Date: Mar 20, 2017 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 20
This was hilarious and freaky at the end!
Ted running to find out Debbie didn't get what she wanted. Justin unable to remain awake. Cynthia saying to her boss that he was getting better friends. Lindsey slamming the door to Michael's face.
I can't imagine Brian's reaction when he will learn what his ex-best friend suggested about Gus!
Date: Mar 20, 2017 7:56 pm Title: Chapter 20
So many updates this weekend!! Oh what a thrill.
Michael...man alive, I swear he encompasses a whole new level of delusional. thankfully the lawyers all seem to be on teh same page re: him giving a fake report about Ben. The DA isn't even going forward with it. Dan did a good job of making them see facts.
The fact that all this has been going on for so long, and that he's involved Chris and apparently Molly (innocently enought I think) is just...wow. I don't get why Justin didn't do anything about it. I am glad however that he told Brian everything.
As much as I get that he wants his independence, he seems a bit over the top about it. He needs to reliquish a bit of the control. Brian doesn't want him to be made to feel weak, but it would be the same for any partner, friend lover etc. One would want to protect those they care about. Brian and Justin just need to be able to come to an understanding about it all.
Grant's interactions with Brian give a good spot of humour. Hopefully the poor guy gets over it soon enough. LOL.
Alex and Emmett huh.........interesting.
Glad Ted is finally seeing himself in a more positive light! About time.
Ben...honestly I'm so infuriated with him! What a complete asshole! Saying that Brian should be the one with Aids due to his screwing around. He's still trying to ruffle feathers even though Justin got Dan to help him. He needs some serious help! He's joined the "blame Brian" party. for some reason he just can't see his own actions are as bad if not worse than some of those made by Michael. He intentionally made life difficult for Justin just to get attention from his husband. He thinks Brian is to blame when Brian has pretty much washed his hands of Michael awhile ago. A part of me hope he heeds Brian's warning, but then another kind of hopes he gets trolloped!
Deb really and truly saw (and heard) Michael and just how far gone he really is. His rant to Brian showed his true colours. Especially his thoughts on Ben and how he used him to gain attention from Brian.
Justin really let Deb have it. He doesn't have a history with her, so he really doesn't have anything to lose. She seemed to get it towards the end, but she seems to flip flop, so who's to say if she adhere's to his words. He was spot on with all he said too. The fact that she's holding all she did for Brian over his head is terrible.
My jaw dropped at what Michael did/said with the girls. Holy cow! you know it's only to link him to Brian. He'll do or say anything to get what he wants. What more will he try to do? Will he actually put Justin in any danger? or least try to? I hope not, or that his plans get nipped in the bud quickly.
Again, brilliant weekend. Can't thank you enough.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 20, 2017 7:40 pm Title: Chapter 19
What an end: Brian kissing Emmett to thank him! That's fabulous!
Michael is so threatening, it's really scary; Deb is out of her mind if she doesn't ask Carl to get Michael out of Justin's way.
Date: Mar 20, 2017 7:14 pm Title: Chapter 18
The lies start to be revealed. Ben is such a bad loser.
I love a defensive Brian.
Date: Mar 20, 2017 11:54 am Title: Chapter 20
Yaaaay finally B&J will settle their lives together and nothing could stop them....
Ben is just pathetic,imagine even his own illness he's putting the blame to Brian just because he didn't get it while he's screwing half of Pitts. ..What a loser,specially his idiot of a husband is still chasing B that's Brian's fault as well. Get a life Ben or you and Michael really belong to each other.
Date: Mar 20, 2017 11:02 am Title: Chapter 20
Yes! Brian and Justin are going to finally intertwine their lives. I can only imagine what Brian is going to do when he finds out about Michael's visit to the girls.
I was laughing so hard at Ted going to Justin's office. Brian is a devious thing. lol
Date: Mar 20, 2017 10:55 am Title: Chapter 19
A cute Brian and Emmett moment. I always thought they should have been closer friends on the show.
Hoping Michael gets thrown in jail soon.
