Date: Nov 25, 2017 10:09 am Title: Chapter 16
Sooooo, the three of them think they can have Brian declared incompetent, huh? Perhaps that might have been able to happen if he continued to ride that CRAZY TRAIN they're on! And yet, fully competent, angry idiotic Mel is sitting there listening to the entitled triad plotting and planning to takeover the life of Brian Kinney? I wonder if her own license shouldn't be revoked since she's privy to Michael's hate speech and his intent to harm, but has done NOTHING to stop the little fucker...and one of those in danger is GUS?!?! Yet, she calls herself a mother? Yeah she's a MOTHER alright... a MOTHER_________!!!!!!
LAWD HAM TURKEY and GRITS, thank goodness for Ted, who has finally decided that enough is ENOUGH! Brian should show Justin the picture of what Michael has done sooner rather than later. I can understand wanting to take a breather, but with Michael's intent to remove the three biggest obstacles to clear a path to his obsession, my theory is WORK NOW, BREATHE LATER! At least the restraining orders are in place courtesy of Ted and Cynthia. Now they have legal recourse should Deb or Michael show up. I hope Melanie and Lindsay are included in the orders! They don't deserve to have easy access to sow dischord between Brian and Justin either!
Looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Nov 25, 2017 4:00 am Title: Chapter 16
Ted was wasting his time talking to Mel she is like Deb only hears and sees what she wants, despite the truth he was giving her all she could see was Brian interfering in her marriage??
I think she needs to see someone for her obsession with Brian and her need to constantly keep him around by bringing him so much, she beginning to sound like Michael ;)
And they all see Brian the Devil is to blame for their problems and the Saint with the endless bank account when they need saving<shakes head sadly>
They are all delusional and need to be put in the same padded room so they can whine themselves to death!!!
Deb is so busy making excuses for Michael that she can't see Michael is edging closer to Dangerous Levels.
He threatened to get rid of anyone standing in his way to Brian and the three people he sees in his way are Gus, Justin and Cameron, but still she thinks Michael loved Ben and ignored his crazy spiel cause he is grieving <eye roll>
Ted was smart to get the restraining orders and have Carl bring them over, Brian and Justin are working on their relationship and really don't need the Whiny Idiots at their door right now.
I think Ted is right that Justin and Jennifer will be quite a force to take on and I can't wait for the others to try:)
[Report This]Date: Nov 25, 2017 12:21 am Title: Chapter 16
Michael is loony tunes. I think Gus should be included in the talking thing.
Date: Nov 24, 2017 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 16
Michael is getting more and more nasty, dangerously bordering insanity, and listening to Deb, it might be genetic.
Mel is unable to see what Ted is trying to explain to her.
Cameron and Brian: I feel their deep connection.
So relieved that they have Carl, Emmett, Drew, Ted and Blake on their sides.
Date: Nov 24, 2017 9:37 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh it is getting good. Can't wait for Michael, Lindsay & Mel to get what is coming to them which is for Brian to throw them to the curb !!!!! Oh, did I tell you they are not my favorite people. Especially Michael & Lindsay. Keep up the great job. Your writing is wonderful.
Date: Nov 22, 2017 5:26 am Title: Chapter 15
Us or them. Them includes Mel and Lindsay right. Yeah they need to be put somewherw where they can be seen to if needed.
Loving Drew. Wonder what it was that ge had told Michael.
Justin is worried about Gus not being a teenager. Having roo many worries on his shoulders. Lindsay's worried about Justin's career. What a mother.
Guess Lindsay didn't like hearing that Brian's purse strings are attached to Justin and that she isn't going to get everything he owns if something was goibg to happwn to him. That she wouldn't have any control over what was left to Gus. Bitch!.
