[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2018 4:31 am Title: Chapter 22
Justin is Healthy Yes!
Brian IS PREGNANT?! Yes & Oh No!
Armani doesn't make maternity clothes for Men!!!! lol
Now that was a nice surprise after so much heartache this will strengthen their relationship and the bonds of the family.
It seems like Deb heard Hunter but will she listen?
Is she really ready to be a grown up and let Michael face the consequences???
Author's Response:
Of course he is!! After everything I put him through I wouldn't dare to hurt him anymore.
I'm sure Justin will have a wonderful time with Brian's pregnancy... lots of wonderful moments. I had lots of ideas and hope to re-write those.
In the next chapter I have written about Debbie's inner thoughts and she realizes a couple of things... we'll see where my muse takes me. Debbie might surprise me but I can't promise xD
Date: Feb 14, 2018 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 22
Oh this is so good. Thank you for updating on Valentine's Day. A nice gift. Happy Valentine's Day to you.
Author's Response:
You're welcome :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 14, 2018 9:51 pm Title: Chapter 22
Hopefully Deb took what Hunter said in. Now it is really great the Justin is okay, even better that Leonie is going to have a sibling. So funny.
Author's Response:
We'll see. My muse actually surprised me while I was re-writing chapter 24.
Justin deserved to be okay and healthy after everything I put him through.
Date: Feb 05, 2018 9:41 pm Title: Chapter 21
Jeebus! I what an absolute C-word! Unbeleivable. did she really think that she could just go in and give some fake apology then ask for help? Michael learned from the best in how to manipulate. Can't blame Brian at all fro freaking out! what will Deb try next? Was even a little bit of her sincere? She had all the right words, but it doesn't mean shit does it?
Great chapter
cheers
Elaine
Author's Response:
Of course she thought she could do that. We're talking about Debbie here xD
Thank you for your comment :D
Date: Feb 04, 2018 9:32 am Title: Chapter 21
I almost fail for her word, just like Brian but she will always be Debbie and will always put Michael first. When I read Brian's part, I thought well, that's it, he's gonna forgive her and I was still conflicted about that so I'm glad you kept her selfish.
Kiss
Mathilde
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! I will never understand how a guy like Brian didn't see through the bullshit that certain people threw at him on the show. Better stopping here because my comment has the lenght of an entire fic itself lol
Date: Feb 04, 2018 9:13 am Title: Chapter 20
I'm normally not a violent person but Mickey deserved it.
As for Deb, I will see where your mind take her lol.
Tried to talk to you on FB, are you ok?
Author's Response:
Same here. I don't like violence at all but luckily one can use fanfiction for those kind of things ;)
I think Debbie's path is pretty clear from now on. There will be moments of her realizing what she did but in the end she'll stick with her attitude.
So, so sorry. I've been so messed up lately with the constant visits to the hospital, family stuff and my niece visiting. I also thought it was fun to get the flu so yeah, I've been terrible when it comes to catching up. I'll leave you a mail tho in the next days :D <333
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2018 7:55 pm Title: Chapter 21
Oh That Was Low, Even For Deb!!!
She used her crocodile tears to try to get Brian to save her baby from what he deserves.
Michael can rot in Hell and he can Take Deb With Him!!!!!
Brian is too strong now to fall her Shit and the crumbs she tosses out when she needs to for her baby.
After everything both Brian and Justin have been through they aren't taking crap from anyone anymore.
Will they tell everyone about Deb's pathetic attempt at apologizing, I am sure Jennifer would love to go see Deb and Comfort Her?
Patience Is A Virtue, so I will try to practice it cause this story has me enthralled:)
Author's Response:
I know. Debbie is definitely going to meet with the others... but it won't give her the results she desperately wants hehe xD
Thank you so much :D
Date: Feb 02, 2018 7:14 pm Title: Chapter 21
So glad that Brian could stand up to Debbie. She has some nerve. Great chapter. RL just has to have a place in your life. Enjoy your time with your niece. We will wait patiently for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for understanding and being so patient. I hope to write more tomorrow and Sunday so I can post more. I doubt I'll be able to do much when my niece is with me. I usually feel like a walking dead person as soon as she's in bed.
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2018 7:08 pm Title: Chapter 21
Can't get over how Deb even knowing that Michael was in the wrong still wants Brian to help him. Not going to happen. Michael gets what Michael deserves.
Author's Response:
I don't think Deb will change her tune in this story. So far, all of my ideas for future chapters don't show her changing her tune towards her former family.
