Date: Dec 21, 2017 12:53 am Title: Chapter 19
Yes I can't wait for the revenge going to be EPIC
Author's Response:
I hope I can do justice to what they deserve xD
[Report This]Date: Dec 21, 2017 12:02 am Title: Chapter 19
Boo!! Cliffhangers Are So Mean! ;)
Payback is about to begin for Michael and Lindsay which they are not going to enjoy just like prison, but just think if all the fun they will get to experience and it will last for years.
Justin going to Debra's to confront her about her behavior towards Brian could be a waste of time.
Debra has a thick head when it comes to anyone telling her that Michael isn't a saint.
Or how her behavior lead to Michael thinking that he could say or do whatever he wanted and he wouldn't be seriously punished.
Michael learned from his mother because she was allowed to get away with her behavior.
Perhaps if they just ignored her yelling and that red finger and told her off, stood their ground and fought back she wouldn't believe she had the power to dictate to everyone.
Loud yelling don't mean right, it just means LOUD!!
I hope Justin is given the All Clear when his test results come back.
Thanks for the update I was starting to miss the story :)
Author's Response:
I agree with everything you said about Debbie. A part of me loves her while the other part just wants to slap her. Sometimes it's one step forward and ten steps back with her.
I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story. I'll try to update faster.
Date: Dec 21, 2017 12:01 am Title: Chapter 19
Great update. Can't wait to see where this story will go. It is so good. Happy Holidays.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2017 7:49 am Title: Chapter 14
What a little spitfire..fabulous.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all your comments :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2017 5:48 am Title: Chapter 11
Loved the name..lovely..soo sweet of u.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you like the name :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2017 5:37 am Title: Chapter 10
Too good...beautiful writting..thank u for the awesome story.
Author's Response:
Oh my God, thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoy this story :D
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2017 5:18 am Title: Chapter 9
Omg..bastards...awesome chapter.
Author's Response:
One of many good fitting words to describe the villains in this story ;)
Date: Dec 18, 2017 9:58 pm Title: Chapter 18
YAYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!! I FINALLY got to bust up a ball and kneecap, or slap and snatch a bitch bald or three! THANK YOU! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! This made my day, week, month AND year! Plus they are ALL going to jail! I had a major Monopoly moment while reading that (Do NOT pass Go and Do NOT collect $200)! Justice is just beginning to be served on that Fouled-up Foursome!
As for the therapy session, I laughed and cried in happiness throughout it all. Justin is getting himself back in all the ways that matter. Poor sore-assed Brian, but I bet he wouldn't trade that twitch in his hips for anything!
Sandy, you are doing me such a wonderful turn by giving me the inspiration and drive to get back to SOWK and ADLS ASAP. SO PROUD of you!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
YAY!! I'm so glad you enjoyed your parts :) I promised to have you kicking some ass, didn't I?! So so happy you liked it.
I totally agree with you, Brian definitely enjoyed that twitch and doesn't mind the sore ass that much.
Oh YES I can't wait :) I'm so behind with reading all those stories that I had bookmarked that I really need to catch up ASAP!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2017 3:14 pm Title: Chapter 4
Poor sweet mel..great chapter.
Author's Response:
Mel has got to deal with a lot but she'll get better, I promise :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2017 3:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
Lovely chapter...thank u.
Author's Response:
Thank you :D <333
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2017 2:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Omg...that was superrrrrbbbb...damn the cliff hanger...lols..off to climb the cliff...awesome start..loved it...thanks.
Author's Response:
I hope you'll like the rest of the story, too :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 14, 2017 8:12 pm Title: Chapter 18
Way To Go Nichelle!!! They got off lucky outside that courthouse cause anyone else would have killed them.
Now being sentenced to life in prison without parole is a way better punishment and so deserving for those three slimeballs.
So Now that her baby is going to jail forever Debra will be out for blood (Literally and Figuratively) and she better be ready for battle cause no one is holding back anymore.
She isn't just battling Mel she is going to war against The Family and they don't like Bullies.
