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Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2017 5:22 am Title: Chapter 25

Love how open and honest Brian and Justin are here. It's just going to make them stronger!

Alex's talk with Nancy was so informative. i can't fault her for not having any respect for Mel. She's a weak little thing to be so manipulated by that she-wolf called Lindsay. Brian may have had his moments but they can't compare to Mel. For so much brain, she is absolutely stupid.

As for the contretemps between Nancy and Lindsay. BITCH you wasn't READY!! LOL Nancy verbally spanked that ass but good. Lindsay is not going to see one red cent now that she didn't take Nancy's offer for a trip the first time. Try, try again Trickzilla cause her mom isn't playing this time. I have to admit that I have a completely newfound respect for Nancy... and I think that Alex and Brian will too.

Amazing chapter! Looking forward to MORE!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2017 9:30 pm Title: Chapter 24

Lindsay, you really, really, don't want to go there.  It would be a disaster. A complete terrible worse than Pittsburgh disaster. She's so stupid she probably won't listen, lol

Alex is amazing. I need to book an appointment.

Im so happy Gus us doing so well.  Brian and Ted are doing well also.  

 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2017 4:30 pm Title: Chapter 24

I'm so happy that things are moving in a good direction for our family.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2017 4:15 pm Title: Chapter 23

Awe that was so damn sweet!  I'm glad Brian's family is being so wonderful.

I'm glad Ted seems to be bonding with Edward.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2017 12:19 am Title: Chapter 24

Alex telling Brian to continue to talk to Justin and don't let The Others destroy what they are trying to build is good, Brian has made a lot of progress and with all these new editions he is getting stronger, so is Gus he handled hearing Mom without freaking out the more time he spends around Vicky and Diana will be a good thing cause he has better female role models in his life now.

Ted venturing out without the others is a good start especially if helps him rebuild his inner strength, and going to the opera in New York sounds like a lot of fun and the perfect way to regain happiness slowly.

Nancy helped to protect Gus, I get it has something to do with her Status Quo, but why would she do that she barely knows him???

Ron has been giving Lindsay and Mel money and now he is paying for them and most likely Debra and Michael to come to New York to harass everyone again?

I don't think The Pittsburgh Idiots are ready to meet up with Brian and his family, but it would be good to see what fresh Hell they try to inflict, and how New York Cops are gonna wish these four ding-dongs would just go home???

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2017 9:14 pm Title: Chapter 24

There may be problems if Mel and Lindsay come to NY but now Brian has plenty of help that will keep the girls at bay.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2017 4:10 am Title: Chapter 23

Cuteness overload!!

It's great that some outsider told how things were for Ted; maybe it will help to shut the voices.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2017 1:19 am Title: Chapter 23

In a nutshell.... more! Love ya'!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2017 12:18 am Title: Chapter 23

This family you made works together and I don't see that stopping.  Love that Ted and Edward got to talk.  Seeing something from someone else's point of view helps.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2017 9:44 pm Title: Chapter 22

I am so happy Brian is getting to meet his real family.  I love them already.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2017 4:28 pm Title: Chapter 22

Great and emotional chapter!

Gus wasn't even afraid of this noisy and vibrant family. Justin being there for Brian was wonderful!

The discussion about Brian's donation was funny.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2017 1:21 pm Title: Chapter 22

Well happy chaotic family day! A great start to the beginning of a lot of family fun, I'm sure. I'm glad Gus seemed to take it all in and in stride as well.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2017 10:10 am Title: Chapter 22

This is so cute.  I know that seems an understatement, cuz it's dealing with serious subjects, but the instant family is sweet, funny, and so ... Cute.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2017 4:33 am Title: Chapter 22

CJ and Brian are so alike it's like they are twins.  Everyone is getting along.  Which makes this a top story to read.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2017 3:15 am Title: Chapter 22

OMG!! I want to be part of the Horvath clan! Now THAT'S the family Brian should have always had. I teared up when CJ welcomed Brian home. Vicky and Diana are just... LAWD HAM TURKEY they are too much in the very best of ways! I also loved the fact that Gus feels comfortable with all of them already. Him and CJ walking in together... WOW! What a moment! 

The Punkasses of Pittsburgh sure ain't ready for Team Brian! Oh, I can't wait for MORE!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2017 12:20 am Title: Chapter 21

It's as is Bruan has a whole posse he didn't know about.  Lol.  I'm not sure it was proper for the ladies to go to the diner just to cause problems, but the Liberty Losers needed some problems.   Although, in America there's no such thing as fighting words, meaning you can say almost anything it's when you do something it changes - pouring stuff on them was an assault, not saying they didn't deserve it, but tsk tsk. Lindsay is hysterical, flirting from behind bars, Too funny.


I like this feels like a fairy tale, a bit if a dark one, like the Grim tales, but you know something more than day to day life is guiding it.  Justin is going to give in completely soon, no one is safe from the Horvath charm.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2017 3:18 pm Title: Chapter 21

This new family seems a lot of fun! I hope Brian won't be overwhelmed by them.

Reviewer: patou235vie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2017 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

Je comprends Justin car selon lui entre eux ça va trop vite,mais dans l'autre sens Brian se sesns en sécurité avec lui.

Donc il faut donner une chance à Brian et voir comment les choses vont évoluer, de plus Carl est là pour les aider sans oublier le frère et la soeur,donc il(Justin ) doit laisser faire les choses en douceur.

A bientot pour la suite.

Reviewer: patou235vie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2017 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Je voudrais signaler que pour la traduction google en français les informations ne passent pas, donc j'ai du aller sur l'original du site.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2017 1:44 am Title: Chapter 21

More fun with Brian & Justin! Good for you boys!

CJ & Vicky are going to have such fun with Brian! 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2017 12:23 am Title: Chapter 21

Yes, please do not have sex in Gus's bed.  That's just wrong. lol

I can't wait for Brian to meet his siblings.  They seem like a lot of fun.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2017 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 21

Brian is so happy which is a big change.  I'm loving his real brother and sister.  They are perfectly correct about Debra, Michael, Lindsay and Melanie. Love how Kiki took up for the Horvath crew.  I'm wondering if Debra will have a job to go back to?  And Michael complaining that Vicki and Diana came in as if they own the place!  That is so wrong on so many levels.  Especially when that's what Michael does.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2017 6:52 pm Title: Chapter 20

I would have loved to see this scene at the diner! Brian is getting mentally prepared to seduce Justin,  not that he needs more incentive...

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2017 10:36 am Title: Chapter 20

I think I like Vicky and Diana.  I want to hang out with them. lol

We're making some progress with Brian and Justin.  Staying in the same house...oh the things that could happen.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2017 6:21 am Title: Chapter 20

Now that was funny as hell.

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