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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2017 5:28 am Title: Chapter 23

I hope Brian will change his POA asap!

The house is fabulous!

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2017 3:11 am Title: Chapter 23

Loved the last line-  marry me someday-  I like seeing how their relationship is evolving.

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2017 2:35 am Title: Chapter 22

Served you right you whiny conniving idiot!!!And I'm glad Debbie didn't interfere and side with the whiny brat as usual..So proud of Carl for standing up against the idiot.. 

What a nerve,Molly showing up and accused her brother,maybe it was Chris idea or Craig to push her to confont Brian which she didn't expect he would tell her things about her brother. ..I hope Justin let Dan and Grant tell her all the things their father and Chris did to him..

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2017 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 23

That House Is Gorgeous!!

Brian and Justin are going to be very happy there.

Deb is seeing Michael as insane nutMeg is more accurate Michael is not crazy he is just a two-year old who is throwing a major temper tantrum because he can't get his way.

Of course he is also a vindictive Ass who could be dangerous because he is not getting his way.

When he gets out he is going to be even more determined to do and use whoever he can to get Brian.

Grant getting mad at the thought of Renny being near is man is so cute <giggles>

:)

Reviewer: mcm Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2017 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 23

I am such a bad reader LOL I haven't let you knw for a couble of chapters noe that you have become one of my favorite writers.

I love how you keep the boyz growing in their relationship

 

Thank You

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2017 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 23

OH Good Googly Moogly!!!! That damn Captain Pain in the Ass!!!!! My stars and stripes will Brian EVER be rid of him?!!!!! Is the idiot going to have to do something truly heinous to finally get put away. I'm suddenly afraid for ALL of them, not just Justin, Gus, Brian and Lindsay. The little fuck is poison. 

The 'baby' talk between Mel and Brian then Justin and Lindsay was very informative. And it's a maturity in their relationship to realize that Gus' situation is completely different than what it would be this time around. But this also spikes my anxiety a bit. Since, for all intents and purposes, Michael will be getting out, I worry that he will try to force Lindsay or Mel to accept his babymakers... BTW.....EWWWW.... I just threw up in my mouth a little bit at the thought that Michael has parts in any form to even consider this scenario. I just want to point that out, LOL

Anyway back to my anxiety spiking Where in all of God's green and purple earth is Lindsay's house key?????!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!! Don't tell me that while that little low down dirty bastard stole Brian's loft key off of Lindsay's key ring he actually took hers too?! Now I'm even more concerned because if he did, he'll be coming and going in and out of their house at all times of the day and night in an effort to possibly acquire Gus! LAWD HAM TURKEY you're killing me here Star! The possibilities of this sanely insane idiot and his machinations are endless...SMH

As for the realtor, I nearly died laughing right along with Justin. If that little lady only knew how un-little woman-like Justin really is, she would either learn not to stereotype or prepare to be broke for the rest of her life. Foolish woman! As for the house that Alex suggested, OMG I'm in LOVEEEEEEEEE!!!!! That certainly looks like  a house that Brian and Justin could be happy in.. Stately, to appeal to Brian's inner size queen but enormous enough that Justin has room to fix it according to what he needs without it offending Brian's minimalistic tendencies. Most of all, it's a house a family could grow in. 

Get to writing Star! I'm on the edge of my Chuck Taylors here waiting to run back outside to have a cig while reading and cussing! LOL

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2017 6:17 pm Title: Chapter 22

Hope Molly actually listened to Justin and Brian because Justin would like to have his sister around.

So how badly is Craig in debt?

Michael should just get use to being handcuffed and taken to jail cause I doubt this will be the last time.

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2017 4:59 pm Title: Chapter 22

Finally, he's arrested; it was becoming dangerous for Justin.

I hope Molly will have listened and will understand what happened with Justin and Chris.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2017 4:04 pm Title: Chapter 21

Emmett does indeed move quickly! Apparently so does Alex. ;) 

That must've been a pretty surreal moment for brian finding out what Michael said to the girls. His heart must've gone to his throat!! Would've scared the crap out of me as a parent.

A bit put off by the girl's suggestion. I think it was pretty crappy of them to make their request at such a time. Neither B or J seemed to take offense by it, so whatever. lol. I did however appreciate the fact that Mel said they would understand if he said no. also that they specifically included Justin in the discussion. Just shows what a huge improvement there is in their relationship.

Slightly nervous for both Lindsey and Justin now. Not even sure Gus would be entirely safe from  Michael's deluded thoughts. 

WOAH!!!!!!!!! Grant and Dan?!?!? Woah!!!!! Did NOT see that coming. (I seem to be saying that alot in this one. lol) I have to agree with Dan a bit. I tend to envision Grant as a teen when I picture him. Interesting. I guess we'll have to wait and see what progresses bewteen them.

