
Date: Feb 20, 2017 4:28 pm Title: Chapter 23
Everyone is finally figuring this out. I like that. This is one story I love to read every day.

Date: Feb 20, 2017 4:16 pm Title: Chapter 22
Love the interaction between Michael and Danny. Danny says what he sees yet Michael sees it differently. Perhaps Justin could promise Disney for a later time? I can see that Brian letting Justin deal will be a problem, but then if Brian had taken over there would have been a problem.

Date: Feb 20, 2017 4:01 pm Title: Chapter 21
I love how your characters point out the obvious yet certain people don't see the truth. I also love that Brian realizes what he feels for Justin is love and Justin feels the same way.

Date: Feb 20, 2017 3:31 pm Title: Chapter 20
For someone who had no idea about caring for someone other than himself until Gus was born, Brian has come along way. Michael was his friend, but now he's seeing him in a light that is not flattering.

Date: Feb 20, 2017 3:16 pm Title: Chapter 19
I think that if Sierra hadn't hired a party planner Drew wouldn't have met Emmett. It's wonderful to see Ted's reaction to Michael's bid for attention and that's what it is. Justin hearing that Mel is upset about her baby and doing what he does is fantastic. Mel has more friends as back up than she thought. Brian and Gus are adorable.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 3:07 pm Title: Chapter 22
Oh, Mikey you ugh. Totally what I just said, he didn't evan try.
Callie and Gus were too cute trying to get in on the trip. I'm glad their going to spend time alone. Heck, Grampy liking you could make you fall in love.
Drew likes Emmett!! See, I was sort of right, so was Grampy.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 2:52 pm Title: Chapter 21
I was hoping Mikey would give his Dad a chance, perhaps understand the part his mother played in keeping them separate, but, nope. True to form Mikey is focused on the completely wrong thing. Grampy let him have, poor dumb dumb.
Brian is projecting about Drew because ultimately there were so many factors that dumping the fiancé wasn't easy. You can only hope Drew loves Emmett, which us the same position any couple should truly be viewed in. Even when love is obvious, it may not be love.

