..
Date: Feb 08, 2017 2:45 am Title: Chapter 29
Such a FANTASTIC chapter... but then they all are!!!
I love how your mind works! lol
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2017 1:37 am Title: Chapter 29
Another chapter filled with goodies and I'm not talking just food. Lydia's almost birthday party was fabulous. Now just what is happening with Lindsay and Grady? Something fun I hope.
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2017 8:25 pm Title: Chapter 29
Oooooo Zee's sharpening her claws, I can't wait to see her strike!!
The Blessing Ceremony is going to be so beautiful and I bet Matt and Hunter will be just as loving as the rest of their family after a few years.
Grady is like Luther so I doubt he doesn't have a few bits on the side, is there a chance Lindsay could be pregnant and the baby isn't Grady's??
Is there a possibility Grady decided to get snipped after divorcing Zee so he could continue his fun without little bundles of consequences??
Really can't wait for the next chapter :)
Date: Feb 07, 2017 12:51 am Title: Chapter 28
Oh honey we have to have another chapter quick!
[Report This]Date: Feb 06, 2017 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 28
So much goodness. Talon is back and that's a good thing. Who would have thought. Luther and Elias are stuck in jail. Craig is also doing his time. Matt and Hunter got married. Wonderful. And we have Lydia's birthday. You even managed to put Brian and Justin in here.
Date: Feb 06, 2017 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 28
Looks like I posted last chapter's review b4 the very end...ignore my last little bit and can I just say yeeha!!
Know that, while it was very obvious, *smirk* I was so right about the condoms. wondering wnhy, if both Grady, Ralph and now Talon are aware, why is no one saying anything. Grady obviously has known for a little bit, Ralph caught him red handed. Talon hasn't had teh opportunity to say anything yet, but will she? what would their underlying reasons be for keeping it all quiet? That part I'm curious about and will of course mull over continually. ;)
Craig knows he hooped now. Much more so than he originally thought, now that he's been told that Luther is in jail as well. elia and Luther having the deep understanding that they are now going to be brides of Bubba. LOL. Craig as well perhaps. hehehe.
Beyond thrilled for Matt and Hunter! Those little minx's. They done good! :)
Squirming in my chair reading B&J's scene...whew! thank goodness my day at the office is almost over. May need to re-red that when at home then partake in a cold shower! Aye Karumba!
cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Elaine, thanks so much! Happy showering xx
Date: Feb 06, 2017 9:34 pm Title: Chapter 27
Zander is pretending to play hardball. I'm laughing 'cause Luther is kind of impressed by it. LOL! Oh if only he really knew...
Michael showing his true colours once again in they way he described his prio relationship with Brian. How he claims to "have handled" Brian before Justin came along. Once again proving that he was never a friend, but in fact, a fiend. Let me guess what he's done in the bathroom...1st guess is he's poked holes in condoms? To what end I'm not sure. 2nd guess, don't really have one. The condoms is my only thought. If that's teh case, I'm glad that Grady is as sneaky as he is adn knows what Michael is up to. thsi could prove to be an interesting twist.
Love the plans for Lidiya's birthday. And at the art critic's house no less!
A teeeeeeny tiny part of me almost feels sorry for what's inevitabgly going to happen to Luther. Let's see now, there's Evelyn, Bethany, Talon if need be as well as th last one's name. (sorry, can't remember) all who have at some point been in bed with Luther and probably know more that others. None of them know everything, but each know bits and pieces. together.......all I can say is holy shitballs, Luther is, well, I don't see him recovering from the fall out. As in ever! He is toast! Now that he and Elias are up the creek, let's see if they get their filthy hands on a paddle. Evelyn and bethany were successful, let's see iof any further action can be taken with all the "men's women" put their heads together.
O...M...G!!!!! justin now owns Taylor electronics! If I weren't at teh office right now, I'd be on teh floor. Like everyone else, I can'twait to see Craig's face.
Most excellent! Loved this chapter!!!
Cheers,
Elaine