Date: Apr 07, 2017 2:42 pm Title: Chapter 20
Oh no, not a creepy neighbor who seems so much like Michael!
Date: Apr 07, 2017 8:55 am Title: Chapter 20
Oh, no not another Mikey. ONE is enough! lol
Very interested to see what is in the locked room.
Thanks for the update.
Date: Apr 07, 2017 5:49 am Title: Chapter 20
Now Justin has his own Mickey. Poor baby.
[Report This]Date: Apr 07, 2017 5:20 am Title: Chapter 20
Yay, another chapter when I wasn't expecting one. You are good. Love that Justin isn't interested in Miles. Brian is taking over when it comes to soccer.
Date: Apr 07, 2017 5:02 am Title: Chapter 20
That’s RIGHT Brian and Justin. There shall be NO MIKEY JRs!! Just got away from one pest to trade him in for a new model? OH HELLZ NO! Mark... Miles....Mandarin or whatever his name is better take several seats and a chill pill before Brian tags that jaw the way Justin did the original Captain Pain-in-the-ASS!!
WRITE On Star!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Apr 05, 2017 9:20 pm Title: Chapter 19
Aww... a bath and sweetness. I live it. Hell yeah you own it daddy!!! Lol
Ted, the QAF secret weapon, he can be what you need. I like it. I like Brandon flirting with him too.
The same bag? C'mom Justin spend a little cash. Brian, get him an Louis Vuitton Epi leather duffel, they never wear out.
I guess you can have a life, lol. Take your time, just promise to come back.
Date: Apr 05, 2017 5:53 pm Title: Chapter 19
Sweet momets between our boys. Really good that they were able to talk so openly and honestly. Justin reassuring Brian of his place in Hannah's life and that they were moving forward rather than looking back.
Hmmmm. Ted and Brandon a possiblity? Seems like Brandon really didn't have any alterior motives re: Brian. He just wanted to work with the better company. I must say, I never considered Ted and Brandon together. Wouldn't that just chap Michael's ass, after everything he's said about Ted. LOL!! Oh that would be epic!
Nice chapter. I'd say enjoy your days away, but it seems it's all work related. Oh well, enjoy what you can of it. Will look forward to Friday's update.
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Apr 05, 2017 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter. Glad to see that Brandon doesn't see Ted as boring.
Date: Apr 05, 2017 10:37 am Title: Chapter 19
I'm glad they made it back to Chicago safely. Thanks for the romantic evening between our favorite couple. They definitely deserved it. And Brian's confession that his ass would belong to Justin should show him just how serious he is taking this second chance.
Go Ted! I had a feeling that Brian was listening in to the interview. I guess we'll see how Brandon behaves once he meets Brian.
Date: Apr 05, 2017 6:41 am Title: Chapter 19
Good going Ted.
Date: Apr 05, 2017 4:18 am Title: Chapter 19
This is my first review on this site as I usually am on Ao3 and recently discovered this site. I have torn through your work and am avidly following this story. I am a sucker for a good-guy Brandon and a part of me cheered with the last sentence and a thought of the prospect of a Ted/Brandon hook-up.
Thanks for sharing your stories. Looking forward to more.
Date: Apr 05, 2017 4:17 am Title: Chapter 19
It seems Hannah is Brian as a little girl; he must be proud!
Justin welcomes him to his home the best way.
Ted isn't boring when he's passionate.
Date: Apr 04, 2017 4:53 pm Title: Chapter 18
If everybody is letting Michael alone, maybe will he start to understand why?
Poor Lindsey, she can't reach Brian and Ted isn't going to tell anything this time.
Date: Apr 04, 2017 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 18
I suspect the being rich and poor us worse than being poor and poor. Poor you know you can't afford it. Rich poor, stingy dad won't buy it, lol. Ok I am glad Brian went with them, but he could have carried his own bags, lol.
Poor dumb Lindsay.
Michael is pathetic., There is no hope. Just sad.
Date: Apr 04, 2017 11:57 am Title: Chapter 17
Dang! Mikey got the boot! Deb got really lucky with her surrogate sons. I wonder if she will get a job? Lindsay is so horrible.
