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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2019 5:05 am Title: CHAPTER 13: GROWING UP and BRANCHING OUT

Loving who you decided on for assistants.  This is going to be fun.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2019 1:04 am Title: CHAPTER 13: GROWING UP and BRANCHING OUT

I was wondering about Hunter and there was no need to worry because like Brian and Justin he proved Michael wrong and with him being one of Justin's assistants he will continue to show Michael that he is the one who couldn't make it through college.

Hunter being in the office wil protect Justin's business while also guaranteeing that neither Michael, Lindsay or their cronies can sabotage Brian and Justin.

Daphne is just as good as Justin being the Wasp Verbal Beat down so it should be good having Lindsay try to take her down and getting her add handed to her every second.

Brian chose wisely to make sure Justin and their corporation is protected.

Brian will get over walking in on Mel working her desk with Leda just as soon as Justin gets naked lol

Everything Justin said about Michael and Lindsay along with Brian really thinking about their behavior was very accurate and goes to show greedy, desperate people will go to any length hold on to someone they both know deep inside doesn't want them and never will.

Oh this competition is going to be so much fun!! 😀

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2019 3:01 am Title: CHAPTER 12: A DANCE OF VICTORY… and THE AGONY OF DEFEAT or SHOULD THAT BE OF A FOOT?

I'm enjoying Deb realizing that Micheael is an idiot and selfish etc in this universe.  Love that Brian offered to Move Deb and Carl.  GReat update

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2019 6:59 am Title: CHAPTER 12: A DANCE OF VICTORY… and THE AGONY OF DEFEAT or SHOULD THAT BE OF A FOOT?

Well, Michael's money will not last long. I can not wait to see the idiot duo in action. Thank you for the update.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2019 11:40 am Title: CHAPTER 12: A DANCE OF VICTORY… and THE AGONY OF DEFEAT or SHOULD THAT BE OF A FOOT?

GREAT !! The Dumba*** Duos's stupidity is gonna go Public. Lindsay with Mikey as her assistant ....as her eyes & mouthpiece?! Hilarious! ðŸ‘

Brian & Justin are more together, strongly bonded than before. Micheal & Lindsay bound to bounce on their butthead penniless.

Wonderful chapter. :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2019 3:34 am Title: CHAPTER 12: A DANCE OF VICTORY… and THE AGONY OF DEFEAT or SHOULD THAT BE OF A FOOT?

Love how Deb is taking everyone putting Michael and Lindsay in their place.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2019 12:31 am Title: CHAPTER 12: A DANCE OF VICTORY… and THE AGONY OF DEFEAT or SHOULD THAT BE OF A FOOT?

Deb moving out of her house and leaving Michael to sink in his own  idiocy is the smartest decision she can make for her sanity and her Marriage, Debbie will say yes and they will be moving quickly so that way when Michael comes rrunning home he will find no sanctuary there.

Yeah there will probably be some aiming to take down Brian and Justin by helping Princess OFS (Old Flat Slut) and her Court Jester STD (Shrill Tiny Dick) but they will be outnumbered by those who seriously want to see Lindsay fail, besides The Avenue will protect The Royal Couple.

Michael makes stupid look smart Lindsay will have him broke before the end of the first competition besides aren't supplies and models provided by the show?

What An Idiot!!!

Lindsay is going to have Michael as her assistant and one of her models? 

OMG That Is Hilarious and Gross at the same time!

Perhaps Justin after the bashing might be disrupted by Michael but this Justin won't be so easily rattled, but Michael will be because this will be filmed and Michael doesn't know anything about art.

Lindsay has already handicapped herself and she hasn't even realized it Michael can't tell the difference between Orange and Tangerine so him helping Lindsay will be quite an amusing spectacle for the growing audience and the judges.

The first challenge is going to really show the Amateurs from the Professionals and the Whiners from the Even-Tempered.

The restraining orders don't matter to them not even the kids are a factor the only prize they see is Brian that Ignorance will continue to be their downfall.

Thanks for the Update 😃

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 31, 2019 9:37 am Title: CHAPTER 11: DON’T LOOK DOWN, LOOK RIGHT HERE

Simply Perfectttt.... Justin and Miranda has Lindsay wrapped around. Wonderful chapter!!

I would love see the fireworks farting in Lindsay's mind when they announced their Legal names TaylorKinneys in public. Heaven feels :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2019 12:09 pm Title: CHAPTER 11: DON’T LOOK DOWN, LOOK RIGHT HERE

The trap is ready: Lindsay is too stubborn to backdown; she had to take the dare.

Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2019 11:41 am Title: CHAPTER 11: DON’T LOOK DOWN, LOOK RIGHT HERE

OKAY! so please, i am begging, please concentrate on this story. I hate waiting and your cliffhangers are the best/worst. you know what i mean. so please, forget about everything else, and give us more of this story. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2019 1:47 am Title: CHAPTER 11: DON’T LOOK DOWN, LOOK RIGHT HERE

Yay, another fantastic chapter.  I'm really looking forward to more and rereading this story once it's completed.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2019 1:46 am Title: CHAPTER 11: DON’T LOOK DOWN, LOOK RIGHT HERE

My goodness Lindsay is such an amateur she got played by Justin and Miranda Beautifully and now the reporters have enough to make sure everyone associated with the Art World will be watching especially the ones who have had to deal with Lindsay over the years.

Everyone will begin rapture and glued to their screens watching Justin demolish Lindsay and her implode.

Plus she lied yet again in a room full of reporters and high profile professionals that she is a noted artists the reporters will destroy her for that too considering they will be following these days closely.

Michael will be broke in ten days Lindsay will need to shop to update her wardrobe and her tools for the competition and pay for bribes.

Happy that Adrienne is going to be a judge she also has talent Lindsay never will.

This Is Going To Be So Good!!

Thanks for the Update :)

 

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2019 12:50 pm Title: PART 2: (CHAPTER 10): THE REAL PETER PAN and HIS WASP WANNABE WENDY

reading it again, looking for update.  Thank you

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2019 3:49 pm Title: PART 2: (CHAPTER 10): THE REAL PETER PAN and HIS WASP WANNABE WENDY

Fantastic chapter.  Love everything you post and wish you could do more!!!

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2019 9:11 am Title: PART 2: (CHAPTER 10): THE REAL PETER PAN and HIS WASP WANNABE WENDY

That was FUN. Micheal & Lindsay should read their lifetime about Justin's hardwork & success and get their already jeolous asses kept burning.

What hamster farted in Lindsay's brain that she can do anything to Justin? (probably same one who keep fart ..i mean running in Micheal's brain about delusional dreams of Brian) . Seriously, They are sooo alike.

Loving your fics. great! ❤

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2019 6:18 am Title: PART 2: (CHAPTER 10): THE REAL PETER PAN and HIS WASP WANNABE WENDY

Ha ha ha, the vaseline and eggs joke! Brain bleach!!! Good luck Michael to get rid of Lindsey!

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2019 5:15 am Title: PART 2: (CHAPTER 10): THE REAL PETER PAN and HIS WASP WANNABE WENDY

This just keeps getting better and better. Stupid is as Stupid does. Stupid will never learn to accept advice from others.  If that money lasts a month I'd be surprised.

Lindsay is certainly in for some surprises especially when trying to get back to being on good terms with Justin. This plan of hers is going to backfire so badly she'll be recovering for months.

I'm really glad to see this updated because it let's me know there's still more to come. Yay!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2019 1:43 am Title: PART 2: (CHAPTER 10): THE REAL PETER PAN and HIS WASP WANNABE WENDY

Michael Is So Freaking Stupid!

With Lindsay dripping poison in his ear he will broke in three weeks and she will be kicking his Flat Ass to the curb along with his toys, if course if he broadcasts his version of the Lindsay and Justin Dynamic I think he is going to find out whatever smile really means and be broke in five days.

Why does Lindsay insist on going braless?

Is she expecting to stop traffic with those gross pebbles in her chest or hoping for added buoyancy when her delusion burst to get her afloat!

Seriously taking Justin to see Adrienne once does not a helpful person she make no one applauds the janitor for cleaning the floor so why does she deserve recognition for having one good thought?

Justin didn't suddenly have talent because Lindsay liked one drawing he had talent before he knew her name and since that night his talent despite a bat has gotten better, why her s is still in the beginning stage because she eventually expects every time she picks a pencil or paintbrush the crowd roars.

When your the only one chanting your name then you have problems not even a medically trained doctor can fix.

Brian helped Justin to fight to reclaim his art and the use of his hand while Lindsay avoided Justin because he couldn't fulfil her need to been seen as creative it's only one Justin came back stronger that she suddenly had time for him again.

Lindsay could have never helped Justin achieve the success Ben had now selling art doesn't make you an artist or an agent, besides Miranda has enough talent to know when to push them step back and let the artist and their work shine.

she doesn't need to be the center of the universe she would rather her clients and their talent hogged the spotlight which is something Lindsay could never do cause of everyone is talking, looking, applauding and praising her then she can't live. 

Will have to watch out for her she is willing to go to any lengths to get light shining on her and that makes her more dangerous than Michael.

