Date: Nov 17, 2017 11:46 am Title: And They Make Their Move
Finally. I wish they would go away for a really long time.
[Report This]Date: Oct 16, 2017 4:54 pm Title: And They Make Their Move
Whoa, You didn't disappoint one iota with this chapter!!
I love them talking about Rage the anime and the comic because despite the explanation Michael still sees himself as Brian's True Best Friend and what he did as what any best friend would do.
Too bad he never was a best friend to Brian and neither was Lindsay, cause they are both too selfish to think of anyone else but themselves.
I was so scared when Lindsay took Gus and Michael took the babies, thank goodness everyone was thirty steps ahead and they never got far.
Love what Justin did to Michael and what Ruth did to Lindsay, those were just taps considering the pain they are at to be in lol
I so don't want this to end but I am going to love reading it all over again :)
Date: Oct 16, 2017 3:38 pm Title: And They Make Their Move
I loved the talks after the movie: Michael was so angry about the remarks done on the writing of the comic. Lindsay got some good comments too.
What did Justin actually put on Michael? Is it something he got from his daughters' diapers?
[Report This]Date: Oct 16, 2017 12:46 pm Title: And They Make Their Move
The chickens have finally come home to roost. Love how Kevin and Fred tweeked Michael about his writing of Rage and making it look like everyone thinks Mika was totally out of line. What was even better is that a lot of people knew the backstory to the movie. Turning Mika into a girl was a stroke of genius! But having to explain why it was to Michael makes you want to smack him upside his head. Not to mention Michael still insists that they were best friends and always supported each other! Your explainations were right on.
Then we move on to the kidnapping. I'm not sure I could have set aside and let Michael and Lindsay take Gus and the kids, even with all the backup. I'm certainly glad that it worked out with both Lindsay and Mika taken out. Lindsay trying to blame it all on Michael was fun, not that it will work. The cellar and food poisioning? Could you expand on that? Yes this is what we have been waiting for and you didn't let us down.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I will tie up all the loose ends in the next couple of chapters...one is the arraignment and interviews and then the epilogue and wrap up chapter. Or it might be one long chapter not sure yet.
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 16, 2017 10:39 am Title: And They Make Their Move
Wow! They have finally been caught. I was very worried when she managed to get Gus to go with her.
Thanks for a fantastic update.
Date: Oct 16, 2017 6:12 am Title: And They Make Their Move
Awesome!!!!! I really hate to see this end! So glad that they are finally getting ther comeuppance!
Deb