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Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2017 4:12 am Title: Chapter 16

Like everyone else I'm on the fence about what to do about Michael. One the one hand, I want his selfish ass to go to jail whether he learns anything or not. But as someone with a friend, who was wrongly accused and did time for 15 years before he was finally exonerated, I have a big problem with jailing innocent people. I would love for that old lady and her cronies to be caught and put in jail for the rest of their natural lives. What they are doing is outright wrong BUT I hate the thought of using live bait to put her wickedly religious ass there. I wonder if there would be some way to sneak a few video feeds with sound into the house so that when they acquire the next victim, there is no way for the old lady to dispute the facts.

That said, I agree with Rodney's assessment of Michael. If Michael gets out of the trumped up charges and doesn't end up in jail, the best and most effective punishment is for him to be completely cut off from any part of Brian's life. That includes not being in a position to ask any family members about him or hearing patrons of Liberty Avenue talking about him. Too bad there aren't any exile laws like in the old days. That would surely be a great way to make sure Michael is gone and forgotten. And if Michael doesn't go to jail, it's going to be a nightmare trying to get a restraining order against him without bonafide proof that he's a danger to Brian. WOW! This is a tangled web! SMH....

Looking forward to more machinations from your devious mind!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2017 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 15

Pretty much swooned over Justin & Brian. Big ass smile on my face! :) Wondering if Mel and Lindsey will follow suit? Would be nice for them all to be close, particularly Gus, especially since they all get along.

Micheal..well, I just don't think that boy's ever gonna get a happy ending. lol. Not only does nobody believe him (although factual lol) but he's in deep deep doo doo for his own illegal actions towards Brian. Yup...he's done for. Have to say though, I'm looking forward to more of his demise though. While getting some of his own back (being drugged) what he did to Brian was unforgivable. will he listen though to what Brian said and stay away?

Cheers

Elaine

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2017 6:48 pm Title: Chapter 15

Take that Michael and try to figure out a way to defend yourself.

I love the way Justin told Brian that he would like to share his life.

Reviewer: ConnieMelissa Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2017 11:56 am Title: Chapter 15

As much as I hate Michael, I hope we don't let her get away with kidnapping people. When is Rylie going to make a move?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2017 6:52 am Title: Chapter 15

Does Michael learn anything from all this?  I doubt it.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2017 4:31 am Title: Chapter 15

Justin's invitation to Brian made me tear up. How sweet! And now Brian made the decision to move to Sandcove. I really love the development Brian and Justin's relationship is taking. Plus as an added bonus, it looks like a new variation of Time Bender is on the horizon. I don't think Justin will have to worry about not knowing when to stop working. Brian will make sure of that! LOL

As for Michael, it looks like Karma has come a-calling in more ways than one! Not only was he drugged but now he's being accused of robbery AND it looks like he's going to be extradited back to the Pitts to face criminal charges of drug possession with intent to harm! Take THAT Captain Asshole! What's even better is that no one believed his tale even though it was the truth, just like no one initially believed that Brian NEVER had sex with Michael. Michael arguing that there was no proof of what he bought from the Sap was hogwash. Since there were plenty of bottles of water at the bar, there is no way Michael- even being the dumbass that he is- would have bought a vial of it. That village is calling again for their Idiot... Michael should go home! LMAO! 

So glad there is MORE to come of this!!! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2017 4:06 am Title: Chapter 15

Michael has been banned from Sandcove and thanks to the old lady he looks like a crazy man, thief and a drug addict.

Sap is so going to enjoy being Michael's new best friend.

Loved the way Justin showed Brian that he was ready to share his life with Brian very memorable moment for them.

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 1:49 am Title: Chapter 14

It is quite fitting that Michael is being drugged nd held against his will, and yet not surprising that he doesn't see the irony of his situation<smh>

Reviewer: Lorna Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 9:09 pm Title: Chapter 14

Ohhh this is starting to get good 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 7:16 pm Title: Chapter 14

I hate to say it ,but poor Michael.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 5:56 pm Title: Chapter 14

I love how this group gives so much to the community of Sandcove. Nothing over the top or showy, but sweet and giving nonetheless. 

Great conversation between Brian and Jen. He;s getting more insight into Justin. I think thought that it was mostly confirmation rather than new info. He's realized that his first impression of Justin was off, but they have since been put right. He's really allowing himself to be so open with not only Justin, but with those closest to him as well. 

The contest is going to be good. I'm pretty sure Justin will win it. also looking forward to Brian's reaction when he sees it. Its sounds amazing.

All of Michael's words will hopefully come back and haunt him at some point. However, I'm not so sure he's smart enough to see the irony of it all. Him yelling... "You can't drug me and tell me what you want me to feel..." is exactly what he was doing to Brian. Sadly, he'll probably never get the parallel. I'm actually opinghe does get away from these people. That he's able to contact police and stuff. AS much as I can't stand the asshole, these people are scary! I also want him to get his ass kicked by Brian and the gang. lol.