Thanks for the Update! :)

 

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2019 12:43 am Title: CHAPTER 9: SHIPWRECKED

Love it. Cant wait for update whenever your ready

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2018 9:47 pm Title: CHAPTER 9: SHIPWRECKED

WOW!!!!! Deb has finally opened her eyes and she sees that Michael is no wilting flower he is a bulldozer willing to mow down anyone who doesn't do what he wants and gets in his way, she is finally ready to snip the apron strings and let Michael fly or fall in his own.

Deb should get her locks changed and disconnect the bell maybe a nice stay somewhere else would be nice she isn't running away just avoiding high decibel levels.

Michael got ten thousand and with Lindsay it won't be worth a dime.

Will Michael be smart and disappear with that money?

Hell No!!

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2018 3:03 pm Title: CHAPTER 9: SHIPWRECKED

'Shit for brains' was perfectly set up! lol Wow! Deb's rant was epic, good for her!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2018 9:18 am Title: CHAPTER 9: SHIPWRECKED

Well done! I could imagine Debbie boiling on the other end of the phone and slamming the poor phone on the wall afterwards.

As we are the 31th, I wish you a very Happy New Year!

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2018 8:47 am Title: CHAPTER 9: SHIPWRECKED

I was so very happy to see this updated, and especially with such a nice, long chapter. I've been wondering where Michael would head to with his garbage bags and Captain cutout. I'm still wondering what happened to all the other garbage bags Ben put outside, though.

I could have hugged Brian when he warned Michael against finishing that sentence about Justin. It would have been awful for Justin, Jennifer and Debbie to have heard that come out of his mouth. Or does anyone in your story know yet what Michael actually said that day of the party? But as happy as I was about that, I have to wonder why Brian sat quietly by when Michael kept throwing the derogatory names Justin's way. Brian should have spoken up and told Michael if he couldn't respect his husband, he could leave right now, and the deal is off the table. I know I never could have put up with someone calling my husband those names in my presence.

I relished every single word out of Debbie's mouth to Michael. Thank you for that. It was long overcoming.

I'm hoping in the next chapter, we get more confrontations with Lindsay, and see how she is faring.

HUGS ~ Cathy



Author's Response:

Hey Cathy,

Sorry I'm just answering this now. As you would imagine, I've been writing my fingers off when I finally get a small break in my Mom-induced schedule. NOT FUN! Well at least not the 'Mom, can I have', Mom, can you take me...,' and 'Mom, can you do,' parts! It's especially busy this year because of all the 'Senior' activities for my youngest son...SMH Whereas I'm already feeling a bit nostalgic that this is the final leg of the school-aged journey, I still can't wait for the Go-Go-GO portion of it to be over.

Anyway, to answer your question about why Brian didn't say anything while Michael was hurling insult-after-insult to Justin, it's because Justin asked him to let him handle it, and not buy into Michael's usual arsenal of diversionary tactics. As predicted, Michael tried every single trick in the heretofore tried and true methods of getting Brian to respond the way he wanted to. When wheedling and whining didn't work, Michael resorted to attempting to use their shared past as a way to connect them. And then when that didn't garner the 'appropriate' response by Michael's expectations, he threatened and reminded Brian of what Jack used to do to him. Talk about a superhero complex! So all in all, Justin forewarning Brian of what he'd seen Michael do time and again, prepared him for Michael's assault which ultimately didn't the power it would have before. Basically, Brian and Justin changed the playbook, and Michael nor Lindsay are ready for the new rules!

HAPPY READING and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2018 3:39 am Title: CHAPTER 9: SHIPWRECKED

How Michael thought Brian would let him move in is beyond me.  Once he hears from Ben's lawyer he's going to find himself short of money.  LOL.

Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2018 4:15 pm Title: CHAPTER 8: GUILT IS FOR INSECURE PEOPLE

hellooooo!!!!!!!!!! please update soon!!!! um begginnng



Author's Response:

I am working on it, but as most know, during the months of November and December is especially hard for me to do so due to familial obligations. I'm actually in the middle of the update for this one, and it should be posted by the weekend. I'm also working as much as I can on the others, but my motto has always been and will always be Quality over Quantity. I would never put up a chapter that I am not completely happy with just for the sake of saying 'Oh look, I've got up a new chapter', which is part of the reason it takes awhile for me to update. It's not to inconvenience my readers, but a way to show that I appreciate and value their mental investment and commitment to my works; to give them that a measure of relaxation and release from feeling like a hamster on a wheel.

But today, I am at my son's wrestling tournament about 70 miles away, and will be tomorrow as well. So being an author has to take a backseat to being an athlete's biggest cheerleader whose most important name is Mom.

 

Happy Holidays!

~Nichelle

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