Date: Mar 20, 2017 10:47 am Title: Chapter 18
Go Brian! Ben does need to understand what he did to Justin was very serious. Michael is crazy and could have really hurt Justin.
Alex and Emmett??? Yes, please!
Date: Mar 20, 2017 10:38 am Title: Chapter 17
I wish Ted had more self confidence. He is so adorable and a wonderful person. It's no wonder both Blake and Dan are attracted to him.
Michael is such a piece of garbage. He still isn't going to come clean to Carl. Well too bad. I hope they throw the book at him.
Date: Mar 20, 2017 6:29 am Title: Chapter 19
Well Michael finally gotten crazy completely and how can Debbie still demand to Brian to help her son??
Yaaaay got excited about Emmett and Alex..
Date: Mar 20, 2017 4:46 am Title: Chapter 20
I like this Mel and Liz. Ben is an ads.
[Report This]Date: Mar 20, 2017 2:28 am Title: Chapter 20
Glad Justin was the one to hold a mirror to Deb's face and get her to see that she isn't any better than Brian's parents, as a matter of fact she is worse.
At least this time she actually listened and walked away before Brian showed up and she said something that couldn't be taken back, maybe now she is ready to admit that the way she treated Michael is the reason why he is so spoiled, selfish, vindictive and petty, plus how she treated Brain is why he is pulling away to find his own happiness without strings attached.
Dan gave Ben the truth but like Michael he only sees what he wants to see and hears what he wants to hear, why accept responsibility when it is so easy to blame Brian, just another whiny A-hole who wants to be Brian and doesn't have the balls to pull it off.
Mel and Lindsay are being smart and warning Brian that Michael is coming after their son.
Michael isn't crazy is he is just an idiot who wants who he can never have and he is getting desperate because his plans aren't working.
Wait until he finds out Brian and Justin are moving in together.
Date: Mar 20, 2017 2:20 am Title: Chapter 20
DAMNNNNNN Michael and Ben are some DESPERATE BUM-ASS BASTARDS!!! Ad Deb... well thank goodness Justin seems to have gotten through to her otherwise I may have been tempted to write myself into your fic to punch her lights out. I mean seriously! How can one be that BLIND!!! Stevie Wonder, Ray Charles, Jose Feliciano AND Andre Boccelli can see that the rat bastard is a selfish, egotistical and perverse little shit!
Mel and Lindsay should have ripped Michael's scrotum out. That would have killed the thought that he should father a dust mite, nevermind a child. He better not even think about doing anything to Gus!
WRITE On Star!
~Nichelle
Date: Mar 20, 2017 12:01 am Title: Chapter 19
Really Deb? REALLY?!!!! Instead of concentrating and honing in on the fact that your son is a dreanged stalking, jealous and malicious ASSHOLE, you continue to delude yourself into thinking that Brian should help Michael? Selfish and Willfully Blind MUCH Deb??!! OMG!! Time for some other charges to be racked up against Michael such as Breaking and Entering, Stalking and Vandalism! I can't imagine that the Statutes of Limitations is up on what he's done to Justin. And the fucker admitted it aloud and intentionally along with issuing another threat!!! Goodness, I hope Brian can get evidence that a restraining order is needed. Better yet, lodge a formal complaint and have Michael picked up immediately especially because of the false report! Something has really got to be done before Michael turns violent which I suspect is going to happen very soon. BTW, I don't necessarily think there is any medically wrong with Michael. Quite the opposite actually. Yes, I think he's obsessed but the fact that he is in his right mind while committing all these acts and is basically gloating after he does them, proves that he's sane. He's a selfish, spoiled BRAT whose mother enabled him to be such!
As for Ben, what an asshole! To think that he went to Justin to stir up more shit proves that he is just as petty and childish as Michael. Instead of learning a valuable lesson about the person he's allowed himself to become because of jealousy, envy and insecurity, he lashes out at the people trying to help his sorry ass. Brian and Justin are definitely better people than I am, no matter that they are fictional characters. Ben's ass needs to be in jail for instigating the entire situation. Even though he still he doesn't deserve to be falsely accused of domestic violence, he needs some sort of concrete punishment for his part in all of this. Maybe losing his job will do the trick.