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:37 am Title: Chapter 15
This story is just amazing. It keeps me on the edge of my seat when reading it. I am a sucker for happy Brian & Justin and hope it ends happily, but the road to the ending is making me anxious to see where it goes. Couldn't review sooner as I forgot my penname. DUH Happy Thanksgiving
Date: Nov 20, 2017 11:47 am Title: Chapter 15
I love Drew! Oh, what I would have paid to see him tackle Lindsay. lol
I'm so glad they are still talking. If they just do that they will be fine. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Hugs,
Jessica
Date: Nov 20, 2017 3:18 am Title: Chapter 15
Brian and Justin finally talked. Yeah. Breathes such of relief
[Report This]Date: Nov 19, 2017 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 15
Brian can be mad about Justin leaving but he and The Novotnys took away his voice.
Anytime Justin said anything that didn't agree with The Novotny Edict he got yelled at.
How long was Justin supposed to take that abuse before he could walk away with his dignity still intact??
Plus Brian and his habit of pushing and walking away when it gets to emotional doesn't help either.
Justin kept quiet to give Brian the family he needed and Brian made excuses when they attacked Justin.
Two Wrongs Don't Make A Right, But Makes It Easier For Others To Manipulate The Situation.
So Lindsay trying to play parent is pathetic and yet so her.
Mel and Lindsay run when there are obstacles and blame Brian, neither one knows anything about relationships cause they are children still sitting at the kids table.
Lindsay is paying more attention to Gus have an affair then move out and leave your girlfriend and child no way to support themselves, Lindsay can't take care of Gus, run to Brian, disappear for a few days and move a stranger into your house so he can adopt Gus and you can help in stay in the country with a fake marriage, Mel finds out Lindsay is living with a man (Not Woman Mel, Seriously Get A Clue!!!) their home run to Brian.
Don't complain about Brian being the wedge in your relationship when he helped to save your relationship.
Is Lindsay worried that Brian has changed is will?
Did Mel draw the will and show it to Lindsay?
Mel and Lindsay use their kids as the glue to keep them together, I wonder if they had Gus to keep from admitting that their relationship had run it's course?
I kinda thought that was part of the reason why Mel had Jenny, to have a child that was in no way related to Brian Kinney and prove to Lindsay that she could be a successful Lawyer, Wife and Mother without obstacles.
Emmett seeing where he went wrong with Justin and making amends is more than Michael, Debra, Melanie and Lindsay would do.
Brian made the right choice at last :)
Date: Nov 19, 2017 9:09 pm Title: Chapter 15
I am so glad they talked . How much other people can fuck up your life is amazing and scary.
Date: Nov 19, 2017 8:11 pm Title: Chapter 15
What a dense and hard chapter!
Poor Gus, having to deal with a mother that doesn't understand that she must back off and leave him and his fathers alone.
It's great that Drew and Emmett were present; they helped to find a solution for Brian and Justin to be alone and to talk. What an explosive talk!
The ending is full of hope.
[Report This]Date: Nov 19, 2017 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 15
Lindsay seemed to find that Justin owned half of everything suddenly so interesting that she had to get away. That does not bode well. At least Brian and Justin are talking and sleeping.
Date: Nov 18, 2017 8:14 pm Title: Chapter 14
Great introspection: Brian is going down a difficult road, but it's headed to a better understanding of his insecurities and a healing he desperately needs.
Date: Nov 17, 2017 2:12 pm Title: Chapter 14
So glad Brian is seeing Alex professionally. My heart goes out to him though...I'm happy he's figuring things out.
Date: Nov 17, 2017 11:41 am Title: Chapter 14
Wow! Brian has a lot to think about. I'm glad he went to see Alex. Therapy is good for him.
Thanks for the update.
Hugs,
Jessica
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2017 4:19 am Title: Chapter 14
Love that Alex is pointing out things. Good job.
Date: Nov 17, 2017 3:59 am Title: Chapter 14
Brian is hurting- I hope he starts to talk to Justin about some of the revelations he is having with Alex. So glad that he agreed to go talk to Alex
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2017 3:34 am Title: Chapter 14
Yes Brian has the right to be angry that Justin moved out and didn't tell him, they do need to talk about that and his anger about that.
But as much as Brian trusted Justin he also trusted that he would leave someday.
Brian was abused for years by Jack and Joan Kinney, then he met Michael and Deb who taught him a new form of abuse, Lindsay the observant cow learned how to be sweet and manipulate from her set and abused Brian again.
