[Report This]Date: Mar 17, 2017 12:28 am Title: Chapter 14
I just love that Brian is willing to fight for Justin and wants to keep him safe from whatever Michael plans to do next.
Michael can't stand sharing Brian with anyone but he let Ted and Emmett hang with them because they could never in his opinion outshine Brian and in a way he could Lord over them because he knows Brian better than anyone and they will never take his place by Brian's side.
Michael misses being in the shadow of Brian and he will stoop to any level to get back where he belongs at The Cool Kids Table.
Alex gave Brian some good advice it is time to drop the dead weight and Leave Michael to figure out life on his own without Brian as his safety net.
I think that is also good advice for Justin too.
Instead of him running after Molly it is time for him to stand back and let her come to him ready to face the truth.
Glad Grant found his voice lol
Date: Mar 16, 2017 8:42 pm Title: Chapter 13
I love a Smart Brian!!! Gus is so cute. Michael, Michael, Michael when will you learn?
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2017 6:49 pm Title: Chapter 13
Brian is a better person than me cause I wouldn't have warned Ben of anything just let him face whatever Michael throws out. (I'm Evil)
Deb had to be surprised by Michael's actions toward Brian and has to be wondering how far he would go to keep Brian to himself?
Blake is bitter and I understand that cause Michael made him feel like crap but don't take all your anger out on Ted, save some for Michael who really deserves it because he is the one who manipulated everyone around him.
Ben is either going to heed what Brian said or he ride shotgun with Michael as he continues his course of self-destruction.
Best part was Justin telling Brian he loved him :)
Date: Mar 16, 2017 6:27 pm Title: Chapter 13
Whoa! Michael is going to mess with everybody to try to get what he wants. I hope for Ben that he will be able to defend himself if this goes wrong.
Justin needs to be patient; at least, he understands what's happening and gives Blake good advice.
I hope Ted will be able to make amends to Blake;
Date: Mar 16, 2017 6:01 pm Title: Chapter 13
OMG!!! The ASSHOLERY!!! I hope Nash submits that tape to Carl for evidence of Michael's misdeeds. I really hope he does try to take it further so that Michael can get tried and convicted for filing a false report amongst other things. Like seriously! And then his tantrum though....WHOO-WEE! Deb should have put his grown babyish ass over her knee and spanked his ass for that since he wants to be a five year old. What a MORON!
Although I don't agree with Blake's actions here, I do understand them. Anything concerning Michael would have him questioning Ted's sincerity at this point. That situation could have happened to anyone in the club and I think he would have taken it better but because of Michael's 'faked' medical condition, it just reinforced Blake's insecurities, which I know was Michael's intent where Ted, Brian and Em are concerned.
Good on Brian giving Ben the heads up on his husband's latest round of bullshit. Ben can never say that he wasn't warned. If he doesn't reach out to Carl, knowing that if Michael wanted to take his claims of 'abuse' further, then he deserves whatever he gets.
As for Michael's fake ass confession, he really needs his ass whipped! I wonder if any of them beyond Brian actually heard all of what Michael said loudly about trying to convince Ben that they needed to apologize to Justin and then turned around talking about Brian needing to be there for him. And then screaming that he's hurt but Brian is going back to Justin while pulling away from Debbie. I wonder if they all really saw just how malicious, manipulative and malignant Michael is to get what he wants. I don't hardly think that Michael really wants to play around with Justin too much. That 'You're mine' comment to Brian... if Justin ever gets wind of that, there is bound to seriously be some knuckles flying to the side of Michael's jaw. He needs to have several seats, with a 'Dunce' cap on in the nearest corner before he gets knocked out. And if Justin does lay hands on Michael, it will be justified both personally and legally since Michael was harassing him. It will definitely be looked upon as self-defense then what's the idiot going to do??
