Date: Jan 23, 2017 11:38 am Title: Chapter 21
And the plot thickens. I hope we can figure out who all the players are soon. The suspense is killing me.
Please let Mel and Brian get custody of Gus. Lindsay is such an unfit parent.
Thanks for the update.
Hugs,
Jessica
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2017 6:03 am Title: Chapter 21
So Mel and Leda are wanting another little one. At least Mel is backing Brian. Now we seem to have eleminated Brandon as a suspect. You love to keep us guessing.
Date: Jan 23, 2017 5:52 am Title: Chapter 21
They should make a move about Lindsay befre she can hide...
Debbie,is she crazy or just plain stupid?Really embarrassing herself for what,for the sake of her son?It must be a big slap what Ted said to her.
Aaaaah who could that be?If its not Brandon,maybe Michael but with accomplish right?Anyway whoever it is,he's very good..I just hope he won't start targeting Brian..
Date: Jan 23, 2017 5:52 am Title: Chapter 21
They should make a move about Lindsay befre she can hide...
Debbie,is she crazy or just plain stupid?Really embarrassing herself for what,for the sake of her son?It must be a big slap what Ted said to her.
Aaaaah who could that be?If its not Brandon,maybe Michael but with accomplish right?Anyway whoever it is,he's very good..I just hope he won't start targeting Brian..
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2017 2:27 am Title: Chapter 21
Okay I have no idea who The Stalker is and that just ramps up the tension.
Deb being her normal delusional self isn't surprising perhaps she and Michael can share a padded cell?
Lindsay is in Italy?
Mel finally coming to realize that Brian had nothing to do with her relationship with Lindsay and that the things she did before was just her lashing out at the wrong person.
Brian and Mel have grown up and realized that they can live without Lindsay in their lives, they just need to protect Gus from his mother's manipulations.
Need to beef up security at Kinnetik and around Brian because the stalker is getting closer.
Date: Jan 22, 2017 5:39 pm Title: Chapter 20
Is this still a work in progress. I sure hope so.
Date: Jan 22, 2017 2:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
Usually, I don't enjoy mpregs. Everything else about this story I like. I'm going to try and ride it out. LOL
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2017 2:25 pm Title: Chapter 20
These two were made for each other.
Date: Jan 22, 2017 2:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
I woke up and decided to read a bit. Picking this with no expectations. This was different. The way you started it sucked me right in. My guess is I will be sitting here reading for a couple of hours. Thanks.
Date: Jan 22, 2017 10:54 am Title: Chapter 20
Why can they never be happy? I have never understood why their happiness is anyone else's business.
Thanks for the update.
Date: Jan 22, 2017 8:01 am Title: Chapter 20
Brandon is really weird and Debbie is too stupid.
Date: Jan 21, 2017 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 19
I love it, I have no clue what's going on. Seriously, I trying to find the bad guy and each time I'm sure it changes.
I loved when they laughed about Mikey and keeping things. The Capn Astro jacket is hysterical.
Date: Jan 21, 2017 8:45 am Title: Chapter 19
Stupid the first will get some new punches if he is too close to Justin. The stalker will see him too.
Date: Jan 21, 2017 8:30 am Title: Chapter 19
Maybe Brandon and Michael are working together. That would explain Michael being capable of pulling all of this off.
I can't wait for Lindsay to lose Gus. She is an unfit mother anyway.
Thanks for the update. :)
Hugs,
Jessica
Date: Jan 21, 2017 7:08 am Title: Chapter 19
Ooooh i love a spitfire preggy Justin..So I think Sam and the bitch should watch out,they don't know whats coming on their way..Blessing in disguise of what the stalker did,letting Justin know what the cunt did..But is it really Michael who stalks Justin?or he could be but he has someone with him right??aaah who is the real stalker "please stand up"🤗🤗🤗
Debbie should realize that she's putting her work in jeopardy bcoz of her idiotic mind to protect her son even though it's obviously pointless..
