Date: Sep 05, 2018 3:48 am Title: Chapter 23
Pregnant Brian is funny lol
i ALMOST feel bad for Lindsay... almost
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2018 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 23
Wish I could muster up some sympathy for Lindsay but I am fresh out and the next shipment won't be in until Hell Freezes Over <evil smirk>
Brian craving fast food and not caring about his figure makes laugh, he can gain some weight cause after the baby comes and the doctor gives the all clear Sunshine will help him work it off lmao
Amazing Chapter anyway despite the computer ;)
Author's Response:
Same here, dear. No sympathy for Lindsay or Michael *evil grin*
Exactly! This is Brian's chance to just eat what he wants... he can make a workout a plan with Justin later ;)
Date: Mar 13, 2018 8:28 pm Title: Chapter 23
So sorry to hear about your computer. Lost mine a couple years ago and couldn't repair it so my sister gave me the one I have now. I pray it works for a long time. Powerful chapter. This is a good story so I am happy that you are planning to continue it. Will wait patiently for updates.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope to re-write what I had done already. The next chapter is with my beta now so I hope I can post it soon.
A friend managed to save my laptop so I luckily don't need a new one but everyhing I had on it is gone. I had a couple of new ideas written for another story :/
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2018 8:14 pm Title: Chapter 23
Darn I hate when that happens. That's why I save mine to a flash drive just in case. Brian wanting fast food was funny. Lindsay getting justice was painful.
Author's Response:
I normally write my chapters in GoogleDocs but I had that flow and used word...
Brian deserves to eat without a care for a couple of months, don't you think? ;)
Definitely painful. My niece inspired that actually. She told me that some adult told her about torture techniques - what kind of person tells an 8 year old about that? - and it scared her. I used it for my story but it took me a couple of days to convince my niece that nobody would do something like that to her. Sometimes I want to punch people.