[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2018 5:27 pm Title: Chapter 24
Deb seeing that Michael needs to face his consequences is good, she is seeing here the blame truly lies and how Brian had no hand in Michael's actions.
But outside of her own head I she really ready to let go of Dr need to coddle Michael??
Only Time Will Tell?
The idea for the lofts is good Mel needs time o recover from chemotherapy and Lindsay, she never had the chance to properly mourn the end of her relationship with Lindsay and the betrayal.
Gus and Jenny will love having their own rooms and seeing Brian. Justin, Leonie and meeting the new baby whenever they want
Plus they won't all feel like they are on top of each other and will have privacy when they need it.
Good for them moving on and making their own Happiness.
Author's Response:
We'll see where my muse will take me regarding Debbie. I have no idea how her part of this story will continue.
That's true, sadly. Mel might got the okay from the doctors to go home but it will take lots of time for her to recover.
I'm glad you like the idea :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2018 4:51 pm Title: Chapter 24
Love the ideas for the loft. It's good that the kids are together with so many adults to support them. Deb made mistakes with Michael, that is true, but the monster her son became is all on him.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the idea :)
I don't know in which direction I'll go with Debbie in this story yet. I decided to wait and see what my muse has in store for Deb.
Date: Mar 23, 2018 4:35 pm Title: Chapter 24
Good chapter. Glad Deb is aware that Michael is indeed a monster. Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you :) The next chapter is either coming later today or tomorrow. It depends on my internet connection.
Debbie surprised me here. I'm eager to see where my muse will take me regarding her... maybe she can be saved.