Brian and Justin have a lot of hurt and anger to deal with to rebuild their relationship.
Three used their idea of love to bind Brian to them and the other is using her vindictiveness, spite and jealousy to keep herself bound to Brian.
It's isn't going to be easy dealing with all these hard truths, but locked doors always need to be kicked open so the truth can come out to breathe.
Date: Nov 15, 2017 4:58 pm Title: Chapter 13
A mix of emotions reading this. Anger, frustration, pride (in Hunter) disappointment and much more.
Hunter is there for his sister. For Gus too, but also knows that Gus has B&J. Jenny is left in the wind. Why on earth did these 2 women decide to have childred? they seem to be nothing more that spoiled children themselves. Will Mel EVER get over this fixation with Brian? It seem so matter what anyone says to her, she turns it all around and somehow blames Brian. He own children what to be away from her, but it's Brian and Justin's fault. she's incapable of looking at herself and seeing her own faults. She needs help. she needs couselling as this problem isn't just going to go away and she's going to continue to hurt her kids and all her realtionships.
AS for Deb...I actually hate her in this one. lol. I mean I'm waaaaaaaaaay past angry and disappointed to supremely disgusted and nauseous. While I'm gald that Brian has finally seen the truth behind their relationship, I'm so heartbroken for him. There's no coming back from this I don't think. At least not entirely. She's lost everyone except for Michael. that should tell her something. Being the enabler she is though, I doubt that will ever happen.
Ted I think is and will continue to be a godsend to Brian throughout this. such a wonderful character!
Cheers
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2017 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 13
I cannot believe how addicted I am to this story. It started out so heartbreaking but I trusted you as one of my fav authors and you have definitely delivered. I am seriously hooked on this story and I cannot wait to find out what will happen next.
Oh how I wanted to jump with joy that Brian has finally got Deb worked out for who she truly is and has had Michael arrested.
(That’s how I always felt about Deb in the series- yes she showed people kindness at times, but then she threw it their faces that they owed her for that ‘help’ or act of kindness and therefore had to repay her by doing what she said. It was horrible! Showing an abused teenage Brian some caring and kindness is supposed to be a selfless act of compassion. Not something to hold over his head for the rest of his life- it sickened me every time Deb would say stuff like “after all I did for you, you owe me this!” to Brian. No wonder the poor guy had a messed up view of love and relationships as the only forms of “love” he got came with a huge price tag attached)
I really hope Brian and Justin can now start to get rebuild their relationship, and manage to stand strong together against all the drama that Deb, Michael, Lindsay and Mel will no doubt continue to try to throw at them in the hopes of causing trouble and farthing their own selfish agendas.
Thank you so much for continuing to share your amazing writing with us :)
Date: Nov 13, 2017 11:31 am Title: Chapter 13
When did Hunter get to be so smart? Love that kid.
I'm glad Brian is finally seeing he doesn't owe Debbie or Michael anything. He needs to concentrate on beating this cancer and rebuilding his family with Justin. Nothing else matters.
Thanks for the update.
Hugs,
Jessica
Date: Nov 13, 2017 2:54 am Title: Chapter 13
So happy that someone has Jenny back... Leave it to Debbie to demand Brian do something about Michael
[Report This]Date: Nov 12, 2017 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 13
Mel Did It Again!!!
She abandoned her child because she wasn't getting what she wanted and left Jenny to suffer.
As usual her feelings were more important than making sure Jenny had a safe haven.
I wonder if Mel ever thought about how Gus feels when she goes on a tirade about Brian and he hears "I Wish Brian Kinney Had Just Died Of A Drug Overdose"?
He had to hear that for years and it had to affect his psyche and hurt his feelings to hear the hatred in Mel's voice whenever Brian was brought up?
Now how does Jenny feel hearing her mom talk about How Worthless Michael is and the way she badmouths her brother's father???
Or how Gus and Jenny feel when they hear Mel, Deb and Michael talk crap about Brian and Justin?
Words can hurt just as much as fist because they leave scars on your heart and soul that may never heal.
Is Mel prepared to sit and listen when its Gus and Jenny's turn to lay down some hard truths??