[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2017 3:33 am Title: Chapter 20
Oh my, Brian's new family is the greatest. I'm loving Kiki. Here's to Alex straightening this whole thing out. Looks like Justin's family is moving in. Gus will be happy. Make Ted happy too, will ya.
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2017 2:13 am Title: Chapter 20
OMG!!! Please Say There Is Video of Lindsay, Mel, Deb and Michael getting their Asses Kicked in the diner??
I bet everyone would love to see that!!! I bet they could sell tickets for that viewing rofl
Deb should lose her job and have to pay part of the damage along with the others and for all the free food she was giving to Michael since Brian always paid.
Oooooo I bet it hurt having some of her real hair ripped out?!?
I So Love Vicky and Diana They Were Awesome!!!
Hope the husbands won't be too mad cause that was Hilarious!!! :)
Date: Jun 13, 2017 4:20 pm Title: Chapter 19
Things are getting close and personal with Brian and Justin... Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: Jun 13, 2017 2:10 pm Title: Chapter 19
Awwwwww love this B/J convo, so sweet & telling...I hope the boys accept Vic back into their lives.
Cannot wait to see the Brian, CJ & Vicky interaction...when is that gonna happen?
Date: Jun 13, 2017 10:37 am Title: Chapter 19
I'm glad they finally got to spend some time together alone. It's good for Brian to open up to someone. Can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2017 4:36 am Title: Chapter 19
It's nice that Carl and Joan are getting along. Even nicer that Justin and Brian are too. Can't wait until Carl Jr and Vicky and their family show up.
Date: Jun 12, 2017 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 18
Joan and Brian seem to have a better relationship; maybe with Carl in the picture, it will get even better.
The scene at the diner was a prelude to what is going to happen next because Deb and the girls won't back down.
Date: Jun 12, 2017 7:44 pm Title: Chapter 17
I love this story and how you build the relationships.
Lily has a funny way to tell her dad that she doesn't agree with him; she also has a funny way to get her dads together.
Carl is getting comfortable with his new family and Gus is getting better every day, so is Ted.
Carl junior is in for some treatments if he goes to Liberty Avenue.
Date: Jun 12, 2017 7:17 pm Title: Chapter 16
I love how you wrote Brian and Carl's meeting: honest, daring and funny.
Justin seems to want to wait, but will he succeed avoiding the attraction?
Gus is just adorable with the way he's calling Justin and how he's behaving with him.
The last part was great: big battle of losers who see the defaults in the others so easily, but can't imagine doing something wrong.
Date: Jun 12, 2017 6:14 pm Title: Chapter 18
I love CJ! You go and protect your baby brother!
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2017 11:44 am Title: Chapter 18
Wow, Carl Jr. is all about protecting the brother he hadn't been able to growing up. Gotta love the guy. Carl is going to be good for this family. Gus is doing better and now that Grandma, John, and Peter are there things are going to get interesting. Ted is coming out of his self induced melancolica so maybe Emmett can relax.
Date: Jun 12, 2017 10:48 am Title: Chapter 18
On behalf of Deb, Mikey, Linds and Mel, please allow me to say, "oh sh!t!" Lol way to take it to the CJ. I'm very curious how things will go when they meet his wife.
Carl still hpgets the sexy points. Joan, second chances do usually happen. Justin I know you jet a stranger in the park and ... But look, the dates, Godspeed, whatever is drawing you two together. You can't fight a tidal wave.
Date: Jun 12, 2017 10:28 am Title: Chapter 18
Things just got very interesting. I'm going to like CJ. ;)
Date: Jun 12, 2017 4:35 am Title: Chapter 18
Now that's the kind of brother everyone needs.
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2017 4:20 am Title: Chapter 18
Oooooo I am So Liking CJ!!!
I just love the fact that he got everyone in the diner to pay attention to Deb and maybe reevaluate her version of events???
I think the four idiots are going to be shocked to see Brian and his family ready to take them on.
Getting close to The Showdown Of The Century on Liberty Avenue (it has to be there so Deb, Michael, Mel or Lindsay can't change the story) not ready yet but it is coming!!
Date: Jun 11, 2017 11:48 am Title: Chapter 17
I am so enjoying this story. The ride you are taking us on is nothing I had ever considered before.
I think most of us wish Carl was our dad. He's so sweet.
Date: Jun 11, 2017 7:46 am Title: Chapter 17
That was an interesting way to end this.
Date: Jun 11, 2017 6:38 am Title: Chapter 17
What?? I say again, what?!?!? OMG!! Sneaky author setup. This is gonna be very interesting. Carl JR us so gonna get them.
Carl gets the sexy points the Katt two chaps. So, tough and I going to see my son. That's hotter than Georgia asphalt.
Justin, get a calendar abd mark the days, cuz soon as you can, Brian will. I love it.
Gus, daddy us a perfect babe for him.
Yes, I'm talking to your characters, you should feel proud. :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2017 6:15 am Title: Chapter 17
Carl is fitting rightin. Carl Jr. looking like Brian is going to end up in trouble, especially if Michael tries something. Isn't he in the military? I can't wait for Brian and Carl Jr. to meet.
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2017 12:15 am Title: Chapter 16
Deb is all kinds of screwed up. She actually thinks Michael loved Ted! Glad that Carl got to talk with Brian and that Gus wants Justin to be his daddy.
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2017 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 16
Carl handled the situation with total calm and let Brian know that he is not going away but will stand by his son and fight.
I see Deb is exerting her power over Mel and Lindsay boy will she be surprised when she faces Brian, Emmett, Ted and The Family to see that she has no power over them.
So Lindsay is sleeping around and Mel is enjoying the lifestyle she once lambasted Brian with?
Not surprised the money is running out and that Lindsay's parents are getting tired of paying for her stupidity, not surprised that Mel lost her job but how is Brian to blame for her not doing her part to take care of Gus?
So when is the next party the girls will be busted at?
Deb might want to watch her back Mel and Lindsay are getting tired of her mouth and might be getting ready to shut her up as soon as they figure out a plan with their two brain cells lol
Date: Jun 10, 2017 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 16
I'm glad Brian and Carl had a nice visit.
Gus calling Justin Daddy was a surprise. I guess he knows more about the future than we do right now. lol
Date: Jun 10, 2017 1:58 am Title: Chapter 15
Awwww, Carl is so perfect. I'm glad Justinbsaved the day. Ni understand Bri not being enthusiastic. Hopefully Carl will met his heart. Having his sibs numbers goes a long way.
Date: Jun 10, 2017 1:56 am Title: Chapter 14
What fortune to meet Vic and Rodney at the precinct. It's cool that Carl wants to know more about Brian. I'm so glad he busted the girls, such trash, lol. Now we need Deb locked up.