Date: Apr 25, 2017 3:46 am Title: Chapter 34
MY OH MY I soooooooo LOVE it when Michael gets hit!! I actually leaned forward to the screen yelling 'HIT HIM AGAIN BRIAN!!' LMAO! I really wonder how he thinks that he fixes anything for anyone since anytime he has a hand in anything it gets screwed up beyond repair. If he put half the effort into running his measly store as he did in minding other people's business, he might actually achieve something more than being the 'Asinine Asshole of Liberty Avenue.' Underachieving idiot!
I'm so happy that Brian let Deb take the blame for her son's spoiled behavior. He told her everything she did to stifle his manhood, never allowing him to reach mental maturity. And yet even as he did that, he encouraged her to live her own life and not be stuck in Michael's stinking thinking. Did I mention that I cheered when he hit the dumbass? Yes? Well it bears repeating!!! I'm still cheering, btw!
As for Lindsay, I'm with Justin... why is that crazy bitch still loose?!!!! She's another one who needs to get her cuckoo clock cleaned with a mighty fist! Again, I'm voting for Cynthia or Jen to do it. There has to be some action that the gallery can take to keep her from entering. Also, since her suggestion that Justin wanted to cancel his show wasn't as well-received as she probably hoped, the gallery should hire armed guards before and during the show. I wouldn't put it past Lindsay to burn the entire building down to keep Justin from achieving what was impossible for her to do. But then again if she does, they won't have to worry about admitting her because Ms. Jealousy will be convicted for arson. Lawd Ham Turkey, Star you have created one helluva double-edged sword where Lindsay is concerned. And I LOVE it!!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle

Date: Apr 25, 2017 3:44 am Title: Chapter 34
Michael and Lindsay don't see how they are. Wonder what would help them? Truth serum?
Date: Apr 24, 2017 4:28 pm Title: Chapter 33
Pretty impressed that Justin went to his mother first. While he's not expecting miracles, or for instant healing, he's taking steps. good on him.
So Lindsey.......holy shit she's scary! I'm kind of waiting to see what you have up your sleeve, but I'm also very nervous! She seems to be cut from the same cloth as Lynette and Nancy. All three are freaks!!! Ron finally growing a pair makes me wonder if it's a matter of too little too late.
I know Deb wants a relationship with B&J. I know she's screwed up a TON!! I wonder what will happen if push comes to shove though. If Michael really gets in the shitter, will Deb begin again to cover his ass, or will she REALLY understand that he needs to look after himself.
Cheers
Elaine
Date: Apr 24, 2017 10:30 am Title: Chapter 33
Whoa Alex, that was a quick second diagnosis. Not sure Lynette is messed up, she might be mixed up. Lindsay is a bag of mixed nuts. Ron was funny, finally laying down the law.
Hopefully, he can talk sense into her. If not, commit her on a psych hold. If she could fool a doc for 72 hours she's the pyscho Alex says. Then the only solution is get a gun, dundundunhhhh...
Date: Apr 24, 2017 2:49 am Title: Chapter 33
The whole sociopath angle is very interesting. I've never seen that done. Kudos. TAG
Date: Apr 23, 2017 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 33
I can't wait for the wedding. :)
Wow. That house is full of crazy people. We need to get them all locked up and quickly.
Date: Apr 23, 2017 9:42 pm Title: Chapter 33
What a nest of nutsos! WASP on the outside, but garbage gone bad in the inside!
Date: Apr 23, 2017 9:07 pm Title: Chapter 33
And now we join this episode of the Dumb and the Desperate already in progress...
WHEW!!! House of Horrors is RIGHT! I think Nancy shares Lynette and Lindsay's ailment as well. That kind of dysfunction has to be genetic. It seems that the only 'sane' person in the house is Ron. And yet the fact that he stayed with Nancy even makes me question his mental stability...SMH They all need a padded cell with a happy shot in the ass!
Glad that Brian and Justin are moving on with their plans! I worry about what Michael will do when he finds out though. No doubt if Deb knows, Dummy is bound to find out and will either try to ruin it himself or alert Lindsay to have her do his dirty work for him. Again, SMH at these insane idiots! Any way Michael and Lindsay can be locked in the same cell within the nut house?
BTW... Justin's trying to have Lindsay's life? Who wants a life or failure, regret, mediocrity and inepititude? He's already succeeded far more than she ever will simply because he's intelligent, determined, a great parent and has a lucrative career which is about to become even more so with his paintings. What does she actually have that he could possibly want? He's not only living his life but doing it his way, not looking for approval from anyone. She certainly cannot say the same!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle

Date: Apr 23, 2017 8:22 pm Title: Chapter 33
You almost have to feel sorry for Lindsay being raised in that household. And angry at Ron for letting Nancy get away with it. Frankly all three of the Peterson women need to be in treatment. Let's hope the marriage goes off without a hitch. What am I thinking. This is your story, there is bound to be a hitch.
Date: Apr 23, 2017 6:23 pm Title: Chapter 32
Miles really should see he doesn't have a chance to get Justin, but a big one to lose his job. I love the way Justin handled the news about Lindsay and how Brian wanted to sin before the wedding...
Date: Apr 23, 2017 6:00 pm Title: Chapter 31
Like Mel, I feel sad about Ted and Blake; but they have new partners and seem happy.
I hope Cynthia reported Lindsay being in Chicago.
Date: Apr 23, 2017 5:00 pm Title: Chapter 29
Oh, that's not good: Lindsey knows where to go now!
Date: Apr 23, 2017 11:20 am Title: Chapter 32
I hope they are able to keep the kids away from Lindsay. She really has lost her damn mind. Poor Trina, her father is so stupid. He's going to lose his job.
A wedding...or two? :)

