Date: Jan 19, 2017 7:33 pm Title: Chapter 10
Such an incredibly long chapter. So much happening! I had to read it twice just to take everything in properly. That and I had to get over my immediate over the top reaction to the ending. Soooo exciting! :)
Not overly surprised that Michael did what he did. While he needs definitely psych help, it's not for the suidical tendancies that doc thinks. It's fo his devious behavior towards Brian. I mean he had to know that at some point people would figure shit out, but being in such a state of delusion, I guess he thought he could excuse it away.
Justin REALLY needs to come forward. I know she's sacred, but things will be worse for him if Brian finds out from someone else. He hates lies. I do want to know why he's been so secretive from the start though. It would've been so much better if he'd been straight forward at the beginning. I hope Brian understands and reconsiles himself to the fact that Justin was doing what he thought best. (in his own mind) Hopefully Brian remebers the words he said here. that they would overcome any hurdles together.
Definitely curious about the accident. there's more there than we currently know. Looking forward to more details on that scenario.
Kind of pissed at the gang. Good that Brian spoke to Emmett like he did. Emmett seems the most open of the bunch. I mean, seriously...after 2 years you'd think they'd have noticed the change in him, and would stop holding on so tightly to the Brian of old. Very disappointing.
So many small hints of truth coming out at times, yet sadly, Brian not being able to catch any of them. We're all left reading it and getting so frustrated. lol I just want to shout at them all.
The ending to this chapter..........I am completely and utterly speechless. I cheered...I shouted. I was bouncing up adn down in excitement. Debbie knows!! Debbie knows!! What lies now will Michael tell to try and get himself out of it? will Debbie fall for it? Please PLEASE post soon1 I'm not so sure I can wait till tomorrow! LOL.
Fucking BRILLIANT Absolutely BRILLIANT chapter!!!!
cheers
Elaine
Author's Response:
Hi, Elaine. Justin's side would be more clearer in coming chapters. I just wish you like the twist in the story.
Thank you so much:)
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2017 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 10
I really think Justin better tell Brian before someone else beats him too, it is time for everything to be put on the table once and for all.
Deb needs to wake up and see her son has problems that she can't continue to ignore anymore.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review:)
Date: Jan 19, 2017 5:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG!! OMG!! This is such a nail bitter..LOVE LOVE :)
~~ HUGS~~
Author's Response:
Thank you so much:)
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2017 5:37 pm Title: Chapter 10
Aha. Maybe now the truth will come out. You hint, you tease, but we need to know. One thing for sure denial your name is Debbie. Like how Emmett opened up to Brian.
Author's Response:
Thanks for being patient, though;)
Thanks for the review, I enjoy reading them.
Date: Jan 19, 2017 5:07 pm Title: Chapter 10
OMG! OMG! OMFG!!!!!!!! FINALLY!!!!! Someone heard it!!! YES!!!! And he can't try to worm his way out of his lies! Plus, Debbie heard that Michael tried to off himself on purpose! Good for his conniving cunty ass!! Lord, I must read the end of this chapter AGAIN! It is that good!!!
Now Justin has to tell Brian the truth before anyone else does- namely Emmett, Lindsay or the Jackass himself. Emmett's talk with Brian was definitely appropriate and long overdue. I can't wait for them all to see that Brian and Justin never really ended...only took a break due to circumstances beyond either of their controls. Although I do wonder if the accident happened during the "Ethan Episode." I think I've asked that before and I know I have to wait for the answer but this chapter makes me even more certain that it was. But then Brian talks about being hit in the head and that brought about even more questions.
Lindsay... what can I say about that Waspy Witch?! I think I'm looking forward to her shock as much as I'm looking forward to Michael's. Okay...so I can semi-understand Mel's reaction to knowing that Brian has introduced Gus to his partner. I am a parent as well... but she has to know how protective Brian is. It's ingrained on his DNA as much as being a bitch is stitched on Lindsay's. I think she'll be happy about Brian being permanently off limits to Lindsay in all facets.
