Date: Sep 05, 2018 3:17 am Title: Chapter 16
I should be sleeping but I just can’t stop reading this!
Date: Dec 21, 2017 8:16 pm Title: Chapter 16
And the three fools are back. How can someone be so selfish and so full of himself and so cruel. I just want to slap them both and throw them away. And maybe throw Debbie with them if she doesn't open her eyes.
Brian is finally accepting that he's not responsible for their actions, that's good.
Mathilde
Author's Response:
Brian had to realize it one day! I doubt his relationship with Justin could survive if he never stopped blaming himself for the cruel shit the idiots did.
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:34 am Title: Chapter 16
Haven't been able to review because I forgot my penname, but now it is ok. and I have to tell you that I love this story. It is heartbreaking at times, but that keeps the plot going. Great job. Happy Thanksgiving.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much dear. I'm glad you enjoy the story but also feel the pain that our boys have to endure.
Date: Nov 20, 2017 4:51 am Title: Chapter 16
Brian and Justin continue to break my heart, but there is HOPE that things will get better for them as they heal.
Now onto the court cases... Can you PLEASE write me into the story so that I can punch the YUCK out of the lot of them. Disgusting maggots every last one, from the oldest to the youngest! Sorry maggots everywhere since you actually serve a purpose, while Deb, Lindsay, Michael and Ethan are just examples of wasted {fictional} sperm. Their {fictional} mothers should have swallowed instead of polliuting the earth with these examples of human vermin! And then for Lindsay to think that Brian should have visited her and Michael in jail and that she 'saved Brian?!!!!! What a sanctimonious dipshit she is!!
Can't wait to see Justin confront them all to let them know personally that they didn't win!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
YES! And they will be stronger than ever.
I totally can do that. I had actually written a character that gets to kick some ass. I'll just change her name to Nicole :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 19, 2017 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 16
Well there is really only one verdict that can be found. Deb needs to be included since she's partically responsible.
Author's Response:
Deb would never accept that she's to blame but that's Deb.
She will be all alone in the end while the family is getting stronger and happier.
[Report This]Date: Nov 19, 2017 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 16
Justin describing harming himself, wanting to do it again and how it made him feel got me all teary-eyed.
Together he and Brian will get through this and be 100xs stronger then the ones trying to destroy them.
Deb needs to be in a cell with Michael she is Crazy if she thinks Michael isn't going to jail for a long time.
Of course this will just add more fuel to her quest to Blame Brian for Corrupting Her Precious Baby<eye roll>
Lindsay could get longer than Michael and Ethan cause she is the mastermind behind this evil, disgusting plot.
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!! :)
Author's Response:
It was hard to write that part because I let my own experiences with self harm influence this. It's a scary feeling when causing yourself pain is the only thing that helps you to feel alive or to prevent worse. I wouldn't wish that on anyone.
I always think that for people like those 3, no verdict can be enough. They will never suffer the same as their victims but I still want them to be punished as hard as possible.
Date: Nov 19, 2017 8:52 pm Title: Chapter 16
Wow just wow. Hearing them testify to their crimes is just scary. They think that they are in the right.
Author's Response:
God, I just love your username :) Had to tell you.
I was so glad to have finished writing their statements because it was horrible to write. They will change their way of thinking soon tho ;)