[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2017 1:29 am Title: Chapter 17
Michael is a user. He used Ben thinking once Ben was gone Brian would be there for him. There is a flaw to his thought processes. But now people are seeing him for the nastiness in him. They all thought he was nice.
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2017 1:09 am Title: Chapter 16
So we learn a bit more about Molly and her views and Chris. Like the fact that Dan and Brian are capable of getting along. The fact that Dan coveted Ted was funny.
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2017 12:44 am Title: Chapter 15
Love Justin's thing about right and wrong. Dan, yet another great character. How does Michael think he can get away with this? How does Deb manage to not see things for the lies they are?
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2017 12:34 am Title: Chapter 14
Love this chapter. Brian is a good friend for Blake and I think knowing Blake is one of the reasons that he fell for Justin. I'm glad that Ted is going after Blake and Blake is giving him another chance. Love the twists you've given this story and the new characters Alex and Grant.
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2017 12:14 am Title: Chapter 13
Boy, Michael thinks he can lie with impunity. Hope you teach him a lesson.
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2017 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 25
Brian is planning the wedding?!?! I am Totally Loving That :)
I feel like Ben is going to continue to blame Brian and Justin for how his life is going.
So Jennifer is in town and Justin doesn't seem to thrilled to see her, proud of Lindsay for standing up for herself against her family.
Date: Mar 24, 2017 4:35 pm Title: Chapter 25
Glad that there were some real repercussions for Ben. Mind you, this is just one more thing for both he and Michael to blame either Justin or Brian for. Will there be any retribution from them for our boys or will Ben actually learn something from this? From they way he is in this one, I'm just not sure.
Oh the inevitable disasterous coffee break. LOL. Had to chuckle a little. I mean will he ever be able to get a cup of coffee in peace? Lindsey too now apparently. good on her though to stick up for herself. she gave back as good as she got. Better even. Jen is going to be disappointed I think. She's hoping for a emotionsl reunion with her children and I get the feelign that they won't be as enthusiastic as she hopes.
Soooooooo. Brian is in charge of the wedding huh. hehehe. this is going to be interesting. fun to watch though!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 24, 2017 1:11 pm Title: Chapter 25
Michael has finally got his due. Deb's eyes are finally open, Molly's coming around. Justin said yes, Ted's back with Blake. Emmett's found love, and things look promising for Dan and Grant. Life is almost perfect! ~ Kathleen
Date: Mar 24, 2017 10:33 am Title: Chapter 25
Yeah they are finally getting married!!!! Can't wait to see what Brian comes up with.
Date: Mar 24, 2017 4:29 am Title: Chapter 25
Very funny.
Date: Mar 23, 2017 6:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
I've always been amused by Michael lack of manors... ~ Kathleen
Date: Mar 23, 2017 6:03 pm Title: Chapter 24
Yay Molly dropped dime! I cannot believe they trashed the house and stashed drugs. So slimy, I'm also glad Chris flipped out. Now, Mikey needs to be informed the jig is up and he will get help or go down. I wonder if there's a two for one rate? Chris and Mikey could share a padded cell.
Date: Mar 23, 2017 5:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
Jealous Mikey, always one of my favorites... ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2017 5:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very nice start! ~ Kathleen
Date: Mar 23, 2017 9:09 am Title: Chapter 24
Wow! Michael really has stooped even lower. Setting the girls up with drugs. He's such a jerk and so is Chris.
Date: Mar 23, 2017 5:05 am Title: Chapter 24
Whoa, one step further in the devious plan of Michael! I hope Molly will finally realize what's going on.
Date: Mar 23, 2017 3:09 am Title: Chapter 24
That whiny brat can't just stop isn't he,even inside prison he can still caused a turmoil around Justin??I hope they put him in jail for a long time together with that closeted idiot...oh maybe they can put Molly even for a short time just to make her realize what she's done to her brother...
It's a good thing Gus is not around when it happens. .
[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2017 12:23 am Title: Chapter 24
So does Michael get charged for the destruction along with Chris?
Great chapter!
Date: Mar 23, 2017 12:16 am Title: Chapter 24
NOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooo!!!! Dang! WHAT A CHAPTER!!! I knew that my anxiety regarding Lindsay's keys was spiked for a reason but I was NOT expecting THAT!!!!! OMG!! That deranged closet case MOFO Chris! AAAARRRGHHHH!!!
I feel so bad for Mel and Lindz, to have that kind of false accusation hanging over their heads AND their place looking as if a hurricane hit it. And fall because Chris can't get Justin???? OMG! If I was Mel, I think I would have asked for a jail cell, an orthopedist and a podiatrist in advance right before I put my foot knee deep in Chris Hobbs' ass! WTF!!!! And that little rat bastard troll sitting in jail right now is the one ultimately responsible! I hope they charge him with conspiracy to commit criminal mischief and everything else they can throw at him. Justin needs to officially press charges against Michael and Chris. Although I know that he would hate for Molly to get in trouble, the worse alternative is to have Chris and Michael out where they can cause more damage to property AND people! Both of them need some serious time in a dark cell with Big Bubba and Billy Bob!
As for Craig, I laughed at him. YES I DID!! Sorry son of a buscuit eating whorecake! The idiot traded a SUCCESSFUL son who just happens to be gay for a Closet Case Loser who has a bright future as Billy Bob's bride. I wonder if that 'wedding' is still going to happen....Hmmmm
Rocking in my Chucks waiting Star!!! Gal, I'm cussing again....LONGER this time! LOL
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2017 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 24
Well that got creepy fast and I wonder if Chris was still there when Mel and Lindsay came home?
I felt so bad when Mel and Lindsay got arrested for drugs thankfully they have Dan to help.
Craig finally sees that he really didn't know Chris at all and Molly finally sees the truth.
Michael will be crying for his Mama real soon at the moment he is acting tough but as soon he realizes that Brian is not coming to his aide he will be begging for Deb.
Date: Mar 22, 2017 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 24
Jeebus christmas! My heart was racing through this one. I knew something was going to happen with that key missing, but nothing like that! Felt so bad for Mel and Lindsey.
Molly is completely floored and scared! I think she's finally really caught onto Chris and the truth of what he was up to.
Craig too had a very eye opening experience.
Wow.......just WOW! Amazing chapter!!!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 22, 2017 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 24
Wow way better than I expected.
Date: Mar 22, 2017 5:32 pm Title: Chapter 23
That house is simply gorgeous! Hopefully they hire soemone to do windows! lol.
Loving how understanding Lindsey adn Mel are about Brian's not wanting to have another child with L&M. I like that while they wanted to give him an option first, they already had other ideas.
A bit worrisome that Lindsey wasn't able to find her key. Honestly, hair on the back of my neck raised a bit reading that. A very understated mention in the chapter, yet one that may have disturbing ramifications. Sounds like a possible ominous scenario down the road.
hehehe, had to laugh at Grant's reaction. A little niggling and he made a decision. :) Definitely a relationship that could prove to be interesting and quite possibly entertaining.
Looking forward to "someday" for our boys!! :) What a wonderful event that will be.
Cheers
Elaine
Date: Mar 22, 2017 10:38 am Title: Chapter 23
Wow that house is gorgeous!!!! I want to move in. Look at all the windows. I know why Justin fell in love with it.
Marry him you fool. lol
Date: Mar 22, 2017 9:15 am Title: Chapter 23
Oh no, a missing key plus a psycho Mikey equals the ladies are in trouble. Perhaps Carl confiscated the key?? I guess we shall see.
That house is amazing! It's perfect for two exhibitionist, lol. And, they are so in love, lovely!
Im really enjoying this. Thanks so much!!