Love the way Brian shows his growth here at Babylon and his talk with Emmett!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Mar 19, 2017 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 19
Does Michael have to kill someone in order for Deb to see that Michael is dangerous?
Even after standing there and hearing from Michael's own mouth what he did to Justin she is still trying to get Brian to fix it.
Deb is going to be waiting for Hell to Freeze over if she is expecting Brian to lift a finger to help.
Ben is such an Ass!
Soon he is going to get a nice big payback that he will feel for years to come.
Brian stopped himself for doing something stupid which shows just how grown up he really is.
Alex and Emmett have potential :)
Date: Mar 19, 2017 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 19
I feel the need to review but cannot think of what to say, to let you know how WTF this chapter was. I mean that in a very good way.
Date: Mar 19, 2017 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 19
Wow. Michael really is crazy. Deb needs to get her head out of her ads before he kills someone.
[Report This]Date: Mar 19, 2017 6:00 pm Title: Chapter 18
Well that went Brilliantly! Michael convinced no one Ben actually attacked him and he better pray the DA doesn't decide to press charges against him for filing a false statement.
Grant did a good job showing Emmett that Michael may have opened the door to cruelty and spite but he willing walked through it, Michael didn't force him to play a 'Mean Girl' Emmett did that of his own volition so he should accept some of the blame too.
Ben also needs to face the fact that he gave into to his dark side to hold onto someone who saw him as a place holder and nothing else, you went into this relationship knowing that Michael is in love with Brian and instead of walking away with your dignity still intact he chose to stoop to Michael's level and Justin took the hit.
Ben saw Michael as a wounded puppy chasing after any scrap Brian gave him and he wanted to save Michael, in turn he lost himself to hold on to a lost cause and his jealousy turned him into a bitter, vile buffoon.
Wonder what Michael plans next now that his lie imploded on its self?
What is Ben going to do about Michael?
Date: Mar 19, 2017 5:54 pm Title: Chapter 18
You go Dan! You tell Michael what a piece of shit liar he is! Woohoo! Nice warning for Ben Brian...well said
Date: Mar 19, 2017 4:50 pm Title: Chapter 18
Some real home truths delivered during this chapter!!! Now Michael has been proven the liar he truly is and not just by Dan but by Carl AND the nosy neighbors! LMFAO!!!! What a pathetic schmuck! I hope Carl tells Deb every single little detail BEFORE Michael has another chance to spin another lie.
I LOVED Brian’s talk to Ben. He's another idiot who wanted the undivided attention of an asshole! I swear Michael’s 'Mean Girls' syndrome is contagious! Ben better take heed to everything Brian said because all won't end well for him.
As for Em and Grant's talk, I glad he didn't let Em wallow in self-pity, just told him the facts and made him hold himself accountable for buying into Michael's brand of crazy. Now maybe Em can truly become the person he thought he was. Oooh Em & Alex?? I think I really like that combo!
Looking forward to more!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~ Nichelle
Date: Mar 19, 2017 2:52 pm Title: Chapter 17
I think I posted in the wrong chapter, sorry. To recap OMG, what??? Poor Justin. It's time this situation was handled but good. I know you want your independence but a mans Gita know when to ask for help. Get a new restraining order, some mace, a baseball bat, a dog and a gun, lol.
Date: Mar 19, 2017 2:43 pm Title: Chapter 16
What??? This story just got even more serious. I'm glad the truth came out, the first rule of war is know your enemy. I'm really glad they are communicating. As for Dan I was expecting the love goddess to hit Emmett. I'm not sure he deserves it so I'm cool with the assistant. So glad they can help Ben. I despise liars.
Date: Mar 19, 2017 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 16
I'm glad that Justin went after Brian. They really do love each other and need to stay together. Don't let any of this crap going on effect them.
I think Dan and Renny flirting was adorable.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: Mar 19, 2017 7:20 am Title: Chapter 17
Great. I hope Michael meets big bubba when he goes down for filing a false report.