Date: May 03, 2017 5:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really interesting start. I always wondered what would happen if Brian would have left to New York.
Date: May 03, 2017 10:34 am Title: Chapter 39
Damn you Lindsay, if you had just hit him we could sweep it under the rug. Nancy is always a pistol. Lindsay, poorvLindsay ending up in the trunk listening to the boys, lol. Brian, you were very very bad leaving the police.
I enjoyed this! Can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2017 3:45 pm Title: Chapter 39
Well thank you for keeping us knee deep in great stories.
Its funny you say you keep writing because we keep reading (and completely enjoying), but I keep reading because of your stories. I guess its all your fault Im addicting to Brian/Justin stories. So like umm thanks? LOL
Date: May 02, 2017 2:50 pm Title: Chapter 39
Thank goodness there's a sequel! So much still to happen. Dying to know what eventually happens with Bat-shit crazy Lindsey, who a complete psuchopath and her partner in crime the feebleminded Michael. Those two...they're just so far gone out of reality! Well, at least they're entertaining!! (for us at least)
Nancy seeming to think she has an in with the "leaders of the community" is going to face a huge dose of reality! At least Ron's isn't going to help in her endeavors. He found his balls and is still using them which is good to see. It's not like nancy gives a shit about Lindsey, only the family name is of any concern to her.
I'm loving the Ted/Brandon relationship! And that Brandon was the one to encourage Mel to live with them.
Mel facing down Lindsey was good for her. Lindsey is so far in her delusions that the conversation seemed like simply a blip on her radar. Not sure how long it's going to take for her torealize that Brian simply isn't going to be there for her. I'm sure she'll continue with her ideas that Justin is keeping him from her. It's going to take many many drugs ffor her mental state to even begin to normalize!
The sequel I'm sure is going to be equally exciting! There's still so much to deal with. Looking forward to when that gets started. You have a lot on your plate right now and am enjoying the other stories in the meantime.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: May 02, 2017 10:30 am Title: Chapter 39
I would have loved to have seen Deb waiting in the cell for Lindsay. That would have been priceless.
Can't wait for the sequel.
Hugs,
Jessica
Date: May 02, 2017 5:57 am Title: Chapter 39
*Sigh* Another wonderful story for my harddrive. :) I will wait patiently ;) for the sequel.
Deb
Date: May 02, 2017 5:20 am Title: Chapter 39
Fantastic fic, hated tosee it end!
Looking forward to sequel.
Thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
Date: May 02, 2017 4:27 am Title: Chapter 39
Loved every bit of this. Cant wait to read the sequel :)
Date: May 02, 2017 4:10 am Title: Chapter 39
Nancy is almost as delusional as her crazy baby if she thought the mayor will help her!
Mel was right to go and tell her about Gus.
So happy you will continue this story! Thank you!
Date: May 02, 2017 4:03 am Title: Chapter 39
HA!! Nancy pick your botoxed-to-death face off the floor, honey child. Your smoke and mirrors have been wiped clean and the picture staring back ain't pretty! I'm glad that Ron has made it so Lindsay, Nancy and Lynette have to fend for themselves. He's FINALLY found his cajones, which in truth were probably hiding out from Nancy after she gave birth to Lilth and Sybil! I'm really interested to see what happened with Lindsay's Dumbass-in-Crime and how her arrest is going to affect him.
So happy that Ted, Mel and Brandon will be joining Brian and Justin in Chicago. I wonder if Cynthia is going to be stationed there and just flutter back and forth to Pittsburgh. Maybe they should just sink the idea of the Pitts altogether? But then again, the Pitts is a happy medium between Kinnetik and the East Coast clients while Chicago is a midway point between the Pitts and the West Coast companies they will undoubtedly be going for. It will be interesting to see what they all decide.
So pissed that Nancy pushed for Deb to be arrested but glad Brian bailed her out almost immediately. Deb shouldn't have been arrested for doing a PUBLIC SERVICE, LOL. And Brian and Justin are finally going to get a breather! I honestly can't wait for the sequel to see how their lives shape up without the Gruesome Twosome dogging their every step. It will also be interesting to see if Miles has FINALLY abdicated his recurring role as Mikey Jr.
WHOO! So much goodness in this one fic! Thank you so much for writing Star! Your updates give me a wonderful reason to kick back, relax and rest my own overactive imagination. Every chapter is like a much-needed vacation, no matter how angsty and I LOVE IT!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2017 3:50 am Title: Chapter 39
Wow. Yet another fantastic ending. I'm looking forward to the sequel.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2017 3:44 am Title: Chapter 39
I see Ron kicked the three witches to the curb without a dime took him long enough, wonder what Nancy is going to do without her meal ticket? (If he was evil he would mail Nancy, Lynnette and Lindsay a bill for everything he paid for and a threat of restitution <evil laugh>).
The mayor was smart to walk away from that minefield before it went off Nancy will just have to figure another way to save face when everyone finds out.
