Date: Nov 19, 2017 8:52 pm Title: Chapter 16
Wow just wow. Hearing them testify to their crimes is just scary. They think that they are in the right.
Author's Response:
God, I just love your username :) Had to tell you.
I was so glad to have finished writing their statements because it was horrible to write. They will change their way of thinking soon tho ;)
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2017 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like the premise so far, although I can already tell there will be a LOT of angst... TAG
Author's Response:
Of course there will be. At least I hope I'll be able to pull it off xD
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2017 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like the premise so far, although I can already tell there will be a LOT of angst... TAG
Author's Response:
If I can pull it off and write down what I have in mind then there should be lots of angst xD
Date: Nov 10, 2017 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 15
OMG!!!! How dare that...that HARRIDAN yell at Brandon and then make her way over to Brian and Justin's home to berate them for the eternal pettiness and petulance of HER offspring?! LAWD, HAM, TURKEY and GRITS, she best feel lucky that Ben stopped her from taking a swing in retaliation at Jennifer! Not only will Deb have ended up in jail, but I believe that Jennifer would have commenced to whipping her ass into a coma.
So proud of both Justin and Brian for telling Mrs. Novotny off, but most of all, for meeting with Alex and being honest about their feelings. I completely get where Justin is coming from and yet, Alex is right. Justin feeling indifferent about his attackers is NOT good. Hopefully, between Alex and Brian, Justin can face what's happened to him and move beyond it to be happy and whole. The best revenge is to LIVE WELL, and look good doing it. With luck, the entire family will adopt that motto!
As for that fucktard, Ethan.....Lawd please be a cinderblock and knock the HELL out of him! His attorney should have better sense than to listen to the demands and pleadings of a self-serving, sadistic scumbag like him! If not, I hope Brian stomps a mudhole in his ass as well as his cunty client's.
Okay rant over... for now! Looking forward to the next installment!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Ohhhh your reactions are strong, my dear! I would have loved to see Jenn kicking her ass, tho ;)
Justin and Brian will heal together and be stronger in the end. That's what I have in mind for the story at least.
Ethan is a useless idiot here and won't be happy in jail, I promise.
Date: Nov 10, 2017 9:09 pm Title: Chapter 15
I am so proud of the avenue, way to tell her off.
Author's Response:
It's great how they all stick together.
Date: Nov 10, 2017 7:11 pm Title: Chapter 15
Deb is my fave character on the show its hard reading Anti Deb but this fic I like
Author's Response:
Thank you! I promise that I don't always write Anti-Deb fics. Most of the time I do adore her but there are moments where I want to give her a little slap or two.
I'm glad you can enjoy this story, tho. :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 10, 2017 6:35 pm Title: Chapter 15
Debra has some nerve yelling at Brandon that he doesn't know anything, that never stopped her from flying off the handle and blaming Brian for Michael's screw ups!!!!!!!
I so wanted Jennifer to kick her Ass for coming over and yelling at Brian, but that slap was a good start.
Ms. Novotny might want to get use to the cold shoulder cause her treatment of Brian is well known on Liberty Avenue and no one is letting her get away with it anymore.
Brian didn't lose a mother he just gained a Better One in Jennifer.
Ethan is on the delusional train with Michael, Lindsay and Ms. Grassi (Though if Vic was alive I doubt he would call Debra his sister or Michael his nephew!!!)
Brian and Justin dealing with their feelings considering Michael, Lindsay and Ethan is good they are going to need to be strong with the upcoming trials and Debra Drama.
Even when Ms Grassi hears the truth and comes with the remorseful tears I don't think Brian and Justin should forgive her.
Time for Debra to stand on her own two feet and face the consequences of her actions aswell as Michael's!
Author's Response:
Exactly! It's one of the things that bothered me about her. For Deb, the slap is only the beginning.
That's what I feel about Brian and Jenn, too. I think as soon as Jennifer accepted Justin for how and who he was, she also accepted Brian and learned to love him.
Vic would be so ashamed of Deb and Michael for ure.
[Report This]Date: Nov 10, 2017 6:07 pm Title: Chapter 15
It's good that Liberty Avenue is behind Brian and Justin. It's bad that Deb is blaming Brian. That's like blaming the victem! I don't know if I want her to realize what she's done or not. The fact that she was going to slap Jennifer is not a good sign.