WHEW! Great chapter Star!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Mar 16, 2017 5:47 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh thank goodness Brian is smart enought to see through Michael's crap! Ted too. Hopefully between Ted, Emmett and Justin, Blake will be able to see that Ted was doing his job and not running to Michael. It may take awhile, Blake is understandably mistrustful of the whole thing. can't blame him a bit.
those sweet moments between B&J always make me smile! Always gives me a happy feeling especially in amongst all teh angst going on with the others. Brian knows his prioroties. Justin is comfortable in this realtionship.
Good that Brian went right away to confront Ben and got the answers he needed. they will all have a deeper understanding of what lengths Michael will actually go to get what he wants. Hwo far will Michael try to go with this? How much trouble will Ben get in or will he be able to avoid it? Hopefully this will be the reality check he needs to stop using.
So glad you updated already! Was waiting on pins and needles to see what was going to happen.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 16, 2017 5:39 pm Title: Chapter 13
Good guys.
Date: Mar 16, 2017 3:48 pm Title: Chapter 12
Once again, you throw a facinating twist into the mix. Chris as the step-brother, Molly being so against Justin. All very interesting and am really looking forward to what you're going to do there. Completely threw me for a loop. Love it!
Hopefully Justin opens up to Brian about everything going on with the family. As much as he's always dealt with it before, he has support from Brian now and he should use it. If nothing else, Brian would definitely understand.
So the roids explains Ben's behaviour a bit. Still, doesn't excuse it though. Seems like he has a whole ton of shit to deal with and is using roids to assist. Seems like Ben fell back into it, where as Blake had Brian to be a real friend, 'cause really, there's no real difference between them. Addict is addict. Does Ben or Michael differentiate between the 2 I wonder?
As for Michael. My goodness. He really is a manipulative little asshole isn't he? So many ways this can play out. I can only hope that Brian doesn't fall for it, or that he at least keeps a hands off approach. Mind you, after the incident at the diner, knowng that Ben is using again, I can't see him just ignoring it. Just the thing Michael is hoping for and will use to his advantage. Oh I hope it doesn't work. I hope that they are able to figure out he did it to himself. I mean they'd only have to look at Ben's hands to see that he didn't do anything. As much as Michael is manipulative, he doesn't really tend to think things through. He jumps at an opportunity rather than making any kind of plan. Really is a dumb ass!
Brutal cliff hanger there Star!!!
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2017 11:01 am Title: Chapter 12
Omg Mike is going to play that card!! I hope Justin shuts him down quick. Debbie better not come at Brian to fix his Best Friend's sorry ass
Date: Mar 16, 2017 10:51 am Title: Chapter 12
This is a new low even for Michael. I hope Brian doesn't fall for his nonsense.
I hope Justin will talk to Brian about his family more. It's so obvious they love each other and want to take care of one another. Daphne is right, don't hide the bad.
Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2017 8:24 am Title: Chapter 12
What a bastard micheal is!???? Lieing piece of shit... i so wanna kill him here. What a story...i like it very much... thank u for updating.
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2017 8:24 am Title: Chapter 12
What a bastard micheal is!???? Lieing piece of shit... i so wanna kill him here. What a story...i like it very much... thank u for updating.
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2017 8:16 am Title: Chapter 11
Last line was soooo fabulous.
Date: Mar 16, 2017 6:28 am Title: Chapter 12
Poor Justin still dealing with those people in his life. ..Let Molly live her life the way she pleases and live yours,atleast for once Justin shouldn't be thinking about her at all if she's just being a brat towards him...I love how Brian being supportive..
I hope Ben really did beat that whiny brat,if he's planning to use it to get to Brian,but hoping B won't believe it for a minute...
Date: Mar 16, 2017 5:02 am Title: Chapter 12
Molly seems to be a real Daddy's girl; why on Earth Justin wanted to attend such an event!
What is Michael scheming? Nothing good I guess.
Date: Mar 16, 2017 4:02 am Title: Chapter 12
Wow Michael is a piece of work.
