Date: Aug 20, 2017 1:10 pm Title: The List and the Letters
I have been loving this fanfic so far! But omg this chapter has made me cry so much. The letters broke my heart in all types of ways. This whole story is making me angry, happy, sad and annoyed. You really know how to play with people's emotions! Haha! I hope this has a happy ending, otherwise i don't know what i'll do!
Date: Jul 23, 2017 5:42 pm Title: Epilogue
Thanks for this wonderful, exciting, beautiful but also sad story. Thanks for a Brian, who, through being pregnant and being a father has grown-up so much, who finally managed to defeat most of his demons. This is mainly shown by the fact that he tells Justin about his illness and to ask for help. And I was very surprised that he never fucked anybody else since Justin had left. Justin – he went through a lot. But fortunately, went through all this shit, stronger, matured and more self-confident than before. Now, he’s finally ready to be a father and a partner. And so is Brian. And in the end, it was only time! Thanks again for sharing this awesome story!
Date: Jul 23, 2017 8:02 am Title: The Glint of Dawn off the Wing of a Plane
I’ve already known this, but I’m glad you mentioned that Brian sees through Lindsay’s bullshit. I still think she’s a bitch. She wants to have Justin out of the way? So, she can imagine that those kids are hers and Brian’s and play little straight family for some times I can’t help myself, I don’t like her.
I don’t know what I should think about it. One thing is for sure, Brian can love unconditionally. He just wants what he thinks is best for Justin. He is able to let him go. He knows that his love is immemorial. That’s great. But what I don’t like about it, is, that he has consciously prevented a bond between the children and Justin. He was already in the process in building a cliff. Again, he decided what would be best for Justin. In my opinion, he has taken away from him the opportunity to choose. That was the thing I loved so much about “Monogamy” – in the end, they’ve chosen together. I am still of the opinion that there could have been a different solution for them. On the other hand, you have clarified that Justin is just too young and too confused. He must find out what he wants. Even if it is terribly painful. Beautifully written. It affected me so much, but it also hurt.
Date: Jul 23, 2017 7:15 am Title: Who's Your "Daddy"?
You broke my heart. Again. Maybe it would be right if they would be separated for some time. And they’re really in a mess. Brian – it’s great that he changed so much for his kids, I would have never expected him to be so absorbed in his role as a father – and Justin – it’s not okay to accept this scholarship without talking to Brian before. But – the same as in the show – I don’t like the way Lindsay interferes with their relationship and what I like even worse is that Brian let her have her way. She loves the house, too? She’s not the one who has to love it, she won’t live there. It should have been Justin there by his side when he bought this house. But both are to blame – why aren’t they talking to each other…
Date: Jul 21, 2017 2:51 am Title: The Face that Launched a Thousand Ships
At first, I didn't think I would like the name Helen for her, but the meaning behind it is lovely. I don't like Jennifer so much in this story and I am a big Jennifer fan. How rude to tell your kid you would have preferred your grandchild be called something else? Poor Brian, he is having anxiety without Helen in his arms.
Date: Jul 20, 2017 6:51 pm Title: Barney's, Bergdorf, and Saks Fifth Avenue
I love how Brian stuck it to the Sap.
The meanies in Babylon broke my heart, but I guess Brian deserved it a little LOL.
Justin getting off on the babies moving and the bump is actually so cute lol
Date: Jul 20, 2017 5:31 pm Title: Okay
These boys are so fucking frustrating lmao, they need to stop hurting each other. Brian needs to talk more and Justin needs to think more of Brian. I am so happy with how Lindsay reacted. Good for her. And Jennifer, she seems to know Brian better than Justin sometimes.
Date: Jul 20, 2017 5:18 pm Title: Ireland's Legendary Warrior Queen
I’ve already thought so. Justin told Brian before, he would be okay with him tricking again after giving birth. But he’s not, and somehow, it’s understandable. I just hope their rules will function.
Oh Lindsay is such a bitch. How can she try to separate them, separate not only Justin from Brian but also from his kids??? That’s so awful. I’m so shocked. I’m so fucking angry at Lindsay right now. As if she would have done this when there hadn’t been the kids. But I would have a solution for them. I don’t know if this exist in the USA, but here in Germany, you can take parental time over three years. Brian just could accompany Justin with the kids. This would be so great and Lindsay would be so angry….
The end of the chapter is so beautiful. They are so great and cute and beautiful together. Please, don’t separate them…
Date: Jul 20, 2017 5:13 pm Title: "Let's Fuck"
I think Justin sometimes needs to be a bit more understanding of the surge of hormones raging through Brian's body/ They're so snippy with each other, but arguing with a pregnant person is only going to get you into trouble lol
That scene at the end was so hot and romantic, Brian can say so much with his actions.
Date: Jul 20, 2017 3:19 pm Title: The Face that Launched a Thousand Ships
Wow! This is such a beautiful but also sad chapter. Brian’s really changed – I hope it stays this way. It’s so cute how he’s looked for a name which includes in some way the person he loves so much. And he’s so protective and caring about his daughter, he already loves her so much. Justin – Sometimes it’s different than you think and I must agree with Brian - maybe Justin has just imagined too much – you have to live it, not imagine it. It’s so beautiful how Brian tries to support Justin in bonding with their daughter through giving him time with her alone. I’m so afraid about the trouble which surely will come. And I also don’t trust Michael…. And by the way, I don’t want your story to end…
Date: Jul 20, 2017 1:58 pm Title: Dark Brown Hair and Blue Eyes
I was aware that not everything could stay this way… quiet… harmonic… But these developments I haven’t expected. And Brian, he’s so brave. Justin’s reaction is strange, but again, he’s only human. So cute how you describe her as a mix between Brian and Justin. Must be a beautiful baby!
Date: Jul 20, 2017 1:50 pm Title: The List and the Letters
What a beautiful chapter. Those letters are so gorgeous and affecting. They show this other side of Brian which also belongs to him. If he just wouldn’t be so afraid of being vulnerable and getting hurt, then he could /would show this side more often. I think, at least now, Justin should have an answer to his question (“Or was he hesitating on the threshold because he'd glimpsed Brian's soul and found it so complex and so beautiful that all of his complaints seemed trivial in comparison?”).
Date: Jul 20, 2017 4:14 am Title: Barney's, Bergdorf, and Saks Fifth Avenue
So, thanks for some levity! It’ so great how you picture and characterize Michael – makes me want to shake him, but also laugh so much!
Oh, poor Brian. Must be hard to hear those things, but they’re not worth a second thought. And as mean as this moment was, the more beautiful is how you picture them walking home hand-in-hand, lying in bed and feeling these movements together. This is such a awesome moment!
And thanks again for another "topping Justin" scene - hot, cute and beautiful!