Author's Response:
Killing them would be too easy... I have lots of things in mind for them ;)
Deb is going to fight against the whole family and many of their supporters :D
[Report This]Date: Dec 14, 2017 1:55 pm Title: Chapter 18
Nichole did a fine job of kicking ass. Made for a great chapter. I know how difficult it is to write when others need you, so I'll just keep waiting and hoping for more when you have the time.
Author's Response:
She did indeed! I couldn't stop thinking about adding her to the story. I hope she'll enjoy her action, too ;)
Thank you so much for understanding and being so patient with me!! I do appreciate it. I'll try to do better.
Date: Dec 14, 2017 11:54 am Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter. Thank Nichelle for her very deserved punishment of the nasties. It is a busy time so enjoy the holidays and we will enjoy any updates that you get to us.
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I hope Nichelle will enjoy her action in this story, too. I did enjoy writing it.
Thank you for understanding and being so patient with me.
Sandy xoxo
Date: Dec 14, 2017 8:17 am Title: Chapter 18
OMG I love how Nichelle is in this fic LMAO I know how she dislikes michael awesome verdict well deserved
Author's Response:
We'll get some more details about the jury's process later xD I enjoyed writing them.
YES! Nichelle was awesome. Let's hope she'll like her appearance, too.
Date: Nov 28, 2017 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 17
LOVED the verbal bitch slapping Debbie incurred by being her usual sanctimonious, pro-Michael, ignorant,dead WRONG self! Go my JUSTIN!!! I love it when he's strong, articulate and ANGRY! Deb may have barked up the wrong tree when she went after Brian, but she got bit in her ample ass by a Stomy Sunshine!
I'm with Brian...I'm interested in finding out why the Jury is, at this point, Undecided. How can that be?!?!? All of the idiots gave testimony, which proved motive and malicious intent. What's confusing about that?! It simply cannot be a case of legal wording versus common sense, especially not when they themselves would be demanding justice on their own behalf! I hope it's not another issue like the one post-bashing (yet different) where they feel the crimes of the defendants were justified because it happened to a gay man.
Looking forward to MORE of this intriguing story!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
P.S. Congrats to grandpa on achieving another milestone. WOW! 80 years old and still kicking life in the ass one day at a time! Many well wishes to him for continued long life and good health. I can certainly identify with his happiness for all the folks being gone from his house. Would that my own family would get the hint but NOPE! They'll be here until January 3rd...SMH <insert deep sigh here> Another month and some days of #FamilyHolidayHell to look forward to...
Peace and Blessings!
Author's Response:
YES! I so loved writing that part! Debbie here deserved the verbal slapping because she couldn't help herself. But it did help Justin to regain control :)
Oh I understand you! I don't understand how a crime couldn't be seen as a crime just because it happened to a gay man. Makes me angry but in this story, the jury couldn't decide how long they have to face jail because no verdict could be enough xD Once they're thrown into their cells the fun can begin xD But who said it will be fun for them?
Thank you so much for your support! I just updated the story and you are the special guest star :)
PS: Thank you! 80 years is really a long time especially when he isn't all healthy but he keeps going.
He doesn't like having our relatives here just like me. I can't stand most of them and don't feel comfortable around them. Now they decided to stay until January, too and I feel your pain! It's annoying. ;)
Date: Nov 28, 2017 1:05 am Title: Chapter 17
Super awesome strong Justin.
Author's Response:
That's the Justin we love :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2017 5:51 pm Title: Chapter 17
YES!!! Go Sunshine!! That was the best verbal bitch slapping of Deb!!! Love It!
Author's Response:
It was, I agree. And I truly enjoyed writing that. Deb showing up definitely helped our Sunshine to regain his strenght and control :D
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2017 5:32 pm Title: Chapter 17
Way To Go Justin!!!
Love that he told Debra off and pushed her out the so he could slammed the door in her face.
She will use any excuse she can for raising such a mean, vile, spoiled, self-absorbed, selfish, cruel, inconsiderate brat who still thinks Brian will come to his rescue.
Michael is the product of her lies and inability to let him grow up, she can't face the truth so she runs to her favorite punching bag Brian Aiden Kinney to take the blame.