Great chapter,thanks for updating..😘
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2017 4:35 am Title: Chapter 19
Michael couldn't think his way out of a coffee cup so someone has to be pulling his strings, if it is Brandon then Michael is the perfect scapegoat because he would admit to stalking Justin but try to justify it.
Perhaps Deb needs to realize that being a Loud-mouth busy body with no life and a vagina that hasn't seen sunlight since Michael was born doesn't mean that she isn't expendable, excusing Michael's behavior and feeding into his delusions just means her son will be sitting in a padded cell very soon.
Michael is in New York following Justin and Brian while she is in Pittsburgh acting like a stone cold delusional harpie.
Lindsay and Sam deserve exactly what they are about to get talk about a stupid patsy, Lindsay is going to lose Gus and her connection to Brian and Sam will lose what little reputation he has left.
I feel like dancing at their stupidity. ;)
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2017 4:22 am Title: Chapter 19
Could Michael be working with Brandon? Love how Emmett told Deb off. Also that Lindsay's gonna get her just deserts.
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2017 12:48 am Title: Chapter 18
So Sam had Lindsay sneak into Justin's apartment to get pictures of Justin's paintings, Sam must be desperate for inspiration I guess his muses aren't working anymore and perhaps his talent is drying up?
Is it Brandon or is he just the convenient scapegoat for the stalker?
Date: Jan 20, 2017 9:49 pm Title: Chapter 18
So is it really Brandon,or another guy??but he became creepy as time goes..Worst of it,what's he gonna do when he finds out about Justin's pregnancy?I just hope they catch him before that happens..And Michael i thought after he got beaten that he would stop harassing Justin for awhile but i guess he didn't learn his lesson...
As for Lidsay,what a cunt,is she that desperate and stupid enough to follow what Sam is telling her to do??Really trespassing Justin's place just to get a photo of his paintings is just stupidess thing to do and dangerous...I hope both of them got caught of what they did,or maybe the stalker can share that little bit of information..
Yes Mel and Brian will work together to get Lindsay out of their life specially Gus's..
Thanks for updating,loved it😘
Date: Jan 20, 2017 8:06 pm Title: Chapter 18
So Brandon bought a ticket to New York. Are we to assume that he's the stalker or do you have some kind of explanation forthcoming for that? Was it a coincidence? I'm not sure. He fits the profile for sure and there have been enough hints. He mentions his observant boss...but is it really Carl? I just have that niggling thought going through my head is all.
WTF is Lindsey up to? Why the subterfuge with Sam about Justin's paintings? anther worrisome situation. She's willing to do anything to stay with Sam. I guess he's the best "in" at the moment for her in the art world.
Sitting on teh edge of my seat thinking of teh many and various scenarios. Always exciting to read a new chapter and then.......it's teh wait for the next one. *sigh*
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jan 20, 2017 5:48 pm Title: Chapter 18
What is Sam trying to do with Justin's work? Lindsey is ready to do anything to get fucked. Mel would be so happy if she knew that.
Date: Jan 20, 2017 5:40 pm Title: Chapter 17
Can't they ask for security tapes from the hall outside the bathroom and at the airport too?
Lindsey always sure of herself...
Date: Jan 20, 2017 2:31 pm Title: Chapter 18
As usual this fic zigs when I expect a zag. I was ready with my new list of suspects and here you are with the answer and yet another problem. It's fantastic!
Justin is so cute. His bravado with Lindsay and his willingness to face the stalker rock. I even like that he likes Ted but finds Mikey icky. Brian is strong and protective which is uber sexy and sweet. Cameron being in there us perfect for fueling out Rage, the more he protects Justin and baby Bella the more he loves them.
You should be very pleased with the flow and the building and layering of suspense.
Date: Jan 20, 2017 9:23 am Title: Chapter 18
Brandon...it would make sense. Justin has rejected him. Not sure how it would have started but I'm along for the ride.
I'm loving how protective Brian is of Justin and the baby.
Thanks for the update.
Hugs,
Jessica
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2017 6:09 am Title: Chapter 18
I'm not sure if Brandon was the last person I could have expected or too obvious. But it's nice to know who the stalker is.