[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2017 2:42 am Title: Chapter 14
Lindsay like Michael let her obsession consume her to the point that she was ready to throw everything away to keep Brian focused on her.
Perhaps she and Mel should actually talk instead of avoiding the issues in their relationship, especially before this new baby comes, they both can't keep using Brian as a scapegoat or a new baby to avoid the problems.
I don't excuse the game she was playing and when Brian wakes up I hope she is ready to deal with the consequences of her actions.
I knew Michael was driving!
I also figured he played a roll in why Justin hadn't seen Brian the little weasel needs to be dealt with once and for all, so does Deb and the rest of the family who treated Brian like shit after he woke up instead of trying to help him and embrace the change.
I do wonder which Brian we will get when he wakes up?
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Thanks for the review, loved reading it:)
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2017 1:56 am Title: Chapter 14
So sad that Lindsay has been trying to attract Brian's attention since college. We learn how and when she learned she was a lesbian. That she tried to entrap Brian not once but twice is shocking. But in the end she got her head on straight. Now we just need to learn which Brian wakes up and how much he remembers.
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Thank you!
Date: Jan 23, 2017 1:11 am Title: Chapter 14
Knowing her back story and hearing her memories, I still don't care about Lindsay... such a selfish bitch! If she REALLY loved Brian, she would have put him before her, and that was never even a thought for her!
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I think Mikey and Linds would be great roommate in psych ward. Both delusional. Haha
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Date: Jan 23, 2017 12:37 am Title: Chapter 14
The thought of Lindsay and Brian sleeping together is turning my stomach. Not that I don't think Brain could have hot hetero sex but with her just NO!!!
Please let us have more Brian/Justin/Gus in the next chapter. There's still so much to wrap up in the last couple of chapters.
Hugs,
Jessica
Author's Response:
I hope everything will be covered in my last 2 chapters:)
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Date: Jan 22, 2017 9:35 pm Title: Chapter 13
Heartsick Brian is so sad, angry walking into a setup heartsick Brian kicked butt! He could have said and done more, they deserved it. These people are bottom feeders. I hate that he had an accident but it makes sense.
Learning how Michael manipulated everything I am even more angry. His ploy for sex and affection was pathetically cruel but risking Brian's health is inexcusable! I understand that Justin is stressed because of everything but I want him to kick Mikey's a$$. Losing Brian isn't enough. When he walked in and shut whiny down it was PERFECT!
I am so glad I am reading this, nice job!!
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Thanks for the review:)
Date: Jan 22, 2017 6:50 pm Title: Chapter 13
OMG, so right now niether of them know that they were both working their way back to each other at that point???? OMG
I hope when Brian wakes up he remembers everything from before and from the past 2 years... he needs to see how much he loved Justin then and even more now... and he NEEDS to remember what Michael and Debbie did!!!!!
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Thanks, hun:)
Date: Jan 22, 2017 6:09 pm Title: Chapter 12
If it is Michael in Ted's car, I'm gonna pummel him myself!!!!
Of course, Brian is upset and hurt that Justin didn't tell him, but I'm so happy that he still wants to stay and when he found out about the bashing ... OMG, this accident has got to NOT make it worse!
Oh wait... Justin has POA!!!!!!
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Thank you so much:)
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2017 2:34 pm Title: Chapter 13
Now we learn the backstory from both parties and how Mikey managed to con Brian. When Brian comes to what will he remember?
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I'm hoping everything.
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Date: Jan 22, 2017 1:07 pm Title: Chapter 13
What an amazing key chapter!
We get to understand what happened 2 years ago. I don't think Justin should be worried that much; Brian wanted to fight for him, only he didn't know it for all this time.
Michael must be fuming and very afraid Brian will recover his memories because he will be in deep trouble and will lose everything that maters the most.
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Thank you for the review:)
Date: Jan 22, 2017 9:58 am Title: Chapter 13
Wow thank you so much for filling in the pieces of the first accident.
I was so waiting for the scene with Justin and Gus. It was just too priceless that he started screaming "Daddy's Heart."