Author's Response:
Happens way too much! Blaming the victims is as bad as hurting/raping them.
She will realize one day what she did but she won't be welcome in the family anymore.
[Report This]Date: Nov 10, 2017 4:27 pm Title: Chapter 15
With Brandon's statement you see that the Avenue protects their stud.
Is it sad that I want to see Jennifer go all terminator on Deb?
Great Story!!
The other Sandy :-)
Author's Response:
Hi Sandy :) Thank you for your comments.
Who wouldn't want to see Jennifer like that? I think not even Deb could be prepared for that xD
Date: Nov 10, 2017 2:05 pm Title: Chapter 15
It's great that Debbie getting a cold treatment from her "boys", all of them.
Author's Response:
Oh yes. Is it bad that I enjoyed writing this?
Date: Nov 10, 2017 2:05 pm Title: Chapter 15
It's great that Debbie getting a cold treatment from her "boys", all of them.
Author's Response:
Yes, she deserves it.
Date: Nov 06, 2017 4:59 pm Title: Chapter 14
Way to go Molly! Jennifer would be so proud of her.
I hope Deb will stay out of Michael's problems, otherwise she will be all alone and bankrupted.
Author's Response:
Molly's a real proud sister. Deb won't learn too soon.
Date: Nov 06, 2017 4:53 pm Title: Chapter 13
Lindsey is completely nuts; he parents are in for huge disappointment and shame.
Author's Response:
That she is. Luckily for her parents they don't want to know her anymore.
Date: Nov 04, 2017 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 14
Brian and Daphne's talk was gut-wrenching and heartbreaking but it was so necessary. Brian has done and is doing all he can and it will be enough. I just hope that he really allows himself to heal from all of this WHILE Justin does the same. The wholeness of the victim is important indeed, but so is the caregiver's. I think that's something that everyone tends to forget when dealing with traumatic experiences.
As for Deb and Michael's conversation...I don't care how much the realization maybe hitting her now, Deb still deserves to suffer alone. She went after Brian because of Michael like a vulture goes after carrion! There shouldn't be a way for her to come back from that even if in theory they forgive her for their own sanities. Deb is old enough to know better! As for the mealy-mouthed mutton that is Michael, I gasped aloud when he actually had the au-fucking-dacity to demand that Deb call Brian to come see him and to pay for his lawyer...UGH! What in all-blazing HELL?!?!?! Yep... No insanity defense for the petulant pissant nor his Malignant Narcissistic co-defenders! They all KNEW what they were doing and should be punished accordingly!
Molly is my SHE-RO! I would have loved it even more if she would have socked Craig, but I'm so glad that Carl was there to hear every single word she uttered as well as Craig's continued arrogance. I can't wait for him and Sapperstein to go down with the sinking ship of Dumbass Criminals they've aligned themselves with!
Looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS!
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I agree with you! Something like this affects everyone and each one needs to heal in their own time.
Don't think Debbie blaming Brian is over yet. She will always find a way to blame Brian no matter what. Michael and his co-defenders might did something insane but they're not. They're just a bunch of frustrated, jealous weasels turned into criminals.
Trust me, Molly will sock him soon. And lots of people will see it and celebrate her.
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2017 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 14
I'm not sure how Deb could blame Brian for what Michael did, especially after hearing it from Michael's own mouth. It's good to know that Molly told Craig off before he got taken away to jail.
Author's Response:
Deb can always find a way to make Brian guilty for everything. In her eyes Michael can do no wrong.
I loved writing Molly's part. And Carl being there was fun for me, too.
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2017 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 14
Deb heard him say he wanted Justin and his daughter dead and she ignored it he said that he wished Chris Hobbs had finished the job and suddenly her hearing improved.
Deb may finally realize that Michael hates Justin enough to want him dead, but she will figure out a way to blame Brian cause her baby can do no wrong.
And if Michael did do something wrong its because Brian lead him on and after 'Everything They Did For Him' and because Lindsay and Ethan tricked him?...Some How?...Some Way???
Craig is about to learn what it means to lose everything...and then some.
Way to go Molly confronting Craig.