GREAT Chapter!! Please, if you can, post the next today! I'm dying here, LOL
HUGS Nadine,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Sorry for not posting chapter 11 so soon, I wasn't home yesterday, hun. But I updated already, and I'm going to try another one before the night is over. I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story. Thanks for the review, loved them so much:)
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2017 2:59 pm Title: Chapter 10
Michael is in for a world of hurt now that Debbie knows what he was doing. Hopefully she will get Michael the help he really needs.
Author's Response:
Thanks you so much for the review:)
Date: Jan 19, 2017 2:24 pm Title: Chapter 10
Finally new get to the good stuff
Author's Response:
Thanks for leaving a review:)
Date: Jan 18, 2017 8:52 pm Title: Chapter 9
I want to strangle Michael so much...
Can't wait for the big reveal!
Author's Response:
The big revelation is cumming, I mean coming:)
Thank you so much.
Date: Jan 18, 2017 6:25 pm Title: Chapter 8
I have the feeling that something bad is going to happen soon and Brian will recover his memory.
Author's Response:
You might be right, or not... ;)
Thanks for the review.
Date: Jan 18, 2017 5:10 pm Title: Chapter 9
Can we agree that Michael needs to be punched in the throat and his voice box snatched out? I'm sooooo PISSED at him! But at least now, Brian told Justin all of what he was told by Michael. Now Justin needs to come clean with his secrets or at the very least, Vic and Cynthia needs to tell Brian what they know and the consequences be damned. Michael cannot get away with this!! Furthermore, Ted and Emmett should have known something was seriously wrong since Brian was yelling at Michael and threatened to punch his lights out. I doubt that was a normal way of dealing with the pest before the accident. I think the only way Brian and Justin will survive this is to start taking actions instead of having to react to circumstances. And that begins with Justin doing what he knows is right to do.
Such suspense!!! Please post the next chapter quickly!!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Sorry for not updating it so soon. I'm so caught up with chores sometimes:)
Thanks for the review, I'm loving it:)
Date: Jan 18, 2017 4:52 pm Title: Chapter 9
OMG OMG OMG OMFG!!!!! I am having such a mix of emotions here.
A) Can I please please please hurt Michael?? PLEASE?!?!?!?!? Fuck he's such an asshole. He's been lying this entire time! If they really had been together for 9 years, the gang would've said something, even inadvertantly over the past 2 years. Something that would've given something away. Notice Michael does nothing romotely questionable when the others are around.
B) I'm kind of freaking out in fear of Brian's reaction to what I HOPE Justin will eventually reveal. My goodness. Justin must be beside himself. Furious at Michael, scared shitless at and FOR Brian, scared for their furture. (OK...not really 'cause they HAVE to end up together!!)
Please understand...I'm currently doing a liver detox for the next 4 days, and am off coffee. Not coping well. ;) My anxiety is at a high point. Please...PLEASE ease my burden, even just a tiny tiny bit.
Am REALLY looking forward to the next chapter. We're just past the half way point now....So enjoying this!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thanks, Elaine. I appreciate the reviews, I loved to read the readers thought, it always makes my day.
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2017 2:18 pm Title: Chapter 9
I'm so worried about what Michael might do. Brian took so long to tell Justin about Michael that I'm not surprised the Justin has something he need to tell Brian. Makes for suspense. I never worry about technicalities like ID's for domestic partners, but it's a good idea.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review.
Date: Jan 18, 2017 11:59 am Title: Chapter 8
I so loved this chapter. I'm so in love with Brian being in love. It's such a change from his normal character.
The bathroom/raw scene. THUMP! That was so hot and so perfect.
Gus was so cute wanting to see daddy's heart. I hope he likes his new room at the new house.
Things are going really well...I have a sense of dread coming. Don't be too harsh with us. lol
Thanks for the super long update.
Hugs,
Jessica
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving some thoughts, and yeah, that bathroom scene was one of my faves, too.