I hope Brian wakes up soon and with all of his memories in tact. It's the only way they will be able to move forward and heal.
Patiently waiting for the next update.
Hugs,
Jessica
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Thank you so much, J:)
Date: Jan 22, 2017 5:52 am Title: Chapter 13
OMG!! I am so freaking devastated reading about what happened between Brian and Justin. Misunderstandings, misleading information and two funky muskrats who interfered wherever they could to get what they wanted. Now I fully understand why Justin was loathe to bring it up and why Brian's brain chose to block out the emotional trauma that truly broke him. I really hope Brian comes out of it with all his memories in tact, including the present. Michael (and Debbie by default) really shouldn't be allowed to get away with their duplicity!
And speaking of the screeching spawn of Satan, he needed his ass well and truly kicked and then fpr it to be thrown in jail, let alone out of the hospital!! I admire Ted, Em and Justin's restraint- especially Justin’s!! But admittedly he had a more important person to worry about. As for that narcissistic bitch Lindsay, she really needs to pump her brakes too. Melanie should leave the bitch and take Gus with her since it's obvious that the harpy only cares about herself and her need for constant attention. I did get a whole lot of gratification though picturing the stunned look on her (and everyone else's) face! Not only the Pain-in-the-Ass Association (aka Michael, Lindsay and Debbie) fimd out that Brian wasnt lying about being in a relationship but that he is back with Justin. Jealous much? We can all safely bet our asses that they are!
Furthermore, it must have burned Lindsay's flat ass raw to know that Gus recognized Daddy's Heart and greeted him as if she were a nonentity. She again wasn't the COA; Justin was. Emmett and Melanie hugging Justin and Ted greeting him- even though it was from afar- were truly special moments. If the other three (not that Debbie her oversized Infant matter anymore) don't fall in line, at least Mel, Em and Ted can say they understand the way of things and are happy for B &J. Incidentally, so HAPPY Nathan showed up!!! I see some restraining orders being issued in the very near future to the PITAs.
Anxiously awaiting the next chapter (or more? Hint hoped and Fingers crossed LOL)!! This is such an amazing and engaging story!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, N. I really appreciate all the great reviews from you, I wish I can tell all the reviewers how much I appreciate their efforts in letting me know how they feel about the story. Thank you all so much!
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2017 1:41 am Title: Chapter 12
It never occurred to anyone especially after Brian got hurt to do whatever they could to find Justin?
Everyone was so busy listening to Michael and expecting Brian to be the same that no one thought about his feelings even after two years and they could see him pulling away?
So now Lindsay is showing her ugly side and trying to use Gus to exert her will over Brian?
They all need a swift kick to the Ass and after what just happened I think they are about to get it.
Ted's car but Michael or Lindsay behind the wheel??
Will Brian's memories come back???
And if they do the Shit is going to hit the fan and everyone is going to feel the Wrath of Brian Kinney. (If Justin doesn't beat him to it first!
Author's Response:
If someone from the gang had tried to look for Justin, they would have a hard time finding him. They don't know his new address, he changed his phone number and deactivated his emails. Now, if they tried to go to PIFA within a month from his disappearance, they might have find him there, well, most likely. But maybe they also let it go when it was obvious that Justin wanted to get away from his Liberty ave. friends. So.. It could be either way, really.
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Date: Jan 21, 2017 7:58 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh cruelty, thy name is Nadine, lol. To leave us hanging after the last chapter left us dangling too? Thus is terrible. What a climax!!
I kind of understood Justin's reasons, but when Vic died I just felt he really should have spoken up. However, knowing their history and seeing them together now, I can appreciate not being willing to risk it.
Brian is going to have to do for Justin what he asked him to do and just understand like Justin did with Mikey and the 9 years. Speaking of which you did a great job of making the ick factor very clear in Mikey's scheme. Between the groping and Babe I want him punished. Deb get a very slight pass because of grief.
Ive enjoyed reading and the suspense!