Cheers

Elaine

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2017 3:54 pm Title: Chapter 22

A bit of an emotionally charged chapter! Questioning Molly's motives RN, but I'm hopeful that she actually listened to Brian and Justin and will at least consider what was said. Perhaps she'll realize that Justin isn't the enemy at all. she'll figure out that Chris was really using her. More importantly, she'll figure out that Daddy dearest is really an ass. What help does Craig actually need? I'm supposing money?

Michael sounds like a 5 year old spoiled brat speaking to Carl. His attitude is unbelievable! To top it off he shoves Carl...a cop! what a monumental stupid ass move. His temper tantrums are that of a petulant. He seems to think that tearing up the order will make it go away. I'm guessing that an overnight stay in jail won't do much good. He'll continue to blame Justin, and will still try to contact Brian. I'm wondering how far he will go though.

Wondering what Dan will do for Michael with getting the help he needs. Michael is going to fight anything tooth and nail! I'm a little concerned for Lindsey and Justin actually. Even a bit for Gus if Michael goes too far.

Brilliant update!!!!!!!!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2017 1:32 pm Title: Chapter 22

Yay Michaels going to jail! Oh happy day! Good for Deb....

Hopefully Molly & Justin can move forward now.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2017 10:35 am Title: Chapter 22

I'm so glad that Debbie is allowing Carl to do his job and not defending Michael.  He needs to grow up and realize that his actions have consequences.

I'm still unsure of Molly's motives.  I guess we'll see where that goes.

 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2017 10:27 am Title: Chapter 21

Interesting pairing...Grant and Dan.  Go Emmett and Alex!  I'm glad they took the next step.

I understand Brian's apprehension in saying yes to another child.  I think he really wants him and Justin to have a baby together.  Like he said one that they didn't have to share.

Can't wait to see where this is going.

Hugs,
Jessica

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2017 5:37 am Title: Chapter 21

Interesting new developments in there!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2017 4:38 am Title: Chapter 22

Great chapter. Michael needs help. Good for Deb.

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2017 3:30 am Title: Chapter 21

Oooh didn't expect that one but it could be interesting to see Grant and Dan making their journey through romancehood🤗🤗

Love it💜💜

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2017 12:43 am Title: Chapter 21

Dan and Grant? I can actually see it happening.

Brian is being smart and getting the restraining order against Michael.

Michael is plotting and going to be pissed that Brian is moving further away, everyone has to be on alert because he is going to be after Justin even more now.

As for Mel and Lindsay asking Brian to father another baby all I can say is: It's Called Tact You F!#kRags!!!! <scoffs<

With Michael going around all topsy turvy do they really think this is a good time to bring up having another baby?? ? <rolls eyes>

And even though they are all getting along I don't trust it??

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2017 12:24 am Title: Chapter 21

Umm, I'm with Dan what the heck Grant?? We shall see.  Oh no, I hope Linds doesn't get killed, lo not really but, lol.  Perhaps Mikey will fall in love with someone else and no one needs to get hurt? Not likely, but it's a thought.

Seriously ladies did now seem like the appropriate time for baby making? Their friends suck, lol.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2017 12:23 am Title: Chapter 21

I think Grant is adorable! I could definitely see him & Dan together. 

Everyone needs to get a serious plan in place for certifiable Michael 

Reviewer: MissMerlot Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2017 12:22 am Title: Chapter 1

HMOF!  Am all caught up.  First brilliant and secondly just wow Michael I was screaming when he was beating himself up.  But Ben what a tool...boohoo to you that Brian got lucky in love on his first time out.   Never thought I would dislike him in a story but I really want to open a can on him!

Can't wait for more.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2017 12:20 am Title: Chapter 20

Umm, Ben seriously you're going to get a 5250 just like Mikey if you don't cool it.  Dan is hysterical when he's not saying I use to date Justin.  

Mikey broke in to the loft? Seriously Mikey you are so confused.

Yay, we are moving fast but who cares our boys are in love, buying a house and basically getting married!!

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2017 12:15 am Title: Chapter 19

So many WTF moment in this chapter.  Mikey has totally lost it. Poor Deb too late to have a back up kid.  Ben seriously needs a nice injection.  All the scheming can't be healthy.  Brian, yes'm go home.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2017 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 18

Omg what us he thinking?  He must have read a comic and there's was this as an idea.  He really thinks he can fool everyone? The DA, Carl?  Poor fool.  He will be lucky if he doesn't go to jail for filing a false report.

 

Reviewer: ConnieMelissa Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2017 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 21

Well now I feel sorry for Emmett's assistant 😐. I hope Deb doesn't end up hurt by Psycho Michael. Also, I understand that the bio-clock is ticking but was that the best time to ask for another kid? I am glad Grant gets love too. Now if we could just get Ben and PsychoMichael to take a long walk off a short pier all will be welk.

Reviewer: Sallyo Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2017 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 21

I love this story. 

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