Date: Mar 16, 2017 2:41 am Title: Chapter 12
Yoooooo!!!! Seriously Michael is NOT about to try to play abused spouse or 'Justin’s punching bag'!!! THAT POS!!! I hope Brian blocked his number after that almost-rumble in the Diner. What a manipulative asshole. Doesn’t the ass know that there are ways to tell if the injuries are self-inflicted?? Well this should be interesting but honestly Ben deserves to see what Michael is really all about since he wanted to play blind mouse...SMH UH-HM-MMM.
I hope Ted will level with Blake and tell him what changed between him and bastard boy. It will go a long way in helping Blake understand the hold Michael used to manipulate Ted. He and Em have a lot of healing to on do along with some serious bridge building in regards to Justin.
As for Molly and Chris, those two deserve Craig. Justin needs to let them stay toxic by themselves, even when Molly's world starts crashing around her ears. She deserves it for being a an bitch!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Mar 16, 2017 1:19 am Title: Chapter 12
So Ben wanna tango, well Brian's got some moves for ya brother, lol. Omg all the anger and dare I say rage? Ok, no way how did you find a way to make Craig and Chris worse? Seriously that is just ick and Dad should never ask Justin to come. ick!
Emmett and Ted deserved the cold shoulder. I love Ted and Blake together, but Ted will need to prove himself.
Oh No He Didn't!! I have no words. Zero. He deserves whatever is coming.
Please Brian don't answer the phone.
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2017 1:14 am Title: Chapter 12
My what a family Justin has. Molly is being a shit, might be a good idea to introduce her to Michael. On second thought maybe not. Ben seems to see things badly and Michael instead of being a good spouce is using his anger to incite Brian to come to his defense. Not good especially if Brian does. Put some clothes on Gus!!!! LOL
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2017 1:11 am Title: Chapter 12
If Ben is consistent with his steroid abuse then Michael is consistent with playing the victim so Brian can come and save him, only this time I hope Brian ignores his pitiful cries and he tells him to figure it out for himself.
Justin needs to do to Molly what Brian is doing to Michael let her go and see if she figures out the truth herself.
The next chapter is going to be interesting :)
Date: Mar 16, 2017 12:40 am Title: Chapter 12
You made me curse..."Oh, you f***ING piece of sh**, Michael" wow what an update. I hope Brian doesn't fall for it, just to see . Michael's head explode.
Date: Mar 15, 2017 4:44 pm Title: Chapter 11
glad to see that Gus isn't fooled by Michael's games. Kids are smart. Good on him.
Good plain hard truths that Brian told Michael and in particular Ben. Ben is still being a dick mainly cause he's using again. doesn't excuse the fact that he started this whole thing by using Justin. He still hasn't come clean to Michael about it, and still makes excuses for his behavior. I like Justin's truth too. That Ben needed to make shit up to keep Michael's interest.
Deb was great sitting on the sidelines like that. I can totally visulaize her asking the diners what's what. Like that she's not taking everything from Michael as golden and has opened her eyes to him and hsi ways.
Nice day at the Zoo. Perhaps there's hope for Emmett and Ted to be brought into B&J's circle. I think Justin will still want them to prove themselves. Can't blame him.
Will Justin catch onto what Brian was saying?
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 15, 2017 10:42 am Title: Chapter 11
Wow! Brawl at the diner. I'm glad Ted was able to get Gus out of there before he saw much.
I wish Brian would have put Ben on his ass. I don't know what he sees in Michael but those two belong together.
Look at Emmett giving love advice to Brian. Yes, please tell him and show him everyday. :) I'm loving Gus and Justin's relationship.
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2017 7:06 am Title: Chapter 10
Gus is adorable...cute.
Date: Mar 15, 2017 5:43 am Title: Chapter 11
That was hot in a not lice-affirming way: Ben is as hateful as Michael; poor Gus wo almost witness that! The end though was positive, thanks to Emmett's words to Brian!