If I manage to write down all the ideas I have for Mikey, Linds & Ethan they will get even more ;)
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2018 1:08 am Title: Chapter 20
Excellant update. Justin really gave it to Deb and the inmates certainly gave it to Mikey. Hehehe.
Author's Response:
Mikey really deserved it, didn't he?
Thank you for sticking to the story.
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2018 5:58 pm Title: Chapter 20
I wish I could feel bad for what Michael went through but I don't have that emotion in me right now.
He didn't feel bad when he helped to kidnap Justin, watched him be raped by Slimy Ethan, or stop Lindsay from stabbing Justin in the stomach to rip out his baby so she could kill an innocent child.
He laughed, gloated and laughed some more.
Michael is in a place where he has to face the consequences for his part in this horrendous crime, and there is no Captain Astro, Rage or Brian to save him Hell not even Deb has any power now.
Justin going to see Deb is brave cause he laid down some truths she refused to hear and had no real answers to without repeating herself.
She helped Brian but she never Saved Him!!
Saving him would have been stopping him from going back to that situation.
A meal, a blanket, pillow, band-aids, peroxide, alcohol, antiseptic does not equal Brian owes Deb or Michael his life.
All of that together doesn't equal the price Brian paid for a crumb of so called love they gave.
Deb used her semblance of caring to bind Brian to her but her emotional abuse over the years surpasses the physical abuse Jack dished out and coldness of Joan.
Deb isn't better she was 10xs worser because she used Brian to make Michael happy, while disregarding that Brian has a will of his own.
She, Michael and Lindsay also underestimated how strong Brian's will is to live his own life, they used Brian's past to break him, while Justin used glimpses into Brian's past to make him stronger.
Now the ball is in Deb's court, she can either leave Michael to deal with his fate, apologize and stop trying to control everyone, or she can continue to fight for custody of Jenny while blaming and badmouthing Brian and Justin???
The next chapters should be quite interesting.
Author's Response:
I never had that kind of emotion for Michael or Lindsay... for all the others, yes but never those two.
That's one of the things I always hate when it comes to Brian's past and Debbie's role in it. As a mother who would do anything for her son and claimed to love the guys as her own she didn't really try to save Brian back then. Of course she did good when she provided him with food, care and shelter but she should have done more.
There are so many things the writers did with and to Brian that didn't even make sense. But I shouldn't get into that now or my response will be longer than the actual story xD
A big part of me loves and adores Debbie because she supports the rights of the LGBT community and opens her doors for those in need but the other part of me cannot stand the hypcrisy and blindness when it comes to Michael. The others had to suffer and the way she always makes it sound like she saved Vic, Brian and all the others. The minute something went wrong in Michael's life, the others owed their own lives and happieness to her and Michael. That's something I really don't like but I could never dislike her completely because underneath all those flaws is a good person, a mother who wants the best for her child. She only never allowed herself to have a life and let Michael grow up.
I hope to update soon again. Thank you for your reviews. Makes me happy :D
Date: Jan 16, 2018 4:11 pm Title: Chapter 20
Definitely enjoying it. So glad you are back and will wait patiently for updates when you can get to them. I was just afraid it was going to be unfinished and it is too good of a story for that. Great job.
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it so far. I'm trying to write as much as I can inbetween treatments and resting. Internet connection here is not so good tho but I hope to update over the weekend if I write during the week :)
Date: Jan 16, 2018 7:14 am Title: Chapter 20
Hey Sandy Darling!!!! OH HOW I HAVE MISSED YOU!!!! Such a gift you have given me all throughout this chapter!
The 'talk' between Deb and Justin was EPIC! Justin delivered some hard truths and negated every single lie Debbie has ever told herself (and others) about her treatment of Brian. I would hope that it would sink in, but honestly, I don't think it will. She's going to find a hard way to go on the Avenue if she keeps living in denial about what a lowlife her bitchboy is!
As for Michael....*STANDING OVATION* BRAVO! He will definitely give a new meaning to the term 'talking shit' now, LOL One thing I know about prisoners is that whenever you harm a child, your days are either hard or numbered. With that whining habit he has, I can't see him lasting long unless it's just to punish him even more. I doubt even the warden will order for that particular torment to stop...I would say 'Poor Michael' but NAH...my feelings just aren't set up that way!
Brian and Justin's talk at the end was so touching. Yes, Brian was worried for Justin's safety, but Justin was worried for Brian's heart and sanity. When Brian said, 'You gave me a real mother in Jennifer,' it had me in tears. That alone speaks volumes about whom Brian really treasures in his life.