Date: Jan 18, 2017 11:54 am Title: Chapter 9
I'm not mad at Sunshine... I"m furious with Michael... I think Justin wants to pummel him lol
I"m sure Brian will be pissed when he finds out Justin wasnt honest with him either, but I don't think that Brian will break up with Justin over it... his heart will always go to Sunshine!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I hope you like the new chapter that I just posted:)
Date: Jan 18, 2017 2:42 am Title: Chapter 8
I hope they make it all legal before Michael finds out and tries to take their happy away... I do think Brian is going to be pissed that nobody told him his past... of course, Brian hasn't told Justin about his supposed relationship with Michael, so it all evens out, but I'm guessing they will argue, but hopefully get back to happy in the end... and Michael be damned... I want everyone to find out what he did and HATE him for it!
Author's Response:
I would hate myself if I were Mel, she is pregnant with his child. Lol
Thanks for the review:)
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2017 12:00 am Title: Chapter 8
Now they have a new house. Gus likes Justin and using the nickname keeps people wondering. So Mikey is going to be a dad. He seems to think that Brian and him wil be a couple. I'm wondering about Cynthia. She's happy for Brian but she knows something that Brian might need to know. What was Daphne and Justin fighting about? Important to have a new chapter.
Author's Response:
Well Daphne was mostly out of the loop regarding Justin's life since she was out of state for 3 years. Now, she might just learn something from Justin which she doesn't agree to?
Thank you so much:)
Date: Jan 17, 2017 4:30 pm Title: Chapter 7
The pieces are falling into place and I think Michael is in for a HUGE rude awakening when the gang finds out that he told them all to not mention Justin ever, all so he could try to manipulate Brian into being with him... such a pathetic person!
Author's Response:
Yes, everything will come out, eventually.
Thanks!
Date: Jan 17, 2017 6:04 am Title: Chapter 7
Yeah, take that bitches
Author's Response:
Haha, yeah, they deserved it.
Thanks for the review:)
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2017 1:31 am Title: Chapter 7
I got the feeling that Brian and Vic were talking at cross-purposes. That Vic was talking about things he thought Brian knew. Perhaps I'm wrong. It's nice that Brian and Justin will be sharing a new place. Something tells me that he and Mel might get along better now that he's told her that he's not Lindsay's Peter anymore.
Author's Response:
All I can say is that , Brian's life is about to get a little bit complicated.
Thanks, hun:)
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2017 12:46 am Title: Chapter 6
Boy, this was a scary chapter. Mikey almost sexually assaulted Brian! I'm glad he got the lock changed. Wonder what Michael thought when he came to leave the box and he couldn't get in. Brian really needs to tell Justin. It's nice that he's returning to the interests he'd lost over the years.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment, dear:)
Date: Jan 17, 2017 12:16 am Title: Chapter 7
Good chapter! I cannot wait to see how the story enfolds. I am kind of sad seeing him pulling away from his family though, but at the sametime I know why. They do love him, but they also use him as a scapegoat among other things.
Lisa
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, Lisa. I appreciate the comment:)
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2017 12:10 am Title: Chapter 5
It's nice that Brian and Justin are mentally the same age almost. The only problem will prove to be Mikey and he seems to have gone postal. My question is where Brian and Michael together before the car crash? Having to wait to find out is keeping me on the edge of my seat.
Author's Response:
Yeah, mentally and emotionally, just not physically:)
Thanks!
Date: Jan 16, 2017 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 6
Will Michael stay away for real?
Author's Response:
You know Michael will not get away from Brian. Thanks for the review:)
Date: Jan 16, 2017 9:41 pm Title: Chapter 5
Temper tantrum... what a buffoon.
Too bad Brian still can't remember anything.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review:)
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2017 9:10 pm Title: Chapter 7
I'm so glad Brian was able to set Lindsay straight about whoo he is, who he isn't. Now he needs some of his memories of him and Justin to resurface. He needs to expose Michael's lies to the gang. Just wondering how long this gif is, because I'm loving it and don't want it to end!!!
Hugs Kathleen
Author's Response:
Hi, Kathleen. I'm so glad you are enjoying the story. This is already a complete story, by the way, with 15 chapters and 1 epilogue.
Thanks for the review:)