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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2017 12:53 am Title: Chapter 42

Love how Michael thanks to Warren was smart and brought a lawyer to the meet.  Wonder what it was that he told Sam to do.  At least Michael won't have to pay a housenote.  So he's getting something.  And Lindsay can't try anything with the twins.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 41

Awwww... more parking lot tears... it was way better than better than Brian saying "I'm rich b!tch!"  Grampy considers him a son.. Beautiful!

Theres no rules so Miley is welcome to try to do the right thing.  Like the kids said he needs to think.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 9:33 pm Title: Chapter 41

It's nice that Michael has finally got his head on straight.  I can see where it would be hard for everyone to believe him and surprisingly I think Michael gets that.  He's not looking through rose colored glasses anymore.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 8:42 pm Title: Chapter 41

Awe what a touching moment between Brian and Grampy.  I still don't trust Michael.  I guess I'll wait and see what happens.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 8:07 pm Title: Chapter 41

That whole scene with Brian and Warren got me all teary-eyed I just loved that part.

Warren was right about Ben he thinks because he takes the moral high ground he is superior but it is just taking the cowards way out so he doesn't have to fight.

He stood by Michael while he abused, mistreated and was cruel to everyone around him in his bid to be the center of everything and he didn't stop it until it personally affected him then Zen Ben couldn't get away fast enough.

Loving someone doesn't mean you excuse their behavior until it hits you, it means being honest and helping each other be better.

Michael liked that Ben excused his behavior because it meant he could continue to act like a child and Ben liked that everyone saw him as a different version of Brian.

Only problem is that Brian was honest  with his actions while Ben hid behind his Zen master mantra.

I hope Ben and Michael can grow up and face the problems in their marriage so both can show Hunter and Jenny what a family is.

I also want to believe that at long last Michael is ready to face life like a grown up instead of reverting back to fourteen again whenever he doesn't get his own way??

Wonderful Update, Thanks :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 8:00 pm Title: Chapter 41

Whoa, Michael really is making efforts to be better.

The end is so emotional: Brian finally has a true father figure. Someone he can lean on, beside Justin.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 7:52 pm Title: Chapter 41

OK, so those last few lines....major lump in my throat. That was really really lovely and something Brian I'm sure really needed to hear.

I guess now we can honestly trust Michael apparently. He's been very straight forward. Kind of impressed. I took in what others said to him, didn't get all pissed off when they were skeptical, and finally understood what all his mother did for him growingup, and also, just how much a father Carl has been. 

I think Emmett may take a bit longer to forgive Michael. Can't really blame him. Unlike wiht Justin, what he did effected more people and did far more damage.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 11:35 am Title: Chapter 40

I'm still very skeptical of Michael.  I hope for Hunter and Jenny's sake he's actually trying to be a better person.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 10:25 am Title: Chapter 40

Well, that's a bit better, Mikey really trying to help.  Linds and Sam suck.  Hunter hopefully will forgive Mikey.  Granny is awesome.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 10:22 am Title: Chapter 39

Seriously, Mikey you should keep a sucker in your mouth so at least you'd have to take it out before speaking and maybe those seconds will filter some of the stupid.  You get points for trying to help.

Im glad the opening went well.  Everyone should be pleased with the progress.  

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 10:19 am Title: Chapter 38

I warned you Mikey and now look, no sexy muscle bound Professor.  And frankly if you read the paper you'd know dying from AIDS is the US, the cocktail works Ben has anther 40 years in him.  

 

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 8:33 am Title: Chapter 40

It's good to see Michael pull his head out off his ass..I hope it stay that way and his jealousy toward Justin stop all at once...

Lindsay is really a manipulative cunt..The family better off without her constant annoying presence around..

She doesn't know what hit her when she learn that Michael is about to betray her..

Reviewer: jaspersgirl21 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 7:42 am Title: Chapter 1

I can't believe I'm admitting this but, I was actually crying over Michael in a GOOD way in this chapter, so I thank you for that. I love when a story can make me cry and laugh and all the other emotions  in between. It's  a beautiful and breathtaking thing to watch someone change for the better. I only hope that it will be a permanent change. I know there will be bumps on his journey because , let's face it, he's Michael , but I think he has the potential to be a wonderful human being. Can't wait for the next chapter !!!!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 6:01 am Title: Chapter 40

A part of me wants to believe Michael is embracing change and is helping Ted and Blake, but the other part is wondering what is his actual angle and where to hide the body encase he decides to do a double cross? lol

Lindsay is determined to keep a tight hold on Brian by using Gus and her unborn children that is a woman who should be boiled in oil.