Date: Apr 04, 2017 10:36 am Title: Chapter 16 This is the right chapter now
Oh, poor Deb. She has no grandchild, her son is an idiot, and she lost her job. Thus sucks, the world is so cruel to women. It's not her fault she only worked one job. Maybe Brian can send her to school?
of course Jen likes Brian now, he hasn't been around. She probably feels bad that he missed Hannah's life.
Date: Apr 04, 2017 10:34 am Title: Chapter 18
I'm glad Justin and Brian are talking about the past. They need to at least get it all out and then move on. I'm so excited for them to get to Chicago.
I love Ted! He handled Lindsay perfectly.
Welcome back David. I guess he really was done with Michael's bullshit. Good for him.
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2017 9:40 am Title: Chapter 18
It's good that Brian is leaving with Justin. I hope that Brian doesn't have any problems getting Gus. You almost have to feel sorry for Michael. He seems to be living in the past with no future to look forward to.
Date: Apr 04, 2017 4:22 am Title: Chapter 18
Hello Lindsay and Michael... have you seen your asses lately? Nope, probably because they were just KICKED to oblivion!! LMAO! While they are stuck in ruts of their own making, everyone else is or has moved on. David's insult to Michael (and that of his lover) was the icing on the cake from what Brandon and friends did. WOW!!!! To know that even David sees Michael for the cockblocking troll he is, now that was something else!!
Glad that Justin and Brian are continuing to clear the air. Hannah is one smart cookie to have inherited both of their intelligence. I can understand Brian's need to know what he's missed in their lives and that he's always recognized the difference in comparison to Michael and Lindsay. It's also a sign of maturity that Brian is now seeing Mel in a completely different way because of his own situation with Hannah. It was quite a shock to know that Justin named Brian on the birth certificate... and such a smart move! With Lindsay lurking, there's no telling what she would have tried to become Brian's baby mama, this time of the little girl. Yeah, I'm STILL appalled that she suggested that she and Mel take Hannah to raise even though it happened quite a few chapters ago. WHAT A BITCH!!
Looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Apr 03, 2017 9:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, Lindsay is such a bitch! Now how long will it take Brian to find him?
Hugs Kathleen 💟
[Report This]Date: Apr 03, 2017 6:50 pm Title: Chapter 17
Even after the way Deb behaved Brian and Ted still looked out for her too bad Michael would walk pass if she was starving or needed a place to sleep.
Deb is starting to see that maybe (Heaven Forbid!)she was wrong in how she treated the others and that Michael isn't the angel she always told herself he was.
Of course I still wouldn't let her near Hannah or Gus even if she begged on her knees, Deb has burnt too many bridges and everyone needs space to heal.
And because I don't trust that once Deb got back in she wouldn't revert back to her old ways.
So what stupid scheme are Lindsay and Michael up to now?
Date: Apr 03, 2017 4:07 pm Title: Chapter 17
So Deb is finally seeing what a dead weight Michael really is. Seeing as he apparently can't even afford to giver her money to help around teh house, how does he expect to pay rent in his own place? who is he going to try to manilulate now?
So good that Brian sees the value in Ted. He's worth hsi weight in gold and will continue to prove it going forward.
I think Deb was pretty floored by seeing what the boys did to help her. Hopefully she's humbled enough that she doesn't keep falling back into her old ways of supporting Michael. That the rose coloured glasses are finally off for good.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Apr 03, 2017 3:53 pm Title: Chapter 17
I hope Deb will keep this determination towards her son! Otherwise, it's a lost cause.
Date: Apr 03, 2017 3:20 pm Title: Chapter 17
FINALLY a lightbulb goes off in Deb's head and see actually sees the difference between Brian, Justin, Ted and Emmett and that spoiled overgrown infant she raised. Perhaps there is hope for her to find a life of her own although I hope none of the guys trust her again. She's proven that she is a fair-weather person who changes directions like the wind. It's okay to love her from afar, which is the safest place for all of them.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Apr 03, 2017 9:49 am Title: Chapter 17
Finally it looks like Deb might be seeing the light.
I'm so excited to get our family off to Chicago. Hoping for some together time too.