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Haha, I just want a little suspense. Thanks for the reviews, I appreciate it:)
Date: Jan 21, 2017 7:32 pm Title: Chapter 12
No words can fully describe how this left me feeling. Proud of Brian. Listening to Ben, Cynthia and Emmett. Getting real info. Disgusted still by the rest of the gang. Little to no forgiveness imo. Am heartbroken over what's happening now. Can only pray that hospital contacts Justin. That he has poa. I'm sure you have a few more twists up your sleeve.
Am so incredibly emotionally invested in this.
Seriously can't wait for more.
Cheers
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, Elaine. I'm so happy to know you still liking the story:)
Date: Jan 21, 2017 3:35 pm Title: Chapter 12
These bitches must be crazy!!!!!
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:)
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[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2017 3:28 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh dear we are back where we started. Only this time Brian is willing to admit he and Justin are a couple. Can't wait for your next chapter.
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Thanks, Hun:)
Date: Jan 21, 2017 3:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Need to go get more tissues and a zanax!! The Love, Emotions
You have so got everyone on the edge of our seats tugging at our heart strings.
LOVE LOVE this
~~Hugs~~
Teresa
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Thanks, Teresa:)
Date: Jan 21, 2017 1:39 pm Title: Chapter 12
I forgot something in my last comment: the only good thing coming out of this accident is that the POA will allow Justin to be with Brian at the hospital and Michael (if he was not in the accident too) won't be able to do anything.
Maybe another good thing: Brian's memory will be back.
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Thank you so much:)
Date: Jan 21, 2017 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 12
Nadine.... PLEASE!! I'M BEGGING on my hands, knees, elbows, and forehead....PLEASE post the next chapter!!!! You have me over here breathing heavy like I've just run a marathon. What a chapter!!! A whole lot of hard truths are FINALLY about to be delivered to Michael and Lindsay and I CAN'T WAIT!! OMG OMG OMG!!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, hun. I'm so glad you still enjoying it:)
Date: Jan 21, 2017 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 12
I don't even know what to type. My emotions are all over the place for this chapter.
I'm so glad that Brian is going home to be with Justin. It broke my heart to witness the scene with Brian and Gus crying. I'm glad he didn't take Gus with him this time.
I do hope he will be okay from the accident. I hope Justin makes it to the hospital.
If we all promise to be really good, will you please post the next chapter today? PLEASE!!!!!
Hugs,
Jessica
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, Jessica:)
Date: Jan 21, 2017 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 12
Whoa!!! What a chapter!
So emotional, raw and full of truths that may help for Brian's future with Justin.
So glad Ben, Cynthia and Emmett talked to him; finally getting him some facts about his past.
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Thank you so much for the review:)
Date: Jan 21, 2017 11:51 am Title: Chapter 12
What the hell.You can't do that.
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Thank you:)
Date: Jan 21, 2017 8:44 am Title: Chapter 11
Well my suspicions were confirmed. I had this feeling that Justin knew Brian before the accident. Just in the way that Cynthia seemed heartbroken that Brian wouldn't be getting back together with his ex. She never really cared for Michael so I knew it wasn't him she was referring to.
I can't believe Debbie went along with Michael! I'm so angry with her right now.
I just hope Brian lets Justin explain why he did what he did. They are practically married now so they have to work it all out. Plus, Gus would be so upset if "Daddy's Heart" were no longer around.
Trying to patiently wait for an update.
Hugs,
Jessica
Author's Response:
Yeah, I don't want Gus to be heart broken, too. BJ should really talk this all out, for once and for all.
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[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2017 12:56 am Title: Chapter 11
Justin should have told the truth but he let his fears consume him and now he looks worser than Michael and Debbie.
I hope Brian will let him explain so they can stand against Michael, Debbie and Lindsay who is throwing her that in.
Not surprised by Debbie's behavior but using Vic's death makes it worse, she used her relationship with Brian to bully him into staying with Michael in a relationship that never existed.
Man the next episode is going to be very hard and I bet there will be lots of tears.
Author's Response:
Yeah, more angst to come.
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Date: Jan 20, 2017 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh, that's not good, at all!
On one hand, it will force Justin to talk about the past, but on the other hand, the next hours/days might be tough.
Author's Response:
Yeah, it was tough for both BJ.
Thanks for the review:)