All she sees is dollar signs and the envy of everyone around her the truth is something she will deny because it doesn't get her what she wants the center of Brian Kinney's Universe.

I hope she does sign over her rights to Gus and the babies so they can all be free of her and she can leech off Sam until he finds his next muse.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 5:29 am Title: Chapter 40

Yeah, the good Michael seems to be back and for a right reason!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 12:18 am Title: Chapter 40

How nice to see a Michael who isn't thinking of himself.  Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 40

Hmmmmmm. I can see this plan working if only Michael actually stays on track. I'm not sure he can be trusted. I have to admit though, maybe....just maybe there's hope for him yet. I don't see him as being overly malicious in this, just...inately stupid. lol. He's done the tyipical 1 step forward 10 steps back thus far. If he's trying to convince Hunter, and really work on hsi relationship with Hunter, I'd hate to see him really ruin it by falling backwards again.

Lindsey on the other hand, is simply trying to keep herself in Brian's world. She'll do anything to stay there, even in teh smallest way. She may be heading off with Sammy boy, she still feels she needs to have a hold here just in case she comes back. She's simply awful!! Gus is teh only one she wants ties with as it keeps a slight hold on Brian. The twins are only useful if Brian takes them, which she assumes he will. But he won't. She's using Michael for the time being. she definitely has more up her sleeve, but she's in for a shock when the twins go to Ted and blake, and Mel and Brian figure everythign out with Gus.

Good to see Michael hopefully coming to terms with reality finally. Definitely not holding my breath as I've said, but let's just say my fingers are crossed for him. As much as I'm an anti-Michael fan, this one really isn't. He's a pain in the ass and quite selfish, I do see hope for him. And if he's able to win over Hunter and the gang, good for him, especially if he's able to help screw Lindsey in teh end. lol

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 5:38 pm Title: Chapter 39

Damn it Michael: shut your mouth or stay home!

Brian saved the day and Justin must feel overwhelmed.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 4:57 pm Title: Chapter 39

What a gorgeous heart warming chapter. Brian naming it Justin's Heart was so touching. Paying tribute to his husband this way was lovely. It show's just how much Brian has changed. How open he's become, not just with Justin, but he really showed it at the opening of the center by talking with, who he thought was the street kid. Opening up to her like he did. I'm glad that part turned out OK! Loved the intereaction with Zack and Nat. REally showing that they don't want a hand ut, but want to work at and honest job. they don't want handouts. amazing the difference in attitudes between these two and Michael, who would be quite happy to have everything just handed to him without having to earn it.

Michael needs to seriously learn how to use a filter on his mouth. I'm honestly not even sure he realizes how condecending he really is, or if he really does look down his nose at these kids. What was his real motivation to go to the opening? I can't see it being for true altruistic purposes. He's far too selfish. Was it just to try to hang with Brian? Was it so he looks better in the public eye, or to look better in Brian's eye? Whatever his motivation, he's still a stuck up little prick whose entitlement issues are misplaced! I seriously don't get where they come from.

Nice article that Nancy wrote. 

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 11:23 am Title: Chapter 39

Awe..."Justin's Heart."  Brian is so head over heals in love with his husband.

Michael does need to learn to keep his mouth shut.

I'm glad it was a reporter and not a real street kid.  It was real sweet to see them all pitching in to take care of Zach and Nat.

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 4:39 am Title: Chapter 39

Excellent chapter!

Thanks for sharing!

JoAnn

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 1:07 am Title: Chapter 39

An excellant chapter and once again Michael almost steps in it.  But Brian's trying to talk a girl out of leaving brought tears to my eyes.  I applaud the center and wish there were places like this in every town.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 12:50 am Title: Chapter 39

Really nice

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 12:35 am Title: Chapter 39

Maybe if Michael had to struggle he wouldn't be so quick to put down others who have to survive on the streets.

He had Deb who worked until she was to tired to get so he had everything his little heart desired, he never once had to fight to make it one more day because he had Deb, Vic, Brian to protect him from the real world while he could live in his comic books and fantasies.

Michael lived a life of a little Prince while Deb worked and saved to give him a better life so he would never know how utterly cruel and draining life could be and how did her son pay her back?

He treated her like crap called her embarrassing, talked down, criticized, humiliated and cast her aside unless he needed his battles fought.

Michael took one step forward to come to the center and help then he opened his mouth and moved twenty steps back, luckily it was a reporter and not an actual kid coming there for help.

Justin's Heart is going to help anyone who wants a chance for a better life, Brian should be very proud of all he did behind the scenes to make this center possible and everyone who helped should be happy aswell.

Very Good Chapter :)

 

Reviewer: mcm Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 12:07 am Title: Chapter 39

I loved it.Great job <3

 

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