Date: Mar 26, 2017 4:07 pm Title: Chapter 6
I enjoyed this story and it was nice to see Michael growing up for once.
Author's Response:
I don't normally think Michael would find his way out of his delusion, but I thought I'd be nice to him this time!
Date: Mar 26, 2017 2:38 am Title: Chapter 6
Didn't see the ending as you painted it, but I like it. I'm not a Mickey fan but this story works
Author's Response:
I don't normally find redemption for Mikey either, but in my story he wasn't really a bad guy, just delusional/crazy... losing everything I THINK would make him realize keeping his family is more important... but I do love to see him left on his own too LOL
Date: Mar 26, 2017 1:29 am Title: Chapter 6
Wow, what a turn around. At least therapy helped crazy comic boy! Glad you went full circle on this fic, I enjoyed it!
Author's Response:
I gave Mikey a break this time... normally I just hate him and can't find a way to be nice, but I figured he wasn't actually bad in this one, just delusional, so why not let him find his way out of cray cray land lol
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2017 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 6
Brandon finally realized what good is revenge if the mark doesn't help sell it and no one cares, he spent weeks with Michael and all he got was a migraine and embarrassed.
Michael wanted his fantasy so bad that all he could see was the prize too bad the happily ever after was just in his head.
At last he finally got help and sees that the world will keep spinning without him and trying to push his fantasy got him nothing but alone.
Now he has his family, friends and can face life in the real world.
Gotta say I could see Lindsay acting the same way and not giving up isn't that sad?
Great Story :)
Author's Response:
I could TOTALLY see Lindsay acting the same way... I avoided her in this story just so i could focus on Michael and not bash her as well... I don't think she helps, just finds a way to twist things to focus on herself
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2017 8:58 pm Title: Chapter 6
So sorry to see this end. It was an enjoyable ride.
Author's Response:
This was my longest story yet... I'm still getting more courage and ideas on my writing... my next idea is an AU story that I predict will be longer...
I tend to be a quick fix girl in real life, so right now so are my stories... find a problem fix it... not extend it with issues... lol... give me time!!! :D
Date: Mar 25, 2017 7:59 pm Title: Chapter 6
It was great to work with you Kat! You did an amazing job on this story, even giving a character I normally loathe with every drop of ink in my pen and printer a much needed redeeming quality. I enjoyed this story thoroughly!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all your help... you are just absolutely awesome!!!!
Date: Mar 25, 2017 7:46 pm Title: Chapter 6
Good for you Michael to finally accept the reality and start living without delusions..
I love it,you really did great in this one..Looking forward for more from you and your amazing stories to come...😘😘😘
Thank you for sharing.😘
Author's Response:
thank you... thinking up new ideas now!
Date: Mar 25, 2017 7:45 pm Title: Chapter 6
Loved it such a cute story..... Would have preferred Michael to rot in prison but we can't have it all lol
Author's Response:
I normally do not let Michael be redeemed... I prefer him in prison or at least alone as well, but I don't think he was "bad" in this story as much as delusional.... so I thought I'd be a little nicer to him this time LOL
Date: Mar 25, 2017 6:30 am Title: Chapter 5
Hahahah LMAO what a way to get Brian to get jealous...Can't wait for the men in the backroom's reaction after that specially Brandon...
Author's Response:
Brandon is not happy to say the least LOL
Date: Mar 25, 2017 6:24 am Title: Chapter 4
I'm really enjoying this;thank you😘😘
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2017 5:09 am Title: Chapter 5
What an interesting scene. Michael and Brandon in the backroom. Then Michael cries out Brian's name. Truly hysterical. Not to mention embarrassing.
Author's Response:
it should be embarassing to Michael, but really only Brandon will live with the embarassment IMO... Michael would have to acknowledge what he did to be embarassed lol
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2017 5:01 am Title: Chapter 4
Funny how nobody is really missing Michael.
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2017 5:01 am Title: Chapter 4
Funny how nobody is really missing Michael.
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2017 4:57 am Title: Chapter 3
Deb tried. But Michael wasn't buying it. Michael and Brandon talk about your odd couple. LOL.
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2017 4:52 am Title: Chapter 2
Wow. Love how Ted takes up for Brian and tells Deb he's insulted that she would blame Brian without knowing the truth. Emmett's right on about Michael being delusional. Poor Ben. He's the one who is really hurting.
Date: Mar 24, 2017 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 5
Yes apologize for that yucky yuckiness! Ew ew ew...I cannot unseen that I'm my minds eye....oh well, I guess we all must be patient for the outcome, no pun intended. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
yeah, no unseeing/unthinking that grossness.. sorry lol
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2017 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 5
I can't breath lol. brain bleah stat
please keep the good work up
Author's Response:
thanks.. yeah the brain bleach wasn't enough for me lol
Date: Mar 24, 2017 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 5
BAHAHAHAHA! OH man! OK, so like you said, not enough brain bleach to take away that visual, BUT...I'm imagining the reactions from everyone around them, Brandon included (his ego being somewhat shattered) and have to laugh. Brandon's level of "cool" is probaly the only thing that kept him from scraming out Brian's name as well. LOL! Wait till word gets back to Brian and Justin. I'm sure that will just add another level of creepiness.
Try as theu might, they just won't ever get the attention they're hoping for from those they truly desire. If anything, I bet B&J will have a slightly green look about them.
Have to admit, I think I have the same shade of green myself after reading that last bit. thankfully lunch was a couple hours ago. The very idea of Michael and sex is just.....*shudders* UGH!
Poor Ben. He just doesn't deserve any of this. thankfully he has his friends to give support.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
any Michael sex is just yuck... can we just start thinking of him as a eunuck????
Date: Mar 24, 2017 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
EW, EW, and oh yea EWWW.
Author's Response:
normally I might be insulted by that, but I TOTALLY agree... it was just as, if not more, difficult to write it than to just read it LOL
Date: Mar 24, 2017 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 5
OK. I will never forget that scene. Michael 's ass . Gross!
Author's Response:
yeah, it was not easy to write... I started writing it last night and had to stop and finish today since it was so icky LOL
[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2017 2:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
Michael et Brandon Brian contre Unis Ca va être explosif ! Vite la suite et il y a même du super sexe j'adore Merci Kathy
Author's Response:
Si heureux que vous en appréciiez ... juste quelques chapitres supplémentaires je pense
Date: Mar 23, 2017 12:02 am Title: Chapter 4
Whoop whoop! Gets better and better. On to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
thank you Miss Merlot!!!! :) <3
Date: Mar 22, 2017 5:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh man...this Brandon and Michael dating thing is equally disturbing, and hilarious! Brandon is suffering and is fated for more. Michael seems to be enjoying it a bit more than Brandon is mind you. Will he start to obsess over him now or will he keep Brian in his scope?
Had to laugh that it suddenly occured to the gang thatit's been so long since hearing from Michael. none of them seemed to miss him at all. While Michael is assuming that they are all wondering where he is, what's going on, they've only just realized he hasn't been around. LOL!!
Justin sticking up for Brian like he did was wonderful!! So needed to be said and that the others agreed as well, made it hit Deb even harder her continued sticking up for Michael and blaming Brian or forcing Brian to "fix things" has been so hurtful to him. Hopefully this will really open her eyes and force her to change things going forward.
Great chapter!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review Elaine.
Brandon does seem to be suffering more right now doesn't he?
I enjoyed that the gang has enjoyed their peace and quiet... the way it should be! lol