Date: Feb 20, 2017 4:53 am Title: Chapter 18
Correct me if I'm wrong but I thought Deb never told Danny she was pregnant. In that case how could Danny be there for him if he didn't know. I love how Emmett gave Michael a chance to look at himself. And I adore how Justin threw Michael out of the office and is willing to trust Brian. Really I love this whole chapter.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 2:39 am Title: Chapter 23
Loved it...Can't wait for the next chapter...
Date: Feb 20, 2017 2:39 am Title: Chapter 23
I'm loving the "getting to know each other" scenes. It's so refreshing to see a different side of Brian.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 2:31 am Title: Chapter 22
Callie and Gus are so cute. I do see a trip to Disney in their future.
Can't wait to get to Maine.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 2:29 am Title: Chapter 22
Loved Grampy for being protective of Brian..
And Michael well,he's just a hopeless case,not seeing anything beyond his wants,so better he'd be left alone with nobody...
Good to see Mel start putting herself together for her kids..and Gus and Callie they are just adorableðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Date: Feb 19, 2017 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 22
Very funny
Date: Feb 19, 2017 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 22
I really appreciated Brian being straight up with Drew and the honesty Drew gave back in return. I can understand a little more of why Drew wasn't claiming Emmett when the news first broke. They both have protective natures so it stands to reason that Brian now has a clearer view of Drew.
As for the second part of the talk regarding Sierra... well that explains a whole lot, now doesn't it?! She tried to cover up her own misdeed by playing victim. I think she was just pissed because Drew wouldn't boink her but I don't think she would have acted as much of a shrew if it was a woman he had an affair with. Her coming forward was more about pride and envy than it was about anger, in my opinion. Futhermore, I think she was probably planning to entrap Drew with a kid eventually. You never can tell with scheming chickenheads like that. I mean, hell look at what Lindsay was trying to do to Brian... just saying
Michael is as always a selfish little pissant and this time he was called on it by the one person he needed to hear it from...not that it made a bit of difference. Danny was completely honest with Michael telling him that he didn't want to be a father and that Deb gave him the freedom to live his life according to his own expectations, not hers. But Michael heard none of it. Instead once again he goes off on a tangent of 'Woe is Me' and blames everyone else for his lack of action and how as far as Brian goes, he took care of him. Mitch please?!!!!
Michael was happiest as long as Brian remained unattached because it fueled a fantasy that was never going to happen. Furthermore it allowed Michael into places that his whiny would have probably been banned from otherwise. How dare he think that Brian is so mindless that he's succumbing to the influence of Justin? Again, no acknowledgement in the part he played causing Brian to do those things just his wish that Brian gets rid of Justin so his life can go back to what he considers normal. And this is a 'best friend'? Danny was absolutely right to tell Michael that he really isn't a best friend. It really must be a special kind of hell to live in Michael Novotny's head- painful, pathetic and pussified to actually take responsibility for his own fracked-up existence. If Michael could have benefitted from having a father-figure at all, it would have been to teach him how to be an adult and own his shortcomings. But again, this is Michael Charles Novotny, blame-thrower extraordinaire we're talking about.
Gus and Callie are adorable. They will probably make great lawyers someday. I laughed so hard at them and their ploys to get a Disney trip out of Justin. Daph and Mel looking on was also endearing. It was a wonderful light-hearted family scene!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Feb 19, 2017 9:59 pm Title: Chapter 21
Michael might have gone about things the wrong way but he’s right that Drew’s fiancée is the victim in this mess. Brian is right that Drew should have broken things off with her before getting involved (sexually or otherwise) with someone else so Drew was in the wrong there. And since Emmett knew that Drew was engaged he was in the wrong too by having sex with Drew. But since they did what they did, instead of manning up and owning their mistakes and at least apologising to the fiancée and trying to make restitution they’re trying to make themselves look good instead. And I’m very disappointed that Warren and Justin are encouraging that when instead they should be encouraging Drew and Emmett to do the right thing by the fiancée and at the very least apologize to her personally and hopefully even publically as well! I now dislike all four of them. Since everyone is telling Michael to own up to his mistakes they should be applying that to Drew and Emmett as well.
Date: Feb 19, 2017 6:25 pm Title: Chapter 21
What a family reunion!
Date: Feb 19, 2017 3:29 pm Title: Chapter 21
Fabulous Chapter!!! Michael and Lindsay have shown that they can't be helped and need to be left behind.
Glad that Mel and Ben made the decisions that are right for them. Helen is an absolute dream!! I really love the way she got Mel to both think and say what she needed to.
I love that Lindsay is going to have to learn to stand on her own for once instead of looking for hand-outs. It's something that should have happened a long time ago!
Warren and Brian's talks are endearing. Brian is finally getting the father-figure he's always needed.
Michael trying to guilt Justin into giving him the attention he wants backfired big time. I loved the way he acted as Michael's mirror and pointed all of the supposed grievances back where they belonged.
But most of all I loved that Brian and Justin declared their feelings for each other.
Looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Feb 19, 2017 2:15 pm Title: Chapter 20
Brian is finally seeing Micheal for what he is: a jealous profiteer.
Date: Feb 19, 2017 2:00 pm Title: Chapter 19
So happy they are getting closer. I bet that seeing Brian as a father will help them.
Date: Feb 19, 2017 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 21
Aaaaaaaah finally declaring their love for eachðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Wow Michael really is fantasizing about having everything in a blink of an eye because he's related to Justin??Does he even think that his father might have nothing or so little compare to Justin's family?but No...So immature and childish and expect everything will be handed to him..
Good for Mel taking a stand and not letting Lindsay manipulate her again..and too bad for Lindsay no one's gonna come to sit beside her and specially not Brian not even helping her..she's on her own,it should be a lesson for her...
Date: Feb 19, 2017 11:43 am Title: Chapter 20
I'm sorry i didn't get a chance to leave a review for the past chapters got a problem with the net...
This chapter is just so good and i love how B/J start falling for each other....on the other hand i'm so pissed at the whiny brat..he's completely conniving traitor ever..
Great chapter as always..
Date: Feb 19, 2017 11:32 am Title: Chapter 21
Swoon...I love you both!!!! lol
I know I tell you all the time but I love this story.
Date: Feb 19, 2017 11:18 am Title: Chapter 20
I can't wait until they actually tell each other that they are in love. Warren I swear is cupid. lol
Date: Feb 19, 2017 11:12 am Title: Chapter 19
I love Brian and Gus moments. I'm glad this Brian seems to be more open with Justin.
Mikey is going to get a severe tongue lashing and not in a good way.
Date: Feb 19, 2017 3:13 am Title: Chapter 20
YAY!!! Brian and Justin are realizing just how a 'mistake' actually can be a blessing in disguise!
I felt so bad for Emmett here. To be betrayed like that...!!!! Brian's plan is golden though. Treat Michael as the insipid, insignificant ingrate that he is. The only attention he should be given is a punch to the throat by Debbie but I think Moronic Michael is about to know just how it really feels to be banished to the land of obscurity, even from his mother and his lover. At least I hope so!
WRITE On Star!
~Nichelle