Deb got her hit in so hopefully in the sequel it will be Jennifer lol
WOW YOU ARE ON FIRE!!!;)
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2017 3:36 am Title: Chapter 39
I love that Nancy stomped out like a 5 year old child that didn't get what she wanted out of the mayor, laywer, and Ron.
Take time to finish your other two stories.
You have blossomed into a great writer and for that I am thankful.
Date: May 01, 2017 3:50 pm Title: Safety Features can really Suck.
So that was a bit of a nail biter! I was nervous reading the title of it, thinking Lindsey once again diverted capture. thank goodness Justin was able to plant his cute little butt on the trunk and keep her there until everyone arrived. Nice and hot little "reunion" scene between our boys. Sure pissed Lindsey off. HA! tough shit bitch.
It was shown that apparently all the women in this family are somewhat sociopaths. mind you, I think Lindsey is a step further and is an actual psychopath, but we see that Nancy is just as much a cause as anything. Her value on reputation surpasses anything else. I've known some people like that in my lifetime, and it so sad to see what happens with the children. We see it often these days where so many kids seem to have this sense of entitlement. It's maddening and so frustrating. Anyway...I digress...lol.
Justin was able to aswage Gus of his fears. Oh I hope that the custody goes through quickly now!! curious as to what is going to happen to Lindsey now that she's been caught. Also the other butthead in this story. What will Michael do now? And how about Miles? What's going to happen with that sap?
Man alive!! this one is most definitely your most thrilling story yet! I'm on pins and needles every chapter, and am ridiculously impatient for every update. LOL.
Brilliant!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: May 01, 2017 11:14 am Title: Safety Features can really Suck.
What a chapter!
The WASP's battle was hot! Too bad Tucker wasn't here; I bet he would have been all turned on by Jennifer.
I could imagine how Lindsey felt when Brian met Justin and she had to hear them having a short, but hot moment.
The kids are adorable; poor Gus, having such a mother can't help feeling right.
Carl and Deb: verbal and physical righter of wrongs.
Date: May 01, 2017 10:52 am Title: Chapter 37
A little bit scary, but hilarious on some parts (the end for example).
Justin's speech in the car was full of truths and he got the arguments she couldn't fight. The last line is my favorite: “Shut up, I’m enjoying my honeymoon.” I yelled, hitting the trunk.
The bitch can't escape now.
Date: May 01, 2017 9:43 am Title: Chapter 36
What a day and night! Full of firsts!
What a wedding gift Justin got!
So happy for Jennifer: Tucker was smart for proposing when the close family was gathered.
The wedding was simple and straight to the point: they wanted to get married and they just did that.
As for the diamonds on the rings: it seems out of character to me; I think they both would have rings, but simple ones, as they wanted a simple wedding, nothing fancy. I don't see them wearing diamonds.
[Report This]Date: May 01, 2017 1:36 am Title: Safety Features can really Suck.
Tada! Brian found Justin. Lindsay's on her way to jail and maybe her mother will be joining her. Superb chapter.
Date: May 01, 2017 12:32 am Title: Safety Features can really Suck.
I'm so glad Justin was okay. I know Brian, Jen and the kids were very worried. Poor Gus thinking Justin wouldn't love him anymore because his mother is a whack job.
The scene on the trunk was hot! I'm sure Lindsay hated listening to them get reacquainted.
Date: Apr 30, 2017 11:13 pm Title: Safety Features can really Suck.
Glad Justin was rescued quickly. Amazing how Nancy and Lindsay are cut from the same delusional cloth. Thanks for updating so quickly - don't know how you have the time.
Date: Apr 30, 2017 10:48 pm Title: Safety Features can really Suck.
YES!!!!!!!! The bitch is in jail at long last! And Nancy should have a cell right next to her. I cheered aloud at Jen telling that condescending bitch off. Then I gave a standing ovation when Debbie smacked the FIRE out of Lindsay! Deranged, dishwater dirty Dumbasses! Looks like the Entitled Express is FINALLY leaving the building.
So glad that Justin was able to make the call and restrain Lindsay until Brian and Carl got to him. Furthermore, thankfully someone + the security cameras both at the loft and the market confirmed that Lindsay knew exactly what she was doing. Can't wait to get the full list of charges from Chicago too!
Please send that bitch to jail, not the psych ward....WHEW!! What a chapter!! Looking forward to the next installment!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Apr 29, 2017 11:10 am Title: Chapter 37
Justin, I think you let her grab you so you could kick her ass. Nice job by the way. You did better than Mikey and Miles.
Date: Apr 29, 2017 10:39 am Title: Chapter 37
Go Justin! I'd like to drive that car off a cliff with her still in it. I hope he drives to the police station and delivers her with a great big bow.
I know Brian is freaking out right now. Please let Justin get in contact with him soon.
Date: Apr 29, 2017 7:30 am Title: Chapter 37
Good for Justin.
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2017 5:24 am Title: Chapter 37
Loving that Lindsey is getting hers