Author's Response:
I think so, too. In Deb's eyes Michael can do no wrong.
Craig will not be happy for a very long time xD
Date: Oct 31, 2017 7:55 pm Title: Chapter 13
Very good. I am proud of Lind's parents. Poor Justin and Brian.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
I can't believe anyone would support a person who has tried to kill not only an innocent baby but also someone who wasn't able to defend himself. It's what Lindsay did and I can't see her parents helping her after learning what she did.
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2017 4:56 pm Title: Chapter 13
The Family coming to see Justin and meet Leonie was just what was needed to help ease the tension.
Lindsay is clearly delusional and yet she is as sane as anyone else, her big mouth has ratted out the other conspirators in this twisted plot so they can go down too.
The Petersons finding out the truth and leaving Lindsay to face the consequences all alone is the best thing they can do for themselves and her, now she has no safety net to fall back on anymore.
I really didn't want Justin to remember what Ethan did but the mind can only keep the door shut for so long.
I hope his test come back negative.
You Are Evil to cliffhang right there but I forgive you ;)
Author's Response:
Yes, is was needed. They all needed this moment.
I promise Justin will never remember every detail but unfortunately he will always know that it did happen.
Wouldn't do any more to cause our Justin harm. I promise!!
Thank you :) Next chapter is up.
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2017 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 13
wow. I'm glad to see that Ben and Hunter aren't shunned for what Michael did. Even better that Ron and Nancy realize that what their daughter did was pure evil. But I am sad to learn that Justin has to go through more tests because Ethan didn't use a condom.
Author's Response:
Ben and Hunter know where the fault lies, unlike Debbie. Fortunately Ron and Nancy are nothing like Deb and understand that their daughter can't be helped.
I promise the test results won't be bad. It's part of the investigation and of course Justin's recovery but no disease will follow.
Date: Oct 31, 2017 10:47 am Title: Chapter 13
Lindsey is really a piece of shit and I'm glad her parents decided to not help her.
I love that everyone rally around Brian and Justin. They are going to need it if someting comes from the rape (which I hope don't lol).
Author's Response:
I promise nothing will come from the rape but yes, the family is there to support them!!! :)
Date: Oct 31, 2017 10:44 am Title: Chapter 12
Wow, I wasn't expecting that, Ethan is really really nuts. I'm so sad that happened to Justin.
Hunter is all grown up and maybe he could explain life to Debbie.
I was so sad when I read the part with Gus and Jenny, they are just baby; they don't understand that some people are evil.
Author's Response:
Same here. It shouldn't have happened to him. Sadly it's another real life issue that many women and men have to deal with :(
I don't think Debbie would understand it tho because in her mind, the world owes her and Michael.
It's hard to write something like that. How to explain something like this to such young children.
Date: Oct 31, 2017 10:40 am Title: Chapter 11
I'm so glad Everyone is alive.
I love the name you choose. I'm sorry for your friend.
Make L&M suffer, they deserve it.
Author's Response:
Thank you! In a way, having this story and using her name it makes me think of her even more. And even though it hurts to think of her I wouldn't want to forget the time we had with her.
Date: Oct 31, 2017 10:40 am Title: Chapter 11
I'm so glad Everyone is alive.
I love the name you choose. I'm sorry for your friend.
Make L&M suffer, they deserve it.
Author's Response:
Thank you honey <333
Date: Oct 29, 2017 4:45 pm Title: Chapter 12
Whoa! That's a new development, to say the least. Ethan is sicker than the two others. When Brian will find out, it will be hell for Ethan. Creepy!
Author's Response:
They'e all really sick. Oh yes, Brian won't allow for Ethan to get away with that. xD
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2017 4:45 pm Title: Chapter 12
OH GOD NO!!!
I hope Justin never remember that!
Ethan you Sick Twist!!!
They are all sane and deserve to be buried under the jail!!
So what the Hell has Deb been up to?
And where is she getting the money to pay for lawyers to help Michael and with the custody case?????
Author's Response:
Not buried but they won't have a good time in jail ;) Brian and the gang will make sure of that.
We'll meet Deb later again. There's so much that needs to be mentioned at this point. But a little hint: Deb will see how delusional her son really is for the first time.