Another terrific update. As always, I look forward to anything you bring us. 

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 4:59 pm Title: Chapter 14

Ha ha ha, it's so funny how Michael is trying to convince his kidnapper that he's gay and nothing will change that; on the other hand, it's quite dramatic as I think people like that exist and try to convert gays.

Reviewer: Lorna Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 3:51 pm Title: Chapter 14

Ohhh this is starting to get good 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 5:18 am Title: Chapter 14

Love how Brian and Justin seem made for each other.  Michael is going to be brain washed.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 4:52 am Title: Chapter 14

LMAO!!!!! Michael has met another Joan Kinney up close and personal- only this one is magnified by 1000%. Good for his ass! Maybe he'll see the light in that what he did or tried to do to Brian was WRONG. It's funny how now that the tables have been turned on him, he's not liking it very much but Maniacal Michael actually thought that drugging Brian and trying to force him into a relationship with him against his will was A-OKay. This couldn't happen to a more deserving idiot! What a selfish, conniving WEASEL! 

I really liked Brian's talk with Jennifer. I think she really needed to get a feel for the type of man Brian is. The fact that he was willing to admit aloud that he wanted Justin in his life was wonderful. Also what the guys of Sandcove do for the residents there is great. That is definitely a small town I wouldn't mind being a part of!

Looking forward to MORE!

HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 1:14 am Title: Chapter 13

Hello Karma, This is Michael he is now your Bitch Have Fun lol

How fitting that Michael has now been drugged and is about to have a very bad experience.

Brian is making it possible for his life with Justin in Sandcove.

Can't Wait to See What Happens Next :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2017 6:13 pm Title: Chapter 13

The weird family is almost together; too bad Michael will miss that!

He is getting the same treatment he used on Brian, except nobody saw what happened nor where he is!

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2017 6:02 pm Title: Chapter 13

Have to admit...Michael being shoved into a camp akin to "see the light". He's obviously been drugged. I had to laugh at the irony of it all!! 

Ah Jen has arrived. More family for Brian to meet. I am soooo going to like Jen in this I think. I mean, she was raised by Gran...LOL!!

Like brian's comment on not always wanting to have to be in the Pitts! He's definitely serious.

Oh I can't wait to see what all you have up your sleeve! Will Michael be made straight? will he get away and find his way to Brian. What will his reaction be then when he finds out about Justin? Will we see a slightly more serious side of Riley at some point? Will Gran finally achieve the ever alusive "O". ;)  So many more things to happen I'm sure and am looking forward to everything you bring!!!!

fun times ahead!! Really enjoying this!

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2017 5:05 am Title: Chapter 13

It looks like everyone is going to have fun except Michael.  And nobody knows where he is.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2017 3:33 am Title: Chapter 13

HELLO KARMA Manic Michael's old friend!!! LMFAO! The little bastard got slipped a convert-to-straight Mickey. Serves the little fool RIGHT! Hopefully they will succeed in making Michael straight and ship his ass to somewhere in the Bible Belt never to be seen or heard from again. If not, then I hope Sandcove has some sort of extradition law to be able to arrest Michael and have him sent back to Pittsburgh to await trial. Either way the self-serving snake needs to suffer big time!

So Jennifer has arrived! The 'Meet the Family' phase is at last complete. It will be interesting to see if Jenn has a wide side like her mother and son. As for Brian, I'm glad that he is trying to find a way for him to be able to run his business from the Cove with only the occasional trip back to the Pitts. I really love how they are developing!

Looking forward to more!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 4:37 am Title: Chapter 12

Yeah, shower scene!

Brian is already thinking about change his hometown; I hope he could have Gus easily with this new address.

Oh no, not Michael to Sandcove...

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 3:02 am Title: Chapter 12

Brian and  Justin keep getting better and better.  What happens when Michael arrives to spoil it?

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 2:47 am Title: Chapter 12

NOOOOOOOOOOooooo!!!! That loony fudrucker is about destroy the peace of Sandcove?!?!?! Is it too much to hope that the couple is actually a pair of murderers willing to torture Captain Asshole to within an inch of life (sanity is not an option because he has NONE)?! OMG please Star, fix this crazy mess you have going here. My anxiety just shot off the charts reading this!

Panicked and Pissed beyond words (at Michael, of course),

HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2017 5:48 pm Title: Chapter 11

Brian is moving fast towards his future and it seems Justin is on the same page.

Gran and Deb: what an interesting meeting!

Gran seems to have no limit and no shame: that's amazing and funny to read.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2017 5:00 pm Title: Chapter 11

I'm glad to see that they've decided to stay where the other wants them to be.  Now we have to find out what happens to Michael.

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