Deb is worse than Jack and Joan because she hid behind kindness to manipulate Brian and everyone else (Are Sure She Isn't Lindsay's Mother??), Deb expects things to go her way and when she doesn't get it she bullies to get her way.
Deb has as much chance of getting custody of Jenny as Michael has of finding a Get Out Of Jail Free Card.
What Lawyer would take on her case and are they ready to feel the weight that will be on their heads or deal with Deb's bullying??
Is Deb ready for all her secrets to be revealed and every nasty thing that she has said about members of the family that they didn't know about?
Where did she get the money for a lawyer and who will testify on her behalf??
Author's Response:
That part was so much fun to write and when I re-read it later I was so proud of Sunshine, too.
I honestly never got that about Deb. She treated Justin - mostly - like an adult and was proud of him for standing up but was okay with Michael hiding? WTF?
Oh God, just imagine Lindsay and Michael being Deb's children - NIGHTMARE ALARM!
We will find out more about Deb's plans soon ;)
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2017 1:50 pm Title: Chapter 17
Wow! I'm so glad that Justin let Debbie have it. She was beyond wrong. Definitly looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I thought it was a good way for Justin to let out all his frustrations. And since Debbie is always trying to defend Michael it was perfect.
Date: Nov 27, 2017 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 17
First of all, Happy Birthday (late) to your grandpa. Secondly, what a great chapter. You really know how to give readers a cliff hanger. Glad to see Justin getting back to whatever can be called normal.
Author's Response:
Thank you :) He's a happy camper again now that all the people left lol
Justin just took back something he thought he had lost: control. And of course Brian gets to celebrate with him ;)
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:34 am Title: Chapter 16
Haven't been able to review because I forgot my penname, but now it is ok. and I have to tell you that I love this story. It is heartbreaking at times, but that keeps the plot going. Great job. Happy Thanksgiving.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much dear. I'm glad you enjoy the story but also feel the pain that our boys have to endure.
Date: Nov 20, 2017 4:51 am Title: Chapter 16
Brian and Justin continue to break my heart, but there is HOPE that things will get better for them as they heal.
Now onto the court cases... Can you PLEASE write me into the story so that I can punch the YUCK out of the lot of them. Disgusting maggots every last one, from the oldest to the youngest! Sorry maggots everywhere since you actually serve a purpose, while Deb, Lindsay, Michael and Ethan are just examples of wasted {fictional} sperm. Their {fictional} mothers should have swallowed instead of polliuting the earth with these examples of human vermin! And then for Lindsay to think that Brian should have visited her and Michael in jail and that she 'saved Brian?!!!!! What a sanctimonious dipshit she is!!
Can't wait to see Justin confront them all to let them know personally that they didn't win!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
YES! And they will be stronger than ever.
I totally can do that. I had actually written a character that gets to kick some ass. I'll just change her name to Nicole :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 19, 2017 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 16
Well there is really only one verdict that can be found. Deb needs to be included since she's partically responsible.
Author's Response:
Deb would never accept that she's to blame but that's Deb.
She will be all alone in the end while the family is getting stronger and happier.
[Report This]Date: Nov 19, 2017 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 16
Justin describing harming himself, wanting to do it again and how it made him feel got me all teary-eyed.
Together he and Brian will get through this and be 100xs stronger then the ones trying to destroy them.
Deb needs to be in a cell with Michael she is Crazy if she thinks Michael isn't going to jail for a long time.
Of course this will just add more fuel to her quest to Blame Brian for Corrupting Her Precious Baby<eye roll>
Lindsay could get longer than Michael and Ethan cause she is the mastermind behind this evil, disgusting plot.
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!! :)
Author's Response:
It was hard to write that part because I let my own experiences with self harm influence this. It's a scary feeling when causing yourself pain is the only thing that helps you to feel alive or to prevent worse. I wouldn't wish that on anyone.
I always think that for people like those 3, no verdict can be enough. They will never suffer the same as their victims but I still want them to be punished as hard as possible.