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Date: Oct 18, 2017 8:49 am Title: Chapter 14 ~ Bittersweet Kisses…

I'm happy that they won't take this to court. That would only hurt Gus. 

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Date: Oct 18, 2017 8:38 am Title: Chapter 13~ Jump-Run-Skip-Kiss…

What a nice afternoon. I hope they have many more like that. 

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Date: Oct 18, 2017 8:34 am Title: Chapter 12 ~ Heated Kisses…

Melanie is right. They are so screwed. 

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Date: Oct 18, 2017 8:31 am Title: Chapter 11 ~ No Good Bye Kiss?

It's about time Brian got some of his rights back. 

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Date: Oct 18, 2017 8:28 am Title: Chapter 10 ~ Plum Sauce Kisses…

So Michael wants money? I hope Ben has the guts to just leave him. 

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Date: Oct 18, 2017 8:25 am Title: Chapter 9 ~ Whiskey Kisses…

They truly belong together. 

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Date: Oct 18, 2017 8:13 am Title: Chapter 8 ~ Kiss Off!

Debbie could never really see that Michael is causing his own problems. 

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Date: Oct 18, 2017 8:08 am Title: Chapter 7 ~ Leather Kisses…

Why can't Michael let others have what he has?

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Date: Oct 18, 2017 8:05 am Title: Chapter 6 ~ Neon Kisses…

Michael is such a dumbass. 

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Date: Oct 18, 2017 8:03 am Title: Chapter 5 ~ Raindrop Kisses…

Going out in the rain for a magazine? Must be true love. 

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Date: Oct 18, 2017 8:02 am Title: Chapter 4 ~ Not So Sugar-Coated Kisses…

Lindsay's and Michaels reaction is exactly as I expected. 

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Date: Oct 18, 2017 7:59 am Title: Chapter 3 ~ Champagne-Covered Kisses…

They did it. Good for them. 

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Date: Oct 18, 2017 7:48 am Title: Chapter 2 ~ Cum-Covered Kisses…

Brian can be pretty convincing. 

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Date: Oct 18, 2017 7:41 am Title: Chapter 1 ~ Soot-Covered Kisses…

It must be so scary to even think about losing the one you love. 

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2017 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 28 ~ Butterfly Kisses

I really hope you can find time to finish this. Your insight into the effects of the bashing on our guys is excellent. Looking forward to the rest of the story 

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2017 9:36 am Title: Chapter 28 ~ Butterfly Kisses

I know you have a lot of WIP. When do u think you be back to this one? Really would like to read more 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2017 3:15 am Title: Chapter 28 ~ Butterfly Kisses

Will you be updating some of your WIPs I have missed reading your stories??:)



Author's Response: Yes, my muse is finally coming out of hibernation, and I'll be working on updating my fics... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Lorie Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2016 5:56 pm Title: Chapter 28 ~ Butterfly Kisses

So happy to see another chapter of this. The story is great. Michael just keeps proving that he is nothing but a nasty piece of shit and will use anyone he can. So glad Devina called Deb. Now at least the cops can be watching for him and know where he is, hopefully they will catch him soon.

Justin is a wonderful second dad to Gus, if it was Michael he would be too jealous of any time Brian spent with his son whereas Justin tries to include him in everything.

~Lorie



Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Michael so so sleazy and slimy, he'll be fucking up again soon enough and the cops will be more than happy to provide him with room and board. Justin really is a great parent, and you're right Michael would feel like he was in competition for Brian's attention. Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2016 2:29 pm Title: Chapter 28 ~ Butterfly Kisses

I wonder how Brian is going to react to Lindsay violating the restraining order. 

I love our cute little family Brian/Justin/Gus and of course the ducks. lol

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response: It was inevitable that she'd show up sooner or later, at least this way they know where she is. You've got to love Gus and the ducks... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2016 10:31 am Title: Chapter 27 ~ Unfaithful Kisses…

Justin and Gus together are so much fun and sweet.

Lindsay is not getting what she's been yearning for years and she will lose the only link she has letf with Brian: Gus.

Great chapter!



Author's Response: Justin and Gus really are sweet together, and Brian's finally happily accepting full-time parenthood. Lindsay is burning her bridges, and soon she'll be left with nothing... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2016 8:10 pm Title: Chapter 28 ~ Butterfly Kisses

Gus and Ducks, gotta love 'em.  Lindsay trying to worm her way into Britin.  Michael trying to con Divina into supporting him.  Brian winning AT&T as a client.  Doesn't get better than this.



Author's Response: Gus and the ducks are so cute, they even won Brian over. Lindsay wormed herself right into the back of a police car, now it's Michael's turn. Thankfully Divina's no fool, she saw right through Michael's manipulations. Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2016 6:52 pm Title: Chapter 28 ~ Butterfly Kisses

Sooooooooooo excited and happy to see an update to this one!