Date: Apr 23, 2017 3:34 am Title: Chapter 32
Looks like Miles is going to be looking for another job. At least Charles is watching the kids until Emmett returns. Just how does he plan to find Lindsay?
Date: Apr 23, 2017 3:08 am Title: Chapter 32
Goodness ME! I LOVE Emmett and Charles!! I'm so happy that Brian and Justin have them in their corner. So happy that Cynthia called Charles! As for Dumbass the sequel, Miles cannot say that he wasn't warned. I swear fo' cheese he is Michael and Ethan Jr., even if in this AU, Justin never met the little chit-rat violin-thrumming bastard! If I were Charles, I would go ahead and save time by handing the complaints to HR now. He's already proven his inability to keep his private thoughts out of the professional setting. There's no way he's going to change.
Brian is right though, that Lindsay may use him and it will save them the trouble of having to involve HR. The two of them are desperate enough to risk anything to have what they want. The only difference is that Lindsay is a sociopath with a strong touch of borderline psychopath mixed in; Miles is just a lonely, intrusive and inept idiot with stalkerish tendencies. It will be fun to see the bitch running around Chi-town making the ultimate ass out of herself while everyone else is going about business as usual. I do hope that Nancy will be of some use though. Lawd knows she was useless enough raising- or should we say, not raising, her deranged daughter.
Love the idea that Brian and Justin are FINALLY going to irrevocably join their lives! It's about damn time! As for the rest of the family, it will be a joy to watch them going about business as usual and making plans to design the lives they want, Mel, Ted and Brandon in particular. With all of them leaving, Michael and Lindsay's avenues of escape, entitlement and expectations will be gone, forcing them to deal with their own shit for once. Definitely can't wait!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Apr 22, 2017 10:29 am Title: Chapter 31
Yeah, all the important people are moving to Chicago!!! I'm so happy that Brian and Justin are making a real go of their relationship. I can't wait to see how they both react to Lindsay and her imaginary husband scenario.
I love Brandon and Ted. I'm so happy that they were both unsure of what to do since they really want to be together.
Date: Apr 22, 2017 3:35 am Title: Chapter 31
That lying bitch!! And now we have stupid ass Mikey Jr. believing everything that's being told to him by that conniving cunt. I hope Miles loses his job and that his prostate falls out while he's on his way back across the street! Yeah.. definitely CANNOT stand his intrusive, gossipy ass! He's too invested in business that is NOT his. Brian should fire the bastard already! As for Lindsay, I'm sooooo disappointed that a semitruck wasn't there ready to run the trick over while she was pulling her car away...SMH I hope she gets her comeuppance very soon!
I wonder who Cynthia was on the phone with. I'm fairly positive she recognized Lindsay- at least I hope so. It really needed to be the police or the men with the little white coats and a tranquilizer dart! Guess we'll find out soon.
Can't wait for MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle

Date: Apr 22, 2017 3:17 am Title: Chapter 31
Lindsay has told a biiiig fib. When Brian and Justin find out she's claiming she and Brian are married, things are really going to go down the drain. So there's a possibility that Ted and Blake might get together again?
Date: Apr 19, 2017 2:41 pm Title: Chapter 30
Oh man...Lindsey is going to go too far pretty soon. Hopefully she's stopped before she tries anything. Hopefully alex is able to warn Brian and Justin. glad they are looking into moving in order to keep the family safe. I don't think Justin is really aware of just how dangerous Lindsey is or will become.While it certainly wasn't his intention, Michael was able to forward alex of just how tenuous Lindsey's hold on reality is. He may have already known, but he's being forwarned of her current behavior.
I like the idea of B&J having another kid, and Brian being there for all of it. close call for both of them for a second, and extremely tempting, but definitely a good idea to perhaps wait, at least for a little while.
The bet between Hannah, gus and Emmett was just too cute! I found it very appropos actually. something they would totally do.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Apr 19, 2017 11:38 am Title: Chapter 30
I'm thinking she's more a psychopath, people are pawns to her. Both dangerous and unpredictable but could explain how it's stayed hidden so long especially since she has no since of guilt. Still not sure what she thinks end game is, but it's on! She either tries to kill everyone on the way Chi gor just tries to kill her goal, either way her actions will tell us all about her craycray.
That darn Brian always oopsing the condom with Sunshine, lol.
Date: Apr 19, 2017 10:25 am Title: Chapter 30
I hope Alex can warn Brian and Justin before something bad happens. Lindsay is a loose cannon.
I think it was so adorable that the kids and Emmett made a bet on when they will get married.
I'd like for them to have another baby but maybe once Lindsay is taken care of for good.
Date: Apr 19, 2017 4:22 am Title: Chapter 30
Their first step into the wild: I bet it won't be the only one if they both want a kid.
Thank Michael for your big mouth: Brian will soon be aware of Lindsey's plan.

Date: Apr 19, 2017 4:06 am Title: Chapter 30
Love that Brian wants it all and Justin is willing to give it to him. Now what is Lindsay up to? Michael we know is delusional.

Date: Apr 19, 2017 3:17 am Title: Chapter 30
Hope Alex was calling Brian as he rushed out the bar because the Wicked Witch from WaspLand is on her way?!?!?!?
Date: Apr 18, 2017 4:14 pm Title: Chapter 29
Am officially getting REALLY creeped out by Lindsey. Michael unfortunately is her unwitting stooge. While she pretends to understand him, and want what he wants, she's only using him. He thinks that she's out to help him, but really she's only out for herself. Mind you, so is he, however, he has no idea that she's dangerous.
This is really intense and an loving every minute of it. Lindsey and Michael both had better be careful. They don't know this new Brian. the one who will protect his family no matter what.
Cheers,
Elaine