OMG! Great job and so worth the wait! Hope you are doing well and that this new year brings you much joy, peace and happiness!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind words, Nichelle. Made me very happy :) <33
I'm not sure about Deb's faith yet... I'll just go with the flow and see where she wants to end up ;)
Since Michael always talked shit I thought this would fit perfectly for him xD More is coming...
Much love to you dear <333
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2018 4:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Waiting and hoping for more, hope all well, thanks 😊
Author's Response:
Thank you! I just posted the next chapter and will try to update faster :)
Date: Jan 14, 2018 9:27 pm Title: Chapter 19
Wish this story would continue or end. It is so good. Patiently waiting.
Author's Response:
Not ending but finally continuing. I'll try to update faster.
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2017 10:58 am Title: Chapter 19
Great story..awesome team work.keep it up..thank u for the lovely update.
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter, too
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2017 10:56 am Title: Chapter 18
Fantastic chapter..thank u.
Author's Response:
Thank you :D
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2017 10:54 am Title: Chapter 17
Fabulous
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: Dec 21, 2017 8:37 pm Title: Chapter 19
Can't wait to see what they have in store for the two idiots.
So the jury wasn't undecided about guilty or not, just about the punishment. Well everything is too good for them.
I don't know if I want Debbie to be nice again. I think she did too much damage and even if sometimes I like that she becomes better I don't think she would or should here. She should loose everyone.
Mathilde
Author's Response:
Payback started already in the chapter I just posted. Hopefully you'll enjoy it, too.
Yes, I wanted the jury to struggle finding the right verdict because their crimes touch so many lives, not just Justin's.
Jury's still undecided about Deb. I decided to just go with the flow and decide if she'll change her tune or lose everyone.
Date: Dec 21, 2017 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 18
Thank you Nichelle, can you do the same to Debbie now lol.
Of course they are guilty!!!!! Anyone thinking otherwise is stupid (wink to Debbie)
And goddies to Brian and expecially Justin, it's the first step to regain your life.
Mathilde
Author's Response:
Nichelle did good, didn't she? Soooo good.
Brian and Justin will regain their lives for sure. Nobody could tear them apart, especially not the idiots.
Date: Dec 21, 2017 8:26 pm Title: Chapter 17
I'm like Brian on that, how can the jury be undecided, I hope you will explain in the next chapter.
Way to go Justin for telling Debbie off. I could really reall slap her but I'm glad it help Justin regain some of his life.
I really like this story so far.
Kiss
Mathilde
Author's Response:
Thank you so much hun :) You know me and my crazy ideas and thoughts so I'm glad you like it xD
Date: Dec 21, 2017 8:16 pm Title: Chapter 16
And the three fools are back. How can someone be so selfish and so full of himself and so cruel. I just want to slap them both and throw them away. And maybe throw Debbie with them if she doesn't open her eyes.
Brian is finally accepting that he's not responsible for their actions, that's good.
Mathilde
Author's Response:
Brian had to realize it one day! I doubt his relationship with Justin could survive if he never stopped blaming himself for the cruel shit the idiots did.
Date: Dec 21, 2017 7:53 pm Title: Chapter 15
Ethan is just delusional.
I'm glad the avenue is on Brian and Justin's side and that they told Debbie off. I don't know what to think about her. Sometimes I'm like Jennifer and want to slap her and sometimes I like her. I wish she would open her eyes.
It's good that both Brian and Justin are seekink treatment. I really hope they are going to be ok.
Mathilde
Author's Response:
Of course he is. He thought he's better than Brian... says it all, doesn't it?
Brian and Justin will always be okay and stronger in the end <333 I couldn't write a story in which they didn't end up happily together.
Date: Dec 21, 2017 7:47 pm Title: Chapter 14
Daphne is such a good best friend. I'm glad Brian and Justin have her.
I just don't understand Debbie, Mickey just confess to what he did and why he did it and she's stil blaming Brian. How can you be so obtuse?
I never liked Craig and can't wait to see what you have in store for him.
Sorry I've been MIA for so long, it's been a busy month.
Mathilde
Author's Response:
Daphne should write a book telling everyone to be a good best friend. Mickey and Linds could learn from her ;)
[Report This]Date: Dec 21, 2017 4:09 am Title: Chapter 19
Looks like Mikey and Lindsay will get what they deserve. But will Deb?
Author's Response:
The jury's still undecided about Deb.