AT&T?! Wow! impressive and YAY for Ted! 

Damn.Michae lgot away AGAIN! shit Shit Shit. Oh well. his time will come and am enjoying his homelessness in the meantime. ;) Can't believe the little shit stole the jewellery box. In a way I hope it had lots of expensive stuff in it so his accumulating charges also include grand theft. haha.

Lindsey getting charged was great! Another strike against her. I feel bad for gus, but he has lots of support around him.

Terrific update and so happy to see this update.

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response: Thanks! At this rate, with Ted's help Brian going to be taking Madison Avenue by storm, or there big accounts anyways. Michael may be on the run again, but he's an idiot and the law will be catching up with him soon enough. Lindsay arrest was perfect, but no doubt mommy and daddy will be coming to her rescue. Thankfully Gus doesn't seem to be missing Lindsay, now that he has his daddy and Justy. Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2016 6:46 pm Title: Chapter 28 ~ Butterfly Kisses

Lord Give Me Strength! I want to smack Michael and Lindsay into another galaxy they are just so selfish!!

Glad that Gus is with his Daddies the ducks are too cute I can see why Brian isn't too mad about them.

Brian and Ted are quite a dynamic force they are making sure that no one can compete with them.

Deb told Lindsay where Brian and Justin live? Thank goodness the gate was already up  and there was witnesses to Lindsay's delusional ranting, so now she goes to jail for violating the restraining order to bad she can't share a cell with Michael.

Danny (Devina) did not deserve to be used like that especially since Michael was making a mess in someone's home, that selfish little A-hole got away again at some point his time has to be running out??

The Wait was worth a wonderful chapter full of surprises. Thanks :)

 



Author's Response: Michael and Lindsay sure do need a good bitch slapping! They're both delusional assholes, that belong behind bars. One down, One to go... Yeah, Brian may shout about Mr. Quackers and family, but seeing Gus's happiness melts his heart. At the rate Brian and Ted are going they're both going to be multimillionaire soon. Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: tataniastorm Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2016 6:42 pm Title: Chapter 28 ~ Butterfly Kisses

Yay. Love this story and have missed ig. Ty for the update.



Author's Response: You're so welcome Darling. I'm so glad your enjoying it. Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2016 4:20 pm Title: Chapter 28 ~ Butterfly Kisses

Welcome back! And in a truly magnificient way!!! What a coup for Kinnetik! While Brian's life is on an upward mobility track, Lindsay and Michael...LAWD HAM TURKEY foolery, foolery, FOOLERY!! SMH!

Michael thinking that Danny aka Divina owes him anything after all this time is laughable. Perhaps if they had found each other when Michael wasn't a grown ass man (and I use that term extremely loosely) that argument would fly. Not having a father cannot be an excuse- nor should it be- for disregarding moral standards and flouting the law. Try again Moron or better yet, do the right thing and go to jail where you belong! At least in jail he's entitled to 3 hots and a cot by law while serving his time. Now instead of just being a professional idiot, he's about to add professional bum and con artist to the non-existent, unimpressive resume of his insignificant life.

As for Lindsay....Good Gravy where to start with this Train Wreck?! I can't figure out if she's really crazy or just playing at being insane. For her to think that anyone owes her anything OR that Justin's life with Brian should be hers is definitely an insane thought. But since her actions are completely well-thought out and in some trashy chick handbook completely rational, it really makes me wonder what she is trying to claim. The judge ordered her to seek professional help but honestly, I'm not sure she needs it as much as she needs an ass whipping and a jail cell. I'm still fuming at her leaving Gus in the grocery store and then lying lie-after-lie to try and justify her neglect but she could remember how to spread her legs and get her back dug out by some dude in exchange for an article in Art Forum to undermine Justin's career and separate Brian and Justin. There are people who are truly delusional and are sick but then there are people who play at being so to excuse despicable behavior. I firmly believe that Lindsay is the latter! Hopefully they won't let her out of jail.

Looking forward to MORE!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

 



Author's Response: Ted has become so much more than a CFO, he's truly Brian's right hand man. Poor Danny, to bad he didn't realize his sexuality before he slept with Debbie. He could have avoided the whole Michael fiasco, he shouldn't have to be subject to the raving idiot. Michael maybe a grown man, but he's still emotionally a little mama's boy. Brian's had it right all along, he so pathetic... Lindsay maybe unstable and manipulative, but that's only because she's driving herself crazy with all her absurd plots to ensnarl Brian's heart. She knows exactly what she's doing, and she not doing it very well... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

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